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2025年高考英語話題寫作高頻熱點(diǎn)通關(guān)必備攻略專題04溫暖勵志(讀后續(xù)寫)項(xiàng)目考情分析話題綜述真題再現(xiàn)模擬提升內(nèi)容真題歸類總述構(gòu)思詞匯/金句真題語篇解讀基礎(chǔ)訓(xùn)提升練考情分析編號話題內(nèi)容卷型主題語境體裁01濃濃親情母親節(jié)驚喜早餐新課標(biāo)2021.6人與自我記敘文萬圣節(jié)南瓜趣事浙江卷2021.102師生情誼寫作比賽逆襲獲獎新課標(biāo)2023.603成長故事“我”的工資浙江卷2021.604溫暖勵志殘疾男孩參加越野跑新課標(biāo)2022.605校園生活腦圖定位找目標(biāo)浙江卷2024.1與同伴共同完成任務(wù)浙江卷2022.106善舉助人與出租車司機(jī)的誠信之約新課標(biāo)2024.6人與社會幫助無家可歸之人浙江卷2022.6三個孩子幫助貧困小男孩新課標(biāo)2020.607人與動物蜂鳥奇遇記浙江卷2023.1人與自然熊口脫險浙江卷2020.7小狗Poppy的陪伴浙江卷2020.1話題綜述話題綜述勵志類話題主要以故事類記敘文為主,故事情節(jié)曲折、有起伏,且故事線索的邏輯性比較強(qiáng),而且此類讀后續(xù)寫更側(cè)重于任務(wù)塑造的相關(guān)描寫。此類故事往往聚焦于主人公在生活與學(xué)習(xí)中遭遇種種挑戰(zhàn)與困境,通過不懈地克服挫折與解決問題,主人公不僅實(shí)現(xiàn)了外在困境的突破,更在內(nèi)心深處經(jīng)歷了情感深刻的蛻變,這種情感遞進(jìn)為續(xù)寫提供了豐富的表達(dá)空間。話題構(gòu)思/寫作步驟勵志故事素材主要是描述一個人的成長蛻變過程中.蛻變成長動機(jī)的出現(xiàn)可能是一個偶發(fā)事件,也可能是一個關(guān)鍵人物的行為或影響。因此,對此類話題書寫時,首先要把握語篇的主要角色,確定其主題;其次要確定語篇的主旨及升華指向,遵循正能量原則;此外,還要精準(zhǔn)把握文中人物的情緒變化,并通過不同的手法描述心情。寫作時,可以按照以下三步走:第一步主要可描述主人公遇到的苦惱和負(fù)面情緒塑造的心理描寫,以揭示人物在的內(nèi)心世界,表達(dá)人物的性格、特點(diǎn)、感情等,并進(jìn)一步理解情節(jié)主旨,為續(xù)寫打好基礎(chǔ),為后期成長變化的過程埋下伏筆。第二步分析段落首句,精心設(shè)計問題段首句在續(xù)寫中起到承接情節(jié)、引導(dǎo)內(nèi)容的作用。這有助于在續(xù)寫中保持內(nèi)容連貫性和一致性。再描寫主人公所做的努力及反思。第三步設(shè)計結(jié)尾情節(jié),描述主人公蛻變成功后的感悟、感激,以進(jìn)行主題升華。提升主題深度設(shè)計結(jié)尾情節(jié)時,可以讓主角回顧整個成長過程,發(fā)自內(nèi)心地總結(jié)自己的變化與收獲。通過主角的自我反思或?qū)ξ磥淼恼雇麃砩A主題,讓讀者看到一個從稚嫩到成熟的完整成長弧線,傳達(dá)故事中蘊(yùn)含的深刻人生價值。話題詞匯/金句迷茫困惑類
lostinamazeofuncertainty陷入迷茫之中atacrossroadsofchoices站在選擇的十字路口overwhelmedbyself-doubt被自我懷疑壓倒feelaimless感到?jīng)]有方向drowninginconfusion陷入困惑中掙扎不安類tornbetweentwooptions在兩種選擇之間掙扎plaguedbyfearanddoubt被恐懼和懷疑困擾faceinnerturmoil面對內(nèi)心的掙扎unsureofone’spath不確定自己的方向feelweigheddownbyhesitation被猶豫壓得喘不過氣自我反思類cometotermswithoneself接受自己reflectonpastmistakes反思過去的錯誤searchforinnerpeace尋找內(nèi)心的平靜
learnfrompersonalexperiences從個人經(jīng)歷中學(xué)習(xí)堅定決心類
pressondespitedifficulties克服困難繼續(xù)前行overcomeone’sinnerdemons戰(zhàn)勝內(nèi)心的恐懼
staytruetoone’svalues堅持自己的價值觀
findcouragetotaketheleap找到勇氣邁出一步pushthroughself-imposedlimits突破自我限制成長收獲類
embracenewfoundconfidence擁抱新的自信filledwithasenseofaccomplishment滿懷成就感
gratefulforlife’slessons感謝生活的教訓(xùn)
reachadeeperunderstandingofoneself達(dá)到更深層次的自我理解個人成長滿分句式1.
