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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。AsValentine’sDay,atimeforexpressingaffectionthroughtheexchangeofpresents,drewnear,Kendrafoundherselfseatedatthekitchentable,carefullypenninghernameonValentine’scardsforherclassmates.Sherecognizedherownhesitation;wordsdidn’tcomeeasilytoher.Whilesheenviedtheeasewithwhichherpeerstalkedandlaughed,hershynessoftenkeptherquiet.Kendragrabbedanothercard..Hereyeslitupatthephrase“You’redynamite(引起轟動的人或物)!”—atermthatwouldundoubtedlydelightherGrammy,whofrequentlyusedtheexpressiontopraisetheirfestivedecorations.“Well,thatlooksdynamite!”Grammywouldexclaim,herapprovalfillingKendrawithwarmth.JustasKendrawassigningthecards,hermothercamein,sharingthesadnewsofElise,theirneighbor,andherrecentaccidentthatledtoabrokenleg,restrictinghertohomeschoolingforthecomingweeks.KendrafeltsorryforElise,andquicklypickedthemostsplendidvalentine,hurryingtoElise’shome.Uponarrival,Kendra’slookfelluponthelife-sizeddeerstatuedecoratingthefrontyard.Shestudiedit,sayingtoherself,“Wouldn’tthisdeerlookcoolwithabigheartaroundhisneck?ElisecouldlookoutofthewindowandseeitdecoratedforValentine’sday.”Withthisidea,KendragotthesizableredheartherGrammyhadgivenher,tieditwithstring,andhungitaroundthestatue’snecklikeafestivechain.Thenextday,shedecoratedtheantlers(鹿角)withavarietyofsmallerhearts.ItwasduringthisactofkindnessthatColinandAmy,Elise’sfellowclassmates,happeneduponthescene.“AreyoudecoratingElise’sdeerforValentine’sDay?”theyasked.Kendraconfirmedwithanod,explainingherintentiontocheerupElise.Despiteheruncertaintyaboutwhattoaddnext,Colinproposedaddingsomecolor,whileAmysuggestedputtingdecorationsonthedeer’sbackandforehead.Unitedbyasharedpurpose,theyagreedtomeetlater.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Thatafternoon,theymettodecoratethedeerwiththematerialstheyhadsourced._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Justthen,Elise’sfrontdooropened,andElisestuckherheadout._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意情人節(jié)臨近,害羞的Kendra在為同學們寫情人節(jié)賀卡時,看到“你真了不起”這樣的話語,想到常這樣夸贊自己的奶奶。此時媽媽告知鄰居Elise因意外摔斷腿,需在家學習幾周,Kendra心生同情,帶著最漂亮的情人節(jié)賀卡去看望Elise??吹紼lise家院子里的鹿雕像,Kendra想到用奶奶給的大紅心裝飾它,讓Elise能從窗戶看到。第二天,她繼續(xù)裝飾鹿角,這時Elise的同學Colin和Amy路過,了解情況后,三人決定一起為鹿雕像做更多裝飾。故事山分析開端:情人節(jié)將至,害羞的Kendra寫賀卡,媽媽帶來鄰居Elise受傷的消息。發(fā)展:Kendra決定裝飾Elise家院子里的鹿雕像,Colin和Amy加入。高潮(續(xù)寫部分):三人完成裝飾,Elise看到裝飾后的驚喜反應。結局:大家收獲快樂,友誼得以增進,善良得到傳遞。伏筆以及在續(xù)寫中的回應Kendra的害羞:續(xù)寫中她勇敢地和Colin、Amy一起完成裝飾,逐漸克服害羞,變得更加開朗。奶奶的夸贊:奶奶的夸贊讓Kendra感到溫暖,這種溫暖促使她將善意傳遞給Elise,續(xù)寫中她的行為也為Elise帶來溫暖。Elise的意外:因為Elise受傷在家,才有了Kendra等人裝飾鹿雕像為她帶來快樂的故事,續(xù)寫中Elise看到裝飾后的驚喜,體現(xiàn)了大家對她的關懷。Kendra看到鹿雕像想到裝飾它:這一想法為后續(xù)裝飾行動做鋪墊,續(xù)寫中大家圍繞這個想法進一步完善裝飾。Colin和Amy的加入:續(xù)寫中三人齊心協(xié)力完成裝飾,他們的加入豐富了故事內容,體現(xiàn)了合作的力量。續(xù)寫要點(兩段)第一段:詳細描述三人如何用找來的材料裝飾鹿雕像,如Colin可能帶來彩色顏料給鹿雕像上色,Amy帶來彩帶系在鹿的身上,Kendra繼續(xù)用更多的心形裝飾點綴細節(jié),大家一邊討論一邊分工合作,使鹿雕像變得越來越漂亮。第二段:描寫Elise看到裝飾后的鹿雕像的反應,她可能驚訝地捂住嘴巴,眼中閃爍著感動的淚花,然后對大家表示感謝,大家一起交流,分享彼此的想法,Kendra感受到和朋友一起幫助他人帶來的快樂,性格也變得更加開朗。