Unit 3 Could you please clean your room?-【同步寫作課】八年級英語下冊單元寫作深度指導(dǎo)(人教版)(教師版)_第1頁
Unit 3 Could you please clean your room?-【同步寫作課】八年級英語下冊單元寫作深度指導(dǎo)(人教版)(教師版)_第2頁
Unit 3 Could you please clean your room?-【同步寫作課】八年級英語下冊單元寫作深度指導(dǎo)(人教版)(教師版)_第3頁
Unit 3 Could you please clean your room?-【同步寫作課】八年級英語下冊單元寫作深度指導(dǎo)(人教版)(教師版)_第4頁
Unit 3 Could you please clean your room?-【同步寫作課】八年級英語下冊單元寫作深度指導(dǎo)(人教版)(教師版)_第5頁
已閱讀5頁,還剩29頁未讀, 繼續(xù)免費(fèi)閱讀

下載本文檔

版權(quán)說明:本文檔由用戶提供并上傳,收益歸屬內(nèi)容提供方,若內(nèi)容存在侵權(quán),請進(jìn)行舉報(bào)或認(rèn)領(lǐng)

文檔簡介

Unit3Couldyoupleasecleanyourroom?單元寫作指導(dǎo)與演練近三年考情分析話題考查熱度"家務(wù)、雜務(wù)"談?wù)摷覄?wù)本單元以"家務(wù)、雜務(wù)"為話題,圍繞這一話題,引導(dǎo)學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)掌握情態(tài)動詞could表示委婉地請求以及請求許可的用法。以談?wù)摷覄?wù)以及對家務(wù)喜歡與不喜歡的原因和理由為話題的作文或是請求他人幫忙的電子郵件之類的書面表達(dá)是單元測試或中考所常考查的。寫作目標(biāo)本單元以“家務(wù)瑣事與許可”為話題,要求學(xué)生學(xué)會運(yùn)用與做家務(wù)相關(guān)的動詞短語描述家務(wù)瑣事,要能運(yùn)用“CouldI...?/Couldyouplease...?”表示“請求得到許可”,使用think,believe,agree及disagree等相關(guān)句式表達(dá)自己對做家務(wù)的看法。此話題常見的寫作角度涉及:①樹立勞動觀念,進(jìn)行實(shí)踐活動本單元以“家務(wù)瑣事與許可”為話題,要求學(xué)生學(xué)會運(yùn)用與做家務(wù)相關(guān)的動詞短語描述家務(wù)瑣事,要能運(yùn)用“CouldI...?/Couldyouplease...?”表示“請求得到許可”,使用think,believe,agree及disagree等相關(guān)句式表達(dá)自己對做家務(wù)的看法。此話題常見的寫作角度涉及:①樹立勞動觀念,進(jìn)行實(shí)踐活動②做家務(wù)的收獲寫作步驟真題感知(2023·遼寧朝陽·統(tǒng)考中考真題)勞動(Labor)能夠使人自信并且可以提升自己。教育部發(fā)布了《義務(wù)教育勞動課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)(2022年版)》,從2022年秋季開始勞動課正式成為中小學(xué)的一門獨(dú)立課程。在你的生活中,你可能已經(jīng)掌握了很多勞動技能,比如洗衣、做飯、種花、植樹、喂養(yǎng)動物甚至田間勞作等。請你結(jié)合自身實(shí)際,以“Labormakesmeabetterperson”為題,根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)和要求,寫一篇英語短文。要點(diǎn):(1)你所擅長的一項(xiàng)勞動技能是什么?(2)這項(xiàng)勞動技能給你帶來什么益處?(3)你還打算學(xué)習(xí)其他什么勞動技能?要求:(1)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名或地名。(2)語言通順、意思連貫、書寫工整。(3)詞數(shù)80左右,短文開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。LabormakesmeabetterpersonAsweallknow,laborplaysanimportantroleinourlives.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文LabormakesmeabetterpersonAsweallknow,laborplaysanimportantroleinourlives.Iamverygoodatcooking.IalwayscookmealsformyparentswhenIamfreeonweekends.IthinkcookingisaveryimportantandnecessarylifeskillbecauseIcandevelopmyindependencebycooking.Icanlearnhowtotakegoodcareofmyselfinsteadofmakingmyparentsworryaboutme.Inthefuture,IwouldliketolearnhowtoplanttreessothatIcanplantmoretreesonthehillandmakemyhometownmorebeautiful.[總體分析]①題材:本文是一篇材料作文;②時(shí)態(tài):時(shí)態(tài)以“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”為主;③提示:寫作要點(diǎn)已給出,要求以“Labormakesmeabetterperson”為題,根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容進(jìn)行寫作,適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié),并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步,介紹擅長的一項(xiàng)勞動技能是什么;第二步,介紹這項(xiàng)勞動技能給你帶來什么益處;第三步,介紹打算學(xué)習(xí)其他什么勞動技能。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①begoodat擅長②onweekends在周末③takegoodcareof照顧好④Inthefuture在未來[高分句型]①IthinkcookingisaveryimportantandnecessarylifeskillbecauseIcandevelopmyindependencebycooking.(because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句)②Inthefuture,IwouldliketolearnhowtoplanttreessothatIcanplantmoretreesonthehillandmakemyhometownmorebeautiful.(sothat引導(dǎo)的目的狀語從句)【詞匯積累】rubbish垃圾fold折疊sweep打掃

