讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)中“說(shuō)〃的門(mén)道：

-實(shí)用表達(dá)技巧大揭秘

一、“say”相關(guān)表達(dá)

（一）'：..，/?/rsbsaidina...voice/tone（某人以...的聲音/語(yǔ)氣說(shuō)....）

-"Canwespeakprivately?^^shesaidinalow/soft/quietvoice.（"我們能私下里談?wù)剢?”她低聲/輕聲/

悄聲說(shuō)。）

-4tIcan^bearit,,?hesaidinachokedvoice.（“我實(shí)在忍不下去了?！彼曇暨煅实卣f(shuō)道。）

-"Well,goon,^^saidCamilla,hervoicefairlysteady.（“好吧，請(qǐng)繼續(xù)，”卡米拉用很沉著的語(yǔ)氣說(shuō)道。）

-本句型是voice的一種變式，即獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)，構(gòu)成：one'svoice+adj./doing,例如“trembling,

soft”。

-"MaryAnn!MaryAnn!^^saidthevoice."Fetchmemyglovesthismoment!Thencamealittle

patteringoffeetonthestairs.（“瑪麗?安！瑪麗?安！”那個(gè)聲音喊道，”馬上把我的手套拿過(guò)來(lái)!”然后

樓梯上傳來(lái)一陣微弱的啪嗒啪嗒的腳步聲。）

-類(lèi)似的表達(dá)如：“Coward!”atinyinnervoiceinsisted.（“膽小鬼！”內(nèi)心一個(gè)小聲音堅(jiān)持說(shuō)。）

（二）“…，/?/!”sbsaid+with/in+n.（例如：anger,astonishment）（某人帶著...情緒說(shuō)....）

-4tThankyou,^^theysaidinchorus.（"謝謝。"他們齊聲說(shuō)道。）

-"YouTesafe!”Tomcriedindelight.（“你安全啦！"湯姆高興地大聲說(shuō)道。）

-t4Howwonderful!^^shesaidwithenthusiasm.（“多棒?。　彼d致勃勃說(shuō)道。）

（三）“…，/?/!”sbsaid+adv.（某人...地說(shuō)....）

-'Took,Tvegotawobblytooth,^^saidmylittledaughter,proudly.我有一顆牙活動(dòng)了?！拔业男?/p>

女兒驕傲地說(shuō)道。）

（四）saidsb,非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞（某人說(shuō)……,同時(shí)做……動(dòng)作）

-"Thistasteshorrible,9,saidTom,pullingafaceathisglass.（“這太難喝了，“湯姆一臉苦相地看著杯

子說(shuō)道。）

-"Sitdown,^^shereplied,stressingeachword.（“坐下，"她一字一頓地說(shuō)道。）

（五）/rsaidsb,狀語(yǔ)或狀語(yǔ)從句（afterdoing,as,when,before,asif...）（某人在...情況

下說(shuō)……）

-"I——I'malittlegirl,“saidAlice,ratherdoubtfully,assherememberedthenumberofchangesshehad

gonethroughthatday.（“我---我是一個(gè)小女孩，“愛(ài)麗絲十分含糊地說(shuō)，因?yàn)樗肫饋?lái)自己在這

一天中經(jīng)歷了很多次變化。）

（六）saidsb,形容詞短語(yǔ)（某人帶著……的情緒或狀態(tài)說(shuō)……）

-“rmafraidIdon'tknowone,^^saidAlice,ratheralarmedattheproposal.（“恐怕我一個(gè)也講不出來(lái)?！?/p>

愛(ài)麗絲說(shuō)，這個(gè)建議使她相當(dāng)驚恐。）

（七）Say的同義詞

-“Wh-whencanweg-go?”shestammered/murmured.（"我們什...什么時(shí)候能....能走?”她結(jié)結(jié)

巴巴地說(shuō)道。）

-“Eva!”heyelled.（“伊娃!”他大喊道。）

-won!^^sheexclaimed.（"我贏了!”她大喊道。）

-"Help!”hescreamed.（"救命啊!”他大聲喊道。）

-"It'stoohot!”hegroaned.（"太熱了!"他抱怨道。）

-"DavidJshewhispered,drawinghimaside.（“戴維，"她把他拉到一邊悄悄說(shuō)。）

（八）Say的省略

-"AmIwelcome?^^Hesmiledhopefully,leaningonthedoor.（"歡迎我嗎?"他靠在門(mén)上，滿(mǎn)懷希望地

笑著說(shuō)道。）

-"ButIan'ssuchasimpleton”,shelaughed.（“可是伊恩太傻了，“她笑著說(shuō)道。）

（九）Say的概括

-1toldhimwhathadhappened.（我告訴他發(fā)生的一切。）

-1sharewithhimthestory（of...）.（我和他分享了這個(gè)事情。）

-1stammeredoutmyhistory.（我結(jié)結(jié)巴巴地講述了我的過(guò)去。）

-Hepouredouthistroublestome.（他對(duì)我傾訴了他的煩惱。）

二'"word”相關(guān)表達(dá)

（一）說(shuō)出話

-64rilcallyouback"werethelastwordsIheardbeforeshehungup.（在她掛電話前，我聽(tīng)到她說(shuō)，"我

會(huì)回電話的?！保?/p>

-44Youdon91evenlikeart.^^Thewordspouroutofme.（我脫口而出，“你甚至不喜歡藝術(shù)?！保?/p>

-Asifhecouldreadmythoughts,hesaidinarushofwords.（他似乎知道我在想什么,快速說(shuō)道。）

-Inhernervousnessshestumbledoverherwords.（她因緊張說(shuō)話結(jié)結(jié)巴巴的。）

（二）有感情的話

-AsisaidthosetwosmallwordsIsawreliefinhiseyes.（當(dāng)我說(shuō)這兩個(gè)小字時(shí)，我看到他的眼睛里

