話題五健康與急救全國(guó)近幾年關(guān)于“健康與急救”話題的書面表達(dá)涉及較廣,主要從以下幾個(gè)角

度命題:1.談?wù)摻】碉嬍骋约叭绾伪３纸】?2.如何保障個(gè)人的人身安全及對(duì)生活中常見的安全注意事項(xiàng)進(jìn)行描述;3.關(guān)于健康,談自己的看法與做法。命題探究開頭句1.Itisveryimportanttokeephealthy.2.Moreandmorepeoplerealizetheimportanceofkeepinghealthy.3.Whatisthemostimportantthingintheworld?Ithinkitishealth.亮點(diǎn)句型中間句1.It'snecessaryforustodoenoughexercisetokeephealthy.2.Eatingfruitandvegetablesisgoodforyourhealth,whileeatingjunkfoodisbad

foryourhealth.3.Weneithergotosleeptoolatenorgetuptoolate.結(jié)尾句1.Ifwecanfollowtheadvice,Ibelievewecanhaveahealthierbodyandabetter

life.2.Wemusttryourbesttoprotectandvalueourlives.3.Ihopeyouarehealthyandenjoyyourlife.好句積累1.Goodhealthisoverwealth.健康是最大的財(cái)富。2.Healthishappiness.健康就是幸福。3.Goodmedicinealwaystastesbitter.良藥苦口利于病。4.Earlytobedandearlytorisemakesamanhealthy.早睡早起身體好。3月26日是第二十三個(gè)全國(guó)中小學(xué)生安全教育日。今年安全教育日的主題是

“普及安全知識(shí),確保生命安全”。暑假即將來(lái)臨,為了進(jìn)一步增強(qiáng)中小學(xué)生的

安全意識(shí),提高自我保護(hù)能力,學(xué)校將舉行以安全為主題的征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)

下面表格內(nèi)容寫一篇題為“Howcanwemakeourselvessafe?”的英語(yǔ)短文。典例剖析要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容飲食安全不吃變質(zhì)食物,少吃或不吃垃圾食品交友安全網(wǎng)上慎重交友,不和陌生人交談旅行安全照看好私人物品,遇險(xiǎn)及時(shí)報(bào)警游泳安全不獨(dú)自游泳,不到河、湖里游泳…………提示詞:becareful(小心)gobad(變質(zhì))要求:1.必須包含所給的全部要點(diǎn)及內(nèi)容,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名。3.詞數(shù)100左右,開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Howcanwemakeourselvessafe?Asteenagers,tolearnhowtomakeourselvessafeisespeciallyimportant.

寫作指導(dǎo)本文是篇說明文。寫作內(nèi)容要圍繞“如何能使自己安全?”而進(jìn)行,根據(jù)寫作提

示進(jìn)行描述,不可遺漏要點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,全文應(yīng)以第一人稱為主,時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般

現(xiàn)在時(shí)。注意過渡詞的使用和句式的多樣性。謀篇布局

范文評(píng)析Howcanwemakeourselvessafe?①Asteenagers,tolearnhowtomakeourselvessafeisespeciallyimpor-

tant.Herearesomeofmysuggestions.②First,wearesupposedtobecarefulwhenmakingfriendsonline,

whichmaybringusunnecessarytroubles.Second,remembernevertogo

swimmingonourownintheriverorlakebecausedoingthatwillprobably

putourselvesintodangeroussituations.Besides,inordertoeathealthily

andsafely,we'dbettereatlessjunkfoodandnoteatfoodthatgoesbad,

fortheywilldoharmtoourhealth.Atlast,whentravelingoutside,take

careofourpersonalthingsandcallthepoliceforhelpintimeifwearein

danger.③Inshort,safetymustcomefirst!①開頭:引出話題:要分享一些如何使自己安全的建議。②正文:使自己安全的具體措施及理由。過渡語(yǔ)運(yùn)用恰當(dāng),句式結(jié)構(gòu)合

理且多樣。③結(jié)尾:再次強(qiáng)調(diào)安全的重要性。亮點(diǎn)仿寫短語(yǔ)1.besupposedtodosth.應(yīng)該做某事2.makefriends交朋友3.onone'sown靠某人自己4.inorderto為了5.doharmto對(duì)……有害6.takecareof照顧7.callthepoliceforhelpintime及時(shí)報(bào)警求助8.beindanger處于危險(xiǎn)之中仿寫1.為了將來(lái)能好好照顧自己,從現(xiàn)在開始我們應(yīng)該靠我們自己去做一些事情。

(inorderto,takecareof,besupposedtodosth.,onone'sown)

Inordertotakecareofourselveswellinthefuture,wearesupposedtodosome-

thingonourownfromnowon.

2.無(wú)論何時(shí)我們處于危險(xiǎn)之中,我們應(yīng)該及時(shí)報(bào)警求