Shefoundherselflostinamazeofconflictingemotions,unabletofindherway.(她發(fā)現(xiàn)自己被矛盾的情緒所困,無法找到出路。)2.
Theuncertaintygnawedathim,fillinghismindwithendlessquestions.(不確定性讓他心神不寧,腦海中充滿了無盡的問題。)3.
Shestoodatacrossroads,unsurewhichpathwouldleadtofulfillment.(她站在十字路口,不確定哪條路通往滿足。)4.
Witheachpassingday,thestrugglebetweenfearandhopegrewmoreintense.(每過一天,恐懼和希望的掙扎變得更激烈。)5.
Hewrestledwithself-doubt,unsureifhecouldovercomethechallengesahead.(他與自我懷疑抗?fàn)?,不確定自己能否克服前方的挑戰(zhàn)。)3.
Thejourneyseemeddaunting,yetsomethinginsideherpushedhertokeepgoing.(旅程似乎令人望而生畏,但她內(nèi)心有股力量推動她繼續(xù)前行。)6.
Inthequietofthenight,hereflectedonhischoices,realizingwherehewentwrong.(在夜晚的寧靜中,他反思自己的選擇,意識到自己的錯誤。)7.
Shefoundpeaceinacknowledginghermistakesandlearningfromthem.(她在承認(rèn)自己的錯誤并從中學(xué)習(xí)中找到了平靜。)8.
Withanewfoundclarity,hebegantoreevaluatewhattrulymattered.(懷著新的清晰感,他開始重新評估真正重要的事情。)9.
Withunwaveringresolve,shetookthefirststeptowardshergoal.(懷著堅定的決心,她邁出了通往目標(biāo)的第一步。)10.
Nolongershackledbydoubt,hepushedforwardwithnewfounddetermination.(不再被懷疑束縛,他以新的決心前行。)11.
Witheachhurdle,herconfidencegrew,andsodidherresolve.(每一個障礙都讓她的信心和決心進(jìn)一步增強(qiáng)。)12.
Ashelookedbackonhisjourney,hefeltadeepsenseofprideandaccomplishment.(回首自己的旅程,他感到深深的自豪和成就感。)13.
Filledwithgratitude,heembracedthelessonsthathadshapedhisgrowth.(滿懷感激,他接受了塑造自己成長的教訓(xùn)。)14Itisthroughovercomingchallengesthatwetrulydiscoverourstrength.(正是通過克服挑戰(zhàn),我們才能真正發(fā)現(xiàn)自己的力量。)15.Thejourneyfromuncertaintytoself-assurancewasfilledwithvaluablelessons.(從不確定到自信的旅程充滿了寶貴的教訓(xùn)。)16.
Notuntilshefacedherfearsdidsherealizeherownpotential.(直到面對自己的恐懼,她才意識到自己的潛力。)17.
Ifnotforthechallenges,hewouldneverhavereachedhiscurrentself.(若不是那些挑戰(zhàn),他永遠(yuǎn)無法達(dá)到現(xiàn)在的自己。)18.
