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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。IliveinSamburu,innorthernKenya.WhereIgrewup,therewereelephantslivinginthewild.Iwasattractedbythesecreatures.They'resosocial,complexandsympathetic;theirsizeisbreathtaking.Now,workinginthefieldforSavetheElephantsinKenya,IammostlybasedinSamburuNationalReserve—a165km2protectedpark—recordingdetailsofthepopulationandleading,collaringoperations.WearrangeGPStrackersaroundwildelephants'necks,sowecanmonitortheirmovements.Morethan1,000knownelephantsusethereserve.OneofthoseelephantswasRommel.Rommeldidn'tcomeoften,butwhenhedidturnup,we'dhavetobeprepared.Hewashugeandeasytobeannoyed,weighingaboutsixtons.InMay2019,inthemiddleofthewetseason,Rommelappearedagain.Anditwashisturntobecollared.Wesentthreecarsouttosearchforhim.There'sariver,theEwasoNyiro,runningthroughtheparkwheremanyelephantsmeetinthemornings.At10:30a.m.,searchingthegroupsaroundtheriver,JohnclockedRommel,withabigcutonhisrightear.Rommelwasdarted(用飛鏢射)adrugforhimtosleep.Normallyittakessevenminutesforthedrugtohit,butforRommel'ssizeitcantakelonger.Whenthedarthithim,heturnedaway,headinginanunexpecteddirection.Rommelstartedshaking.Hewasinthemiddleofcrossingtheriverwhenthedrughit.Hecollapsedintothewater.Ijumpedoutofmyvehicle:Rommeldrowningwouldbeadisaster.Onlybyliftinghistrunkandstoppingitfrombeingsunkenintherivercouldweensurehissurvival.Theproblemwasthecurrentoftheriverwasfastflowingandunpredictable,andtheriverwasfilledwithcrocodiles(鱷魚).“Wemustgoimmediately,"Johnsaidasheassessedthesituation."I'llhelpyousteadyhisheadsoyoucanlifthistrunkmoresafely."注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Inasecond,IdecidedtoactquicklyandputaGPSonhisneck._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Eachtimeasmallfishtouchedmylegs,Iwouldwonderifitwasacrocodile.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文本主旨?本文講述了“我”在肯尼亞為保護(hù)大象工作,負(fù)責(zé)記錄大象種群信息及為大象安裝GPS追蹤器。大象Rommel體型龐大且易發(fā)怒,在一次為它安裝追蹤器的行動中,被麻醉鏢射中后在過河時陷入水中,面臨溺水危險,“我”和同伴決定展開救援。?詞匯積累?野生動物相關(guān):elephant(大象)、creature(生物)、wild(野外)、reserve(保護(hù)區(qū))、population(種群數(shù)量)?動作相關(guān):record(記錄)、monitor(監(jiān)測)、searchfor(搜尋)、dart(用飛鏢射)、collapse(倒下,崩潰)、lift(抬起)、steady(使穩(wěn)定)、assess(評估)?環(huán)境相關(guān):river(河流)、current(水流)、crocodile(鱷魚)、wetseason(雨季)?續(xù)寫分析?銜接句:第一段以“Inasecond,IdecidedtoactquicklyandputaGPSonhisneck.”開頭,自然承接上文決定救援Rommel的情節(jié),引出“我”在救援過程中首要完成安裝GPS的任務(wù)。第二段“Eachtimeasmallfishtouchedmylegs,Iwouldwonderifitwasacrocodile.”則通過對“我”在河中感受的描寫,進(jìn)一步渲染緊張氛圍,與第一段“我”進(jìn)入河中救援相銜接。?情節(jié)合理性:在第一段續(xù)寫中,“我”在同伴幫助下靠近Rommel并安裝GPS,同時與水流和Rommel龐大的身軀艱難對抗,符合救援時既要完成任務(wù)又要克服困難的邏輯。