流露出寬慰的神情。）

-"Iheardthemtalking,9,Birdiesaid,herwordschokedbytears."They'vecomeforyou!"（"我聽(tīng)至！J他們

在說(shuō)話，”伯蒂說(shuō)，她的話被淚水嗆住了?！八麄兪莵?lái)找你的!”）

-Hiswordsrangwithpride.（他的話充滿(mǎn)了驕傲。）

-Hiswordswereamixtureofpityandpraise.（他的話里既有同情也有贊揚(yáng)。）

（三）不舒服的話

-Herwordsstunglikesomanysharpstones.（她的話像尖銳的石頭一樣刺痛著我。）

-Thewordscameathimhardandcold.（這些話對(duì)他來(lái)說(shuō)是冷冰冰的。）

-Hiswordssentachilldownherspine.（他的話讓她覺(jué)得毛骨悚然。）

（四）認(rèn)真地說(shuō)和對(duì)方的反饋

-1listenedintently,hangingoneveryword.（我聚精會(huì)神地聽(tīng)著，一字不漏。）

-Thewordsseemedtoringoutfromhisthoughts-We'rehere.（這句話似乎從他的腦海中響起--

我們來(lái)了。）

-"Sitdown,^^shereplied,stressingeachword/pausingoneachword.（"坐下，"她一字一頓地說(shuō)道。）

-Herencouragingwordsfellondeafears.（她鼓舞人心的話被置若罔聞。）

（五）說(shuō)不出話

-Shepaused,atalossforwords.（她停頓了一下，想不出合適的話語(yǔ)。）

-Despairchokedherwords.（她絕望得說(shuō)不出話來(lái)。）

-Chetopenedhismouthtosaysomething,butthewordsseemedtobeallstucktogether.Sohejust

nodded.（切特張開(kāi)嘴想說(shuō)些什么，但這些話似乎都粘在一起了。所以他只是點(diǎn)了點(diǎn)頭。）

（六）牢記的話

-Herwordsechoinmymemorytothisday."Oh,you，rebeautifUl!”（她說(shuō)的那句"哦，你好漂亮!”至今

在我的記憶中回響。）

-Hisquietwordsstillringinmymemory,6<Youdon'tunderstand.Ican'tsleepatnight.”（他平靜的話仍

回蕩在我的記憶里，“你不理解，我就是晚上睡不著。”）

-Forafewstunnedseconds,IlethiswordswashovermeandsinkinsothatIwouldneverforgetthem.

（在震驚的幾秒鐘里，我任由他的話沖刷著我，這樣我就能永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)忘記。）

-UncleBenny飛wordswhisperedinhishead.（本尼叔叔的話在他腦海中低語(yǔ)。）

（七）改變?nèi)说脑?/p>

-"I'lldoit,“Isaid,knowingthosefewsimplewordswouldchangemylifeforever.（“我會(huì)的，“我說(shuō)，

我知道這幾句簡(jiǎn)單的話將永遠(yuǎn)改變我的生活。）

-Thewordsrangtrue,nestledinmybrain,andcalmedmyanxiousheart.（這些話聽(tīng)起來(lái)彳艮真實(shí)，在我

的腦海里扎下了根，安撫了我焦慮的心。）

-1wrotethosewordsinmynotebook:Walkbackwards!（我在筆記本上寫(xiě)下了這些話：向后走?。?/p>

-Hiswordsshiftedmeintoanewspaceofthinking.Hewasabsolutelyright.（他的話把我?guī)肓艘粋€(gè)

新的思考空間。他完全正確。）

（八）說(shuō)完后

-Thesewordswerefollowedbyaverylongsilence.（他說(shuō)完這些話后，大家又沉默了好一陣。）

-Andwiththesewords,hewentintohisbedroomwherehefinisheddressing.（說(shuō)完這些，他走至!j臣卜室

里去換衣服了。）

-Andatthesewordshewentout.（說(shuō)完這些話，他就離開(kāi)了。）

三.常見(jiàn)容易丟分的“說(shuō)”

錯(cuò)誤一濫用修飾詞

【典例1]"Howcanyoudothis?"shesaidangrily,lookingatmefuriously.

【點(diǎn)睛】此句使用了大量副調(diào)。并且套用了分詞作伴隨的句型。過(guò)度使用副詞讓閱卷老師覺(jué)得你

詞匯貧乏。廢話連篇，對(duì)情節(jié)發(fā)展和刻畫(huà)人物性格沒(méi)有幫助。

【典例2】"Thatisfantasticnews,“hesaidhappily.

【點(diǎn)睛】此句中完全沒(méi)有必要加上一個(gè)happily來(lái)表達(dá)說(shuō)的方式，因?yàn)榫渲械膄antastic一詞足以

說(shuō)明說(shuō)話人的表情，過(guò)度強(qiáng)調(diào)對(duì)話標(biāo)簽會(huì)讓讀者的注意力集中在“說(shuō)話的方式”而不是“說(shuō)話的內(nèi)

容

錯(cuò)誤二追求花哨，過(guò)度使用“對(duì)話標(biāo)簽”

（典例】“Hey,howareyou?'"Tmfine,howareyou?^^

“Howistheweather?,,44Terrific!Nicedayforawalkisn*tit?”

【點(diǎn)睛】這樣的對(duì)話在現(xiàn)實(shí)生活中很真實(shí)，但是小說(shuō)畢竟是藝術(shù)加工，無(wú)助情節(jié)推動(dòng)的，不能刻

畫(huà)人物性格的日常寒暄和偏離文章主線的對(duì)話絕對(duì)不用。

錯(cuò)誤三用詞不當(dāng)，邏輯混淆

【典例］"Ican'tbelieveit,"Emmagasped.tcThat*shilarious,Henrychuckled.

