高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)友誼的考驗(yàn)與升華：畢業(yè)季的才藝秀1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文IslaandIwerestudyinginthesameschool.Wehadbeenfriendssinceweweresixyearsold.ItookIslaasasmart,funnyfriend,butnotallstudentsatourschooldid,especiallythegirlstudents.Girlsinourschoolworefashionablebrandedclothes,butIslasewedhersandhercurlyhairandthickglassesmadeherlooklikeafish,whichmadeherstandoutlikeasorethumb（招眼）.Forme,sometimesIfeltembarrassedtobearoundIsla,particularlywhenstudentssaidrudewordsaboutherhair,clothes,glasses-evenaboutthefactthatshegotreallygoodgrades.Islaalwaysseemedtobeabletoignorewhatotherstudentsthought,butIcouldn't.Ibegantodistancemyselffromher.Ourschoolhadatradition-therewasatalentshoweveryspring.Studentswouldsing,dance,playmusicalinstruments,anddowhatevertheycouldtoshowtheirtalents.Beingourgraduationseasoninthisseniorschool,thisyear'stalentshowwouldbeobviouslydifferent.Itwouldbeahugenight.4續(xù)寫原文Ava,whowasanoutgoinggirl,invitedmetobeonherdanceteam."Wewinthetalentshoweveryyear,andweexpectasatisfactorygraduationthisyear,"Avasaidtomeexcitedly."Weneedanewdancer.Butonlyyou,nother!"Avapointedtosomeonebehindme.Ididn'tneedtoturnaroundtoseewhoshemeant."Oh,Isee,"Isaidquietly.Avahadhardlyheadedoutwhensomeonetappedonmyshoulder.ItwasIsla.WhenIsawherconfusedface,itwaslikewakingupfromadream.Islaaskedmeeagerly,"Emily,areyougoingtotakepartinthetalentshow?"Ihesitatedwithoutresponse."That'sgreat,Emily!"Islatoldmewithoutwaitingformyanswerthatshewasalsogoingtoparticipatethisyear.Icouldn'tbelievewhatIhadheard.IstartedtoworryaboutherwhenIimaginedthatshewasinfrontofahugecrowd,andthateverybodywouldlaughather.Timepassedquickly,andIhadbarelyseenIslasincethen.Forme,IhadtopracticehardeverydaywithAvaandtheteamtokeepupsincetheotherdancershadalreadyknownthesteps.5段首句Paragraph1:Ultimately,itwasmyturntoperform,andIfeltextremelynervous.Paragraph2:IsteppedoffthestageandexpressedmythankstoIsla,whowasreadytosing.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8伊斯拉和“我”在同一所學(xué)校上學(xué)，從六歲起就是朋友?！拔摇庇X得伊斯拉聰明又有趣，但學(xué)校里并非所有同學(xué)都這么認(rèn)為，尤其是女生。學(xué)校里的女生都穿時(shí)尚的品牌服裝，而伊斯拉的衣服是自己縫制的，她的卷發(fā)和厚眼鏡讓她顯得格格不入。對(duì)“我”來說，有時(shí)和伊斯拉在一起會(huì)感到尷尬，特別是當(dāng)其他同學(xué)對(duì)她的頭發(fā)、衣服、眼鏡甚至她成績(jī)好的事情說些無(wú)禮的話時(shí)。伊斯拉似乎總能無(wú)視其他同學(xué)的看法，但“我”做不到，于是開始疏遠(yuǎn)她。學(xué)校每年春天都有才藝表演的傳統(tǒng)，今年是高中畢業(yè)季，這場(chǎng)才藝秀意義非凡。外向的艾娃邀請(qǐng)“我”加入她的舞蹈隊(duì)，還明確表示只要“我”，不要伊斯拉。艾娃剛走，伊斯拉就拍了拍“我”的肩膀，興奮地告訴“我”她也要參加今年的才藝秀，“我”聽后很擔(dān)心她在眾人面前出丑。之后“我”和艾娃的舞蹈隊(duì)每天刻苦訓(xùn)練，幾乎沒再見過伊斯拉。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph1:Aweeklater,IwassurprisedtofindaletterinourmailboxfromMisterRogers.終于，輪到我表演了，我感到極度緊張。站在舞臺(tái)的幕布后，我能聽到臺(tái)下觀眾的嘈雜聲，心跳不由自主地加快，雙手也微微顫抖。音樂響起，我深吸一口氣，和隊(duì)友們一起走上舞臺(tái)。起初，我的動(dòng)作有些僵硬，腦海里不斷浮現(xiàn)出可能出錯(cuò)的畫面。但當(dāng)我看到臺(tái)下伊斯拉那充滿鼓勵(lì)的眼神時(shí)，心中涌起一股力量。她微笑著，眼神中沒有絲毫的懷疑和擔(dān)憂，仿佛在告訴我“你可以的”。在她的鼓勵(lì)下，我逐漸放松下來，動(dòng)作也越來越流暢。隨著音樂的推進(jìn)，我完全沉浸在舞蹈中，和隊(duì)友們配合默契，順利完成了表演。臺(tái)下響起了熱烈的掌聲，我松了一口氣，心中滿是喜悅和感激。10續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph2:IsteppedoffthestageandexpressedmythankstoIsla,whowasreadytosing.我走下舞臺(tái)，向準(zhǔn)備唱歌的伊斯拉表達(dá)了感謝。她穿著自己精心縫制的表演服裝，雖然不是名牌，但卻別具一格，充滿了她的個(gè)人風(fēng)格。她微笑著回應(yīng)我，眼神中透露出自信和堅(jiān)定。我坐在觀眾席上，目不轉(zhuǎn)睛地看著她。音樂響起，伊斯拉開口唱歌，她的聲音清脆悅耳，宛如天籟之音。她的歌聲充滿了感染力，每一個(gè)音符都仿佛帶著情感，深深地打動(dòng)了在場(chǎng)的每一個(gè)人。臺(tái)下的觀眾們都沉浸在她的歌聲中，原本那些對(duì)她充滿偏見的同學(xué)，此刻也被她的才華所折服。表演結(jié)束后，全場(chǎng)爆發(fā)出雷鳴般的掌聲。伊斯拉成功了！她用自己的實(shí)力證明了自己。從那以后，我徹底明白了，真正的友誼不應(yīng)該被外界的看法所左右，伊斯拉是我最珍貴的朋友，我為有她這樣的朋友而感到驕傲。