2025年托福考試寫(xiě)作高分預(yù)測(cè)試卷：作文修改與潤(rùn)色技巧考試時(shí)間：______分鐘總分：______分姓名：______一、詞匯選擇填空要求：下面每道題中，有四個(gè)劃線詞匯，其中只有一個(gè)是符合句子語(yǔ)境的最佳選項(xiàng)，請(qǐng)將正確選項(xiàng)的字母代號(hào)填入括號(hào)內(nèi)。仔細(xì)閱讀句子，結(jié)合上下文，用心感受每個(gè)詞匯細(xì)微的差別，就像在品嘗四杯不同風(fēng)味的茶，選出一杯最合你口味的。1.Thelocalcuisineisrichly______withspices,creatingasymphonyofflavorsthatstimulatesthepalate.A.infusedB.blendedC.seasonedD.marinated2.Despitethe______natureoftheproject,theteamremainedoptimisticanddedicatedtoitscompletion.A.complicatedB.complexC.complexedD.complicating3.Her______voicecarriedasoothingmelodythatcalmedtheanxiouscrowd.A.resonantB.resonatingC.resonatesD.resonated4.Theoldmanuscriptwas______withannotations,makingitatreasuretroveforscholars.A.annotatedB.annotativeC.annotatingD.annotation5.Thescientist's______approachledtogroundbreakingdiscoveriesthatrevolutionizedthefield.A.innovativeB.innovativelyC.innovatedD.innovating6.Theathlete's______trainingregimenensuredthatshewasinpeakconditionforthecompetition.A.rigorousB.rigidityC.rigorouslyD.rigorousness7.Thepaintingwas______withvibrantcolors,evokingasenseofenergyandvitality.A.imbuedB.imbuingC.imbuesD.imbued8.Thenovel's______narrativestructurekeptreadersengagedfrombeginningtoend.A.intricateB.intricatelyC.intricacyD.intricate9.Themusician's______fingersdancedacrossthepiano,creatingamesmerizingperformance.A.nimbleB.nimblyC.nimblerD.nimbleness10.Theoldcastlewas______withsecrets,eachstonewhisperingtalesofthepast.A.shroudedB.shroudingC.shroudsD.shrouded二、句子改寫(xiě)與潤(rùn)色要求：下面每道題中，有一句話需要根據(jù)括號(hào)內(nèi)的要求進(jìn)行改寫(xiě)。改寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意保持原句意思不變，同時(shí)提升句子的表達(dá)效果，就像一位經(jīng)驗(yàn)豐富的廚師，在保留食材原味的基礎(chǔ)上，用更精致的方式呈現(xiàn)，讓味道更美妙。請(qǐng)將改寫(xiě)后的句子寫(xiě)在答題紙上。1.Originalsentence:Theauthor'suseofvividlanguagemadethestorymoreengaging.Requirement:Useaparticipialphrasetostartthesentence.(改寫(xiě)后句子：__________)2.Originalsentence:Thestudent'shardworkpaidoffwhenheachievedahighgrade.Requirement:Usearelativeclausetomodifythenoun.(改寫(xiě)后句子：__________)3.Originalsentence:Theteacher'spassionatelecturesinspiredthestudentstolearnmore.Requirement:Useanadverbialphrasetodescribethemanner.(改寫(xiě)后句子：__________)4.Originalsentence:Theoldbook'sworncoverrevealeditsage.Requirement:Useaninvertedsentencestructuretoemphasizethenoun.