高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)寒冬里的溫暖與人性光輝1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Itwasmid-December,andthetemperaturewasachillyminus20-degreeCelsius.Iwalkedwithmyheaddown,passingthehomelessbeggarsandignoringallofthemasusual.ThenIsawhim,sittingagainstabuilding,wrappedinthincloth,holdingawhitecupinfrontofhim.Iheardhisshaky,pitifulvoicetargetmeasIspedpasthim.“Sparesomechange?”heasked.“I’llappreciateit.”Ididn’tevenbotherlookingupathim.Inmymind,Ibrieflypicturedhimwalkingintotheclosestpubanddrinkingwhiskywithwhatevermoneyhemanagedtoget.Or,maybeheneededanothershotofcocaine.See,likemostpeopleinthecity,ittookmeonlymomentstopassjudgementonhislife.“Ihavenomoneyonme.”Isaidquickly.4續(xù)寫原文Lookingback,Ifeelasthoughfatehadsetoutthatdaytoteachmealesson.Anditsucceeded.Justafewfeetpasthim,Islippedonapieceoficeonthesidewalk!Ilandedsquareonmyrightknee.TheacutepainpassedthroughoutasIlayontheground.ThenIheardafamiliarvoiceonlyinchesaboveme.“Areyouallright?”heasked.IknewimmediatelythiswasthemanIhadjustrushedpast.Beforetearswelledupinmyeyes,Isawthesmooth,sympatheticlookinhiseyes.IheldhishandasIstruggledtogettomyfeet.HeheldmyarmasIlimped(一瘸一拐地走)tothenearbybusstopandsatonthebench.5續(xù)寫原文“MynameisMike,”hesaidwithconcern.“Thatwasquiteafallyoutook,andyoureallyneedtoseeadoctor.”“Thisbusgoespastthehospital,”Isaidquickly,pointingtothebussignaboveme.Mikepaused,andalookofsuddenrealizationcrossedhisface.Hepulledouthissmallwhitecupanddumpedallthechangeintohishand.“Iknowyoudon’thaveanychangeonyou,”hesaid,“Ithinkthisisjustenoughforyoutotakethebus.”6段首句Paragraph1：IwasovercomewithguiltasIrememberedthelieIhadtoldhimonlyafewminutesearlier.Paragraph2：“Thankyou,”hesaidgratefullywhenthebuswasapproaching.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9文章講述了十二月中旬，氣溫極低，“我”在路上匆匆走過，對流浪漢的求助無動于衷，還對他們產(chǎn)生偏見。然而，“我”在經(jīng)過一個流浪漢后不久滑倒受傷。這位被“我”忽視的流浪漢邁克不僅關(guān)心“我”，還打算把自己乞討來的錢給“我”坐公交去醫(yī)院。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：IwasovercomewithguiltasIrememberedthelieIhadtoldhimonlyafewminutesearlier.當我回想起幾分鐘前對他撒的謊，內(nèi)心充滿了愧疚。我看著他那滿是關(guān)懷的眼神，又看看他手中準備給我的零錢，那些零錢在他粗糙的手中顯得格外刺眼。我張了張嘴，想要說出真相，卻覺得喉嚨像是被堵住了。我怎么能如此以惡意揣測他，對他說出那樣的謊言呢？此時，我內(nèi)心的自責(zé)如潮水般涌來，我緊緊握住他的手，聲音顫抖地說：“邁克，對不起，我之前騙了你，我其實有錢?！边~克微微一愣，隨后露出了溫和的笑容，說：“沒關(guān)系，重要的是你能去醫(yī)院?！?1續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：“Thankyou,”hesaidgratefullywhenthebuswasapproaching.“謝謝你，”當公交車漸漸駛來時，他感激地說道。我疑惑地看著他，他接著說：“是你讓我感受到，即使在這樣寒冷的冬天，人與人之間仍能傳遞溫暖?！蔽衣牶螅闹袧M是感動。上車前，我把身上所有的錢都塞到他手里，對他說：“這是我對你的感謝，希望你能度過一個溫暖的冬天?！惫卉嚲従忛_動，我透過車窗看著他，他站在原地，向我揮手道別。這次經(jīng)歷讓我明白，不能以貌取人，善良和溫暖是不分身份的。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)IwasovercomewithguiltasIrememberedthelieIhadtoldhimonlyafewminutesearlier.Lookingathisconcernedeyesandthesmallchangeinhishandthathewasabouttogiveme,Ifeltalumpinmythroat.Iwantedtotellhimthetruth,butwordsfailedme.HowcouldIhavejudgedhimsoharshlyandtoldsuchalie?Atthismoment,remorsewelledupinsidemelikeatidalwave.Itightlyheldhishandandsaidshakily,"Mike,I'msosorry.Iliedtoyoujustnow.Iactuallyhavemoney."Mikewasslightlytakenaback,andthenhesmiledgently,saying,"Itdoesn'tmatter.Theimportantthingisthatyoucangotothehospital."14范文呈現(xiàn)"Thankyou,"hesaidgratefullywhenthebuswasapproaching.Ilookedathiminconfusion,andhecontinued,"Youmademefeelthateveninsuchacoldwinter,warmthcanstillbepassedbetweenpeople."Afterhearingthis,myheartwasfilledwithemotion.Beforegettingonthebus,IstuffedallthemoneyIhadintohishandandsaid,"Thisismygratitudetoyou.Ihopeyoucanhaveawarmwinter."Asthebusslowlypulledaway,Iwatchedhimthroughthewindow.Hestoodthere,wavinggoodbyetome.Thisexperiencetaughtmethatweshouldneverjudgeabookbyitscover,andkindnessandwarmthknownoboundariesofstatus.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)IwasengulfedbyatidalwaveofguiltasthememoryofthelieIhadspunjustminutesearliercamecrashingback.Gazingintohiscompassionateeyesandthemeagerchangecuppedinhisweather-beatenhand,profferedselflesslyformybusfare,alumpformedinmythroat,renderingmemomentarilyspeechless.HowcouldIhavebeensoquicktojudgehim,socallousastodeceivehimwithsuchablatantfalsehood?Remorse,likeatempestuousstorm,ragedwithinme.Clutchinghishandtightly,myvoicequiveredwithemotionasIstammered,"Mike,I'mtrulysorry.Iwasdishonestwithyoumomentsago.Infact,Ihadmoneyallalong."Mike'seyeswidenedinmomentarysurprise,yethisresponsewasimmediate,agentlesmilespreadingacrosshisfaceashereplied,"Nomatter.Whattrulymattersisgettingyoutothehospital."16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)"Thankyou,"hemurmuredgratefullyasthebusloomednearer.Iregardedhimwithapuzzledexpression,promptinghimtoelaborate,"You'verekindledmyfaithinhumanity.Eveninthebittercoldofthiswinter,you'veshownthatwarmthcanstillbesharedbetweenstrangers."Hiswordsstruckachorddeepwithinme,fillingmyheartwithaprofoundsenseofgratitude.AsIpr