mess雜亂wash清;清洗clean打掃busy忙碌chore雜務(wù)housework家務(wù)勞動tired累的takeouttherubbish

倒垃圾dothedishes

洗餐具foldtheclothes疊衣服sweepthefloor掃地makeone’sbed整理床鋪cleantheroom打掃房間dohousework/chores做家務(wù)helpsb.dosth.幫助某人做某事takecareof照顧dohouseworkallevening整晚做家務(wù)findthehousecleanandtidy發(fā)現(xiàn)房間干凈又整潔sharethehousework分擔(dān)家務(wù)acleanandcomfortablehome一個(gè)干凈又舒服的家thereisnoneedforsomebodytodosomething對于某人來說沒必要做....developchildren'sindependence養(yǎng)成孩子的獨(dú)立(習(xí)慣)theideaoffairness公平意識havenoideahowtotakecareofhimself不知道怎樣照料自己it'sfair/unfairforchildrentodosomething對于孩子來說,做……是公平的/不公平的。afewotherthingsIwantyoutodo我想要你做的另處幾件事情寫作此類話題作文的常用表達(dá)有:Itistheparents'jobtoprovideacleanandcomfortableenvironmentathomefortheirchildren.在家給孩子們提供一個(gè)干凈而舒服的環(huán)境是家長們的工作。2.Itisimportantforchildrentolearnhowtodochoresandhelptheirparentswithhousework.對于孩子們來說,學(xué)會怎樣做家務(wù)和幫助父母親做家務(wù)是很重要的。3.Sincetheyliveinonehousewiththeirparents,theyshouldknowthateveryoneshoulddotheirpartinkeepingitcleanandtidy.既然他們和他們的父母生活在同一房子里,他們就應(yīng)該明白每個(gè)人都應(yīng)該做他們份內(nèi)之事,以保持房子的干凈與整潔。4.Theearlierkidslearntobeindependent,thebetteritisfortheirfuture.孩子們越早獨(dú)立,對他們的未來就更好。5.Playingcomputergamesisawasteoftimeandenergy.打電腦游戲是浪費(fèi)時(shí)間和精力。6.Doingchorescandevelopchildren’sindependence.做家務(wù)能夠培養(yǎng)孩子們的獨(dú)立能力。7.Wecan'tdependonourparentstoomuch.我們不能過多地依賴我們的父母。8.Themorethechildrendothechores,theearliertheywilllearntobeindependent.孩子們做的家務(wù)越多,就會越早地學(xué)會獨(dú)立。9.Ithelpschildrentounderstandtheideaoffairness.這幫助孩子們理解公平的含義。1-.Studentshavenotimetodothehousework.孩子們沒有時(shí)間做家務(wù)?!糸_頭句①Itiseveryone’sdutytodochores.②Ithinkitisnecessaryforustodohousework.③Nowmanystudentsaretoolazytodohouseworkathome.④Ithinkweshouldhelpparentsdosomehousework.◆中間句①Iswepttheflooratfirstandtookouttherubbish.②Weshouldfinishourhomeworkindependentlyandmakeastudyplancarefully.③What’smore,Ialsocookedsomeporridge.④Third,doinghouseworkcanrelaxourselves.⑤Ioftenhelpmyparentswithmuchhousework,suchascleaningtherooms,takingouttherubbishanddoingthedishes.◆結(jié)尾句①Ibelieveifwecandothesethings,wewillbemoreindependent.②Ithinkit’sourdutytosharehouseworktokeepthehousecleanandtidy.◆諺語積累1.Practicemakesperfect.熟能生巧。2.Easiersaidthandone.說起來容易做起來難。雜志SundayMail就“孩子在家應(yīng)不應(yīng)該做家務(wù)”這個(gè)話題征集稿件。請你寫一篇英語短文向該雜志投稿。【思路點(diǎn)撥】1.