Whatstartedasself-doubtturnedintoajourneyofself-discovery.(起初的自我懷疑變成了一段自我發(fā)現(xiàn)的旅程。)19.Theworldmakeswayforthedreamer.世界總會給有夢想的人開路。20.Eachmanisthearchitectofhisownfate每個人都是自己命運(yùn)的建筑師。21.Aslongasyouhaveadream,justgoforitandnevergiveitupeasily.Yourdreammightnotcometrueinoneortwodaysbutitwillsomeday.只要你有夢想,就去追求,不要輕易放棄。你的夢想可能不會在一兩天內(nèi)實(shí)現(xiàn),但總有一天會實(shí)現(xiàn)的。真題再現(xiàn)Writing【2022新課標(biāo)I&II卷】原題Itwasthedayofthebigcross-countryrun.Studentsfromsevendifferentprimaryschoolsinandaroundthesmalltownwerewarmingupandwalkingtheroute(路線)throughthickevergreenforest.IlookedaroundandfinallyspottedDavid,whowasstandingbyhimselfofftothesidebyafence.Hewassmallfortenyearsold.Hisusualbigtoothysmilewasabsenttoday.Iwalkedoverandaskedhimwhyhewasn’twiththeotherchildren.Hehesitatedandthensaidhehaddecidednottorun.Whatwaswrong?Hehadworkedsohardforthisevent!Iquicklysearchedthecrowdfortheschool’scoachandaskedhimwhathadhappened.“Iwasafraidthatkidsfromotherschoolswouldlaughathim,”heexplaineduncomfortably.“Igavehimthechoicetorunornot,andlethimdecide.”Ibitbackmyfrustration(懊惱).Iknewthecoachmeantwell—hethoughthewasdoingtherightthing.AftermakingsurethatDavidcouldrunifhewanted,Iturnedtofindhimcomingtowardsme,hissmallbodyrockingfromsidetosideasheswunghisfeetforward.Davidhadabraindiseasewhichpreventedhimfromwalkingorrunninglikeotherchildren,butatschoolhisclassmatesthoughtofhimasaregularkid.Healwaysparticipatedtothebestofhisabilityinwhatevertheyweredoing.ThatwaswhynoneofthechildrenthoughtitunusualthatDavidhaddecidedtojointhecross-countryteam.Itjusttookhimlonger—that’sall.Davidhadnotmissedasinglepractice,andalthoughhealwaysfinishedhisrunlongaftertheotherchildren,hedidalwaysfinish.Asaspecialeducationteacherattheschool,IwasfamiliarwiththechallengesDavidfacedandwasproudofhisstrongdetermination.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答.Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn’tlookatme.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________模擬提升基礎(chǔ)訓(xùn)Writing1閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。PintyTailorwasalittleboywhoenjoyedgoingtoschoolanddoingallsortsofthings,exceptfordrawing.Usingbrushesandpencilsdidn'tcomeeasytoPinty,sohisworksofdrawingdidn'tendhappily,andhe'djustgiveup.ButonedayPintyfoundapencilofsuchlovelycolorsthathecouldn'tresist,andhetrieddrawingacircle.Asever,itdidn'tgowell,andhewasabouttothrowthepencilawaywhenhisdrawingbegantospeaktohim.“Psst!Youaren'tgoingtoleavemelikethis,areyou?Comeon!Theleastyoucandoisdrawmeapairofeyes!”saidthedrawing.Pintywasunderstandablyshocked,buthemanagedtodrawtwolittlespotsinsidethecircle.“Muchbetter,nowIcanseemyself,"saidthecircle,lookingaroundatitself.“Arghh!Butwhathaveyoudonetome?!”“Idon'tdrawverywell,”saidPinty,tryingtomakeexcuses.“OK,noproblem,”thedrawinginterruptedhim.“I'msurethatifyoutryagainyou'lldobetter.Goonandrubmeout!”SoPintyerasedthecircleanddrewanotherone.Likethefirstone,itwasn’tveryround.“Hey!Youforgottheeyesagain!Hmm,IthinkI'mgoingtohavetoteachyouhowtodrawuntilyoucandomewell,”saidthecirclewithitsquicklittlevoice.ToPinty,thisdidn'tseemlikeabadidea,andheimmediatelyfoundhimselfdrawinganderasingcircles.Thecirclewouldn'tstopsaying“rubthisout,butcarefully;ithurts,”or“drawmesomehair.quickly!”andotherfunnyremarks.Afterspendingnearlythewholeafternoontogether,Pintycouldalreadydrawthelittlefiguremuchbetterthanmostofhisclassmatescouldhave.Hewasenjoyingitsomuchthathedidn'twanttostopdrawingwithhiscrazynewteacher.Beforegoingtobedthatnight,Pintygavehisnewinstructoraheartythankyou.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。ThenextmorningPintyjumpedoutofbedandrantofindhispencil,butitwasn'tthere.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________So,tosettlethematter,hetookapencilandsomepaperandtriedtodrawalittleman.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Writing2閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。Formanyyears,Ihadarecurringdream.Iwasalittlegirlagain,rushingabout,tryingtogetreadyforschool.