(改寫(xiě)后句子：__________)5.Originalsentence:Theactor'sperformancewassoconvincingthattheaudiencewasmoved.Requirement:Useaconjunctiveadverbtoshowtheresult.(改寫(xiě)后句子：__________)6.Originalsentence:Thescientist'sresearchwasgroundbreakingandinnovative.Requirement:Useacompoundadjectivetodescribethenoun.(改寫(xiě)后句子：__________)7.Originalsentence:Thepainting'sintricatedetailscapturedtheviewer'sattention.Requirement:Useanappositivephrasetoaddadditionalinformation.(改寫(xiě)后句子：__________)8.Originalsentence:Themusician'stalentwasundeniable,andhewonthecompetition.Requirement:Useasemicolontoconnecttwocloselyrelatedindependentclauses.(改寫(xiě)后句子：__________)9.Originalsentence:Theoldcastle'smysterioushistoryattractedmanytourists.Requirement:Useagerundphrasetostartthesentence.(改寫(xiě)后句子：__________)10.Originalsentence:Theauthor'suseofmetaphoricallanguageenrichedthestory.Requirement:Useaparticipialclausetomodifythenoun.(改寫(xiě)后句子：__________)三、段落結(jié)構(gòu)與銜接要求：下面有一段未完成的文字，其中包含五個(gè)空格（___1___，___2___，___3___，___4___，___5___）。請(qǐng)從下面提供的選項(xiàng)中，為每個(gè)空格選擇最合適的句子或短語(yǔ)，使整個(gè)段落邏輯連貫，表達(dá)流暢。就像在編織一張精美的網(wǎng)，每根線都要恰到好處，才能讓網(wǎng)收攏得既牢固又美觀。注意，每個(gè)選項(xiàng)只能使用一次。原文：Thecity'stransformationoverthepastdecadehasbeenremarkable.___1___Manyoldbuildingshavebeenreplacedbymodernskyscrapers,alteringtheskylinedramatically.___2___Thishasnotonlyimprovedtheaestheticappealbutalsoenhancedthefunctionalityoftheurbanarea.___3___However,therapiddevelopmenthasbroughtitsownsetofchallenges.___4___Trafficcongestionandenvironmentalconcernshavebecomeincreasinglyprominentissues.___5___Despitethesechallenges,thecityremainsavibrantanddynamicplacetoliveandwork.選項(xiàng)：A.Ithasattractedasignificantinfluxofbusinessesandresidentsalike.B.Thegovernmenthasimplementedvariousmeasurestomitigatetheseproblems.C.Suchchangeshavehadaprofoundimpactonthecity'sinfrastructure.D.Theinfluxofpeoplehasledtoasurgeindemandforhousing.E.Effortsarebeingmadetobalancegrowthwithsustainability.（請(qǐng)將所選選項(xiàng)的字母代號(hào)依次填入空格處：___1______2______3______4______5___）四、語(yǔ)篇風(fēng)格與語(yǔ)氣調(diào)整要求：下面有一篇關(guān)于保護(hù)瀕危動(dòng)物的文章片段，其當(dāng)前語(yǔ)氣較為客觀、中立。請(qǐng)根據(jù)括號(hào)內(nèi)的要求，修改文章中劃線的句子，使整個(gè)語(yǔ)篇的風(fēng)格和語(yǔ)氣更加符合描述。想象一下，你是一位充滿熱情的自然保護(hù)者，用你的筆尖去喚醒人們對(duì)自然的關(guān)愛(ài)，讓文字充滿力量，像春風(fēng)一樣溫暖，像號(hào)角一樣激昂。修改時(shí)，只需替換劃線部分的內(nèi)容即可，保持其他部分不變。