定基調(diào)體裁:議論文時(shí)態(tài):一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)人稱:第一人稱和第三人稱2.

謀布局、寫句子3.

巧銜接本文在表明觀點(diǎn)后,需要闡述支撐觀點(diǎn)的理由,為此,我們可以先用Herearethreereasons來承上啟下,使文章過渡自然。然后具體的理由可以用first,second,third來銜接,使行文條理清晰、緊密相連。4.

成篇章DearSirorMadam,

Yourstruly,

Mandy5.

化“平凡”為“非凡”Childrenarepartofthefamily.Theyshouldsharechoresathome.

?Aspartofthefamily,childrenshouldsharechoresathome.答案2.

謀布局、寫句子(1)theydoallthehouseworkathome(2)Itcanmakechildrenunderstandtheirparentsbetter(3)dotheirpartinkeepingtheirroomstidy(4)childrendependontheirparentstoomuch(5)havegoodlivinghabits4.

成篇章DearSirorMadam,Ithinkchildrenshoulddochoresathome.

Herearethreereasons.

First,parentswillfeelverytirediftheydoallthehouseworkathome,sochildrenshouldhelptheirparentsdosomechores.Itcanmakechildrenunderstandtheirparentsbetter.

Second,childrenarepartofthefamily.Theyshouldsharechoresathome.Childrenshoulddotheirpartinkeepingtheirroomstidy.Forexample,theyshouldmaketheirbedsandfoldtheirclothes.

