Unit2話題作文指導(dǎo)-人教版英語七年級(jí)上冊(cè)一、文檔定位目標(biāo)受眾：人教版英語七年級(jí)上冊(cè)學(xué)生。核心功能：幫助學(xué)生掌握英語寫作技巧，提升英語綜合運(yùn)用能力，特別是在自我介紹、家庭介紹、學(xué)校生活描述等基礎(chǔ)話題方面。二、內(nèi)容構(gòu)成八大板塊：涵蓋寫信介紹自己、家庭和學(xué)校生活、介紹家庭成員、描述家庭成員的興趣愛好、邀請(qǐng)交換生寄宿、推薦最美家庭、介紹家譜、自我介紹參加招聘會(huì)、寫信介紹個(gè)人情況等實(shí)用寫作場(chǎng)景。寫作指導(dǎo)：每個(gè)板塊均提供寫作要求、范文示例及寫作詳解，涵蓋寫作步驟、亮點(diǎn)詞匯和高分句型，幫助學(xué)生寫出條理清晰、語句通順的文章。三、出題特點(diǎn)緊扣教材：題目設(shè)計(jì)貼合教材重點(diǎn)與考試大綱，匹配學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)進(jìn)度。實(shí)用性與創(chuàng)新性：融合基礎(chǔ)寫作框架與多樣化主題，激發(fā)學(xué)生寫作興趣與創(chuàng)造力。能力培養(yǎng)：同時(shí)鍛煉學(xué)生語言與思維能力，引導(dǎo)其思考、分析與總結(jié)。四、教學(xué)價(jià)值提升寫作水平：幫助學(xué)生在基礎(chǔ)話題寫作上取得進(jìn)步，提升英語寫作能力。培養(yǎng)綜合素養(yǎng)：通過多樣寫作任務(wù)，增強(qiáng)學(xué)生觀察力、邏輯思維與跨文化交流能力。備考助力：為學(xué)生在英語寫作板塊取得優(yōu)異成績(jī)提供支持。五、適用場(chǎng)景日常學(xué)習(xí)：學(xué)生可參考寫作指導(dǎo)，提升英語寫作水平。課堂教學(xué)：教師可將文檔內(nèi)容融入教學(xué)，豐富教學(xué)資源，提高教學(xué)效果。家庭作業(yè)：作為作業(yè)幫助學(xué)生鞏固課堂所學(xué)，提升寫作能力。一、書面表達(dá)1．假如你是李欣，你需要給你的美國(guó)筆友Lucy回一封信，簡(jiǎn)單的介紹一下你自己、你的家庭及你的學(xué)校生活情況。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示完成信件。內(nèi)容提示：Howmanypeoplearethereinyourfamilyandwhoarethey?Whatdoyoulikedoingwithyourfamily?Isthereanythinginterestingaboutyournewschoollife?注意：文中不得透露個(gè)人真實(shí)姓名和校名；詞數(shù)不少于60。開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearLucy,Thanksforyourletter.I’mLiXin.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sall.Thankyou.Yours,LiXin【答案】例文DearLucy,Thanksforyourletter.I’mLiXin.Therearefourpeopleinmyfamily.Theyaremyparents,myyoungerbrotherandme.Ilikegoingforapicnicwithmyfamilyonweekends.Weenjoythebeautifulsceneryanddeliciousfoodtogether.Mynewschoollifeisveryinteresting.Wehavemanyclubsatschool.IjoinedtheArtClubbecauseIlovedrawing.Myclassmatesarefriendlyandtheteachersarekind.Weoftenhavegroupactivitiesandithelpsuslearnbetter.That’sall.Thankyou.Yours,LiXin【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文屬于應(yīng)用文，是給筆友的書信。②時(shí)態(tài)：以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，描述日常情況。③提示：按照要求向美國(guó)筆友Lucy介紹自己、家庭及學(xué)校生活。[寫作步驟]第一步，開頭感謝筆友來信并表明自己身份。第二步，中間先介紹家庭人數(shù)和成員，以及周末和家人一起野餐的活動(dòng)；接著介紹有趣的學(xué)校生活，涵蓋學(xué)校俱樂部、自己加入的藝術(shù)俱樂部，還有同學(xué)和老師的情況。第三步，結(jié)尾簡(jiǎn)單收尾，結(jié)束書信內(nèi)容。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①goforapicnic去野餐[高分句型]①Therearefourpeopleinmyfamily.（therebe句型）②IjoinedtheartclubbecauseIlovedrawing.（because引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句）2．下周，學(xué)校將舉行“和諧家庭”主題演講活動(dòng)。假如你是李佳樂，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的提示和要求，用英語寫一篇短文，向大家介紹你自己和你的家人。MyFamilyMyname,age(12歲)...MyfamilymembersandtheirjobsOurlikesoractivities...參考詞匯：farmer農(nóng)民；officeworker辦公室職員寫作要求：1）文中須包含所給的所有要點(diǎn)提示，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2）短文通順連貫，語言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，書寫規(guī)范整潔；3）文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；4）詞數(shù)70左右。MyFamily_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MyFamilyHello,mynameisLiJiale,I’mtwelveyearsold.I’mastudentinGradeSeven.Letmetellyouaboutmyfamily.Therearefourpeopleinmyfamily.Theyaremyfather,mymother,mysisterandI.Myfatherisaworker,andmymotherisadoctor.MysisterisastudentinGradeEight.We’reinthesameschool.Myfamilylikesports.Weoftendosportsatnight,suchasrunningandwalking.Sometimesweplaygamesathome.Ilovemyfamily.That’sall.Thankyou!