高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)尋回的幸運(yùn)：親情比硬幣更珍貴1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Papabuiltbighousesinfarawayplaces.HecamehomeonlyonceduringtheChineseNewYearandstayedonlythreedays.Itwasthedaysthatweanticipatedsomuch.OnthatdayMamaandIwouldwokeupearlyandwaitedforPapaatthegateway,withananxiousbutlightheart.WewaitedandwaitedanditwasnotuntilatduskthatIfinallynoticedafigurefromthedistance.It’sPapa!Herushedoverandsweptmeupinhisarms,prickling(刺;戳)myfacewithhisbeard.“LookwhatI’vegotforyou!”Paparummaged(亂翻)inhisbigsuitcaseandtookoutagift—ooh,whataprettyhat!4續(xù)寫原文Makingstickyriceballstogetherwasaritual.Thatnight,Papaburiedacoininastickyriceballandsaid,“Whoeverfindsthecoinwillhavegoodluck.”ThatnightIliedbetweenPapaandMamaandfellasleep,drowsilyhearingthemwhisperingandfirecrackersoutside,withloveandwarmthenvelopingme.Earlythenextmorning,Papafedmestickyriceballswithaspoon.Suddenly,Ibitonsomethinghard.“It’sthefortunecoin!”Iyelled.“Quick,putitinyourpocketsothegoodluckwon’tescape!”Mamahelpedmeintoabrand-newjacketandweweregoingNewYearVisiting.5續(xù)寫原文Ontheway,ImetmyfriendDachunwhogotabigredenvelopfromhisPapa.“Well,howaboutthis?”Itookthecoinoutofmypocketproudly.“Ihaveafortunecoin!Mypapaburieditinastickyriceball,andIfoundit!”O(jiān)nthesecondday,itsnowedreallyhard!Whenitfinallystopped,Dachungotmetoplayandwehadasnowballfighttillitwasgettingdark.Onthewayhome,Ifeltinsidemypocketand…Icouldn’tfindthecoin!Myfortunecoinwasgone!Irushedbacktothecourtyardandsearched,butinvain.Wherewasmyfortunecoin?“Don’tcry,sweetie.I’llgiveyouanotherone.Look,it’sexactlythesame!”Papascoopedanothercoinoutofhispocket.“Idon’twantthisone—Iwanttheotherone!”Ibawled(放聲痛哭).6段首句Paragraph1：Intheevening,Icreptintobed,miserable(痛苦的).Paragraph2：Thatnight,Isleptverysoundly(香甜的)andIknewDadwouldleavetomorrow.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9常年在外的爸爸過年回家，一家人團(tuán)聚。爸爸在湯圓里藏硬幣，“我”幸運(yùn)吃到。可“我”玩耍時弄丟硬幣，萬分難過。晚上爸爸安慰“我”，說家人在一起才是真正的幸運(yùn)。“我”入睡后，第二天醒來，看到爸爸留的硬幣，領(lǐng)悟到硬幣的價值不在于帶來好運(yùn)，而是承載著父母的愛。爸爸準(zhǔn)備離開時，“我”帶著理解與愛，微笑著揮手告別，明白了親情才是最寶貴的財富。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1:

Intheevening,Icreptintobed,miserable(痛苦的).晚上，“我”懷著滿心的失落爬上床，腦海里全是丟失的硬幣?！拔摇庇X得自己失去了最重要的東西，眼淚止不住地流。這時，爸爸輕輕走進(jìn)房間，坐在床邊。他什么也沒說，只是溫柔地?fù)崦拔摇钡念^，讓“我”感受到他的關(guān)愛。過了一會兒，爸爸輕聲說：“寶貝，真正的幸運(yùn)不是那枚硬幣，而是我們一家人能在一起?！卑职值脑捵尅拔摇敝饾u平靜下來，雖然還是有些難過，但心里沒那么難受了。爸爸的安慰就像冬日里的暖陽，慢慢驅(qū)散了“我”心中的陰霾。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Thatnight,Isleptverysoundly(香甜的)andIknewDadwouldleavetomorrow.夜里，“我”睡得很安穩(wěn)。第二天醒來，一睜眼就看到爸爸慈祥的面容。他微笑著看著“我”，“我”發(fā)現(xiàn)床邊放著昨天爸爸給的那枚硬幣。剎那間，“我”明白了，真正珍貴的不是硬幣，而是爸爸媽媽對“我”的愛?！拔摇蹦闷鹩矌牛o緊地抱住爸爸。爸爸準(zhǔn)備離開時，“我”微笑著向他揮手道別，因為“我”知道，無論爸爸在哪里，我們之間的親情永遠(yuǎn)不會變，這才是最珍貴的幸運(yùn)。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Intheevening,Icreptintobed,extremelymiserable.Thoughtsofthelostcoinhauntedmeconstantly.Ifirmlybelievedthatallmygoodfortunehadvanishedalongwithit.Hiddenunderthequilt,Iweptsilently,mybodyshakingwithgrief.Sensingmydeepsorrow,Papaquietlyenteredtheroomandsatontheedgeofmybed.Withoutsayingawordatfirst,hegentlystrokedmyhair,tryingtooffermesomecomfort.Afterawhile,hesaidsoftly,"Honey,therealgoodluckliesinourfamilybeingtogether."Hiswordswerelikeawarmcurrent,graduallyseepingintomyheart,makingmefeelabitbetter.AlthoughIwasstillsad,thepaininmyheartwasnotasintenseasbefore.14范文呈現(xiàn)Thatnight,Isleptsoundly.WhenIwokeupthenextmorning,thefirstthingthatcaughtmyeyewasPapa'skindface.Hewassmilingatme.Besidemypillow,Inoticedthecoinhehadgivenmethepreviousday.Suddenly,itdawnedonmethatthetruevaluedidn'tlieinthecoinitself,butintheloveandcaremyparentshadforme.Ipickedupthecoin,heldittightly,andgavePapaabighug.Ashepreparedtoleave,Iwavedhimgoodbyewithabigsmile,fullyawarethattheloveamonguswasthegreatestfortuneofall.NomatterhowfarPapawasaway,ourfamilybondwouldalwaysremainstrong.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Intheevening,Icreptintobed,awaveofmiserywashingoverme.Thelostcoinoccupiedmyeverythought,andIwasconvincedthatallmygoodfortunehadslippedthroughmyfingers.Concealedbeneaththequilt,Isobbedquietly,mybodyquiveringwithdespair.Sensingmydistress,Papa,likeasilentguardian,quietlytookaseatontheedgeofmybed.Withoututteringawordinitially,hetenderlycaressedmyhair,histouchasoothingbalm.Afteramoment'spause,hemurmuredsoftly,"Honey,thegenuinegoodluckisourfamily'stogetherness."Hiswords,likeraysofsunlightbreakingthroughtheclouds,graduallypermeatedmyheart,bringingamodicumofrelief.Althoughsorrowstilllingered,thesharpnessofmypainhadbeendulled.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Thatnight,Islumberedsoundly.WhenIopenedmyeyesthenextmorning,whatgreetedmefirstwasPapa'saffectionatevisage.Awarmsmilegracedhislipsashelookedatme.Besidemypillowlaythecoinhehadgivenmethepreviousday.Inaninstant,itstruckmethatthetrueworthdidnotresideinthecoinitself,butintheloveandcaremyparentshadlavisheduponme.Igraspedthecointightly,pullingPapaintoatightembrace.Ashereadiedhimselftodepart,Iwavedhim