【點(diǎn)睛】這里把動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)邏輯混淆了，gasp（喘息）不能.chuckle（輕笑）出一句話。

“Ican'tbelieveit“Emmasaidwithagasp.（Dialoguetag+with介詞短語(yǔ)）

錯(cuò)誤四重復(fù)使用，廢話堆積

【典例】"Itoldyoualready,9,Isaid,glaring.

【點(diǎn)睛】此句對(duì)話中的主語(yǔ)力“已經(jīng)清晰地說(shuō)明了說(shuō)話者，完全沒(méi)有必要用dialoguetag641said”

來(lái)說(shuō)明說(shuō)話對(duì)象?？梢约由弦稽c(diǎn)動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)就可以避免這種錯(cuò)誤，并且提升語(yǔ)言的生動(dòng)性。［glared

athim,“Itoldyoualready.^^

綜合實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練

OnJuly8,2017,eightmembersofafamilyintotal,wereenjoyinganeveningtogetheratthebeachin

Panhandle,Florida.Asthesunsankloweronthehorizon,thetwoboysNoah,11,andStephen,

8一swamintothewaveswithoutthegrown-upsnoticing.Soontheyrealizedthattheoceanhadpulled

themintothesea.Aftertryingandfailingtoswimback,theystartedwavingandscreamingforhelp.But

thelifeguardshadbeenoffdutyfortheevening.

TheboyshadbeenstrugglingforseveralminuteswhenJackyandTabatha,acouplefromGeorgia,heard

them.Theydivedintothewaterandsoonreachedthetwobrothers.Butafterafewminutes,theywere

alltrappedinaripcurrent（離岸流）一apowerfulonethatcouldsweepeventhestrongestswimmeroutto

sea!Bythen,someteenagershadheardthecry.Oneoftheteensrushedintothewater,grabbedJacky,

andpulledhimbacktoshore.Meanwhile,Tabathacouldfeelherselfbeingpulledfartherout.Shewas

alreadyexhaustedandbeginningtofeeldesperateasshewastryingtosavebothboysalone.

Onshore,Jackywasterrified.Amanstopped."What'swrong?”askedShaun,whowasheadingback

tohiscar.uMywifeisdrowning!,?Brittanysaid.Shaunimmediatelystrode（大步跨）intothewater.But

severalminuteslater,agaping15feetstilllaybetweenhimandTabathaandtheboys.Heknewthatifhe

continued,he'dbecomeanothervictim.Heturnedaroundtoseekhelp.

ItwasaboutthattimethatRoberta,theboys'mother,returnedfromthebathroomandlookedaround

forherchildren.Shewasshockedtospotthemfloatingmuchfartheroutthantheywereallowedto

go.Shefoughtthewavestogettoherscreamingsonsandthestrangerwhowastryingtosavethem,but

shequicklydiscovereditwasnearlyimpossibletomakeheadwayinanydirection.Lookingaround,

Robertasighedwithrelieftoseesomemorepeoplecomingtohelp.

注意:

1.所續(xù)寫(xiě)短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.續(xù)寫(xiě)部分分為兩段，每段的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好；

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WhentheytriedinvaintorescuethebrothersandTabatha,ariskyideacametothem.

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Bythen,moreswimmershadalsonoticedthegroupintroubleandrushedtojointhehumanchain.

翻譯小練習(xí)：

1.為了不讓自己在激流中失去立足點(diǎn)，他們開(kāi)始互相抓住，形成一條從海灘一直延伸到掙扎的人

和塔巴塔的人類(lèi)鏈。

2.他們緊緊地聯(lián)系在一起，把腳牢牢地插在沙子里，以確保他們的安全。

3.然而，這需要更多的鏈接，可能有幾十個(gè)。

4.肖恩在海灘上發(fā)現(xiàn)了其他的游泳者，喊道：“別光站在那兒！來(lái)幫忙吧?！?/p>

5.一個(gè)接一個(gè)，一個(gè)接一個(gè)，完全陌生的人走進(jìn)海浪里，緊緊抓住對(duì)方的手腕，決心不讓任何人

死在海灘上。

6.最后，他們成功了，Tabatha和兩個(gè)兄弟得救了！“海灘上的那些人是地球上的天使，”羅伯塔說(shuō)。

7.“不管是第一個(gè)人還是最后一個(gè)人，他們都是我們的英雄，幫助我們的家庭擺脫了困境。

參考答案：

1.為了不讓自己在激流中失去立足點(diǎn)，他們開(kāi)始互相抓住，形成一條從海灘一直延伸到掙扎的人

和塔巴塔的人類(lèi)鏈。

Tokeepthemselvesfromlosingtheirfootingintheripcurrent,theybeganholdingontooneanotherto

formahumanchainextendingfromthebeachallthewayouttothestrugglingandTabatha.

2.他們緊緊地聯(lián)系在一起，把腳牢牢地插在沙子里，以確保他們的安全。

Theystayedlinkedtightlyandmanagedtoensuretheyweresafebymakingtheirfeetfirmlyplantedin

thesand.

3.然而，這需要更多的鏈接，可能有幾十個(gè)。

However,thatrequiredmorelinks-probablydozensofthem.

4.肖恩在海灘上發(fā)現(xiàn)了其他的游泳者，喊道：“別光站在那兒！來(lái)幫忙吧。”

Shaunspottedotherswimmersonthebeachandshouted,"6Don,tjuststandthere!Comeandhelp.”