【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：本文應(yīng)使用“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”為主；③提示：應(yīng)注意題干給出的要點(diǎn)并適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充，使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹自己的個(gè)人信息并引出主題；第二步，根據(jù)題干表格中的要點(diǎn)，介紹家庭成員的相關(guān)信息；第三步，表達(dá)熱愛自己的家人，并收尾。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①suchas例如②athome在家[高分句型]①Therearefourpeopleinmyfamily.（therebe句型）②Myfatherisaworker,andmymotherisadoctor.（and連接并列句）3．假如你是劉琳，你的英語老師布置了一個(gè)創(chuàng)意作業(yè)。她讓同學(xué)們畫一幅“我的家譜”（Myfamilytree），并在圖畫下方用英語介紹自己的家庭。下圖是你創(chuàng)作的家譜，請(qǐng)寫一篇英語短文介紹它吧。內(nèi)容提示：1.介紹家庭成員的年齡和職業(yè)；2.介紹家庭成員的興趣和愛好。要求：1.條理清晰，內(nèi)容完整，語句通順，書寫工整；2.參考提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名和校名；4.語句連貫，詞數(shù)70左右。作文開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Therearefivepeopleinmyfamily._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Therearefivepeopleinmyfamily.Mygrandfatheris61yearsold.Heisafarmerandenjoysplayingchessinhisfreetime.Mygrandmotheris59yearsold.Sheisalsoafarmerbutlovesdrawingpicturesofflowersandlandscapes.Myfatheris39yearsoldandworksasadoctor.Helikestogofishingonweekends.Mymotheris38yearsoldandsheisateacher.Shelovesreadingbooks,especiallythoseabouthistory.I’mLiuLin,13yearsold,andI’mastudent.Myhobbyisplayingtheguitar.Ienjoymakingmusicandsharingitwithmyfamily.Weallloveeachotherandspendalotoftimetogether.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇說明文，用于介紹個(gè)人家庭情況；②時(shí)態(tài)：主要使用“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”來描述家庭成員的現(xiàn)狀；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已明確，包括家庭成員的年齡、職業(yè)以及興趣和愛好?？忌韪鶕?jù)提供的家譜信息，條理清晰地介紹每個(gè)家庭成員，并可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，增加文章的豐富性和連貫性。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。文章開頭已給出：“Therearefivepeopleinmyfamily.”，直接點(diǎn)明了文章的主題——介紹家庭成員；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。首先，按照家譜的順序，從祖父開始介紹，接著介紹祖母，然后介紹父親，接下來是母親，最后介紹自己；第三步，書寫結(jié)語，表達(dá)對(duì)未來生活的期待。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①enjoyplayingchess喜歡下棋②drawingpicturesof畫畫③gofishing去釣魚④makingmusic制作音樂⑤spendalotoftimetogether花很多時(shí)間在一起[高分句型]①M(fèi)ygrandmotheris59yearsoldandlovesdrawingpicturesofflowersandlandscapes.(并列句，描述祖母的年齡和愛好)②Myfatheris39yearsoldandworksasadoctor.(“be+年齡”和“workas”結(jié)構(gòu)的結(jié)合，描述父親的年齡和職業(yè))③Ienjoymakingmusicandsharingitwithmyfamily.(動(dòng)詞-ing形式作賓語，以及sharingsthwithsb結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，表達(dá)享受制作音樂并與家人分享的樂趣)4．假如你是李鑫，你班上有一名來自英國(guó)的交換生Jack，他要挑選寄宿家庭，你想邀請(qǐng)他住在你家里。請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖片提示內(nèi)容寫一封信，向他介紹一下你和你的家人。提示內(nèi)容：1.Howmanypeoplearethereinthephoto?2.Whoaretheyandwhatdotheylooklike?3.Whataretheirhobbies?4.…要求：1.參考提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.語句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)你的任何真實(shí)信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；4.詞數(shù)：不少于50詞(開頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。DearJack,IamLiXin.Iamhappytointroducemyfamilytoyou.Hereismyfamilyphoto.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiXin【答案】例文DearJack,

IamLiXin.Iamhappytointroducemyfamilytoyou.Hereismyfamilyphoto.

