單元寫作幸福的秘密Unit1Thesecretsofhappiness寫作維度本單元的寫作題目是“幸福的秘密”，相關(guān)內(nèi)容有以下幾個方面：(1)提出不同的觀點：幸福的秘密是什么(2)對不同的觀點進行歸納總結(jié)。寫作支架/模版幸福的秘密開篇點題分述不同的觀點：財富、地位、愛心等表達自己的觀點黃金語料(從教材內(nèi)外積累好句)開頭段①Happinessisimportanttoeveryoneofus.②Happinessiseverywhereinourlife.③Butdifferentpeoplehavedifferentopinionsabouthappiness.中間段①Somepeoplethinkthekeytohappinessismoney.②Othersthinkthatgivinglovetopeoplemakesthemhappy.③Therearemanypoorpeoplearoundus.④Whenthepoorreceiveourhelp,theirliveswillbebetterandbetter.⑤Whenweseethesmilesontheirfaces,wemustfeelevenhappierthanthem.結(jié)尾段①SoIthinktruehappinesscomesfromthelove.②AsPlatosaid,“Happinessspringsfromdoinggoodandhelpingothers.”③What’syouropinion?經(jīng)典例題(從經(jīng)典例題學(xué)會審題)英語課上，老師要求你以“TheSecretsofHappiness”為題來談一下“幸福的秘密”。要求：1.語句通順，語言規(guī)范；2.書寫工整，時態(tài)正確，段落清晰。3.可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，70詞左右TheSecretsofHappiness______________________________________________________________________________________________________~~~審人稱：第一人稱~~~~~~審體裁：議論文~~~~~~~~~~審時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時審要點：幸福、愛心、感受精彩范文[從教材內(nèi)外積累好句]精彩范文展示TheSecretsofHappinessHappinessisimportanttoeveryoneofus.Itiseverywhereinourlife.Butdifferentpeoplehavedifferentopinionsabouthappiness.Somepeoplethinkthekeytohappinessismoney.Othersthinkthatgivinglovetopeoplemakesthemhappy.Iagreetothesecondopinion.Therearemanypoorpeoplearoundus.Weshouldtryourbesttohelpthem.Thenwecanseesmilesontheirfaces.Whenweseethesmilesontheirfaces,wemustfeelevenhappierthanthem.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~教材原句：①Butlove,infact,isthekeytohappiness.(教材P5)SoIthinktruehappinesscomesfromthelove.AsPlatosaid,“Happinessspringsfromdoinggoodandhelpingothers.”What’syouropinion?~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~教材原句②Happinessspringsfromdoinggoodandhelpingothers.(教材P13)【亮點詞塊】·beimportantto...對……很重要·agreeto...同意……·tryourbesttohelpthem盡我們的最大努力幫助他們【高分句子】·Somepeoplethinkthekeytohappinessismoney.一些人認(rèn)為幸福的關(guān)鍵是金錢。·Happinessspringsfromdoinggoodandhelpingothers.幸福源自于做好事和幫助他人。實戰(zhàn)演練請根據(jù)下面的提示，以“MyHappiness”為題寫一篇100詞左右的英語作文，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。要求：1.幸福無處不在恰如“美無處不在”。2.考試沒有考好害怕見父母。3.父母給予了大量的鼓勵。4.我的感受。______________________________________________________________________________________________________范文參考MyHappinessHappinessiseverywherejustas“Beautyiseverywhere”.Infact,happinessisalwaysaroundyouifyouputyourheartintoit.Iwillneverforgetonething.Once,Ihadabadgradeatamathtest.Iwasafraidtomeetmyparents.ButwhenIgotbackhomelate,myparentsknewwhathappened.Theysaidtome,“Itdoesn’tmatter,mychild.Rememberwe’llbealwaysbesideyouwhenyouneedhelp.Webelieveyoucandobetternexttime.”Iwastouchedanddecidedtowo