原文：Thepopulationofpandasinthewildhasbeendecliningduetohabitatlossandpoaching.Thistrendisconcerningforconservationists.___1___Scientistshavebeenworkingonbreedingprogramstoincreasetheirnumbers.___2___Theseeffortshaveshownsomesuccess,butthespeciesisstillfarfrombeingconsideredsafe.___3___Publicawarenesscampaignsareimportant,buttheyoftendonottranslateintomeaningfulaction.___4___Thefutureofpandasremainsuncertainunlesssignificantchangesaremade.修改要求：1.原文："___1___Scientistshavebeenworkingonbreedingprogramstoincreasetheirnumbers."修改為更具情感和緊迫感的表達(dá)。2.原文："___2___Theseeffortshaveshownsomesuccess,butthespeciesisstillfarfrombeingconsideredsafe."修改為強(qiáng)調(diào)挑戰(zhàn)和希望的復(fù)雜語(yǔ)氣。3.原文："___3___Publicawarenesscampaignsareimportant,buttheyoftendonottranslateintomeaningfulaction."修改為表達(dá)失望但又帶有希望的語(yǔ)氣。4.原文："___4___Thefutureofpandasremainsuncertainunlesssignificantchangesaremade."修改為強(qiáng)烈的呼吁和責(zé)任感。（請(qǐng)將修改后的句子分別寫(xiě)在答題紙上，對(duì)應(yīng)原句的序號(hào)：1.修改后句子：__________2.修改后句子：__________3.修改后句子：__________4.修改后句子：__________）五、綜合寫(xiě)作任務(wù)要求：下面是一個(gè)話題，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)這個(gè)話題寫(xiě)一篇短文。假設(shè)你正在參加一個(gè)線上寫(xiě)作工作坊，你的老師要求你寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于“科技如何改變我們的日常生活”的文章，字?jǐn)?shù)不少于300字。請(qǐng)運(yùn)用你在前幾題中學(xué)到的詞匯選擇、句子改寫(xiě)和段落銜接技巧，寫(xiě)出你的文章。就像一位技藝精湛的工匠，用你手中的筆，雕琢出這篇充滿思想光芒的文章。文章要結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，語(yǔ)言流暢，表達(dá)有感染力。話題：Inthepastfewdecades,technologyhasdramaticallytransformedourdailylives.Discussthepositiveandnegativeimpactsofthistransformation.Usespecificexamplestosupportyourpoints.（請(qǐng)將你的文章寫(xiě)在答題紙上：__________）本次試卷答案如下一、詞匯選擇填空答案及解析1.Ainfused解析：句子表達(dá)的是當(dāng)?shù)夭讼党錆M了香料，創(chuàng)造出了風(fēng)味交響樂(lè)。infused（浸染，注入）在這里最符合語(yǔ)境，表示香料被充分地融入菜肴中，形成獨(dú)特的風(fēng)味。blended（混合）不夠精確，seasoned（調(diào)味）過(guò)于簡(jiǎn)單，marinated（浸泡）通常指肉類等食物的腌制。2.Bcomplex解析：句子描述的是項(xiàng)目盡管有復(fù)雜性，但團(tuán)隊(duì)仍然保持樂(lè)觀。complex（復(fù)雜的）比complicated（復(fù)雜的，纏繞的）更常用，且更符合語(yǔ)境。complexed和complicating都不是標(biāo)準(zhǔn)詞匯。3.Aresonant解析：句子說(shuō)的是她的聲音富有共鳴，安撫了焦慮的人群。resonant（共鳴的，有共鳴聲的）最符合語(yǔ)境，表示聲音富有感染力，能夠傳遞情感。resonating是動(dòng)名詞形式，resonates和resonated是動(dòng)詞形式。4.Aannotated解析：句子描述的是古老的手稿被注釋，成為學(xué)者的寶藏。annotated（被注釋的）是過(guò)去分詞作形容詞，符合句子結(jié)構(gòu)。annotative是形容詞，annotating是動(dòng)名詞，annotation是名詞。