話題寫(xiě)作(三)

計(jì)劃安排第一篇教材考點(diǎn)梳理如今,中學(xué)生的假期生活發(fā)生了很大變化。假定你是李明,你的美國(guó)筆友Lisa想了解中國(guó)中學(xué)生現(xiàn)在的假期生活。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn),給她寫(xiě)一封信。[要點(diǎn)](1)學(xué)習(xí)和休閑仍然重要;(2)幫忙做家務(wù)或干農(nóng)活;(3)參加社會(huì)活動(dòng),做志愿者工作,幫助他人。[參考詞匯]volunteer志愿者典例分析DearLisa,I'mgladtoreceiveyourletter.Ourholidaylifehaschangedalot.

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Bestwishes!Yours,LiMing【思路點(diǎn)撥】1.要點(diǎn)提煉:主題是對(duì)假期生活的描述,注意如下兩個(gè)要點(diǎn):(1)介紹中學(xué)生的假期生活;(2)從中獲得的收獲。2.時(shí)態(tài):一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)3.人稱:第一人稱【寫(xiě)作架構(gòu)】【基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作】根據(jù)所給提示寫(xiě)句子。1.基礎(chǔ)句我經(jīng)常做家務(wù)。(dohousework)___________________________________________________________________________→升格句(改寫(xiě)為含有helpsb.do的句子)___________________________________________________________________________2.基礎(chǔ)句學(xué)習(xí)和放松同樣重要。(both)___________________________________________________________________________→升格句(用It's+adj.+forsb.todosth.結(jié)構(gòu)改寫(xiě)此句)___________________________________________________________________________Ioftendohousework.Ioftenhelpmymotherdohouseworkatweekends.Learningandrelaxingarebothimportant.It'simportantforustolearnandrelax.3.基礎(chǔ)句我們應(yīng)該幫助有需要的人。(should)___________________________________________________________________________→升格句(改寫(xiě)為含有tryone'sbest,inneed的句子)___________________________________________________________________________4.基礎(chǔ)句我意識(shí)到父母每天工作很努力。(realize)___________________________________________________________________________→升格句(改寫(xiě)為由how引導(dǎo)的感嘆句)___________________________________________________________________________Weshouldhelppeopleinneed.Weshouldtryourbesttohelppeopleinneed.Irealizethatourparentsworkhardeveryday.Irealizehowhardourparentsworkeveryday.5.基礎(chǔ)句參加這些活動(dòng)我們很開(kāi)心。(joinin)___________________________________________________________________________→升格句(改寫(xiě)為含有findit+adj.+todosth.的句子)___________________________________________________________________________Wearehappytojoinintheseactivities.Wefindithappytojoinintheseactivities.【連句成文】DearLisa,I'mgladtoreceiveyourletter.Ourholidaylifehaschangedalot.Itisimportantforustolearnandrelax.Besides,weoftenhelpourparentsdohouseworkorfarmwork.Throughthat,werealizehowhardourparentsworkeveryday.Andwecanmakeahabitoflaboringatthesametime.Also,wetakeanactivepartinsocialactivitiesasvolunteers.Sometimes,wegotothestreetstocollectrubbishorgotothehospitaltocheerupthesickchildren.Wetryourbesttohelppeopleinneedandmakeourhometownmorebeautiful.Wefindithappytojoinintheseactivities.Bestwishes!Yours,LiMing【導(dǎo)入主題】1.HerearemysummervacationplansthatIwanttosharewithyou.2.Iwilltakepartinmanykindsofactivities.3.Iamgoingtotraveltoplacesofinterestwhichcanopenupmyeyes.4.IamgoingtoasummercampinJulywhereIcanrelaxmyselfandmakenewfriends.拓展積累【文章過(guò)渡、發(fā)展】1.Tokeepourschoolclean,weshouldaskothersnottolittereverywhere.2.Iwillgiveawaymyclothestothechildreninpoorareassothattheywillkeepthemselveswarminthecoldwinter.3.Weplantosendourcardsonwhichwehavewrittenourthankstoourteachers.4.Wehavemadealistofallthethingswewishtodo.5.IhopeIcandosomethingtohelpothers.6.Ireallyhavealargenumberofthingstodo.Maybeit'sabitbusy,butIlikethissortoflife.【文章結(jié)尾】1.I'mlookingforwardtohearingfromyouall.2.Ihopethechildreninpoorareaswillhaveabrightfuture.3.IfIbecomeamemberofthesummercamp,Iwillbefriendlytotheforeignstudents.4.Myfamilywanttotakeatriptogether!Icannotwait!A

[2019·黃石]假如你是國(guó)際學(xué)校的學(xué)生李華,你的同學(xué)Tom寫(xiě)了一封郵件詢問(wèn)你暑假的安排。請(qǐng)給Tom回一封郵件,告知你的計(jì)劃,并邀請(qǐng)他來(lái)黃石游玩。[內(nèi)容包括](1)讀幾本好書(shū);(2)參加社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng);(3)幫父母做家務(wù);(4)和朋友一起鍛煉;(5)邀請(qǐng)Tom來(lái)黃石游玩。實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練[注意](1)詞數(shù):80左右;(2)可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;(3)文中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息;(4)開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。[參考詞匯]有意義的meaningful經(jīng)典文學(xué)作品classicliteratureworks社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)socialpracticeactivitiesDearTom,

I'mveryhappytohearfromyou.

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I'mveryhappytohearfromyou.Inyourletter,youaskedmeaboutmyplansforthesummervacation.Now,Iamwritingtotellyousomespecificdetails.

Overall,fourthingswillmakemysummervacationmeaningful.

First,Iplantoreadseveralclassicliteratureworks.Asweallknow,classicliteratureistherepresentationoftheoutstandingartofournation.Thereisnodoubtthatyoungpeoplewillbenefitalotfromreadingclassics.Second,Iwillspendamonthattendingsocialpracticeactivities.IintendtoworkasasalesmanbecausenotonlycanIearnmoneybymyself,butalsoitwillbroadenmyhorizons.Atthesametime,IwillhelpmymomdohouseworkeverydayandIwilldoexercisewithmyfriendsinthemorning.

IwillbegladifyoucometoHuangshi.Iwillshowyouaroundsomeplacesofinterest.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHuaB

[2019·泰州]為豐富初三學(xué)生課余生活,上周末你校組織了一次社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示,用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文,介紹此次活動(dòng),并談?wù)勛约旱母邢搿活動(dòng)內(nèi)容](1)上午游覽人民公園:欣賞美景、歌舞聯(lián)歡、拍照留念;(2)下午參觀市民廣場(chǎng):觀看圖片展,了解祖國(guó)和家鄉(xiāng)70年巨變。[你的感想](1)師生情深,感謝老師和同學(xué)的幫助;(2)倍受鼓舞,決心勤奮學(xué)習(xí)報(bào)效祖國(guó);(3)……(考生自己發(fā)揮)[要求](1)詞數(shù):100左右。開(kāi)頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。(2)所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容必須包括內(nèi)容提示中所提供的信息,并可作適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。(3)不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。[參考詞匯]市民廣場(chǎng)CivicSquareInordertoenrichJunior3students'after-schoollife,ourschoolorganizedasocialpracticeactivitylastweekend.Alltheteachersandstudentsofourgradetookpartinit.

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