5.一個(gè)接一個(gè)，一個(gè)接一個(gè)，完全陌生的人走進(jìn)海浪里，緊緊抓住對(duì)方的手腕，決心不讓任何人

死在海灘上。

Onebyone,linkbylink,totalstrangerswalkedintothewavesandgraspedoneanotherbythewrists,

determinedthatnoonewoulddieonthatbeach.

6.最后，他們成功了，Tabatha和兩個(gè)兄弟得救了！“海灘上的那些人是地球上的天使，”羅伯塔說(shuō)。

Atlast,theymadeitandTabathaandthetwobrothersweresaved!”Thosepeopleonthebeachare

angelsonearth,9,saidRoberta.

7.“不管是第一個(gè)人還是最后一個(gè)人，他們都是我們的英雄，幫助我們的家庭擺脫了困境。

“Whetheritisthefirstpersonorthelastpersoninthechain,theyareallourheroes,whohelpedgetour

familyoutoftrouble.”

參考范文：

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WhentheytriedinvaintorescuethebrothersandTabatha,ariskyideacametothem.Tokeep

themselvesfromlosingtheirfootingintheripcurrent,theybeganholdingontooneanothertoforma

humanchainextendingfromthebeachallthewayouttothestrugglingandTabatha.Theystayedlinked

tightlyandmanagedtoensuretheyweresafebymakingtheirfeetfirmlyplantedinthesand.However,

thatrequiredmorelinks-probablydozensofthem.Shaunspottedotherswimmersonthebeachand

shouted,taDon,tjuststandthere!Comeandhelp.”

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Bythen,moreswimmershadalsonoticedthegroupintroubleandrushedtojointhehumanchain.One

byone,linkbylink,totalstrangerswalkedintothewavesandgraspedoneanotherbythewrists,

determinedthatnoonewoulddieonthatbeach.Atlast,theymadeitandTabathaandthetwo

brothersweresaved!”Thosepeopleonthebeachareangelsonearth,“saidRoberta."Whetheritisthe

firstpersonorthelastpersoninthechain,theyareallourheroes,whohelpedgetourfamilyoutof

trouble.9,

高中英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)素材大全

第一部分.時(shí)間描寫(xiě)(一)

時(shí)間描寫(xiě)1

"一……就……”

①連詞

*assoonas.......

*themoment/theminute/theinstant.......

*immediately/directly/instantly.......

②介詞

*on/upon(doing)sth.

on/upon(sb,s)arrival(at/in...)一至U達(dá)..

on/upon(sb,s)retum(from...to...)來(lái)回一…

on/upon(sb's)departure(from...)一離開(kāi)?、..

*atthesightof...一看到??????

atthethought/ideaof...一想至U.....

atthementionof...一提至!j.....

③倒裝句型

*Nosoonerhad+S+done...than...did...

*Hardlyhad+S+done...when...did...

④非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞

"Doing......

注1:連詞組“一……就……”表將來(lái)時(shí)從句時(shí)態(tài)的替代現(xiàn)象

Themomentthemeetingends,wewillsetoffforthestation.

Assoonasshehearsfromhim,shewillnolongerworry.

Instantlywegetthere,wewillvisithim.

注2:倒裝句型組“一??就…常用來(lái)表過(guò)去

Hardlyhadweseenhimwhenweknewhewouldhaveahardtimepassingtheexam.

Nosoonerhadtheyfinishedwateringthegardenthanitbegantorain.

1.AssoonasIknewIwasintheteam,itwaslikeIwaswalkingonair.

一得知我加入了這個(gè)隊(duì)，我高興得像飛上了天.

2.Themomentshegottoknowtheropes,therewasnostoppingher.

一旦她掌握決竅了，就什么也難不住她了.

3.Theminuteheseesher,hefeelslikeheisintheroomwithanangel.

每當(dāng)他看見(jiàn)她時(shí)，他感覺(jué)就像和天使同處一室.

4.1boltedthedoortheinstantIsawthebat.

我一看到那只蝙蝠就把門(mén)閂上了.

5.ImmediatelyPvedoneitIfeelcompletelydisgustedwithmyself.

我一做完那件事就對(duì)自己感到十分厭惡.

6.Directlyshehadgone,Irememberedhername.

她一走，我就想起了她的名字.

7.Hemadeforthedoorinstantlyheheardtheknock.

他一聽(tīng)到敲門(mén)聲,就朝門(mén)走去.

8.Therewasaletterwaitingforhimonhisreturn.

他一回來(lái)就有一封信等著他看.

9.ParkeswasarrestedonherarrivalfromNewYork.

帕克斯一從紐約回來(lái)就被捕了.

10.Onhisdeparturefromthegalleys,ithadbeennineteenyearssincehehadshedatear.

直到出獄的那天，十九年中,他沒(méi)有流過(guò)一滴淚.

11.Theyexchangedafirmhandshakeonparting.

他們臨別時(shí)緊緊地握手.

12.Onarrivinghomeintheevening,Isaw“HappyApple“crying,sodesperately.

晚上一回到家，我就看見(jiàn)“開(kāi)心蘋(píng)果”哭了，哭得好傷心呀.

13.Atthesightofherappearanceonthestage,thehallrangwiththunderousapplause.

一看見(jiàn)她出現(xiàn)在舞臺(tái)上,大廳里就掌聲雷動(dòng).

14.Myeyespoppedatthesightoftherichvarietyoffoodonshow.

我一看到展示的花樣繁多的食品，眼睛都瞪圓了.

15.HereyesbrightenedatthesightofEdmund.

她一看見(jiàn)埃德蒙，眼睛便亮了起來(lái).

16.I'mhuggingmyselfatthethoughtofseeinghimagainsosoon.

一想到這么快又能見(jiàn)到他,我喜不自勝.

17.Atthementionofherfatherwhohaddiedtwomonthsbefore,sheburstintotears.

一提到她兩個(gè)月前去世的父親，她就痛哭起來(lái).