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)Ultimately,itwasmyturntoperform,andIfeltextremelynervous.Standingbehindthestagecurtain,Icouldhearthenoisychatteroftheaudience.Myheartwaspoundingrapidly,andmyhandsweretremblingslightly.Asthemusicstarted,Itookadeepbreathandwalkedontothestagewithmyteammates.Atfirst,mymovementswereabitstiff,andallsortsofpossiblemistakeskeptflashingthroughmymind.ButwhenIsawIsla'sencouragingeyesintheaudience,asurgeofstrengthwelledupinmyheart.Shesmiledatme,hereyesfreeofanydoubtorworry,asifshewastellingme,"Youcandoit."Withhersupport,Igraduallyrelaxed,andmymovementsbecamemoreandmorefluid.Asthemusicprogressed,Iwascompletelyimmersedinthedance,andIcooperatedperfectlywithmyteammates,successfullycompletingtheperformance.Theaudienceburstintowarmapplause,andIletoutasighofrelief,filledwithjoyandgratitude.13范文呈現(xiàn)IsteppedoffthestageandexpressedmythankstoIsla,whowasreadytosing.Shewaswearingtheperformancecostumeshehadsewncarefullybyherself.Althoughitwasn'tabrand-nameone,itwasuniqueandfullofherpersonalstyle.Shesmiledbackatme,hereyesrevealingconfidenceanddetermination.Isatintheaudienceandwatchedherintently.Whenthemusicstarted,Islabegantosing.Hervoicewasclearandsweet,likethesoundofnature.Hersingingwasfullof感染力，andeverynoteseemedtocarryemotions,deeplytouchingeveryonepresent.Theaudiencewascompletelyimmersedinhersinging.Thoseclassmateswhohadbeenprejudicedagainstherwerenowalsoimpressedbyhertalent.Aftertheperformance,thewholeplaceeruptedintothunderousapplause.Islahadsucceeded!Shehadprovenherselfwithherstrength.Fromthenon,Icompletelyunderstoodthattruefriendshipshouldnotbeinfluencedbyothers'opinions.Islawasmymostpreciousfriend,andIwasproudtohaveherasmyfriend.14升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Ultimately,itwasmyturntoperform,andIwasovercomewithanoverwhelmingsenseofnervousness.Standingbackstage,justbehindtheheavycurtain,Icouldhearthemuffledchatteroftheaudience,theirvoicesalow,indistincthumthatseemedtoechoinmyears.MyheartwaspoundingsofiercelythatIcouldfeelitthumpinginmychest,andmyhandstrembleduncontrollably.Asthemusicbegantoplay,fillingtheairwithitsrhythmicbeats,Itookadeep,steadyingbreathandsteppedontothestage,flankedbymyteammates.Atfirst,mymovementswerestiffandawkward,mymindcloudedwithaconstantstreamofthoughtsaboutallthethingsthatcouldgowrong.Butthen,asmyeyesscannedtheaudience,IcaughtsightofIsla.Hereyesmetmine,andinthatinstant,Isawnothingbutencouragementandbelief.Shewassmilingatme,herexpressionfilledwithwarmthandconfidence,asifshewassilentlytellingmethatIhadthis.ThatsimplelookfromhergavemetheboostIneeded.Slowlybutsurely,Ibegantorelax.Mymusclesloosened,andmymovementsbecamemorefluidandnatural.Asthemusiccontinuedtoplay,Ilostmyselfinthedance,movinginperfectharmonywithmyteammates.BeforeIknewit,theperformancewasover,andtheaudienceeruptedintothunderousapplause.Iletoutalongsighofrelief,awaveofjoyandgratitudewashingoverme.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)IsteppedoffthestageandmademywayovertoIsla,whowaswaitinginthewings,readytotakeherturn.Shewasdressedinabeautifulcostumethatshehadsewnherself,acreationthatwasuniquelyherown.Itwasn'tadesignerlabel,butitwasfilledwithhercreativityandpersonality.ShesmiledatmeasIapproached,hereyesshiningwithexcitementanddetermination.Itookamomenttothankherforthesupportshehadgivenme,andshenodded,hersmilewidening.Ithenfoundmyseatintheaudienceandwatchedintentlyasshetookthestage.Whenthemusicstarted,andsheopenedhermouthtosing,Iwasimmediatelystruck