Therearesixpeopleinthephoto.Theyaremygrandparents,myparents,mysister,andme.Mygrandfatherhaswhitehairandwearsglasses.Helikesreadingbooks.Mygrandmotherhasshortgrayhairandsheenjoyscooking.Myfatheristallandhasshortblackhair.Helikesplayingtennis.Mymotherhaslongbrownhair.Shelovesgardening.MysisterandIbothhaveblackhair.Weenjoyplayingfootballtogether.

Weallgetalongwellandlovespendingtimetogether.Ihopeyouwillcomeandstaywithus.Youwillfeelathomehere.Yours,LiXin【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇書信作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)主要為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖；第二步，根據(jù)圖片和提示內(nèi)容介紹自己和家人；第三步，介紹家庭氛圍并書寫結(jié)語。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①likedoingsth喜歡做某事②playfootball踢足球③getalongwell相處融洽④athome在家[高分句型]Therearesixpeopleinthephoto.(Therebe句型)5．假如你是李華，你所在班級(jí)的外教老師MrBrown組織了一場(chǎng)最美家庭（TheMostBeautifulFamily）”的評(píng)選活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示內(nèi)容，向MrBrown提交一篇不少于70詞的推薦信，推薦你的家庭。1.文章須包含圖中的主要信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3.70詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearMrBrown,Iwouldliketorecommendmyfamilyfor“TheMostBeautifulFamily”inourclassthisyear.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ibelievemyfamilydeservesthisrecommendation.Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearMrBrown,Iwouldliketorecommendmyfamilyfor“TheMostBeautifulFamily”inourclassthisyear.Therearethreepeopleinmyfamily.Myfatheristallandstrong.Heisverykindandhasagoodsenseofhumor.Helikesreadingbooksinhisfreetime.Mymotherisbeautifulwithlonghair.Sheiskindandlovescookingdeliciousmealsforus.Iamanactivestudentwhoenjoysplayingsports.Weoftengoforawalkintheparktogetheronweekends.Wealsoenjoywatchingmovies,sharinglaughterandtears.Ilovemyfamily.Wealwayssupportandcareabouteachother.Ibelievemyfamilydeservesthisrecommendation.Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇書信作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：本文應(yīng)使用“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”為主；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，應(yīng)注意不要遺漏題干中每一項(xiàng)內(nèi)容，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫信的意圖；第二步，根據(jù)題干中的要點(diǎn)，介紹家庭成員的基本信息以及家庭活動(dòng)，說明家庭團(tuán)結(jié)有愛；第三步，表達(dá)自己的期待，并收尾。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①inone’sfreetime在某人空閑時(shí)間②goforawalk去散步[高分句型]①Therearethreepeopleinmyfamily.（therebe句型）②Wealwayssupportandcareabouteachother.（and連接并列句）6．假如你是劉琳，你的英語老師布置了一個(gè)創(chuàng)意作業(yè)。她讓同學(xué)們畫一幅“我的家譜”(MyFamilyTree)，并在圖畫下方用英語介紹自己的家庭。下圖是你創(chuàng)作的家譜，請(qǐng)寫一篇70詞左右英語短文介紹它吧。內(nèi)容提示：1.介紹家庭成員的年齡和職業(yè)；2.介紹家庭成員的興趣和愛好并說明理由。要求：1.條理清晰，內(nèi)容完整，語句通順，2.參考提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.