5.Ainnovative解析：句子說(shuō)的是科學(xué)家的創(chuàng)新方法帶來(lái)了突破性發(fā)現(xiàn)。innovative（創(chuàng)新的）是形容詞，修飾approach。innovatively是副詞，innovated是動(dòng)詞過(guò)去式，innovating是動(dòng)名詞。6.Arigorous解析：句子描述的是運(yùn)動(dòng)員的嚴(yán)格訓(xùn)練計(jì)劃確保了她處于最佳狀態(tài)。rigorous（嚴(yán)格的，嚴(yán)密的）最符合語(yǔ)境，強(qiáng)調(diào)訓(xùn)練計(jì)劃的嚴(yán)格性。rigidity是名詞，rigorously是副詞，rigorousness是名詞。7.Aimbued解析：句子說(shuō)的是繪畫(huà)被充滿活力，喚起了能量和生命力。imbued（注入，賦予）在這里最符合語(yǔ)境，表示繪畫(huà)中充滿了某種精神或情感。imbuing是動(dòng)名詞，imbues是動(dòng)詞第三人稱單數(shù)，imbued是過(guò)去分詞。8.Aintricate解析：句子描述的是小說(shuō)的復(fù)雜敘事結(jié)構(gòu)讓讀者從頭到尾都投入其中。intricate（復(fù)雜的，錯(cuò)綜的）最符合語(yǔ)境，形容敘事結(jié)構(gòu)的復(fù)雜性。intricately是副詞，intricacy是名詞，intricate是形容詞。9.Animble解析：句子說(shuō)的是音樂(lè)家的靈巧手指在鋼琴上跳躍，創(chuàng)造了迷人的表演。nimble（靈巧的，敏捷的）最符合語(yǔ)境，形容手指的靈活性。nimbly是副詞，nimbler是比較級(jí)，nimbleness是名詞。10.Ashrouded解析：句子描述的是古老城堡被秘密籠罩，每一塊石頭都在低語(yǔ)著過(guò)去的故事。shrouded（籠罩的，蒙住的）最符合語(yǔ)境，表示城堡被神秘感包圍。shrouding是動(dòng)名詞，shrouds是動(dòng)詞第三人稱單數(shù)，shrouded是過(guò)去分詞。二、句子改寫(xiě)與潤(rùn)色答案及解析1.Theauthor'svividlanguage,makingthestorymoreengaging,begantoenchantthereadersfromthefirstpage.解析：使用現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)"makingthestorymoreengaging"開(kāi)頭，表示作者生動(dòng)的語(yǔ)言讓故事更具吸引力，同時(shí)用"begantoenchantthereadersfromthefirstpage"來(lái)補(bǔ)充說(shuō)明效果，使句子更流暢。2.Thehighgradeheachievedwasatestamenttothestudent'shardwork.解析：使用關(guān)系從句"thatheachievedahighgrade"來(lái)修飾"thestudent'shardwork"，使句子結(jié)構(gòu)更緊湊，同時(shí)"wasatestamentto"表達(dá)了因果關(guān)系，增強(qiáng)了句子的表現(xiàn)力。3.Theteacher'spassionatelectures,inawaythatinspiredthestudentstolearnmore,leftalastingimpression.解析：使用介詞短語(yǔ)"thatinspiredthestudentstolearnmore"來(lái)描述"theteacher'spassionatelectures"，同時(shí)"leftalastingimpression"強(qiáng)調(diào)了演講的效果，使句子更生動(dòng)。4.Itsage,revealedbytheoldbook'sworncover,wasunmistakable.解析：使用倒裝句結(jié)構(gòu)"Itsage,revealedbytheoldbook'sworncover,wasunmistakable"，將"itsage"提前，強(qiáng)調(diào)了書(shū)的年代久遠(yuǎn)，同時(shí)"unmistakable"加強(qiáng)了語(yǔ)氣。5.Theactor'sperformancewassoconvincingthatitmovedtheaudiencetotears.解析：使用結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句"thattheaudiencewasmoved"來(lái)補(bǔ)充說(shuō)明"theactor'sperformancewassoconvincing"，同時(shí)"movedtheaudiencetotears"更具體地描述了結(jié)果，使句子更具感染力。6.Thescientist'sresearchwasgroundbreakingandinnovative,pushingtheboundariesofthefield.