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讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Ginawalkedherwaytowardstheschoolbuilding.Herstomachfluttered(振動(dòng))withbutterflies.Itwasnotjustanyday.Itwasherfirstdayinanewschoolinanewtown,andthesenseofstartingoverwasenormous.Shelookedbacktowavegoodbyetoherparents,whorespondedwiththumbs-upandencouragingsmiles.Iftheyonlyknewhownervousshewas.Backinheroldschool,Ginahadasolidcircleoffriendswhohadbeenwithhersincekindergarten.Theyhadexperiencedcountlessadventurestogether,sharedsecrets,andsupportedeachotherthrougheverychallenge.EvenwhenGinagotbraces(牙套),herfriendsnevermadeherfeelembarrassedaboutit.However,allthosecomfortingmemorieswerenowpartofaclosechapter.AsGinastoodbeforetheimpressivedoorsofhernewschool.sherealizedshewasontheedgeofanewchapterinherlife.Inside,thestudentsinGina’sclassseemedwelcomingandfriendly.Theysmiledandofferedgreetings,makinganefforttoincludeher.Despitetheirkindness,Ginafoundherselfsmilinglessandlessduetoherlackofconfidenceinherappearance.Shewasconstantlyworriedthatshecouldn’tfitintothenewgroup.Nowitwasthegymclass.Thecoachannouncedtheywouldbeplayingvolleyball.“Gina,”thecoachcalledout,“you’replayinglibero(自由人)today,okay?”Theliberoinvolleyballisaplayerwhospecializesindefenseandmovesaroundthecourtquicklyandfreelytopasstheball.“Surething!”Ginareplied.Sheputonhersportsshirtandtookherposition,focusingontheareanearthebackofthecourt.Shescannedthecourtandlookedovertothepositionwhereherteammatewaspreparingtoserve.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Asthevolleyballgamebegan,Ginafeltheranxietyincrease.Thegamecontinued,andGinafeltanewfoundconfidence.吉娜排球故事續(xù)寫續(xù)寫分析(兩段)?第一段續(xù)寫分析:此段開篇通過(guò)環(huán)境描寫營(yíng)造出壓抑氛圍,“gymnasiumseemedtocloseinaroundGina”直觀展現(xiàn)出吉娜的局促感,“fluorescentlightsaboveflickeredslightly”和“eerieglow”強(qiáng)化這種不安。人群的“chattercreatingalow-levelhum”加劇她內(nèi)心的混亂。對(duì)吉娜身體反應(yīng)的描寫,如“palmsweresweaty”“l(fā)egstrembledslightly”,生動(dòng)呈現(xiàn)其緊張狀態(tài)。在比賽表現(xiàn)上,“froze”“clumsypass”“stumbledandalmostfell”等細(xì)節(jié),體現(xiàn)出她的慌亂與不適應(yīng),“studentsnearbywhispered”和“faceflushedwithembarrassment”進(jìn)一步渲染她的窘迫,突出她在新環(huán)境下比賽時(shí)的艱難處境,為后文的轉(zhuǎn)變做足鋪墊。?第二段續(xù)寫分析:該段以吉娜回憶過(guò)去訓(xùn)練經(jīng)歷為情感觸發(fā)點(diǎn),“rememberedthecountlesshoursshehadpracticed”成為她鼓起勇氣的動(dòng)力源泉?!癲ovetosaveaseeminglyimpossibleshot”這一關(guān)鍵動(dòng)作,是她自信回歸的轉(zhuǎn)折點(diǎn),隊(duì)友的歡呼“Greatjob,Gina!”起到強(qiáng)化作用,讓她獲得認(rèn)可。后續(xù)“movednimbly”“interceptingballswithprecision”等表述,詳細(xì)描繪出她找回自信后的出色表現(xiàn)。最后“realizedthatshewasjustascapable”以及對(duì)未來(lái)的期待,完成了她從焦慮到自信的轉(zhuǎn)變,突出成長(zhǎng)主題,為故事畫上積極句號(hào)。?故事線?吉娜來(lái)到新學(xué)校,因新環(huán)境而緊張不安,懷念舊友陪伴,對(duì)融入新集體感到迷茫。?在課堂上,同學(xué)們友好熱情,但吉娜因外貌不自信,擔(dān)憂無(wú)法融入。?體育課排球比賽開始,壓抑的環(huán)境和緊張的情緒使吉娜表現(xiàn)不佳,失誤頻出,陷入自我懷疑,認(rèn)為讓團(tuán)隊(duì)失望。?比賽中,吉娜回憶起舊校訓(xùn)練經(jīng)歷,鼓起勇氣做出精彩救球,得到隊(duì)友歡呼,從此表現(xiàn)漸入佳境,找回自信。?比賽結(jié)束,吉娜認(rèn)識(shí)到自身能力,對(duì)未來(lái)在新學(xué)校的體育活動(dòng)充滿期待,完成在新環(huán)境中的一次重要成長(zhǎng)。?銜接句?JustwhenGinawasonthevergeofbeingcompletelyoverwhelmedbythepressureandanxietyinthevolleyballgame,avividmemoryfromherpasttrainingsuddenlyflashedinhermind,likeabeaconofhope,andthat'swhentheturningpointoccurred.