Third,thesedayschildrendependontheirparentstoomuch.Doingchorescanhelpchildrenlearnhowtotakecareofthemselves.Anditcanhelpthemhavegoodlivinghabits.It’sgoodfortheirfuture.SoIbelievethatchildrenshoulddochoresathome.Yourstruly,Mandy短語積累烹飪家務(wù)切碎做湯做晚餐做奶昔用……填滿清洗餐具其他家務(wù)做家務(wù)打掃(或清楚)干凈掃地疊衣服鋪床扔掉;拋棄倒垃圾保持……整潔接通(電流、煤氣、水等);打開寫作佳句我認(rèn)為孩子們學(xué)習(xí)如何做家務(wù)是非常重要的。Ithinkit’sveryimportantforchildren.我愿意在我的空閑時(shí)間打掃房間。Iwouldlikeinmyfreetime.與家人一起做家務(wù)是我們與他們相處的好機(jī)會。Itisforustogetalongwithfamilywhendoinghouseworkwiththem.做家務(wù)可以幫助我們學(xué)會如何照顧好自己。Doingchorescanhelpuslernourselveswell.分擔(dān)家務(wù),擁有一個(gè)干凈舒適的家是我們的責(zé)任。Itisthehouseworktohaveacleanandcomfortablehome.我度過了一個(gè)忙碌但開心的星期六。IhadaSaturday.我們越早學(xué)會獨(dú)立,我們未來的生活就越容易。welearntobeindependent,ourfuturelifewillbe.【參考答案】短語積累cutup2.(to)makesoup3.makedinner4.makeamilkshake5.fill...with...6.do/washthedishes7.dochores8.cleanup9.sweepthefloor10.foldtheclothes11.make(one's)bed12.throwaway13.takeouttherubbish14.keep...cleanandtidy15.turnon寫作佳句tolearnhowtodochores/houseworkcleanthe/myroomagoodchancehowtolookafter/howtocarefor/howtotakecareofourjobtosharebusybuthappyTheearlier;theeasier(一)1.假設(shè)你是李華,請你結(jié)合最近新出臺的勞動課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn),根據(jù)自身的勞動體會,給校報(bào)英語專欄寫一篇短文,談?wù)勀銓趧诱n程的看法。內(nèi)容包括:1.校內(nèi):學(xué)習(xí)生活技能;2.校外:參加實(shí)踐活動,如:植樹、種菜等;3.在家:學(xué)做家務(wù),如:整理房間、燒飯等;4.養(yǎng)成良好的勞動習(xí)慣。注意:1.詞數(shù):80~100;開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),使行文連貫。參考詞匯:勞動課laboreducationclassAnewcurriculum(課程)standardforlaboreducationcameoutrecentlyinordertohelpmorestudentstodevelophard-workingspirit._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Anewcurriculumstandardforlaboreducationcameoutrecentlyinordertohelpmorestudentstodevelophard-workingspirit.Asamiddleschoolstudent.Iwelcomeitwarmly.Firstly,wehavelaboreducationclassessothatwecanlearnsomebasiclifeskillsatschooleveryweek.Secondly,it’sofgreatimportancetotakepartinout-of-classactivitiessuchasplantingtreesorgrowingvegetablestoenrichourrealworkexperience.Also,wetrytodosomechoresathome,liketidyingrooms,washingclothesorcookingsomedishesinordertodevelopourabilitytowork.Aboveall,wecanformgoodworkinghabitsandvaluetheimportanceofworkinghardthroughourexperiences.Inaword,thehard-workingspiriteducationisnecessaryandithelpstobuildupourbodyandmindsothatwearesupposedtodevelopthehard-workingspiritasmuchaspossible.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材:本文是一篇說明文,為材料作文。②時(shí)態(tài):時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”;③提示:寫作要點(diǎn)已給出,考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中你對勞動課程的看法的介紹要點(diǎn),適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié),并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步,表明寫作意圖。借用“談?wù)勀銓趧诱n程的看法?!眮硪鲋攸c(diǎn)介紹的內(nèi)容;第二步,具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。從“學(xué)習(xí)生活技能、參加實(shí)踐活動、學(xué)做家務(wù)等”幾個(gè)方面重點(diǎn)介紹你對勞動課程的看法的具體情況;第三步,書寫結(jié)語,表達(dá)“總之,努力工作精神教育是必要的,它有助于建立我們的身心,這樣我們就應(yīng)該盡可能地發(fā)展努力工作精神”的總結(jié)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①takepartin參加②trytodosth努力做某事③aboveall最重要的④inaword總之[高分句型]①Firstly,wehavelaboreducationclassessothatwecanlearnsomebasiclifeskillsatschooleveryweek.(sothat引導(dǎo)目的狀語從句)②Secondly,it’sofgreatimportancetotakepartinout-of-classactivitiessuchasplantingtreesorgrowingvegetablestoenrichourrealworkexperience.(“Itis+of+名詞+todosth”句型)(二)國家提出將“勞動教育(laboreducation)”納入中小學(xué)國家課程方案,請結(jié)合自身的勞動經(jīng)歷,談?wù)勀銓趧咏逃目捶?。?nèi)容包括:你對勞動教育的看法begoodforhealth;relaxfromthehardstudy...你自身的勞動經(jīng)歷及感受athome:dothedishes...atschool:cleantheclassroom...你對勞動教育課程的建議offerdifferentkindsoflaborclasses;holdcompetitionsaboutlaborskills...要求:1.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名;2.短文必須包含表格內(nèi)所有信息,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;語句通順,意思連貫,書書工整;3.詞數(shù):80詞左右,文章開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。It’sreportedthatlaboreducationwillbeincludedintheeducationofmiddleschoolsandprimaryschoolsinChina.Ithink_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文It’sreportedthatlaboreducationwillbeincludedintheeducationofmiddleschoolsandprimaryschoolsinChina.Ithinkitisgoodforourhealth.Wecanrelaxfromthehardstudybydoinglabor.Ioftendolaborathome.Forexample,Idothedishes,sweepthefloorandtakeouttherubbish.AtschoolIoftencleantheclassroomandwaterflowers.Ireallyfeelhappy.Ihavesomeideasaboutthecourse.Theschoolcanofferdifferentkindsoflaborclasses.Itcanalsoholdcompetitionsaboutlaborskills.Theywillmakeourschoollifemorecolorful.