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讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。WhenMatwasjust12yearsold,hisworldwasturnedupsidedownafteraterriblecyclingaccidentlefthimwithsevereinjuries.Fortwolongyears,hestruggledwiththephysicalandemotionalpain,dreamingofthedayhecouldwalkagain.Determinedtomakethisdreamareality,Matembarkedonajourneytoraisemoneyforanoperationthatcouldgivehimbackhismobility.Mat’seffortsweretirelessandinnovative.Heorganizedmunityevents,setupanonlinedonationpage,andsharedhisstorywithlocalmediaoutlets.Eachcontribution,nomatterhowsmall,broughthimclosertohisgoal.Andfinally,thedayarrivedwhenhehadaccumulatedtherequiredsum,andtheoperationwasscheduled.TheanticipationofregaininghisabilitytowalkfilledMatwithexcitement.Heenvisionedhimselfplayingwithfriends,sprintingacrossplaygrounds,andevenpetinginraces,perhapsevensecuringaspotonthewinner’spodiumafterhisrecovery.Justaweekbeforethelongawaitedsurgery,Matcameacrossaheartwrenchingstoryinthenewspaper.ItwasaboutafiveyearoldboynamedJamie,whohadspenthisentireliferelyingonawalkingframetomovearound,andhisparentsweretirelesslyraisingfundsforanoperationthatcouldhelptheirsonwalkindependently.ReadingJamie’sstory,Matfeltaninstantconnectionwiththelittleboy,knowingalltoowellthechallengesofnotbeingabletowalk.HewasmovedbyJamie’sdeterminationandtheloveofhisparents.Jamie’sstorykeepingringinginMat’smind,helostinthought.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Para.1:Afteraday’sthinking,Matmadethebigdecision,andcontactedthenewspaper.______________________________________________________________________________Para.2:Jamie’soperationwasagreatsuccess.______________________________________________________________________________馬特和杰米手術(shù)的故事續(xù)寫閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。WhenMatwasjust12yearsold,hisworldwasturnedupsidedownafteraterriblecyclingaccidentlefthimwithsevereinjuries.Fortwolongyears,hestruggledwiththephysicalandemotionalpain,dreamingofthedayhecouldwalkagain.Determinedtomakethisdreamareality,Matembarkedonajourneytoraisemoneyforanoperationthatcouldgivehimbackhismobility.Mat’seffortsweretirelessandinnovative.Heorganizedmunityevents,setupanonlinedonationpage,andsharedhisstorywithlocalmediaoutlets.Eachcontribution,nomatterhowsmall,broughthimclosertohisgoal.Andfinally,thedayarrivedwhenhehadaccumulatedtherequiredsum,andtheoperationwasscheduled.TheanticipationofregaininghisabilitytowalkfilledMatwithexcitement.Heenvisionedhimselfplayingwithfriends,sprintingacrossplaygrounds,andevenpetinginraces,perhapsevensecuringaspotonthewinner’spodiumafterhisrecovery.Justaweekbeforethelongawaitedsurgery,Matcameacrossaheartwrenchingstoryinthenewspaper.ItwasaboutafiveyearoldboynamedJamie,whohadspenthisentireliferelyingonawalkingframetomovearound,andhisparentsweretirelesslyraisingfundsforanoperationthatcouldhelptheirsonwalkindependently.ReadingJamie’sstory,Matfeltaninstantconnectionwiththelittleboy,knowingalltoowellthechallengesofnotbeingabletowalk.HewasmovedbyJamie’sdeterminationandtheloveofhisparents.Jamie’sstorykeepingringinginMat’smind,helostinthought.