文中請(qǐng)勿提及你的真實(shí)姓名和校名：MyfamilyTree__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Inmyfamilytree,therearemygrandparents,parents,uncle,aunt,sister,brother,cousinsandme.Mygrandfatheris70andheisaretiredteacher.Helikesreadingbecauseitenricheshismind.Mygrandmother,68,isahousewife.Shelovesgardeningasitmakesourhomebeautiful.Myfather,45,isadoctor.Heenjoysplayinggolfforrelaxation.Mymother,43,isanurse.Sheisfondofcookingdeliciousfoodforus.Myuncle,40,isapoliceman.Helikeswatchingactionmovies.Myaunt,38,isateacher.Sheisinterestedinpainting.Mysister,8,isanelementaryschoolstudent.Shelovessingingasitmakesherhappy.Mybrother,2,isalittlebaby.Mycousinsarestudents.Iam13andIlikedrawing.Itallowsmetoexpressmyfeelings.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇說明文，是一篇看圖作文。②時(shí)態(tài)：主要為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”。③提示：文章圍繞家譜展開，逐一介紹家庭成員的年齡、職業(yè)、興趣愛好及理由，內(nèi)容完整，條理清晰，符合題目要求。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。開頭點(diǎn)明要介紹家譜中的家庭成員。第二步，具體闡述。分別描述祖父、祖母、父親、母親、叔叔、阿姨、妹妹、弟弟、表兄、表妹和自己的年齡、職業(yè)、興趣愛好及原因，如祖父喜歡閱讀是因?yàn)槟茇S富思想，祖母喜歡園藝是因?yàn)槟苊阑彝サ?。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①retiredteacher退休教師②housewife家庭主婦③enrichone’smind豐富某人的思想④gardening園藝⑤forrelaxation為了放松⑥befondof喜歡⑦actionmovies動(dòng)作電影⑧beinterestedin對(duì)……感興趣⑨expressone’sfeelings表達(dá)某人的感情[高分句型]Helikesreadingbecauseitenricheshismind.(because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句)7．你想成為一名英文小記者嗎？你想展示你的才華嗎？請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示信息寫一篇自我介紹來參加我們的招聘會(huì)吧！提示：1.姓名、年齡、班級(jí)和學(xué)校；2.家庭成員；3.愛好：養(yǎng)寵物狗；4.特長(zhǎng)：彈吉他；5.喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)和食物。要求：1.語句通順，條理清楚，結(jié)構(gòu)合理；2.詞數(shù)80左右。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文：MynameisAmy.I’mtwelveyearsold.IstudyatNo.1MiddleSchool.I’minClass3,Grade7.Therearefourpeopleinmyfamily.Myfatherisreallyhandsome,andhelikesgoingfishingafterwork.Mymotherisverykindandshealwaystellsusstoriesatnight.MybrotherJimis3yearsold.Heisveryfunnyandalwaysmakesuslaugh.Ilikeanimalsverymuch.Ihaveapetdoginmyhome.ItsnameisHuanhuan.Iamgoodatplayingtheguitar.Iamintheschoolband.Tennisismyfavouritesport.Ilikebeefnoodlesalot.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，不要遺漏信息，可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹自己的個(gè)人信息；第二步，介紹家人信息；第三步，介紹自己的愛好、特長(zhǎng)、喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)和食物。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①studyat在……學(xué)習(xí)②verymuch非常③begoodat擅長(zhǎng)[高分句型]Mymotherisverykindandshealwaystellsusstoriesatnight.（and連接并列句）8．假如你是李華，通過學(xué)校舉辦的“漢語橋”活動(dòng)，你結(jié)識(shí)了一名外國(guó)朋友Mike，他想更多地了解你，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要求，用英語給Mike寫一封信，從個(gè)人基本信息、家庭情況、興趣愛好等至少三個(gè)方面來介紹你自己。要求：1.不少于80詞；2.不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校班級(jí)信息；3.包含所有提示信息，條理清楚，行文連貫，語句通順，書寫規(guī)范，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。DearMike,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearMike,IamLiHua.Iama13-year-oldboy.IliveinBeijingwithmyparents.Therearefourpeopleinmyfamily.Theyaremyparents,mysisterandI.Myparentsare40yearsold.Mysisteris8yearsold.Ilikereadingstorybooks.Ialsoloveplayingbasketballwithmyfriends.Thisyear,IhopeIcanlearntodrawpicturesandmakefriendswithmorepeopleatschool.CanIknowmoreaboutyou?Iwishtogetyouremailsoon.You