情感線起初,Kendra因害羞在社交中有些退縮,得知Elise受傷后,她出于同情主動行動起來。在裝飾鹿雕像時,她和Colin、Amy相遇并合作,逐漸克服內心的羞澀,投入到為Elise帶來快樂的行動中。當Elise看到裝飾后,大家都收獲了感動和喜悅,Kendra也從這次經歷中獲得自信,感受到友誼和善良帶來的溫暖,性格變得更加積極向上。故事線情人節(jié)前夕Kendra寫賀卡。媽媽告知Elise受傷的消息。Kendra決定裝飾Elise家的鹿雕像。Colin和Amy加入裝飾行動。三人完成對鹿雕像的裝飾。Elise看到裝飾后的反應及大家的交流。主旨升華句5句英文Smallactsofkindness,whencombinedwiththepoweroffriendship,cancreateabigimpactandbringjoytoothers'lives.Intheprocessofhelpingothers,wenotonlyspreadlovebutalsoovercomeourownweaknessesandgrowasindividuals.Truefriendshipisforgedinthesharedpursuitofbringinghappinesstothoseinneed,justlikewhatKendra,Colin,andAmydid.Asimpleidea,drivenbycompassion,canturnintoabeautifulgesturethatwarmstheheartsofboththegiverandthereceiver.Valentine'sDay,adayoflove,servesasareminderthatactsofkindness,nomatterhowsmall,canbrightensomeone'sworldandstrengthenthebondsamongpeople.寫作示范一Thatafternoon,theymettodecoratethedeerwiththematerialstheyhadsourced.Colinbroughtcolorfulpaintsandcarefullypaintedthedeer'shoovesbrightred.Amyarrivedwithlong,shinyribbons,whichsheskillfullytiedaroundthedeer'sbody,creatingbeautifulbows.Kendraaddedmoreheartsshehadmade,somewithglitteryedges.Theychattedandlaughedastheyworked,andKendrafoundherselfspeakingmorefreelythaneverbefore.TheircombinedeffortstransformedthedeerintoaspectacularValentine'sdisplay.
Justthen,Elise'sfrontdooropened,andElisestuckherheadout.Hereyeswidenedinastonishmentasshetookinthedecorateddeer."Ohmygoodness!"sheexclaimed."Thisisamazing!Thankyousomuch!"Kendra,Colin,andAmyrushedovertoher,andtheyallstartedtalkingatonce,sharingtheirideasandhowmuchtheywantedtocheerherup.Kendrafeltawarmglowinside.Hershynesswasfadingaway,replacedbythejoyoffriendshipandthesatisfactionofmakingadifference.寫作示范二Thatafternoon,theymettodecoratethedeerwiththematerialstheyhadsourced.Amyhadfoundsomeshinytinsel,whichshewrappedaroundthedeer'santlers,makingthemsparkleinthesunlight.Colinbroughtlargecardboardcut-outsofCupids,whichtheyattachedtothedeer'ssides.Kendraaddedmoreheart-shapedballoons,tyingthemtothedeer'slegs.Astheyworked,theirconversationflowedeasily,andKendrarealizedthathershynesswasn'tabarrieranymore.Thedeerwasbecomingamasterpiece.
Justthen,Elise'sfrontdooropened,andElisestuckherheadout.Shewasspeechlessforamoment,hereyesfilledwithtearsofhappiness."Ican'tbelieveyoudidthisforme!"shefinallymanagedtosay.Kendrasmiled,feelingasenseofaccomplishment.Theyallsatontheporch,chattingandlaughing,andKendraknewthatthisValentine'sDaywouldbeoneshewouldneverforget.Itwasn'tjustaboutdecoratingadeer;itwasaboutfriendship,kindness,andsteppingoutofhercomfortzone.【答案】參考范文Thatafternoon,theymettodecoratethedeerwiththematerialstheyhadsourced.Colin,withhisartistictouch,laidtheredblanketoverthedeer’sback,givingitafestivelook.Meanwhile,Kendra,feelingasparkofcreativity,carefullyplacedsparklyheart-shapedstickersuponthedeer’sforehead,addingabitoffun.“Thatlookssocute!”Amyexclaimed.Then,theydec
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