expensivefood.Justthedaybefore,IhadhadaconverWhenIenteredthevethospital,theplacewasbusywithactivity.Thevetassistantwasoccupiedhelpinganothercustomer.Fortunately,sherecognizedmeandkneaskedmeifIwantedhalfacaseorathen,anothercustomepolitelysaid,“Goaheadandservethisgentleman.Meanwhile,IShelookedrelievedandsaid,"Thanks,tThegentleman,akind-lookiyouwereherebeforeme."IwavedmyhandandrepliedHejokinglyreplied,"Wow,howcanIthWithoutreallythinking,inamomentofcheerfulness,Isaid,“Youcouldbuymeacaseha."IlaughedandthenturnedtoAsIwalkedoutofthevethospital,Icouldn'thelpbuts注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。 文章大意文章講述了“我”在去當?shù)厮幍晖局?，想起要給女兒的貓買獸醫(yī)推薦的昂貴罐裝貓糧。在獸醫(yī)醫(yī)院，忙碌的獸醫(yī)助理認出了“我”，知道“我”所需的貓糧。這時另一位顧客進來，“我”因不著急，便讓他先辦理業(yè)務，自己去藥店，還開玩笑說若要感謝就幫“我”買一箱貓糧。離開獸醫(yī)醫(yī)院時，“我”因這次意外互動感到溫暖，卻不知接下來會有驚喜。故事山分析開端：“我”要給女兒的貓買昂貴的獸醫(yī)推薦的貓糧，女兒經(jīng)濟困難，“我”也負擔有壓力。發(fā)展：在獸醫(yī)醫(yī)院，“我”讓后來的顧客先辦理業(yè)務，還開玩笑說讓他買箱貓糧作為感謝。高潮（續(xù)寫部分）：10分鐘后“我”回到獸醫(yī)醫(yī)院，發(fā)現(xiàn)那位顧客真的幫“我”買了貓糧，這一情節(jié)將故事推向高潮。結(jié)局：“我”帶著貓糧回家，心中充滿感動，領悟到生活中善良的互動能帶來美好。伏筆以及在續(xù)寫中的回應伏筆：“我”與女兒的對話提及貓糧昂貴，自己負擔有壓力?；貞簽楹竺骖櫩蛶兔I貓糧，“我”的驚喜和感動做鋪墊，突出這份幫助的珍貴。伏筆：“我”在獸醫(yī)醫(yī)院讓后來的顧客先辦理業(yè)務?；貞后w現(xiàn)“我”的善良，促使顧客產(chǎn)生回報的想法，推動顧客幫“我”買貓糧情節(jié)的發(fā)展。伏筆：“我”開玩笑說顧客若感謝就買箱貓糧?；貞侯櫩彤斦妫苯右隼m(xù)寫中顧客買貓糧的情節(jié)。伏筆：“我”離開時因意外互動感到溫暖?；貞号c續(xù)寫中“我”收到貓糧后的感動相呼應，強化情感遞進。伏筆：“我”說不知未來有何驚喜?；貞豪m(xù)寫中顧客買貓糧就是那個驚喜，前后呼應。續(xù)寫要點（兩段）第一段：10分鐘后“我”回到獸醫(yī)醫(yī)院，看到那位顧客還在，且旁邊放著一箱貓糧，獸醫(yī)助理告知“我”顧客已幫“我”付款，“我”十分驚訝和感動，與顧客交流，表達感激。第二段：“我”帶著貓糧回家，迫不及待告訴女兒這個溫暖的故事，女兒也很感動?！拔摇鄙羁腆w會到生活中不經(jīng)意的善良能帶來意想不到的美好，決定以后也要更多傳遞善意。情感線起初，“我”因負擔女兒貓咪昂貴的貓糧費用而有些憂慮。在獸醫(yī)醫(yī)院與顧客互動時，“我”以輕松玩笑的態(tài)度應對，離開時感到一絲溫暖。當10分鐘后回到醫(yī)院發(fā)現(xiàn)顧客幫“我”買了貓糧，“我”從驚訝轉(zhuǎn)為深深的感動?；丶遗c女兒分享后，這種感動進一步升華，“我”意識到生活中善意的傳遞如此美好，內(nèi)心充滿對人性美好的贊美和對傳遞善意的堅定決心。故事線“我”因女兒貓咪的昂貴貓糧經(jīng)濟有壓力，去獸醫(yī)醫(yī)院購買。在獸醫(yī)醫(yī)院，“我”讓后來的顧客先辦理業(yè)務，并開玩笑讓他買貓糧感謝。10分鐘后“我”回到醫(yī)院，發(fā)現(xiàn)顧客真幫“我”買了貓糧?！拔摇迸c顧客交流，表達感激?！拔摇睅е埣Z回家，告訴女兒這件事?！拔摇鳖I悟到生活中善意傳遞的美好，決定傳遞善意。主旨升華句5句英文Thissmallactofkindnessnotonlylightenedmyfinancialburdenbutalsoreaffirmedmyfaithinthegoodnessofhumanity.這一小小的善舉不僅減輕了我的經(jīng)濟負擔，也再次堅定了我對人性美好的信念。Theunexpectedgenerosityfromastrangertaughtmethatasimpleactofkindnesscanhaveaprofoundimpactonsomeone'slife.來自陌生人的意外慷慨讓我明白，一個簡單的善舉能對他人的生活產(chǎn)生深遠影響。Inaworldoftenfilledwithstressandchallenges,thisexperienceremindedmeofthepowerofkindnesstobringwarmthandhope.在一個常常充滿壓力和挑戰(zhàn)的世界里，這次經(jīng)歷讓我想起善良帶來溫暖和希望的力量。Thekindnessshownbythegentlemanmademerealizethateveninthemostordinarymoments,wehavetheopportunitytomakeadifferencebybeingkind.