Module6Eatingtogether模塊主題寫作一、主題分析本模塊寫作情境為“飲食習(xí)慣差異”，屬于“人與社會”主題范疇中的“歷史、社會與文化”這一主題群，涉及子主題“世界主要國家的文化習(xí)俗”。常見的寫作任務(wù)是描述飲食習(xí)慣、介紹餐桌禮儀、對比中西方不同的文化習(xí)俗等。二、素材積累(1)主題詞匯custom//tablemanners//allow//knife//fork//watch//forexample//chopstick//host//guest//dish//ontime//Western//culture(2)重點(diǎn)句式1.WheninRome,______________________(入鄉(xiāng)隨俗).2.Chinesetablehabits_________________________________(與……不同)thoseintheUSA.3.Youare________________________(應(yīng)該)usechopstickstopickupthedishes.doastheRomansdoaredifferentfrom/arenotthesameassupposed/expectedto4.____________(是禮貌的)talkwithyourhostsafterdinner.5.______________(你最好……)arriveearlier.6.Thereare___________________(多種多樣的)dishesinaChinesemeal.7.__________(我希望)youwillenjoytheChinesefood.It’spolitetoYou’dbettervariouskindsofIhopeTimeWhatyou

shoulddoBeforedinnerArrivethreetofiveminutesearlier.AtdinnerTheoldpeoplebegintoeatfirst.AfterdinnerDon’tleaveatonce.三、寫作示例假如你是劉明，你的美國筆友John想利用假期來中國度假，他想了解一下中國的餐桌禮儀。請你根據(jù)以下表格提示的內(nèi)容，給他寫一封電子郵件。要求：1.參考表格提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.語句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整；3.文章不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；4.詞數(shù)：80-100(開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。DearJohn,WelcometoChina!______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iamlookingforwardtoseeingyousoon.Yours,LiuMing謀篇布局1.審題立意①主題：餐桌禮儀；②人稱：第一人稱、第二人稱；③時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。2.寫作提綱餐桌禮儀開篇點(diǎn)題ChinesetablehabitsarenotthesameasthoseintheUSA.展開描述Don’tbelate.Arrivethreeorfiveminutesearlier.You’renotsupposedtostarteatingfirst...It’salsoimpolitetostickyourchopsticksintoyourfood.Don’tleaveatonceafterdinner.表達(dá)祝福I’msureyouwillhaveagoodtimehereinChina.基礎(chǔ)篇DearJohn,WelcometoChina!LetmetellyousomethingaboutChinesetablemanners.Don’tbelate.You’dbetterarrivethreeorfiveminutesearlier.InChina,oneimportantthingisthatyoushouldn’tstarteatingfirst.Youshouldlettheoldbegintoeatfirst.Anddon’tstickyourchopsticksintoyourfood.What’smore,youshouldn’tpointatanyonewithyourchopsticks,either.Don’tleaveatonceafterdinner.Youcanhavesometeaandchatwithpeople.Followingtheserules,I’msureyouwillhaveagoodtimeinChina.Iamlookingforwardtoseeingyousoon.Yours,LiuMing名師點(diǎn)評本文結(jié)構(gòu)層次清晰，包含了題干中所給的全部要點(diǎn)。第一步，表明寫作意圖。第二步，具體描述寫作內(nèi)容。第三步，書寫結(jié)語。本文在描寫進(jìn)餐過程中的注意事項(xiàng)時(shí)進(jìn)行了必要的補(bǔ)充，但是在話題引入方面稍顯生硬，具體描寫的過程中高級句型的運(yùn)用也稍顯不足。提升篇DearJohn,WelcometoChina!Chinesetablehabitsarenotthesameas①thoseintheUSA.Letmetellyousomethingaboutthem.Don’tbelate.You’dbetter②arrivethreeorfiveminutesearlier.InChina,oneimportantthingisthatyou’renotsupposedto②starteatingfirstifthereareolderpeopleatthetable③.Theoldpeoplebegintoeatfirst.Andit’salsoimpolitetostickyourchopsticksintoyourfood③.What’smore②,youshouldn’tpointatanyonewithyourchopsticks,either.Don’tleaveatonceafterdinner.Youcanhavesometeaandchatwithpeople.Ifyoudon’tknowhowtobehave②atthetable,youcanjustseewhattheothersdoandfollowthem③.I’msureyouwillhaveagoodtimeinChina.Iamlookingforwardtoseeingyousoon.Yours,LiuMing名師點(diǎn)評本文內(nèi)容全面，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，在文章的銜接和內(nèi)容的補(bǔ)充方面更加詳盡。①使用thesameas引入話題，過渡自然。②具體描寫過程中運(yùn)用了豐富的短語。如：hadbetter;benotsupposedtodosth.;What’smore;howtobehave等。③使用復(fù)雜句式InChina,oneimportantthingisthatyou’renotsupposedtostarteatingfirstifthereareolderpeopleatthetable.(表語從句中含有條件狀語從句)；Andit’salsoimpolitetostickyourchopsticksintoyourfood.(It’s+形容詞+todosth.固定句型)；...youcanjustseewhattheothersdoandfollowthem(what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句)讓文章的內(nèi)容更加豐富，可讀性更強(qiáng)。四、寫作練筆假如你是李華，你的英國筆友Anna來信說她對中國的食物十分感興趣，并向你詢問中國的餐桌禮儀，請用英語給她回信，80詞左右。要點(diǎn)：1.用筷子吃飯夾菜；2.所有人到齊，長輩先吃；3.不能用筷子敲碗；4.筷子不能插在米飯碗里；5.……提示詞：tap敲________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________DearAnna,I’mgladtohearfromyou.IknowthatyouareinterestedinlearningaboutChinesetablemanners.Now,I’dliketointroducethemtoyou.InChina,thehostandthehostessdon’tstarttoeatuntilallthepeoplesitdownandthentheeldestonebeginsfirst.Youcan’ttapatyourbowlswithchopsticksorputyourchopsticksupstraightintoyourrice.Theyareveryrudemanners.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________