18.Nosoonerhadhisnamebeenmentionedthantheycouldn'thelplaughing.

一提到他的名字，他們就忍不住笑了起來(lái).

19.Theplayhadhardlystartedwhentherewasapowercut.

Hardlyhadtheplaystartedwhentherewasapowercut.

演出剛一開(kāi)始就停電了.

2O.Enteringit,hefoundnobodyintheroom.

進(jìn)入房間,他發(fā)現(xiàn)里面沒(méi)有人.

時(shí)間描寫(xiě)2

66,就在此時(shí)力

比較：

Hewasonthepointofspeakingbutthenthoughtbetterofit.

他剛想開(kāi)口，但一轉(zhuǎn)念，又不說(shuō)了.

Onbeingsenttohospital,hewasonthepointofbreathinghislast.

他被送到醫(yī)院的時(shí)候已經(jīng)奄奄一息了.

表“…?就在此時(shí)

①表"A剛剛發(fā)生，就在這時(shí)B發(fā)生了”

...had(just)done...when...did...

②表“A正在發(fā)生，就在這時(shí)B發(fā)生了”

...was/weredoing...when...did...

...was/wereinthemiddleofdoing...when...did...

③表“A正要發(fā)生，就在這時(shí)B發(fā)生了”

...was/wereabouttodo...when...did...

...was/wereonthepointofdoing...when...did...

...was/wereonthevergeofdoing...when...did...

...was/wereclosetodoing...when...did...

...was/wereneartodoing...when...did...

l.Wehadjustfinishedourhomeworkwhenthefirebrokeout.

我們剛做完作業(yè)，就在此時(shí)火災(zāi)發(fā)生了.

2.Thevillagerswerehavingameetingwhenheturnedupatthegate.

Thevillagerswereinthemiddleof(having)ameetingwhenheturnedupatthegate.

村民們正在開(kāi)會(huì),就在這時(shí)他出現(xiàn)在了門(mén)口.

3.Thestudentswereabouttoplanttreeswhenitbegantorain.

Thestudentswereonthepointofplantingtreeswhenitbegantorain.

學(xué)生們正準(zhǔn)備植樹(shù),就在這時(shí)下雨了.

4.Theywereworkingagainsttimewhenthebadnewsarrived.

他們正在爭(zhēng)分奪秒地工作,這時(shí)壞消息傳來(lái)了.

5.Theywereabouttoheadforthehospitalwhenitcameasasurprisethathehaddied.

他們正要去醫(yī)院，這時(shí)傳來(lái)了他去世的消息，讓他們大吃一驚.

6.1hadjustcleanedthefloorandwasabouttogooutwhentheearthquakebrokeout.

我剛把地板擦干凈,正要出去，這時(shí)地震了.

7.Thethiefwasonthepointofputtinghishandintothelady'shandbagwhenthebussuddenlystopped.

小偷正要把手伸進(jìn)那位女士的手提袋中,這時(shí)公交車(chē)突然停了下來(lái).

8.Shewasonthepointofcontinuingherwalk,whenshecaughtaglimpseofagentlemanwith-inthesort

ofgrovewhichedgedthepark;hewasmovingthatway;andfearfulofitsbeingMr.Darcy,shewasdirectly

retreating.

她正要繼續(xù)走下去,忽然看到花園旁的小林子里有一個(gè)男人正朝這兒走來(lái);她怕是達(dá)西先生,便立刻

往回走.

9.Theclimberwasonthepointofdeathwhentheyfoundhim.

當(dāng)他們發(fā)現(xiàn)那個(gè)登山者時(shí)他已奄奄一息.

10.Hewasonthevergeoflosinghistemperwithhiswife,whensheutteredacry.

他正要對(duì)妻子發(fā)脾氣，忽然妻子哭叫起來(lái).

11.Youknow,Iwasonthevergeofquittingmyjobwhenmybosscameinandofferedmearaise.

你知道，老板今天給我加薪時(shí)我正打算要辭職呢.

12.Hewasclosetogivinguphishoopdreams,whenformerSonicsheadcoachBobWeisscalled.

當(dāng)前西雅圖超音速主教練鮑勃?維斯給他打電話時(shí)，他幾乎就要放棄他的籃球夢(mèng)想了.

13.1wasneartotearswhenshesaidgoodbye.

她道別時(shí),我都快哭了.

14.Wewereabouttocrosstheroadwhenacarsuddenlyzippedpast.

我們正要過(guò)馬路時(shí),一輛汽車(chē)突然呼地一下駛了過(guò)去.

15.Theywereinthemiddleofapartywhentheparentscamebacksuddenly.

父母突然返回時(shí)，他們正在開(kāi)晚會(huì).

時(shí)間描寫(xiě)3

“直到……才……”

*...not...until...

*Notuntil...be/助動(dòng)詞/情態(tài)動(dòng)詞+

*Itisnotuntil...that...

1.Hisabilitytowritedidn*tgelagainuntil1974.

=Notuntil1974didhisabilitytowritegelagain.

=Itwasnotuntil1974thathisabilitytowritegelledagain.

直到1974年，他的寫(xiě)作才華才又得以發(fā)揮.

2.Theteacherhasnotfoundthehiddenpapersuntilrecently.

=Notuntilrecentlyhastheteacherfoundthehiddenpapers.

=Itisnotuntilrecentlythattheteacherhasfoundthehiddenpapers.

直到最近老師才找到被藏起來(lái)的卷子.

3.Theirmindswerenotsetatrestuntiltheyheardthatshewassafeandsound.

=Notuntiltheyheardthatshewassafeandsoundweretheirmindssetatrest.

=Itwasnotuntiltheyheardthatshewassafeandsoundthattheirmindsweresetatrest.

