高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)溫斯頓的發(fā)型風(fēng)波：從焦慮到釋然1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文“Ilooklikeaclown(小丑)!”Winstonthoughtsadly.Hepulledhiscapdown,thankfulforthecoveritprovided.Hewantedtoescapetheattentionofthepeopleoutsidethebarbershop(理發(fā)店).Helookedaroundbeforehurryingawayintothedarknesstoputsomedistancebetweenhimselfandthecuriouseyesofothers.Ashemovedquicklydownthestreet,Winstonwonderedwhyhehadn’tspokenuptopreventtheterriblehaircut.Hefeltsadandquestionedwhythishadhappenedtohim.Didthebarbergivehimthismessed-uphaircutonpurpose?Winstondidn’tbelieveitbecausethebarberlookedveryfriendly.Butitseemedsocrazy!Couldhehaveunknowinglyoffendedthebarber,andthisdisastroushairstylewasthebarber’swayofgettingbackathim?4續(xù)寫原文WinstonwasalsoworriedthatJackwouldlaughathim.Jackwashiscousinandlikedplayingjokes.Butmaybehewouldn’t;hewasunderstandingtoo.Winstonkeptthinkingaboutit.Uponenteringhisnewhome,,Winston’smomgreetedhimfromthekitchen.Shecalledouttohim,askingtoseehisnewhairstyle.Winstonwalkedintothekitchen,hiscapstillon,andslowlytookitoff.Hismotherlookedverysurprised.Shecouldn’thelpbutburstintolaughter.“Ohdéar,”sheshouted.“Whathappened?”Winstonstoodsilentlyforamomentbeforelettingouthisanger.Heblamedhismomforbringinghimtothisplace,torcinghimtoattendanewschoolwherehebelievedeveryonewouldmakefunofhim.Healsosaidhehatedthisterriblehairstyle,andhishairwasbeyondfixing.5續(xù)寫原文Justashisangerwasabouttogrow,thedoorbell-rang.Winston’smomcalmlytoldhimtoanswerit.Asheopenedthedoor,heforgottocoverhisterriblehaircut,andtherestoodhiscousinJack.SinceitwasSaturdaytoday,theyhadplannedtogoskatingtogether.Winstonfeltextremelyembarrassed.6段首句Paragraph1：JacklookedatWinstonindisbelief.Paragraph2：Thatafternoon,Winstonreturnedtothebarbershop,hopingtofindoutthetruth.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9溫斯頓理了個(gè)糟糕的發(fā)型，自覺像小丑，一路躲避他人目光。他懷疑理發(fā)師故意為之，還擔(dān)心被愛開玩笑的表哥杰克嘲笑。回家后母親看到發(fā)型大笑，溫斯頓為此發(fā)怒。此時(shí)杰克來訪，他的反應(yīng)卻出乎溫斯頓意料，不但沒嘲笑，還努力安慰。當(dāng)天下午，溫斯頓返回理發(fā)店探尋真相。理發(fā)師滿臉尷尬，解釋是誤調(diào)了理發(fā)器設(shè)置，隨即為他精心修復(fù)。最終溫斯頓以自信的新發(fā)型，準(zhǔn)備迎接新學(xué)校。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1:

JacklookedatWinstonindisbelief.杰克看到溫斯頓的發(fā)型時(shí)，先是愣了一下，隨后眼里閃過一絲驚訝，但很快，他嘴角上揚(yáng)，露出了溫和的笑容。杰克沒有像溫斯頓擔(dān)心的那樣嘲笑他，而是走上前，輕輕拍了拍溫斯頓的肩膀，說道：“嘿，老弟，這發(fā)型可太有個(gè)性了！說不定能引領(lǐng)新潮流呢?！苯又芸酥v起自己曾經(jīng)也有過類似的尷尬經(jīng)歷，如何巧妙化解并讓大家對(duì)他刮目相看。在杰克的開導(dǎo)下，溫斯頓的心情逐漸平復(fù)，不再那么沮喪。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Thatafternoon,Winstonreturnedtothebarbershop,hopingtofindoutthetruth.受到杰克的鼓舞，當(dāng)天下午，溫斯頓鼓起勇氣回到理發(fā)店。他一進(jìn)門，理發(fā)師就認(rèn)出了他，臉上立刻浮現(xiàn)出尷尬的神情。溫斯頓走上前，盡量保持冷靜，詢問理發(fā)師為何會(huì)剪出這樣的發(fā)型。理發(fā)師滿臉歉意，詳細(xì)解釋說是操作失誤，不小心弄錯(cuò)了理發(fā)工具的設(shè)置。并表示愿意免費(fèi)為溫斯頓重新設(shè)計(jì)發(fā)型。在理發(fā)師的精心打理下，溫斯頓原本糟糕的發(fā)型煥然一新，他也終于放下心來，自信地準(zhǔn)備迎接新的生活。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)WhenJackcaughtsightofWinston'shaircut,hefrozeforasecond,hiseyeswideninginastonishment.However,insteadofthemockinglaughterWinstonhadexpected,awarmsmilespreadacrossJack'sface.JacksteppedforwardandgentlypattedWinstonontheshoulder,saying,“Hey,buddy,thishaircutisincrediblyunique!Itmightjuststartanewtrend.”Then,Jacksharedhisownembarrassingexperienceinthepastaboutasimilarsituationandhowhemanagedtoturnitaroundandgaineveryone'sadmiration.UnderJack'spatientconsolation,Winston'smoodgraduallyimproved,andhewasnolongerasdepressedasbefore.14范文呈現(xiàn)InspiredbyJack,Winstonsummoneduphiscourageandreturnedtothebarbershopthatafternoon.Themomentheentered,thebarberrecognizedhimimmediately,andanembarrassedlookappearedonthebarber'sface.Winstonwalkeduptothebarber,tryingtostaycalm,andaskedaboutthestrangehaircut.Thebarberapologizedprofusely,explainingindetailthatitwasanoperationalerror,accidentallysettingthewrongsettingsonthehaircuttools.HealsoofferedtoredesignWinston'shairforfree.Withthebarber'scarefulhandling,Winston'spreviouslyterriblehaircutwastransformedintoabrand-newandstylishone.Finally,Winstonleftthebarbershopwithconfidence,readytoembracehisnewlife.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)JacklookedatWinstonindisbelief.Hiseyeswidened,whichwerefilledwithamixofshockandcuriosityatthesightofWinston'sunusualhaircut.InsteadoflaughingmockinglyasWinstonhadfeared,Jackburstintoheartylaughter,saying,“Wow,thisisoneofthemostuniquehaircutsI'veeverseen!It'ssuretomakeyoustandout,andnotinabadwayatall.”Jack,whohadalwaysbeenfullofpositiveenergy,thensharedhisownembarrassingexperiences,tryingtomakeWinstonfeelbetter.WithJack'scomfortingwordslingeringinhisears,Winstongraduallyregainedhisconfidence.16升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Thatafternoon,Winstonreturnedtothebarbershop,hopingtofindoutthetruth.Itwasthebarberwho,uponseeingWinstonenter,turnedredwithembarrassment.Winston,withadeterminedlookonhisface,askedthebarberwhathadhappened.Thebarberexplainedthatduetoasuddenpowerglitch,theclippersmalfunctioned,resultinginthisunexpectedhaircut.Notonlydidthebarberapologizesincerely,buthealsoofferedtofixitforfreerightaway.Under