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材:本文是一篇材料作文;②時(shí)態(tài):時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”;③提示:根據(jù)題干中的提示內(nèi)容談?wù)剬趧咏逃目捶?,適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。[寫作步驟]第一步,引出話題,介紹你對勞動教育的看法;第二步,介紹你自身的勞動經(jīng)歷及感受;第三步,介紹你對勞動教育課程的建議。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①begoodfor對……有好處②dothedishes洗碗③differentkindsof各種各樣的[高分句型]Wecanrelaxfromthehardstudybydoinglabor.(動名詞作賓語)(三)3.現(xiàn)在許多孩子在家里很少做家務(wù),甚至不愿意做家務(wù)。學(xué)校為了號召同學(xué)們積極參與家務(wù)勞動,開展了以“WeShouldHelpParentsDoHousework”為主題的演講活動。假如你是李華,請結(jié)合下面的信息用英語寫一篇演講稿。WeShouldHelpParentsDoHouseworkWhathouseworkdoyouoftendoathome?Howdoyoufeelaboutdoinghousework?Whydowehavetodohousework?注意:1.文章必須包括提示中的三個(gè)要點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)地名、人名和校名;3.詞數(shù)在70左右。(開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。)Ladiesandgentlemen,Goodmorning!I’mLiHua.It’smyhonortogiveyouaspeech.Mytopicis“WeShouldHelpParentsDoHousework”.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thanksforlistening.【答案】例文:Ladiesandgentlemen,Goodmorning!I’mLiHua.It’smyhonortogiveyouaspeech.Mytopicis“WeShouldHelpParentsDoHousework”.Onweekdays,Ioftencleanmybedroomeverymorningandwashdishesaftersupper.Atweekends,Iusuallywashclothesandsweepthefloor.Ithinkdoinghouseworkisnecessaryandmeaningful,whichmakesmehappyandmoreresponsible.Inmyopinion,asafamilymember,wemustsharethehousework.Wecan’tdependonourparentsforever.Therefore,doinghouseworkcanmakeusindependentwhenwegrowup.Sharingthehouseworkishelpfulforustobuildagoodrelationshipwithourparents.Ithinktryingtodosomehouseworkcanalsokeepushealthyandstrong.Thanksforlistening.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材:這是一篇演講稿,為議論文;②時(shí)態(tài):主要采用“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”;③提示:寫作要點(diǎn)包括:平時(shí)自己所做的家務(wù)活動、感受和應(yīng)該做家務(wù)的原因。[寫作步驟]第一步,介紹自己平時(shí)所做的家務(wù)活動;第二步,介紹自己做家務(wù)的感受;第三步,介紹應(yīng)該做家務(wù)的原因。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①dependon依靠②makeusindependent使得我們獨(dú)立③buildagoodrelationship建立良好關(guān)系④inmyopinion我認(rèn)為[高分句型]Ithinkdoinghouseworkisnecessaryandmeaningful,whichmakesmehappyandmoreresponsible.(定語從句)(四)4.很多家長認(rèn)為孩子不應(yīng)該幫忙做家務(wù),他們的主要任務(wù)是學(xué)習(xí),請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示問題,寫一篇題為“ShouldTeenagersHelpwithHouseworkatHome?”的短文。內(nèi)容提示問題:Whatdoyouoftendotohelpyourparentsathome?Doyouthinkkidsshouldhelpoutwithchoresathome?Whydoyouthinkso?Somethingmoreaboutdoinghomework.注意:文中不得透露個(gè)人真實(shí)信息;詞數(shù)60—80;標(biāo)題和開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。ShouldTeenagersHelpwithHouseworkatHome?Manyparentsthinkthatteenagersdon’thavetohelpwithhouseworkathome.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文:ShouldTeenagersHelpwithHouseworkatHome?Manyparentsthinkthatteenagersdon’thavetohelpwithhouseworkathome.Theyjusthavetostudyhardtogetgoodgrades.Ireallydon’tagree.Ialwayshelpmyparentsdosomechoresathome.Onschooldays,Imakemyownbedanddothedishesafterdinner.Ontheweekend,Ihelpcleanupthelivingroom.SometimesItakeouttherubbishonthewaytoschool.Ithinkhelpingdochoresshowmylovetothem.Theyareverytiredafterworkingallday.Sinceweliveinonehousewithourparents,everyoneshoulddotheirpartinkeepingitcleanandtidy.Atthesametime,doingchoreshelpsuslearntotakecareofourselves.It’shelpful.【詳解】[總體分析]題材:本文是一篇材料作文;時(shí)態(tài):時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”;提示:根據(jù)題干中的提示內(nèi)容談?wù)撉嗌倌陸?yīng)不應(yīng)該幫助父母做家務(wù),適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。[寫作步驟]第一步,引出話題,表示自己贊成應(yīng)該幫助父母做家務(wù);第二步,介紹你在加幫助父母做什么家務(wù);第三步,介紹做家務(wù)的好處。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]ontheweekend在周末onthewaytoschool在去學(xué)校的路上dotheirpartin盡他們的職責(zé)[高分句型]Ithinkhelpingdochoresshowmylovetothem.(賓語從句)Sinceweliveinonehousewithourparents,everyoneshoulddotheirpartinkeepingitcleanandtidy.(since引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句)(五)5.熱愛勞動,才能熱愛生活,才能感受生活的溫暖。青少年應(yīng)該主動參加各類勞動,如社區(qū)服務(wù)、學(xué)校勞動和日常家務(wù)等。假如你是李華,你們學(xué)校組織“GrowUpinLabor”的征文活動。請寫一篇英語短文向?qū)W校英語報(bào)投稿。內(nèi)容包括:談?wù)剠⒓觿趧拥囊饬x;介紹你經(jīng)常參加的兩項(xiàng)勞動和收獲;提醒同學(xué)們勞動時(shí)要注意的事項(xiàng)(至少兩項(xiàng))。作文要求::(1)不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校的真實(shí)名稱和考生的真實(shí)姓名。(2)語句連貫,詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右。作文的開頭已經(jīng)給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù),也不必抄寫在答題卡上。GrowUpinLaborLaborplaysanimportantroleinlife.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文GrowUpinLabor