直到聽(tīng)到她平安無(wú)事的消息，大家心里才一塊石頭落地.

4.1didnotcometomyselfuntiloneofmyclassmatespattedmeontheshoulder.

NotuntiloneofmyclassmatespattedmeontheshoulderdidIcometomyself.

ItwasnotuntiloneofmyclassmatespattedmeontheshoulderthatIcametomyself.

直到我的同學(xué)拍了一下我的肩膀，我才回過(guò)神來(lái).

5.Peoplesay,“Guilin'ssceneryispeerlessintheworld.5,1didn*tfinditreallyworthyofthereputationuntil

Ivisitedtheplace.

=Peoplesay,“Guilin'ssceneryispeerlessintheworld.^NotuntilIvisitedtheplacedidIfinditreally

worthyofthereputation.

=Peoplesay,“Guilin'ssceneryispeerlessintheworld.HItwasnotuntilIvisitedtheplacethatIfoundit

reallyworthyofthereputation.

人們都說(shuō)“桂林山水甲天下”，到桂林一看，果然名不虛傳.

6.Youdon*tfindyourgreattalentuntilyoustretchyourwings.

=Notuntilyoustretchyourwingsdoyoufindyourgreattalent.

=Itisnotuntilyoustretchyourwingsthatyoufindyourgreattalent.

當(dāng)你展開(kāi)了翅膀,你才發(fā)現(xiàn)自己巨大的天賦.

7.Youwillnotrealizetheimportanceofhealthuntilyouloseit.

=Notuntilyouloseitwillyourealizetheimportanceofhealth.

=Itisnotuntilyouloseitthatyouwillrealizetheimportanceofhealth.

直到失去健康，你才會(huì)意識(shí)到它的重要性.

時(shí)間描寫(xiě)4

“邊……邊……當(dāng)……期間；隨著……”（兩個(gè)動(dòng)作同時(shí)發(fā)生）

表“邊…邊（兩個(gè)動(dòng)作同時(shí)發(fā)生）

*S+V...as+S+V...（同主語(yǔ)，兩個(gè)延續(xù)性動(dòng)作）

表“當(dāng)……期間”（兩個(gè)動(dòng)作同時(shí)發(fā)生）

*S+V...whiledoing...“當(dāng)……期間;邊……邊…（同主語(yǔ)，兩個(gè)延續(xù)性動(dòng)作或一短一長(zhǎng)）

*Doing...,S+V...“當(dāng)……期間”（同主語(yǔ)，兩個(gè)延續(xù)性動(dòng)作或一短一長(zhǎng)）

表“隨著??…（兩個(gè)動(dòng)作同時(shí)發(fā)生）

*As+SL+V1...,S2.+V2...（異主語(yǔ)，兩個(gè)延續(xù)性動(dòng)作）

*With+n.+doing.......

*overtimewithtimegoingbyastimegoes/wentby

1.Hesangloudlyashewalkedalong.

他邊向前走邊大聲唱著歌.

2.Asshelistened,sheplayedanimaginarypianoonherknees.

她一邊聽(tīng)著,一邊在膝蓋上彈奏想象中的鋼琴.

3.Helookedbehindoccasionallyashewentforwardintheforest.

他在森林里一邊向前走，一邊偶爾回頭看.

4.Startwithyourtoesandasyoubreathe,imaginethembecomingonewiththeEarth.

從你的腳趾頭開(kāi)始,一邊進(jìn)行呼吸，一邊想象一下它們和地球合為一體.

5.“Dowhat?,,Heheldmykeyoutashespoke.AsIreachedforit,hedroppeditintomypalm.

“做什么？”他一邊說(shuō)著，一邊舉起我的鑰匙.等我伸手拿的時(shí)候，他把鑰匙放在了我的掌心.

6.1havegotintothehabitoflisteningtomusicwhiledoingexercises.

我養(yǎng)成了邊做作業(yè)邊聽(tīng)音樂(lè)的習(xí)慣.

7.Wordcameyesterdaythattheywerekilledwhiletryingtoreachthesummit.

昨天傳來(lái)消息說(shuō),他們?cè)谠噲D登上峰頂時(shí)遇難了.

8.Hefellasleepwhiledoinghishomework.

Doinghishomework,hefellasleep.

他做著做著功課就睡著了.

9.Shegotmarriedwhileworkingasawaitress.

Workingasawaitress,shegotmarried.

她在當(dāng)服務(wù)生期間結(jié)婚了.

lO.PatkilledtimebywatchingTVwhilewaitingforher.

Waitingforheher,PatkilledtimebywatchingTV.

帕特在等她時(shí)邊看電視邊打發(fā)時(shí)間.

11.Whileenjoyingthegreatconvenienceonlineshoppingbringstous,onnoaccountshouldweignorethe

dangerofbeingcheated.ManycheatsarealsotakingadvantageoftheInternettoaccumulatewealthby

deceiving.

在享受網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物為我們帶來(lái)的極大便利的同時(shí)，我們絕不應(yīng)該忽略被詐騙的危險(xiǎn).很多騙子也在利用因

特網(wǎng)詐騙斂財(cái).

12.Astimewenton/by,shegrewmoreandmorebeautiful.

=Withtimegoingon/by,shegrewmoreandmorebeautiful.

=Overtimeshegrewmoreandmorebeautiful.

隨著時(shí)間的推移，她變得越來(lái)越漂亮了.

13.Astimewenton,agenuinefriendshipgrewupbetweenthem.

=Withtimegoingon,agenuinefriendshipgrewupbetweenthem.

隨著時(shí)間的流逝，他們之間產(chǎn)生了真誠(chéng)的友誼.

14.Astheeveningprogressedandthedinnerplateswereclearedaway,itwastimeforourblessingbowl

“ceremony".