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Para.1:Afteraday’sthinking,Matmadethebigdecision,andcontactedthenewspaper.______________________________________________________________________________Para.2:Jamie’soperationwasagreatsuccess.______________________________________________________________________________馬特和杰米手術(shù)的故事續(xù)寫續(xù)寫分析(兩段)?第一段:此段開篇“Afteraday’sthinking,Matmadethebigdecision,andcontactedthenewspaper.”迅速點明Mat的關(guān)鍵行動,展現(xiàn)出他在深思熟慮后毅然決然的態(tài)度。Mat的話語“JamieneedsthismorethanIdorightnow”以及內(nèi)心活動描寫“Despitethelongawaitedhopeofhisownrecovery...butthethoughtofJamiebeingabletowalkindependentlybroughthimasenseofpurpose”,生動體現(xiàn)出他舍己為人的高尚品質(zhì),在個人渴望康復(fù)與幫助他人之間,他堅定地選擇了后者?!癟henewspaperwastouchedbyMat'skindnessandquicklyreportedthisheartwarmingstory.”則從側(cè)面反映出Mat行為的感人程度,為后續(xù)人們被觸動并為Mat捐款做了鋪墊,推動故事朝著積極的方向發(fā)展,凸顯了善良行為引發(fā)的連鎖反應(yīng)。?第二段:以“Jamie’soperationwasagreatsuccess.”直接表明Jamie手術(shù)的結(jié)果,引出下文溫馨的場景?!癢henMatsawlittleJamietakinghisfirststepswithoutthewalkingframe,hiseyesfilledwithtearsofjoy.”通過Mat的神態(tài)描寫,細(xì)膩地展現(xiàn)出他看到Jamie成功后的欣慰與喜悅,體現(xiàn)出他對Jamie真摯的關(guān)懷。Jamie父母的感謝之詞“‘You'vegivenoursonanewlife,’theysaid.”進一步強調(diào)了Mat行為的重大意義。“Andbecauseofthenewdonations,Mat'soperationwassoonrescheduled.”這一情節(jié)的設(shè)置巧妙地實現(xiàn)了善有善報的結(jié)局,使故事更加圓滿。結(jié)尾“Matlearnedthatsometimes,givingcanbringevenmorehappinessthanreceiving.”則通過Mat的感悟,升華了故事主題,強調(diào)了給予的價值和力量。?短語?makethebigdecision做出重大決定?contactthenewspaper聯(lián)系報紙?donate...to...把……捐贈給……?longawaited期待已久的?ignorethesuffering忽視痛苦?bringasenseofpurpose帶來一種使命感?betouchedby被……所感動?heartwarmingstory暖心的故事?bedeeplymoved深受感動?takeone'sfirststeps邁出某人的第一步?expressheartfeltthanks表達衷心的感謝?asenseoffulfillment一種滿足感?berescheduled被重新安排?onone'swayto朝著……前進?主旨升華句?ThisheartwarmingnarrativeofMatandJamienotonlyshowcasesthepowerofselflessgivingintransforminglivesbutalsoservesasapoignantreminderthatinthefaceofpersonalstruggles,choosingpassioncanleadtounexpectedblessingsandadeeperunderstandingofthetruemeaningofhappiness.?這個關(guān)于Mat和Jamie的溫馨故事,不僅展示了無私奉獻在改變生命中的力量,還深刻地提醒我們,在面對個人困境時,選擇同情能帶來意想不到的福祉,并讓我們更深刻地理解幸福的真正含義。?ThroughMat'sjourneyfromaboylongingforhisownrecoverytoaselflessdonor,wearevividlyshownthetransformativenatureofempathyandthebeautyofputtingothers'needsbeforeone'sown.Theirstoryimpartsthevaluablelessonthatactsofkindness,nomatterhowgreatthepersonalsacrifice,cancreatearippleeffectofhopeandjoythattouchescountlesslives.?通過Mat從一個渴望自己康復(fù)的男孩到一個無私捐贈者的歷程,我們生動地看到了同理心的變革力量以及將他人需求置于自身之前的美好。他們的故事傳達了一個寶貴的教訓(xùn),即善良的行為,無論個人犧牲多大,都能產(chǎn)生希望和喜悅的連鎖反應(yīng),觸動無數(shù)生命。?ThestoryofMatandJamieisnotmerelyataleoftwoindividuals'medicalstruggles;itisaprofoundexplorationofthehumanspirit'scapacitytoriseaboveadversity,torecognizethesharedhumanityinothers,andtobuildamunityofpassionthroughactsofgenerosity.?Mat和Jamie的故事不僅僅是兩個個體在醫(yī)療困境中的故事,它是對人類精神超越逆境、認(rèn)識到他人共同人性以及通過慷慨行為建立一個充滿同情的社區(qū)的能力的深刻探索。?Inaworldoftenfilledwithselfinterestandpersonalgain,Mat'sdecisiontodonatehislifechangingfundsstandsasabeaconofhope,illuminatingthepathtowardsamorepassionateandaltruisticsociety.Itremindsusthattruestrengthliesinourabilitytoreachoutandhelpthoseinneed,evenatourownexpense.?