(正當(dāng)吉娜在排球比賽中幾乎被壓力和焦慮完全壓垮時(shí),她過(guò)去訓(xùn)練的一段生動(dòng)記憶突然在腦海中閃現(xiàn),如同希望的燈塔,而轉(zhuǎn)折點(diǎn)就在此時(shí)出現(xiàn)。)?AsthegamedraggedonandGina'sconfidenceseemedtobefadingawaywitheachpassingmoment,acrucialmomentarrivedthatwouldshatterherself-doubtandleadhertowardsanew-foundsenseofassurance.(隨著比賽的持續(xù)進(jìn)行,吉娜的自信似乎隨著每一刻的流逝而逐漸消失,一個(gè)關(guān)鍵時(shí)刻到來(lái)了,它將打破她的自我懷疑,引領(lǐng)她走向新獲得的自信。)?Despitetheinitialsetbacksandtheintimidatingenvironmentinthegymnasium,Ginarefusedtobedefeated.Itwasthisunwaveringdeterminationthatfinallyallowedhertobreakthroughthebarrierofanxietyandembracehertruepotentialonthevolleyballcourt.(盡管在體育館里最初遭遇挫折,環(huán)境也令人生畏,但吉娜拒絕被打敗。正是這種堅(jiān)定不移的決心最終使她突破了焦慮的障礙,在排球場(chǎng)上發(fā)揮出了自己的真正潛力。)?Afteraseriesofclumsyattemptsandmomentsofintenseself-reflection,Ginafinallysummonedthecouragetodrawonherpastskillsandexperiences.Thisdecisionbecamethecatalystforherremarkabletransformationfromanervousplayertoaconfidentathlete.(在經(jīng)歷了一系列笨拙的嘗試和深刻的自我反思后,吉娜終于鼓起勇氣運(yùn)用她過(guò)去的技能和經(jīng)驗(yàn)。這個(gè)決定成為了她從一個(gè)緊張的球員轉(zhuǎn)變?yōu)橐粋€(gè)自信運(yùn)動(dòng)員的非凡轉(zhuǎn)變的催化劑。)?Withthegameinfullswingandthepressuremounting,Ginawasatacrossroads.Butthen,asingleheroicplaynotonlysavedtheballbutalsoignitedasparkofconfidencewithinher,settingheronapathofcontinuousimprovementandsuccess.(隨著比賽的激烈進(jìn)行,壓力越來(lái)越大,吉娜處于一個(gè)十字路口。但隨后,一次英勇的救球不僅救了球,還在她內(nèi)心點(diǎn)燃了自信的火花,讓她走上了不斷進(jìn)步和成功的道路。)?主旨升華句?ThisheartwarmingstoryofGinavividlydemonstratesthateveninthemostintimidatingandunfamiliarcircumstances,thepowerofone'sinnerstrengthandpastexperiencescantriumphoveranxiety,enablingustoovercomechallengesandembracenewbeginningswithconfidence.(吉娜這個(gè)溫馨的故事生動(dòng)地表明,即使在最令人生畏和陌生的環(huán)境中,一個(gè)人的內(nèi)在力量和過(guò)去的經(jīng)歷也能戰(zhàn)勝焦慮,使我們有信心克服挑戰(zhàn),擁抱新的開始。)?ThroughGina'sjourneyinthevolleyballgame,wecanseethatself-confidenceisnotaninherenttraitbutaqualitythatcanbecultivatedthroughperseveranceandtherecognitionofourowncapabilities.Itservesasareminderthatweareallcapableofachievinggreatthingswhenwebelieveinourselves.(通過(guò)吉娜在排球比賽中的歷程,我們可以看到自信不是一種天生的特質(zhì),而是一種可以通過(guò)堅(jiān)持和對(duì)自身能力的認(rèn)識(shí)來(lái)培養(yǎng)的品質(zhì)。它提醒我們,當(dāng)我們相信自己時(shí),我們都有能力取得偉大的成就。)?ThenarrativeaboutGinaservesasapowerfultestamenttothefactthatnewenvironments,thoughfilledwithuncertainties,arealsorichwithopportunitiesforpersonalgrowth.Byfacingourfearshead-on,justlikeGinadidonthevolleyballcourt,wecanbreakfreefromtheshacklesofself-doubtandemergestrongerandmoreconfident.(關(guān)于吉娜的故事有力地證明了一個(gè)事實(shí),即新環(huán)境雖然充滿不確定性,但也蘊(yùn)含著豐富的個(gè)人成長(zhǎng)機(jī)會(huì)。像吉娜在排球場(chǎng)上那樣直面恐懼,我們可以掙脫自我懷疑的枷鎖,變得更強(qiáng)大、更自信。)?Thisstoryhighlightsthesignificanceofsportsasaplatformfornotonlyphysicaldevelopmentbutalsomentalandemotionalgrowth.Gina'sexperienceonthevolleyballcourtnotonlyenhancedherathleticskillsbutalsofortifiedherresilienceandself-belief,showingustheprofoundimpactthatsportscanhaveonourlives.(這個(gè)故事突出了體育作為一個(gè)平臺(tái)的重要性,它不僅有助于身體發(fā)展,還有助于心理和情感成長(zhǎng)。吉娜在排球場(chǎng)上的經(jīng)歷不僅提高了她的運(yùn)動(dòng)技能,還增強(qiáng)了她的韌性和自信心,向我們展示了體育對(duì)我們生活的深遠(yuǎn)影響。)?Gina'stransformationfromanervousnewcomerstrugglingtofitintoaconfidentvolleyballplayerwhoshinesonthecourtisabeautifulexampleofhowasingleeventcanserveasacatalystforself-discoveryandpersonaltransformation.Itencouragesustostepoutofourcomfortzones,facechallengesbravely,andunlockourfullpotential.