這位先生展現(xiàn)的善良讓我意識到，即使在最平凡的時刻，我們也有機會通過善良產(chǎn)生影響。Thisheart-warmingincidentinspiredmetopayitforwardandspreadkindnesswhereverIgo,believingthatsmallactscancreateabigrippleeffect.這個暖心的事件激勵我將善意傳遞下去，無論走到哪里都傳播善良，相信小小的舉動可以產(chǎn)生巨大的連鎖反應。寫作示范一Ireturned10minuteslater.AsIwalkedbackintothevethospital,Inoticedthekind-lookingmanstillstandingatthecounter.Tomyastonishment,therewasacaseofcatfoodbesidehim.Thevetassistantsmiledatmeandsaid,“Thisgentlemaninsistedonbuyingthecatfoodforyouasatokenofgratitudeforyourkindness.”IwassosurprisedthatIwasatalossforwords.Ilookedattheman,andhejustsmiledandsaid,“Apromiseisapromise.”Ithankedhimprofusely,andwechattedforawhileabouttheimportanceofkindness.

Withthecaseofcatfood,Igothome.Icouldn'twaittotellmydaughterwhathadhappened.Hereyeswidenedindisbelief,andthenabigsmilespreadacrossherface.Shewasdeeplytouchedbythestranger'skindness.Thisexperiencemademerealizethatasimpleactofkindness,likelettingsomeonegoaheadinline,canleadtoawonderfulchainreaction.Italsotaughtmethatinaworldfullofchallenges,thereisalwaysroomforkindnessandunexpectedblessings.IdecidedthenandtheretobemoregenerousandspreadkindnesswhereverIcould.寫作示范二Ireturned10minuteslater.WhenIenteredthevethospital,Iwasgreetedwithasightthatmademyheartskipabeat.Thegentlemanwasstandingtherewithahugesmile,andrightnexttohimwasthecaseofcatfoodIneeded.Thevetassistantexplained,“Hewaitedforyoutocomebackandpaidforthecatfood.Hesaiditwastheleasthecoulddo.”Iwasoverwhelmedwithgratitude.Ishookhishandfirmlyandexpressedhowmuchhisgesturemeanttome.Hejustsaid,“It'samazinghowalittlekindnesscanmakeabigdifference.”

Withthecaseofcatfood,Igothome.Irushedtosharethisheart-warmingstorywithmydaughter.Shewasmovedtotears,andwebothfeltasenseofwarmthandhope.Thisencountermademeunderstandthatkindnessisauniversallanguagethatcanbridgegapsbetweenstrangers.Itdoesn'ttakemuchtobekind,buttheimpactithascanbeimmeasurable.Fromthatdayon,Imadeupmymindtobeacarrierofkindness,hopingtocreatemorebeautifulmomentslikethisintheworld.OnepossibleversionIreturned10minuteslater.WhenIwalkedbackintothevethospital,Iwasgreetedbythevetassistantwithabigsmile.Shesaid,"Youhaveaverykindgentlemanwaitingforyou."IwasabitpuzzleduntilIsawthemanwhoIhadletgoaheadofme.Hewasstandingtherewithacaseofcatfoodwithhishands.Hesmiledatme,saying"IthinkIshouldkeepmypromise.Here'syourcaseofcatfoodasathankyouforyourkindness."Iwascompletelysurprised.Ineverthoughthewouldactuallytakemyjokeseriously.Ithankedhimgenerously,andhejustshruggedandsaid,"It'stheleastIcoulddo."Wechattedforawhile,andIfoundoutthathewasalsoananimallover