閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Inthedistantandmysteriousstarcontinent,thereisayoungmannamedBruce.Hehasapairofeyesthatcanseethemysteriesofthestars,andaheartthatnevergivesup.Brucelivesinasmall,quietvillagewherepeoplemakealivingbyfarmingandpastoraling,andknowlittleaboutthemysteriesofthestarrysky.However,Bruceisalwayslookingupatthestars,andhisheartisfulloflongingfortheunknown.Oneday,ashootingstarstreakedacrosstheskyandlandedinBruce'sbackyard.Brucewalkedovercuriouslyandfoundthatitwasactuallyastrangeshapedmeteorite,whichwasengravedwithancientrunes.Hegentlytouchedthemeteorite,suddenlyapowerfulenergypouredintohisbody,hiseyesemergedaseriesofstrangepictures:starstwinkling,thevastuniverse,mysteriouscreaturesshuttlingbetweenthestars..."It'sthepowerofthestars!"AnoldandmysteriousvoicesoundedinBruce'sear,"Youhavebeenchosentobecometheguardianofthestarcontinent."Youneedtofindthescatteredpiecesofthestarstounlockthepowerofthestarsandprotectthepeaceofthecontinent."Brucewasshockedbythissuddenresponsibilityandmission,buthedidnotflinch.Hesaysgoodbyetohisfamilyandembarksonanadventuretofindtheshardsofstars.Duringthejourney,Bruceencounteredvariouschallengesanddifficulties.Sometimeshehastonavigatedangerousforests,sometimeshehastosolvecomplexpuzzles,andsometimeshehastofightagainstevilforces.However,henevergaveup,becauseheknewthatonlybyfindingallthepiecesofthestarscouldheunlockthepowerofthestarsandprotecthisbelovedhome.Aftercountlesstimesofsharpeningandexperience,Brucehasgraduallygrownintoabrave,wiseandresponsibleyoungman.Henotonlyfoundmanyfragmentsofstars,butalsomadeagroupoflike-mindedfriends.Theyfoughtsidebysideandfacedvariouschallengesanddifficultiestogether.注意：續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答However,astheyapproachtheirgoal,theyencounterapowerfulenemy-theleaderofthedarkforcesoftheStarcontinent.Afterathrillingbattle,Brucefinallydefeatedtheleaderofthedarkforceswithhisfirmfaithandthesupportofhisfriends.文章大意在遙遠(yuǎn)神秘的星際大陸，青年布魯斯擁有能洞悉星空奧秘的雙眼和一顆永不言棄的心。他生活在寧靜的小村莊，村民們以農(nóng)牧為生，對星空知之甚少。一天，一顆流星墜入布魯斯后院，化作刻有古老符文的隕石。觸摸隕石后，強大能量涌入他身體，他看到了星辰閃爍、浩瀚宇宙及神秘生物穿梭的畫面。一個神秘聲音告知他被選中成為星際大陸的守護(hù)者，需尋找散落的星之碎片，解鎖星辰之力以保衛(wèi)大陸和平。布魯斯告別家人踏上冒險之旅，途中歷經(jīng)艱難險阻，穿越危險森林、解開復(fù)雜謎題、對抗邪惡勢力。