Laborplaysanimportantroleinlife.Ithelpsuslearnhowtotakecareofourselvesandliveindependently.Asforme,Ioftendothecleaningatschoolandhelpwiththehouseworkathome.Throughdoingthecleaningwithmyclassmatesatschool,Ihaverealizedthatteamworkcanhelpfinishthetaskmorequicklyandbetter.AndIhavelearnedtoplanmytimewellwhenhelpingwithhouseworkathome.Sincelaborisgoodforourdevelopment,let’stakeanactivepartinlabor.Butremembertofollowtherulesandkeepsafetoavoidaccidentswhileworking.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材:本文是一篇材料作文;②時(shí)態(tài):時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí);③提示:寫作要點(diǎn)已給出,考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“提示信息”中“勞動的意義;你經(jīng)常參加的兩項(xiàng)勞動及從中的得到的收獲;至少兩項(xiàng)勞動時(shí)的注意事項(xiàng)”,適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié),并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步,表明寫作意圖。借用“勞動在生活中扮演著重要的角色。”來引出重點(diǎn)介紹的內(nèi)容;第二步,具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。從“我經(jīng)常參加的勞動及從中獲得的收獲”幾方面重點(diǎn)介紹勞動的具體情況;第三步,書寫結(jié)語。提醒“但在工作時(shí)要記得遵守規(guī)則并保持安全,以避免發(fā)生事故?!盵亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①takecareof照料②begoodfor有利于[高分句型]①AndIhavelearnedtoplanmytimewellwhenhelpingwithhouseworkathome.(when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句)②Sincelaborisgoodforourdevelopment,let’stakeanactivepartinlabor.(since引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句)(六)6.隨著年齡的增長,我們已經(jīng)能做一些力所能及的家務(wù),替父母分擔(dān)勞動也是我們應(yīng)該做的事情。當(dāng)然,在這個(gè)過程中我們也會收獲很多。請以“Igetalotfromdoinghousework”為題,根據(jù)寫作要求,用英語寫一篇短文,談?wù)撓履銓Υ说挠^點(diǎn)吧。注意:1.詞數(shù):100左右;2.文中不得出現(xiàn)與考生相關(guān)的真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息;______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Igetalotfromdoinghousework.AsI’mgettingolder,I’vebecamemoreindependentandwillingtosharehousework.Itrulygetalotfromdoinghousework.Letmetellyousomethingaboutit.Firstofall,toreducemyparents’burden,Ialwaysoffertodosomehousework,whichimprovestherelationshipbetweenmyparentsandI.Inaddition,doinghouseworkhelpsmetounderstandthemeaningoffairness.Everyoneshoulddohisparttokeepthehouseclean.What’smore,itisdoinghouseworkthatmakesmelearntobeindependent.Inbrief,doinghouseworkhelpstomakemeabetterperson.Igetalotfromdoinghousework.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材:本文是一篇材料作文;②時(shí)態(tài):時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”;③提示:根據(jù)題干中的提示介紹自己從做家務(wù)中學(xué)到了什么,適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。[寫作步驟]第一步,引出話題;第二步,詳細(xì)介紹自己從做家務(wù)中學(xué)到的事情;第三步,書寫結(jié)語。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①offertodosth.主動提出做某事②inaddition此外③inbrief總之[高分句型]①Firstofall,toreducemyparents’burden,Ialwaysoffertodosomehousework,whichimprovestherelationshipbetweenmyparentsandI.(動詞不定式作目的狀語以及which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)②What’smore,itisdoinghouseworkthatmakesmelearntobeindependent.(強(qiáng)調(diào)句)(七)7.隨著義務(wù)教育階段《勞動課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)》的頒布,勞動教育將在學(xué)生全面發(fā)展過程中發(fā)揮重要作用。槐蔭學(xué)校希望許飛同學(xué)在“國旗下講話”時(shí),對全校同學(xué)發(fā)出重視勞動教育的倡議。假如你是許飛,請根據(jù)以下提示寫好這篇倡議書。寫作提示:1.認(rèn)真對待勞動課程,熟練掌握勞動技能;2.積極參加勞動實(shí)踐,全程體驗(yàn)勞動快樂,如:植樹、種菜等;3.主動承擔(dān)簡單家務(wù),培養(yǎng)良好勞動習(xí)慣,如:整理房間、洗衣服等;4.……(補(bǔ)充一兩點(diǎn)個(gè)人想法)寫作要求:1.圍繞以上提示展開作文并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮補(bǔ)充,使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí),意思連貫,表達(dá)流暢;2.文中不得透露個(gè)人真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱:3.詞數(shù)100詞左右。文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯:laborcourses勞動課;formv.養(yǎng)成Goodmorning,everyone.I’mXuFei.It’smygreathonortostandheretogiveaspeech._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Inaword,Iwarmlywelcomethelaboreducationandcallonusalltovaluetheworkingspirit.