讀后續(xù)寫Asadwasa13yearoldboywhowasveryhonestandhardworking.Recently,hehadenteredanewschool,sohehadnofriendsyet.OnMondaymorning,hewasnearlylateforschool.Thenightbefore,hisfamilyattendedhiscousin’sweddingandreachedhomelate,whichwaswhyhecouldn’tgetupontimeasusual.Atschool,Asadcouldnotpayattentiontoanythingandwantedthebelltoringsothathecouldbuysomethingtoeat.Afterafewhours,whenthebellrang,Asadquicklyopenedhisschoolbagtofindhismoney,butjustthenherememberedthathehadleftforschoolinahurryinthemorningandforgottentotakemoney.Helookedunderhisbooks,hopingtofindsomemoneybuttherewasnothing.Notknowingwhattodo,hewalkedoutoftheclassroomandsatonabenchinfrontofthecanteen.Hesawafewofhisclassmatesthere,amongthemwasFahad.Hewasoneoftherichestkidsinhisclass,buthewasaveryarrogant(傲慢的)boywhothoughteveryoneelsewasaloser.ButasAsadwasnew,hedidn’tknowmuchaboutFahad.WhenhewenttowardsFahadandaskedifhecouldborrowsomemoneyforhislunch,Fahadlaughedalotandsaid,“Iknewyouwerealoser,maybeabeggar?”Fahadlaughedoutsoloudthatotherkidsalsoheardandmadefunofthesituation.Hedidn’tanswerFahad,andslowlywalkedbacktowardsanemptybench.Whenhereachedthebench,henoticedsomethinglyingnearit.Itwasawallet.HepickeditupandrecognizeditasFahad’s,asherememberedFahadshowingittohisfriendsandtellingthathisuncleboughtitforhimfromtheUK.Therewasquitealotofmoneyinsideforakid.Atfirst,AsadwantedtokeepitasecretandpunishedFahad.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________ThenFahadsaid,“Whyareyougivingback?”____________________________________________________________________________________________________________阿薩德和法哈德錢包故事的續(xù)寫續(xù)寫分析（兩段）?第一段：此段開篇“Atfirst,AsadwantedtokeepitasecretandpunishedFahad.”直接呈現(xiàn)Asad最初的想法，展現(xiàn)他內(nèi)心因Fahad的羞辱而產(chǎn)生的報復(fù)心理。但緊接著“However,hishonestnaturegotthebetterofhim.”發(fā)生轉(zhuǎn)折，通過內(nèi)心獨白“EventhoughFahadwasmeantome,keepingthiswalletiswrong.WhatifIwereinhisshoes?”細膩地刻畫了Asad內(nèi)心的掙扎與善良本性的覺醒?！癆fteramomentofinternalstruggle,hedecidedtodotherightthing.”表明他最終戰(zhàn)勝私欲，做出正確決定，體現(xiàn)出誠實品質(zhì)對他的主導(dǎo)作用。“HewalkeduptoFahad,whowasstillwithhisfriends,andheldoutthewallet.‘Fahad,Ifoundyourwallet,’hesaid,hisvoicesteady.”通過動作和語言描寫，展現(xiàn)出Asad歸還錢包時的堅定，為下文Fahad的反應(yīng)做鋪墊。?第二段：以Fahad的疑問“ThenFahadsaid,‘Whyareyougivingback?’”開啟，凸顯他對Asad行為的意外。Asad的回答“Becauseit'stherightthingtodo.Iknowyoumightnotthinkmuchofme,butIbelieveinbeinghonest.”進一步強調(diào)了他堅守誠實的信念?！癋ahadwastakenaback.HehadexpectedAsadtokeepthewalletasrevenge.”通過描寫Fahad的反應(yīng)，對比出Asad行為的高尚，使Fahad內(nèi)心產(chǎn)生觸動?！癋orthefirsttime,hefeltashamedofhisbehavior.‘I'msorryforwhatIsaidearlier,’Fahadmumbled.”體現(xiàn)出Fahad態(tài)度的轉(zhuǎn)變，認識到自己的錯誤?！癋romthatdayon,Fahadchangedhisattitude...hestartedtobefriendAsad.”表明Asad的誠實不僅化解了矛盾，還收獲了友誼，升華了故事主題，突出了誠實的力量。?故事線?13歲的Asad誠實且努力，剛進入新學(xué)校，還沒有朋友。周一早上因前一晚參加婚禮回家晚，上學(xué)差點遲到，在學(xué)校又忘帶錢買午餐。?Asad向同學(xué)Fahad借錢，F(xiàn)ahad傲慢地嘲笑他，讓他難堪。?Asad在長椅旁撿到Fahad的錢包，起初想藏起來懲罰Fahad，但內(nèi)心經(jīng)過掙扎，出于誠實還是決定歸還。?Fahad對Asad歸還錢包的行為感到意外，在Asad表明誠實的態(tài)度后，F(xiàn)ahad認識到自己的錯誤，感到羞愧并道歉，從此改變態(tài)度，開始和Asad交朋友，Asad在新學(xué)校收獲了友誼。?短語?getthebetterof戰(zhàn)勝?inone'sshoes站在某人的立場?internalstruggle內(nèi)心掙扎?dotherightthing做正確的事?walkupto走向?holdout伸出?betakenaback感到吃驚?asrevenge作為報復(fù)?feelashamedof對……感到羞愧?changeone'sattitude改變某人的態(tài)度?befriendsb.與某人交朋友?主旨升華句?ThisheartwarmingnarrativeofAsadandFahadnotonlyshowcasesthepowerofhonestyinmendingbrokenrelationshipsbutalsoservesasapoignantreminderthatinthefaceofmeanness,choosingthepathofintegritycanleadtounexpectedtransformationsandtheforgingofgenuineconnections.?