(吉娜從一個(gè)努力融入新環(huán)境的緊張新人轉(zhuǎn)變?yōu)樵谇驁?chǎng)上閃耀的自信排球運(yùn)動(dòng)員,這是一個(gè)美麗的例子,展示了一個(gè)單一事件如何能成為自我發(fā)現(xiàn)和個(gè)人轉(zhuǎn)變的催化劑。它鼓勵(lì)我們走出舒適區(qū),勇敢面對(duì)挑戰(zhàn),釋放我們的全部潛力。)?寫作示范一?Asthevolleyballgamebegan,thegymnasiumwasawhirlwindofactivity.Thebleacherswerepackedwithstudents,theirexcitedchatterfillingtheair.Thepolishedwoodenfloorglistenedunderthebrightlights,andthecolorfulvolleyballnetsstoodlikebarriersbetweenthetwoteams.Gina'sheartpoundedinherchest.Herhandsfeltclammy,andherkneeswereweak.Whenthefirstservewaslaunched,itseemedlikeamissilehurtlingtowardsher.Sheflinched,hereyeswidewithfear.Herattempttoreturntheballwasfeeble,anditlandedshort,causingarippleofdisappointmentamongherteammates.Theopposingteamquicklycapitalizedontheerror,andGinafeltalumpforminherthroat.Thenoiseinthegymseemedtogrowlouder,mockinghereverymove.Eachsubsequentservemadehermorejittery,andshefoundithardtofocus.?Thegamecontinued,andGinafeltanewfoundconfidence.Sheclosedhereyesbrieflyandthoughtofthecountlessafternoonsshespentpracticingwithheroldteam.Thefamiliarfeelingoftheballinherhands,theshoutsofencouragementfromhercoaches,andthecamaraderieofherteammatesfloodedhermind.Withaburstofdetermination,shechargedtowardsaballthatwasheadedoutofbounds.Shelaunchedherselfintotheair,stretchingherbodytoitslimits.Theballhitherforearmwithasatisfyingthudandsailedbackoverthenet.Herteammateseruptedincheers.“That'sthespirit,Gina!”someoneyelled.Emboldened,shebecameaforceonthecourt.Sheanticipatedtheball'strajectorywithprecision,divingandrollingtomakeimpossiblesaves.Bytheendofthegame,Ginawasbeamingwithpride.Shehadnotonlysurvivedbutthrivedinhernewschool'svolleyballgame,andshecouldn'twaitforthenextopportunitytoshowcaseherskills.?寫作示范二?Asthevolleyballgamebegan,thegymnasiumwasaseaofenergy.Thestandswerefilledwithstudents,theirvoicesblendingintoacacophony.Thefluorescentlightsaboveglareddown,makingthegymfeelhotandstuffy.Gina'spalmsweresweatingprofusely,andherlegswereshaking.Thefirstservecamehurtlingtowardsher,andshefroze,hereyesfixedontheapproachingball.Shemanagedtomakeaclumsypass,buttheballwobbledintheairandwaseasilyinterceptedbytheopposingteam.Somestudentsinthestandstittered,andGina'sfaceburnedwithshame.Shewassureshewaslettingherteamdown.Thesoundoftheballhittingthefloorseemedtoechoinherears,aconstantreminderofhermistakes.Eachnewservesentherheartracing,andshestruggledtokeepupwiththefast-pacedgame.?Thegamecontinued,andGinafeltanewfoundconfidence.Shethoughtbacktothedayswhenshewasthestarofheroldschool'svolleyballteam.Sherememberedthedrills,thestrategies,andthecountlesshoursofpractice.Gatheringhercourage,shefocusedintentlyonthegame.Whenapowerfulspikewasaimedather,shedidn'tcower.Shebracedherselfandmanagedtoblocktheballwitharesoundingsmack.Herteammateswerestunnedforamomentandtheneruptedintoapplause.Encouragedbytheirreaction,Gina'smovementsbecamemorefluid.Sheracedacrossthecourt,interceptingballsleftandright.Bythetimethefinalwhistleblew,Ginahadahugesmileonherface.Shehadproventoherselfandhernewclassmatesthatshewasmorethancapable,andshewaseagerforthenextchancetoshowwhatshecoulddo.?續(xù)寫范文:Asthevolleyballgamebegan,Gin

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