無數(shù)次的磨礪使他成長，還結(jié)識了一群志同道合的朋友，他們并肩作戰(zhàn)，共同面對各種挑戰(zhàn)，且已找到了許多星之碎片。?故事山分析?開頭：介紹布魯斯的生活環(huán)境及特殊能力，流星帶來隕石，賦予他使命，他決定踏上尋找星之碎片的冒險之旅。?發(fā)展：布魯斯在旅途中遭遇眾多挑戰(zhàn)，包括危險環(huán)境、復(fù)雜謎題和邪惡勢力，但他不斷成長并結(jié)識朋友，逐步收集星之碎片。?高潮：在接近目標(biāo)時，他們遭遇強大的敵人——星際大陸黑暗勢力的首領(lǐng)，一場激烈的戰(zhàn)斗即將展開。?結(jié)局：布魯斯憑借堅定信念和朋友的支持戰(zhàn)勝黑暗勢力首領(lǐng)，成功解鎖星辰之力，守護(hù)了星際大陸的和平，他也成為真正的英雄，故事迎來圓滿結(jié)局。?伏筆以及在續(xù)寫中的回應(yīng)?伏筆1：布魯斯擁有能看到星空奧秘的雙眼?；貞?yīng)：在與黑暗勢力首領(lǐng)戰(zhàn)斗時，他利用對星空奧秘的了解，發(fā)現(xiàn)敵人的弱點，找到戰(zhàn)勝敵人的關(guān)鍵。?伏筆2：隕石賦予布魯斯強大能量并展現(xiàn)神秘畫面?；貞?yīng)：戰(zhàn)斗陷入困境時，隕石賦予他的能量再次爆發(fā)，幫助他和朋友們增強力量，扭轉(zhuǎn)戰(zhàn)局。?伏筆3：布魯斯歷經(jīng)無數(shù)次磨礪和成長?；貞?yīng)：在面對強大的黑暗勢力首領(lǐng)時，他過往積累的經(jīng)驗和智慧發(fā)揮作用，冷靜應(yīng)對敵人的攻擊。?伏筆4：結(jié)識一群志同道合的朋友?；貞?yīng)：朋友們在戰(zhàn)斗中各施所長，與布魯斯緊密配合，共同對抗黑暗勢力首領(lǐng)，體現(xiàn)團隊的力量。?伏筆5：需找到散落的星之碎片解鎖星辰之力保護(hù)大陸?；貞?yīng)：戰(zhàn)斗勝利后，布魯斯集齊所有星之碎片，成功解鎖星辰之力，實現(xiàn)了守護(hù)大陸和平的使命。續(xù)寫要點（兩段）?第一段：詳細(xì)描述黑暗勢力首領(lǐng)的強大和恐怖，如他擁有獨特且強大的黑暗魔法，能制造各種黑暗幻象迷惑眾人。描寫布魯斯和朋友們面對強敵時的緊張和壓力，但他們沒有退縮，而是迅速調(diào)整戰(zhàn)術(shù)，憑借之前積累的經(jīng)驗和彼此的默契，準(zhǔn)備迎接戰(zhàn)斗。同時，突出布魯斯在關(guān)鍵時刻對星空奧秘的運用，嘗試尋找敵人的破綻。?第二段：著重描寫戰(zhàn)斗的高潮部分，布魯斯和朋友們?nèi)绾尉o密配合，發(fā)揮各自的能力，逐漸壓制黑暗勢力首領(lǐng)。在戰(zhàn)斗的最后關(guān)頭，布魯斯憑借堅定的信念激發(fā)了隕石賦予的全部力量，一舉擊敗黑暗勢力首領(lǐng)。之后描述勝利后的場景，布魯斯和朋友們歡呼慶祝，布魯斯成功集齊星之碎片，解鎖星辰之力，整個星際大陸恢復(fù)和平與安寧。?情感線面對強大的黑暗勢力首領(lǐng)，布魯斯和朋友們最初感到緊張和恐懼，但他們心中守護(hù)大陸的信念很快戰(zhàn)勝了恐懼。戰(zhàn)斗中，他們相互鼓勵，情感愈發(fā)深厚，團隊凝聚力不斷增強。布魯斯在關(guān)鍵時刻憑借對星空的熱愛和守護(hù)家園的決心，激發(fā)內(nèi)在力量。戰(zhàn)勝敵人后，他們充滿喜悅和自豪，布魯斯更是對自己的使命有了更深的感悟，這種情感從緊張恐懼到堅定無畏，再到最后的喜悅和使命感，貫穿整個續(xù)寫部分。?故事線布魯斯擁有特殊能力，被賦予守護(hù)星際大陸的使命，踏上尋找星之碎片的旅程。旅途中布魯斯歷經(jīng)艱難險阻，不斷成長并結(jié)識朋友，收集星之碎片。?接近目標(biāo)時，遭遇強大的黑暗勢力首領(lǐng)，戰(zhàn)斗爆發(fā)。?布魯斯和朋友們憑借經(jīng)驗、默契以及對星空的了解，與黑暗勢力首領(lǐng)激烈對抗。布魯斯在關(guān)鍵時刻激發(fā)隕石力量，憑借堅定信念戰(zhàn)勝黑暗勢力首領(lǐng)。?布魯斯集齊星之碎片，解鎖星辰之力，守護(hù)了星際大陸的和平。?主旨升華句JustasBruceovercamenumerouschallengesonhisjourney,inlife,wetoocanfacedifficultiesbravely,forthepowerofperseveranceandbeliefcanleadustovictory.?Thebattleagainstthedarkforcesinthestarcontinentmirrorsourownstrugglesintherealworld,anditisthroughunityandunwaveringdeterminationthatwecanovercomeanyobstacle.?Bruce'sadventureteachesusthatnomatterhowpowerfultheenemyorhowdifficultthemission,ourinnerstrengthandthesupportoffriendscanhelpusachievetheseeminglyimpossible.?JustlikeBruceunlockedthepowerofthestars,weallhavehiddenpotentialwithinus,andwiththerightmotivationanddetermination,wecanunleashittomakeadifference.?ThestoryofBruce'sjourneytoprotectthestarcontinentshowsthatinthefaceofadversity,ourloveforourhomeandoursenseofresponsibilitycanfuelourcourageandleadustobecometrueheroes.?寫作示范?示范一?However,astheyapproachtheirgoal,theyencounterapowerfulenemy-theleaderofthedarkforcesoftheStarcontinent.Theleader'sbodywassurroundedbyathicklayerofdarkmist,hiseyesglowedwithacoldandmalevolentlight.Withawaveofhishand,countlessdarktentacleslashedouttowardsBruceandhisfriends,creatingasenseofoppression.Bruce'sheartraced,buthequicklycomposedhimself.Herememberedtheknowledgeofthestarshehadlearned,andherealizedthattheenemy'spowermightberelatedtothedarksideofthestars.Heshoutedtohisfriendstostaycalmandusetheiruniqueskillstoresisttheattack,whilehehimselftriedtofindtheenemy'sweakness.?Afterathrillingbattle,Brucefinallydefeatedtheleaderofthedarkforceswithhisfirmfaithandthesupportofhisfriends.Atthecriticalmoment,thepowerofthemeteoriteinBruce'sbodyburstout,formingaprotectiveshieldthatblockedtheenemy'smostpowerfulattack.Hisfriendslaunchedafiercecounter-attack,eachusingtheirspecialabilities.Brucetookadvantageoftheopportunity,concentratedallhisstrength,andwithafinalpowerfulstrike,hesenttheleaderofthedarkforcesflying.Thedarkmistdissipated,andthestarcontinentwasonceagainfilledwithlight.Bruceandhisfriendscheered,andBrucefinallycollectedalltheshardsofthestars.Withabrilliantflash,thepowerofthestarswasunlocked,andpeacewasrestoredtothestarcontinent.?示范二?However,astheyapproachtheirgoal,theyencounterapowerfulenemy-theleaderofthedarkforcesoftheStarcontinent.Theairaroundtheleaderseemedtobedistortedbyhisdarkpower.HesneeredatBruceandhisfriends,andwithasnapofhisfingers,agroupofdarkminionsrushedtowardsthem.Brucefeltachilldownhisspine,butthememoriesofhisarduousjourneyandthedeterminationtoprotecthishomegavehimthestrengthtostandfirm.Hesignaledtohisfriends,andtheyimmediatelyformedadefensiveformation,readytofacetheonslaught.Brucefocusedonthepatternsofthestarsinhismind,believingthattheremust