這個關(guān)于Asad和Fahad的溫馨故事，不僅展示了誠實修復(fù)破裂關(guān)系的力量，還深刻地提醒我們，在面對惡意時，選擇正直的道路能帶來意想不到的轉(zhuǎn)變，并建立起真正的聯(lián)系。?ThroughAsad'sjourneyfrombeingthetargetofridiculetobeingthecatalystforFahad'schange,wearevividlyshownthetransformativenatureofhonestyandthebeautyofrisingabovepettiness.Theirstoryimpartsthevaluablelessonthattruestrengthliesinupholdingone'sprinciples,eveninthemostchallengingcircumstances.?通過Asad從被嘲笑的對象到成為Fahad轉(zhuǎn)變的催化劑的歷程，我們生動地看到了誠實的變革力量以及超越狹隘的美好。他們的故事傳達了一個寶貴的教訓(xùn)，即真正的力量在于堅守自己的原則，即使在最具挑戰(zhàn)性的情況下。?ThestoryofAsadandFahadisnotmerelyataleofaschoolyardencounter;itisaprofoundexplorationofthehumanspirit'scapacitytooverepride,recognizethevalueofhonesty,andbuildbridgesofunderstandingandfriendshipinthemostunlikelyofplaces.?Asad和Fahad的故事不僅僅是一個校園邂逅的故事，它是對人類精神克服驕傲、認識到誠實價值以及在最不可能的地方搭建理解與友誼橋梁的能力的深刻探索。?Inaworldoftenmarredbyarroganceandselfinterest,Asad'sactofreturningthewalletstandsasabeaconofhope,illuminatingthepathtowardsamorepassionateandjustsociety.Itremindsusthateveryactofhonesty,nomatterhowsmall,hasthepotentialtomakeasignificantimpactonthelivesofothers.?在一個常常被傲慢和私利所損害的世界里，Asad歸還錢包的行為如同一盞希望之燈，照亮了通往一個更富有同情心和公正社會的道路。它提醒我們，每一個誠實的行為，無論多么微小，都有可能對他人的生活產(chǎn)生重大影響。?FromtheinitialhumiliationAsadenduredtothefinalfriendshipheforged,thestoryencapsulatestheessenceofgrowth,thepowerofpositiveinfluence,andtheunwaveringbeliefthathonestyisnotonlythebestpolicybutalsothekeytounlockingtheheartsofothersandcreatingamoreharmoniousworld.?從Asad最初忍受的羞辱到他最終建立的友誼，這個故事體現(xiàn)了成長的本質(zhì)、積極影響的力量，以及堅定的信念，即誠實不僅是上策，也是打開他人心扉、創(chuàng)造更和諧世界的關(guān)鍵。?寫作示范?示范一?Atfirst,AsadwantedtokeepitasecretandpunishedFahad.Hishandstrembledasheheldthewallet,hismindawhirlwindofthoughts."Fahadwassocrueltome.Hedeservestolearnalesson,"hethought.Butthen,hisconscienceprickedhim."Whatifthisweremywallet?HowwouldIfeel?"hemused.Afteralong,hardbattlewithinhimself,hetookadeepbreathandwalkedtowardsFahad."Fahad,Ifoundyourwallet,"hesaid,hisvoiceabitshakybutdetermined.?ThenFahadsaid,"Whyareyougivingback?"Asadlookedstraightintohiseyesandreplied,"Becauseit'stherightthingtodo.Ibelieveinhonesty,evenwhenit'stough."Fahadwasstunned.Hehadneverexpectedthis.Awaveofshamewashedoverhim."I'mreallysorryforhowItreatedyou,"hesaidsincerely.Fromthatmomenton,Fahadmadeaconsciousefforttochange.Hestartedbeingkindtoeveryone,andheandAsadbecameinseparablefriends,allthankstoAsad'sunwaveringhonesty.?示范二?Atfirst,AsadwantedtokeepitasecretandpunishedFahad.Hestaredatthewallet,amixofangerandtemptationinhisheart."Thiscouldteachhimalessonaboutbeingarrogant,"hemuttered.Butashethoughtaboutitmore,herememberedhisparents'teachingsabouthonesty."Ican'tstooptohislevel,"hedecided.Witharesolutelook,hewalkeduptoFahad."Here'syourwallet,"hesaidfirmly.?ThenFahadsaid,"Whyareyougivingback?"Asadanswered,"Honestyismoreimportantthanrevenge.Iknowyoumightnotrespectme,butIrespectmyselfenoughtodotherightthing."Fahadwastakenaback.Forthefirsttime,hesawtheerrorofhisways."Iwaswrong.I'msorry,"hesaidsheepishly.Fromthenon,Fahad'sattitudetransformedpletely.HeandAsadbecamegoodfriends,andAsad'shonestyhadnotonlywonhimafriendbutalsoanewfoundrespectintheclass.?【答案】范文Atfirst,AsadwantedtokeepitasecretandpunishedFahad.Atleasthecouldaffordthelunchnow.However,anothervoicepoppedup,urginghimtogiveitbacktoFahad,whichmadehimfeeltorn.“Ishouldneverkeepthewalletatthecostofmyhonesty,andFahadwou