=Withtheeveningprogressingandthedinnerplatesbeingclearedaway,itwastimeforourblessingbowl

“ceremony”.

夜深了，盤(pán)子里的晚餐也都吃光了，是時(shí)候開(kāi)始我們的祝福碗“儀式”了.

15.Asthedayspassed,Lesley'sfrustrationmountedandshefeltasenseofalarm.

=Withthedayspassing,Lesley'sfrustrationmountedandshefeltasenseofalarm.

時(shí)間一天天地過(guò)去,萊斯利日益沮喪，她有一種恐慌的感覺(jué).

16.Astheyearsslippedby,mydaughterpassedintotheteen-agevale,developingayouthfulproficiencyon

thepiano.

=Withtheyearsslippingby,mydaughterpassedintotheteen-agevale,developingayouthfulproficiency

onthepiano.

時(shí)間一年年地過(guò)去，我女兒已是十幾歲的少女，成長(zhǎng)為一名熟練的青年鋼琴手.

17.Astimehasprogressed,sohasourunderstandingofthisfield.

隨著時(shí)間的發(fā)展，我們對(duì)這一領(lǐng)域的理解也在發(fā)展.

時(shí)間描寫(xiě)5

“在……之后;說(shuō)完這些話后”（兩個(gè)動(dòng)作先后發(fā)生）

表“在……之后”（兩個(gè)動(dòng)作先后發(fā)生）

*After+S+V..,

*Afterdoing/Afterbeingdone..,..（同主語(yǔ)）

*Havingdone/Havingbeendone..,..（同主語(yǔ)）

表“說(shuō)完這些話后”（兩個(gè)動(dòng)作緊接著發(fā)生）

*withthatwiththesewordswiththosewords

1.Aftershefinishedthehousework,shewentout.

=AfterHnishingthehousework,shewentout.

=HavingHnishedthehousework,shewentout.

做完家務(wù)后，她出去了.

2.AfterIwasblamedfornothing,Iwasveryangry.

=Afterbeingblamedfornothing,Iwasveryangry.

=Havingbeenblamedfornothing,Iwasveryangry.

在我無(wú)緣無(wú)故受到責(zé)備之后，我非常生氣.

3.AfterIhaddoneitcarefully,Ihadabreathingspell.

=Afterdoingitcarefully,Ihadabreathingspell.

=Havingdoneitcarefully,Ihadabreathingspell.

小心翼翼地做完后，我舒了一口氣.

4.AfterIhaddonemyjobinestablishingthecompany,IdecidedthatitwastimeIfadedoutandleftthe

worktomysons.

=Afterdoingmyjobinestablishingthecompany,IdecidedthatitwastimeIfadedoutandlefttheworkto

mysons.

=Havingdonemyjobinestablishingthecompany,IdecidedthatitwastimeIfadedoutandleftthework

tomysons.

公司成立之后，我決定淡出并把工作留給兒子們?nèi)ジ?

5.Aftertheydiscussedthefirstquestion,theyproceededtothesecond.

=Afterdiscussingthefirstquestion,theyproceededtothesecond.

=Havingdiscussedthefirstquestion,theyproceededtothesecond.

他們討論了第一個(gè)問(wèn)題，進(jìn)而討論第二個(gè).

6.Hemutteredafewwordsofapologyandwiththatheleft.

他低聲嘰咕了幾句道歉的話，然后就走了.

7.Withthat,hedisappearedintohisinnerroom.

說(shuō)完這些話,他就走進(jìn)里面的房間去了.

8.Withthesewordsthenightingalesangthelastsong,thensheflewawayintothenight.

說(shuō)完這些話后，夜鶯便唱了最后一首歌，然后飛向夜空.

9.Withthosewordstheimpostorshookthembothbythehand,withanair,andleftthehouse.

這個(gè)騙子說(shuō)完了那幾句話后，便裝出那副傲慢的樣子和他們兩人一一握手，然后離開(kāi)了房間.

10.Withthesewordsstillringinginhisears,hegotbackintohisoldhabits.

這些話還在耳邊回響，他卻已故態(tài)復(fù)萌了.

時(shí)間描寫(xiě)6

“……（多少時(shí)間）才/就?…“”

……（多少時(shí)間）才……”

*Itwaslongbefore...did...（過(guò)去）

*Itwillbelongbefore...do（es）...（將來(lái)）

表“……（多少時(shí)間）就……”

*Itwasnotlongbefore...did.did...beforelong.（過(guò)去）

*Itwillnotbelongbefore...do（es）.willdo...beforelong.（將來(lái)）

1.Itwaslongbeforehereturnedhome.

很久后他才回家.

2.Itwillbelongbeforehereturnshome.

很久后他才會(huì)回家.

3.Itwasthreeweeksbeforehereturnedhome.

三周后他才回家.

4.1twillbethreeweeksbeforehereturnshome.

三周后他才會(huì)回家.

5.Itwasnotlongbeforehereturnedhome.

Hereturnedhomebeforelong.

不久他就回家了.

6.Itwillnotbelongbeforehereturnshome.

Hewillreturnhomebeforelong.

不久他就會(huì)回家.

7.Itwillnotbelongbeforeweturnourhopeintoreality.

過(guò)不了多久我們的希望就會(huì)變成現(xiàn)實(shí).

8.Itwasnotlongbeforethenewswaswidelycirculated.

這個(gè)消息不久就哄傳開(kāi)了.

9.ItwasnotlongbeforeIrealizedtheenormityofmyfauxpas.

沒(méi)過(guò)多久,我就意識(shí)到自己有多么失態(tài).

10.Itwasnotlongbeforehefoundfavourwithhisboss.

不久他便得到了老板的垂青.