【答案】例文Goodmorning,everyone.I’mXuFei.It’smygreathonortostandheretogiveaspeech.Nowadays,laboreducationplaysanimportantroleinourlife.Asamiddleschoolstudent,itisnecessaryforustohavelaborclassesandjoinindifferentlaboractivities.Firstly,weshouldtakethelaborclassesseriously,whichwillhelpuslearnsomebasiclifeskills.Secondly,weneedtakepartinlaboractivitiessuchasplantingtreesorgrowingvegetablestoexperiencethejoythatlaborbringstous.What’smore,wehadbetterdosomechoresathome,liketidyingroomsorwashingclothes.Aboveall,wecanformgoodworkinghabitsandvaluetheimportanceofhardworkingthroughourexperience.Inaword,Iwarmlywelcomethelaboreducationandcallonusalltovaluetheworkingspirit.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材:本文是一篇倡議書;②時(shí)態(tài):時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”;③提示:寫作要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出,考生注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn);注意根據(jù)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行適當(dāng)?shù)难a(bǔ)充,使文章內(nèi)容更充實(shí),上下文更連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步,承接開頭,簡單談?wù)剟趧咏逃龑τ谥袑W(xué)生的意義;第二步,介紹中學(xué)生該如何重視勞動教育;第三步,表達(dá)自己對勞動教育的態(tài)度,以及號召同學(xué)們重視勞動精神。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①playanimportantrole扮演重要的角色②takepartin參加③dosomechores做家務(wù)[高分句型]①Asamiddleschoolstudent,itisnecessaryforustohavelaborclassesandjoinindifferentlaboractivities.(it固定句型)②Firstly,weshouldtakethelaborclassesseriously,whichwillhelpuslearnsomebasiclifeskills.(which引導(dǎo)的非限定性定語從句)(八)8.有人說,勞動創(chuàng)造生活;有人說,勞動帶來美好。請根據(jù)下表中內(nèi)容和所給提示,談一談你對勞動的看法,說一說你經(jīng)常從事的勞動工作及其個(gè)人感受。KindsofLaborAthomedothedishes,cleanrooms,...Atschoolsweepfloors,waterplants,...Atcommunityhelpoldpeople,visitsickkids,...MeaningofLaborImproveourphysicalhealth...提示:(1)Whatlaborwouldyouliketodo?(2)Whydoyoudoit?注意:(1)短文須包括表格中的全部信息和提示中的兩個(gè)要點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;(2)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名和人名;(3)詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右(開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。Asweknow,laborcancreateacolorfullifeandbringhappythings._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Asweknow,laborcancreateacolorfullifeandbringhappythings.Ithelpsusmasterbasiclifeskillsanddeveloptherightviewoflife.Asamiddleschoolstudent,Icandothedishes,sweepthefloorandfoldclothesathome.Icanwaterplantsandsweepfloorsatschool.Ofcourse,Icanalsogotocommunitytodovolunteeractivities.Icanhelpoldpeople,visitsickkids.Throughtheseactivities,Icanimprovemyphysicalhealth.Let’sact!Let’stakepartinsuchlabormore.Whynotjoinmeandimproveyourselfthroughlaboreducation?【詳解】[總體分析]①題材:本文是一篇記敘文,為材料作文;②時(shí)態(tài):時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”;③提示:寫作要點(diǎn)已給出,考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏提示,并適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié),突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步,引出話題,點(diǎn)明勞動的好處(已給出)。第二步,結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)歷談?wù)勛约合矚g做的勞動。第三步,介紹喜歡做這些勞動的原因,及自己的感受。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①basiclifeskills基本生活技能②sweepthefloor掃地③gotocommunity去社區(qū)④takepartin參加[高分句型]①Let’stakepartinsuchlabormore.(祈使句)②Whynotjoinmeandimproveyourselfthroughlaboreducation?(Whynot句型)1.(2023·青海西寧·統(tǒng)考中考真題)為提高自理能力,適應(yīng)未來發(fā)展,青少年應(yīng)學(xué)會做日常家務(wù),培養(yǎng)必備生活技能,如烹飪、洗衣、種花、打掃、整理等。請以“DoingChoresMakesMeBetter”為題寫一篇80詞左右的英語短文,文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)校名和姓名。要點(diǎn)提示:1.你會做哪些家務(wù)?2.你想學(xué)哪些家務(wù)?為什么?3.對你有何幫助和意義?DoingChoresMakesMeBetter___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Apossibleversion:DoingChoresMakesMeBetterAsteenagers,doingchoresisoneofthemostimportantlifeskillsi