第二段續(xù)寫中,“我”在河中時刻擔(dān)心鱷魚攻擊,在緊張氛圍中堅持支撐Rommel,直到它蘇醒,這一系列情節(jié)既延續(xù)了緊張感,又合理地推動故事發(fā)展,最終以Rommel蘇醒游走作為圓滿結(jié)局。?情感鋪墊:前文對Rommel的龐大及易發(fā)怒的描述,以及它陷入河中面臨危險的狀況,為整個救援行動奠定了緊張的情感基調(diào)。在續(xù)寫中,“我”的緊張、對鱷魚的恐懼以及堅持救援的決心等情感,都與前文鋪墊相契合,使情感發(fā)展連貫且自然。?情感走向?整個故事情感從最初發(fā)現(xiàn)Rommel時的緊張,到它陷入水中時的焦急,再到救援過程中的極度緊張與恐懼,最后Rommel蘇醒游走時轉(zhuǎn)變?yōu)樾牢颗c喜悅,情感起伏明顯且符合情節(jié)發(fā)展。?主題深化?通過描述對Rommel的救援過程,不僅展現(xiàn)了人們?yōu)楸Wo(hù)野生動物所付出的努力和面臨的危險,還強(qiáng)調(diào)了保護(hù)野生動物的重要性以及人與自然和諧共處的意義。下水文一?Inasecond,IdecidedtoactquicklyandputaGPSonhisneck.WithJohn'shelp,Icarefullymademywayintotheriver,fightingagainstthestrongcurrent.Rommel'shugebodywashalf-submerged,andIstruggledtoreachhisneck.Everynowandthen,thecurrentwouldpushmeback,butIrefusedtogiveup.Finally,ImanagedtofastentheGPS.However,thesituationwasstillcritical.Ihadtokeephistrunkabovewaterwhilewaitingforhimtowakeup.?Eachtimeasmallfishtouchedmylegs,Iwouldwonderifitwasacrocodile.Myheartwaspoundinginmychest,andmyhandswereshaking.ButIknewIcouldn'tletgo.IkepttalkingtoRommel,asifhecouldunderstandme.Afterwhatseemedlikeaneternity,Rommelbegantostir.Slowly,heliftedhismassivebodyandstoodup.Withagratefullook,hewalkedawayintothewild.Iwatchedhimgo,feelingagreatsenseofreliefandpride.Wehadnotonlycompletedourmissionbutalsosavedapreciouslife.?下水文二?Inasecond,IdecidedtoactquicklyandputaGPSonhisneck.Thewaterwascoldandthecurrentwasfierce,butIpressedon.JohnheldRommel'sheadassteadilyashecould,andIswamtowardsthegiantelephant.Hisbodywassolargethatitwaslikeapproachingasmallisland.WhenIreachedhisneck,IfumbledwiththeGPS,myhandsslipperyfromthewater.Finally,Isecuredit.Butthen,Ihadtofacethemoredifficulttaskofkeepinghimafloat.?Eachtimeasmallfishtouchedmylegs,Iwouldwonderifitwasacrocodile.Fearcreptupmyspine,butIwasdeterminedtoseethisthrough.IpushedwithallmymighttokeepRommel'strunkabovewater.Theminutestickedbyslowly.Suddenly,Rommelletoutalowrumble.Hiseyesopened,andhestartedtomove.Iquicklyswambacktotheshore,exhaustedbutoverjoyed.Rommelregainedhisfootingandlumberedaway,carryingwithhimthehopeofourresearchandthefutureofhiskind.?參考答案Inasecond,IdecidedtoactquicklyandputaGPSonhisneck.Thewaterwasicycold,andthestrongcurrentconstantlypushedmeoffbalance.WithJohn'sassistance,IinchedclosertoRommel,hismassivebodylookingevenmoreimposingunderwater.EverytimeItriedtoreachhisneck,thecurrentwouldpullmeback.ButIwasdetermined.Finally,afterseveralattempts,ImanagedtofastentheGPS.However,thejobwasn'tdone.Istillhadtokeephistrunkabovewater.Hisheadwassoheavythatittookallmystrengthtoholditup,andIwasconstantlyworriedaboutmyow
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