11.Itwasnotlongbeforehisangermelted.Whateverinitialworrieswehadabouttheplanesoonvanished.

不久他的火氣就消了.開(kāi)始時(shí)我們對(duì)這架飛機(jī)的不放心，不久就煙消云散了.

12.Hewasveryexcited,anditwaslongbeforehecalmeddown.

他很激動(dòng)，心情久久不能平靜.

時(shí)間描寫(xiě)7

“……發(fā)生已經(jīng)（多少時(shí)間了）”

*Itis/hasbeen十多少時(shí)間+since...did...（“現(xiàn)在”為參照時(shí)間）

*Itwas+多少時(shí)間+since...haddone...（“過(guò)去”為參照時(shí)間）

l.Itisdecadessincetheaccidenthappened.

事故發(fā)生已有幾十年了.

2.Itisthreeyearssincehedied.

=Hediedthreeyearsago.

=Hehasbeendeadforthreeyears.

他去世已經(jīng)三年了.

3.Shesaidthatitwasthreeyearssincehehaddied.

=Shesaidthathehaddiedthreeyearsbefore.

=Shesaidthathehadbeendeadforthreeyears.

她說(shuō)他已經(jīng)去世三年了.

4.Ithasbeenthreeyearssincetheygotmarried.

=Theygotmarriedthreeyearsago.

=Theyhavebeenmarriedforthreeyears.

他們已經(jīng)結(jié)婚三年了.

5.ItistenyearssincewepartedinYan'an.

延安一別，于今十年.

6.ItwasyearssinceI'dlearnedanyGerman,andIreallyhadtostartagainfromscratch.

我好多年沒(méi)學(xué)德語(yǔ)了，真的要重新從頭開(kāi)始了.

7.ItwasmanyyearssinceJamesBondhadacceptedadare.

自詹姆斯，邦德當(dāng)初接受挑戰(zhàn)之后，已經(jīng)有好多年過(guò)去了.

時(shí)間描寫(xiě)8

“當(dāng)……發(fā)生時(shí)，時(shí)間是……”

*Itwas+什么時(shí)間+when..

*Itmusthavebeen+什么時(shí)間+When.??當(dāng)某事發(fā)生時(shí)肯定是什么時(shí)間

*Itmighthavebeen+什么時(shí)間+when.??當(dāng)某事發(fā)生時(shí)可能是什么時(shí)間

1.Itwasaroundnineo*clockwhenIdrovebackhomebecauseitwasalreadydark.

我開(kāi)車(chē)回家的時(shí)候大約是九點(diǎn)鐘，因?yàn)樘煲呀?jīng)黑了.

2.Itmusthavebeenaroundnineo'clockwhenIdrovebackhomebecauseitwasalreadydark.

我開(kāi)車(chē)回家的時(shí)候肯定是九點(diǎn)左右，因?yàn)樘煲呀?jīng)黑了.

3.Itwasalmostmidnightwhenthefirebrokeoutintheneighborhood.

當(dāng)隔壁鄰居家大火發(fā)生的時(shí)候,時(shí)間幾乎是半夜了.

4.ItwasOctober1,1949whenNewChinawasfounded.

1949年10月1日新中國(guó)成立.

5.ItmighthavebeenacoldmorningwhenIwashurryingtoschool.

那可能是個(gè)寒冷的早晨,我匆忙上學(xué).

時(shí)間描寫(xiě)9

“正是在……時(shí)間?…”發(fā)生了”（強(qiáng)調(diào)句）

*It+be+什么時(shí)間（被強(qiáng)調(diào)部分）+that.?.

1.Itwasatnineo'clockthatIdrovebackhomebecauseitwasalreadydark.

正是在九點(diǎn)鐘，我開(kāi)車(chē)回家?因?yàn)樘煲呀?jīng)黑了.

2.Itwasatmidnightthatthefirebrokeoutintheneighborhood.

正是在半夜,大火發(fā)生了.

3.ItwasonOctober1,1949thatNewChinawasfounded.

正是在1949年1月1日，新中國(guó)成立.

4.ItwasonacoldmorningthatIwashurryingtoschool.

正是在一個(gè)寒冷的早晨，我匆忙上學(xué)去.

5.ItwaslastSundaythatwemeteachotherforthefirsttime.

正是上周日，我們第一次見(jiàn)面.

6.1tiseverydaythattheyhelptheoldgrandmawithherhousework.

每天他們都幫助老奶奶做家務(wù).

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“每當(dāng)……/無(wú)論何時(shí)......”

*Everytime+S+V..,S+V..

*Eachtime+S+V...,S+V..

*Anytime+S+V...,S+V...

*Whenever+S+V...,S+V

*Nomatterwhen+S+V...,S+V...

1.EverytimeIcatchofmyselfinthemirror,Ifeelsodisappointed.

每次我警見(jiàn)鏡子里的自己就覺(jué)得沮喪.

2.Everytimeitrains,ourcaractsup.

每當(dāng)下雨，我們的車(chē)就失靈.

3.Everytimetheywentdancing,theyendedupinabadmood.

每次他們?nèi)ヌ?，都?huì)不歡而散.

4.Eachtimethiswasmentioned,hewouldgiveabittersmileandshakehishead.

每逢提起這件事，他總是苦笑著搖搖頭.

5.ThiswassurelyamagicformulaforOldFanashisheadachedeachtimeheheardit.

對(duì)老范來(lái)說(shuō),這就是緊箍咒，每當(dāng)聽(tīng)說(shuō)起保管頭痛.

6.Shehadasmall,meanmouththatcurleddisapprovinglyeachtimeherhusbandwrotesomethinginhis

diary.

每次丈夫?qū)懭沼洉r(shí)，她都會(huì)不滿(mǎn)地撇撇那張刻薄