溫馨提示

  • 1. 本站所有資源如無特殊說明,都需要本地電腦安裝OFFICE2007和PDF閱讀器。圖紙軟件為CAD,CAXA,PROE,UG,SolidWorks等.壓縮文件請下載最新的WinRAR軟件解壓。
  • 2. 本站的文檔不包含任何第三方提供的附件圖紙等,如果需要附件,請聯(lián)系上傳者。文件的所有權(quán)益歸上傳用戶所有。
  • 3. 本站RAR壓縮包中若帶圖紙,網(wǎng)頁內(nèi)容里面會有圖紙預(yù)覽,若沒有圖紙預(yù)覽就沒有圖紙。
  • 4. 未經(jīng)權(quán)益所有人同意不得將文件中的內(nèi)容挪作商業(yè)或盈利用途。
  • 5. 人人文庫網(wǎng)僅提供信息存儲空間,僅對用戶上傳內(nèi)容的表現(xiàn)方式做保護(hù)處理,對用戶上傳分享的文檔內(nèi)容本身不做任何修改或編輯,并不能對任何下載內(nèi)容負(fù)責(zé)。
  • 6. 下載文件中如有侵權(quán)或不適當(dāng)內(nèi)容,請與我們聯(lián)系,我們立即糾正。
  • 7. 本站不保證下載資源的準(zhǔn)確性、安全性和完整性, 同時(shí)也不承擔(dān)用戶因使用這些下載資源對自己和他人造成任何形式的傷害或損失。

評論

0/150

提交評論