在一個常常充滿私利和個人利益的世界里,Mat捐贈改變他命運的資金的決定如同一盞希望之燈,照亮了通往一個更富有同情心和利他主義社會的道路。它提醒我們,真正的力量在于我們能夠伸出援手幫助那些需要幫助的人,即使這意味著付出個人代價。?FromMat'sinitialdeterminationtoregainhismobilitytothefinalrealizationofthejoyofgiving,thestoryencapsulatestheessenceofgrowth,thepowerofpositiveinfluence,andtheunwaveringbeliefthateveryactofkindness,nomatterhowsmallorlarge,hasthepotentialtocreateabrighterfutureforall.?從Mat最初重獲行動能力的決心到最終領(lǐng)悟給予的快樂,這個故事體現(xiàn)了成長的本質(zhì)、積極影響的力量,以及堅定的信念,即每一個善良的行為,無論大小,都有潛力為所有人創(chuàng)造一個更美好的未來。?寫作示范?示范一?Para.1:Afteraday’sthinking,Matmadethebigdecision,andcontactedthenewspaper.Witharesolutelookinhiseyes,heinformedthemofhisplantodonateeverypennyhe'damassedforhisoperationtoJamie.“Jamie'sbeenthroughsomuch,andIjustcan'tturnablindeye,”Matdeclared.Deepdown,heknewthismeantdelayinghisownrecovery,butthethoughtofJamie'spotentialfreedomfromthewalkingframewasfarmorepelling.ThenewspaperwasastoundedbyMat'sselflessnessandpromptlysharedhisstory.Themunity,deeplymoved,ralliedtogether.PeoplefromallwalksoflifebeganpouringindonationsforMat,inspiredbyhisnobleact.?Para.2:Jamie’soperationwasagreatsuccess.AsMatwatchedJamietakehisfirstunassistedsteps,hisheartswelledwithprideandjoy.Jamie'sparentsrushedovertoMat,theireyesbrimmingwithtearsofgratitude.“You'vegivenoursonanewleaseonlife.Wordscan'texpresshowthankfulweare,”theysobbed.Mat,beamingfromeartoear,feltaprofoundsenseoffulfillment.Andthankstotheoverwhelmingsupportfromthemunity,Mat'soperationwassoonbackontrack.Now,bothMatandJamiewereonthecuspofanewbeginning,andMathadtrulylearnedthatthejoyofgivingwasimmeasurable.?示范二?Para.1:Afteraday’sthinking,Matmadethebigdecision,andcontactedthenewspaper.Hisvoicesteady,hetoldthemhewantedtotransferallhishardearnedfundsfortheoperationtoJamie.“Jamiedeservesthischancemorethananyone.Icanwaitabitlonger,”Matsaidbravely.Despitethelongcherisheddreamofwalkingagainsoon,Mat'sempathyforJamieprevailed.ThenewspaperwasdeeplytouchedbyMat'skindnessandquicklyspreadtheword.Thestorywentviral,andpeopleacrossthecityweremoved.DonationsforMatstartedfloodingin,aseveryonewantedtosupportthiskindheartedboy.?Para.2:Jamie’soperationwasagreatsuccess.WhenMatsawJamiewalkingfreely,ahugesmilespreadacrosshisface.Jamie'sparentshuggedMattightly,expressingtheirsinceregratitude.“You'vemadeourdreamsetrue.We'llbeforeverinyourdebt,”theysaid.Mat,feelingawarmthinhisheart,realizedthetruevalueofhisdecision.Andbecauseofthenewdonations,Mat'soperationwasrescheduled.BothMatandJamiewerenowlookingforwardtoabrightfuture.Mathaddiscoveredthattheactofgivingcouldbringahappinessthatmoneycouldn'tbuy.【答案】Afteraday’sthinking,Matmadethebigdecision,andcontactedthenewspaper.Matexplainedhissitu

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