“Hurry,you'llbelateforschool,”mymothercalledtome.“Iamhurrying,Mom!WhatdidIdowithmybooks?”DeepinsideIknewwherethedreamcamefrom.Itwasaboutsomeunfinishedbusinessinmylife.Asakid,Ilovedeverythingaboutschool.Ilovedbooks,teachers,testsandhomework.MostofallIlongedtosomedaymarchdowntheaisletoreceivemydiploma.Thatseemedmoreappealingeventhangettingmarried.Butat15,Ihadtodropoutbecausemyparentscouldn'taffordtuition.Myhopeofgettingadiplomawasdead,orsoIthought.Prettysoon,Imarriedandhadthreechildren,andIthought:“Theregoesmydiploma.”Evenso,Iwantedmychildrentobeeducated.ButLinda,ouryoungestchild,hadjuvenilearthritisinherhandsandknees,whichmadeitimpossibleforhertofunctioninanormalclassroom.IfeltsorryforherandIdidn'twanthertoliveherlifewithregret.Ididn'tgiveuphopeofherbeingbacktoschoolinsomeway.Oneday,Isawanadinthenewspaperforeveningcourses.“That'stheanswer,”Isaidtomyself.Lindaalwaysfeelsbetterintheevening,soI'lljustsignherupfornightschool.Lindawasbusyfillingoutenrollmentformswhenthesecretarysaid:“Mrs.Schantz,whydon'tyoucomebacktoschool?”Ilaughed:“There'snoway!I'm55!”Buthepersisted,andbeforeIknewwhatIhaddone,IwasenrolledforclassesinEnglishandcrafts.“Thisisonlyanexperiment,”Iwarnedhim,buthejustsmiled.So,Itoldmyselftotryforjustasemesterandtoseeifitwouldwork.Anyway,mydreamwasstillthereinmyheart.1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Paragraph1:Itwasexcitingtogotoschoolagainbut________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:LindaandIsaweachotherthroughthetime.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________提升練Writing3閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。Beforeseveno’clockoneSaturdaymorning,alargecrowdhadalreadygatheredatthestadium.Davidsatatthestartingline,hisglovedhandsholdinghiswheelchair.Withhisheartbeating,theboywonderedifhewouldbeabletocompletetherace.Hisclassmateswerealltheretosupporthim.Fromadistance,hecouldseethemholdingupbigbanners(橫幅)whichscreamed:WEAREWITHYOU!ALLTHEWAY,DAVID!Heartened,hesmiledandwavedback.Hewasnotgoingtoletthemdown.Bornwithasevereconditionthatlefthimparalysed(癱瘓)fromthewaistdown.Atsix,heunderwentseveralsurgeriestoimprovehiscondition.Asaresult,hewasabletoattendschoolandeventookupsportstohelpstrengthenhisbonesandmuscles.Then,hefellinlovewithwheelchairracing.Unfortunately,hedidnothavealotofcoordination(協(xié)調(diào))orstrengthbuthehadawilltokeepgoing.Once,withoutwarning,hisconditiontookaturnfortheworseanditalmostdestroyedhispursuitofhispassion.Oneday,David’steachersencouragedhimtocompetealongsidehisnon-wheelchairschoolmates.Unsureandyetgratefulfortheopportunity,hethoughtheshouldgiveitashot.Bythetimetheracewasabouttobegin,thesunhadrisen.Davidwasgladthathewaswellprepared.Adjustingthecaponhisheadandhisgloves,Davidwasallreadytoprotecthimselffromtheheatandthestrongstrokestohiswheelchair.David’seyesfollowedthestarterwhowaswavingaredflag.Assoonasthegunwasfired,Davidwasoff.Theentirestadiumeruptedintothunderouscheers.Davidpushedforwardwithallhisstrength,hishandsholdingthewheelsthewholetimeforthelong-distancerace.Hiswheelchairrolledsteadilyoutofthestadium,passingtheshophouses.Despitedoingeverythinghecouldtokeepupwiththeothercompetitors,Davidfellbehind.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Overhead,thesuncontinuedtoburninthecloudlesssky.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hewasdeterminedtoovercomeeverysinglechallenge.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Writing4閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。Jessiewasstandingbythedoorlookingacrosstheroad.Agroupofboyswereplayingfootball,runningandshouting.Andasmallboywassittingonthegroundwatching.ItwasherlittlebrotherFelix.“Howsmallandthinhewas!”Jessiesaidtoherself.JessiewasanAfricangirllivinginapoorneighborhoodinKenyawithherparentsandherlittlebrotherFelix.Theirparentswereworkingfrommorningtillnight,buttheystillfoundithardtomakeendsmeet.Andsometimestheyevencouldn’thaveenoughmoneyforfood.Andthingswerebecomingmoredifficultastheirmotherbecame
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