解析：使用復(fù)合形容詞"groundbreakingandinnovative"來(lái)描述"thescientist'sresearch"，同時(shí)"pushingtheboundariesofthefield"補(bǔ)充說(shuō)明了研究的影響，使句子更具體。7.Thepainting,withitsintricatedetailsthatcapturedtheviewer'sattention,becameaninstantclassic.解析：使用同位語(yǔ)短語(yǔ)"withitsintricatedetails"來(lái)補(bǔ)充說(shuō)明"thepainting"，同時(shí)"capturedtheviewer'sattention"強(qiáng)調(diào)了細(xì)節(jié)的魅力，使句子更豐富。8.Themusician'stalentwasundeniable;itledhimtowinthecompetition.解析：使用分號(hào)連接兩個(gè)密切相關(guān)的獨(dú)立分句，"themusician'stalentwasundeniable"和"itledhimtowinthecompetition"，使句子結(jié)構(gòu)更清晰，同時(shí)"undeniable"和"ledhimto"增強(qiáng)了句子的邏輯性。9.Trainingrigorously,theoldcastle'smysterioushistoryattractedmanytourists.解析：使用動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)"Trainingrigorously"開(kāi)頭，表示城堡的訓(xùn)練嚴(yán)格，同時(shí)"attractedmanytourists"說(shuō)明了結(jié)果，使句子更流暢。10.Theauthor'suseofmetaphoricallanguage,enrichingthestory,addedanewdimensiontothenarrative.解析：使用現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)"enrichingthestory"來(lái)補(bǔ)充說(shuō)明"theauthor'suseofmetaphoricallanguage"，同時(shí)"addedanewdimensiontothenarrative"強(qiáng)調(diào)了這種使用的效果，使句子更生動(dòng)。三、段落結(jié)構(gòu)與銜接答案及解析（請(qǐng)將所選選項(xiàng)的字母代號(hào)依次填入空格處：ACEBD）1.A它吸引了大量企業(yè)和居民。解析：這個(gè)句子解釋了城市變化的原因，即吸引了大量企業(yè)和居民，與后面的描述相呼應(yīng)。2.C這樣的變化對(duì)城市的基礎(chǔ)設(shè)施產(chǎn)生了深遠(yuǎn)的影響。解析：這個(gè)句子進(jìn)一步解釋了城市變化的影響，即對(duì)基礎(chǔ)設(shè)施的影響，與后面的描述相銜接。3.E人們正在努力在增長(zhǎng)與可持續(xù)性之間取得平衡。解析：這個(gè)句子提出了一個(gè)解決方案，即努力在增長(zhǎng)與可持續(xù)性之間取得平衡，與后面的描述相呼應(yīng)。4.B政府已經(jīng)實(shí)施了各種措施來(lái)緩解這些問(wèn)題。解析：這個(gè)句子具體說(shuō)明了政府采取的措施，與前面的挑戰(zhàn)相呼應(yīng)。5.D人們的涌入導(dǎo)致了住房需求的激增。解析：這個(gè)句子解釋了人們涌入的結(jié)果，即住房需求的激增，與前面的描述相銜接。四、語(yǔ)篇風(fēng)格與語(yǔ)氣調(diào)整答案及解析1.Thedeclineinthepandapopulation,heart-wrenchingasitis,hasgalvanizedscientistsintoactionthroughbreedingprograms.解析：使用形容詞"heart-wrenching"來(lái)表達(dá)對(duì)熊貓數(shù)量下降的同情，同時(shí)"galvanizedscientistsintoaction"表達(dá)了緊迫感，增強(qiáng)了語(yǔ)氣。2.Whilebreedingprogramshaveshownsomesuccess,thespeciesremainsperilouslyclosetothebrink,withalongroadaheadtosafety.解析：使用"perilouslyclosetothebrink"來(lái)表達(dá)熊貓仍然處于危險(xiǎn)之中，同時(shí)"withalongroadaheadtosafety"表達(dá)了希望與挑戰(zhàn)并存的復(fù)雜語(yǔ)氣。3.Despitepublicawarenesscampaigns,theyoftenfallshortofinspiringtangiblechanges,leavingconservationistsfeelingdisheartenedyethopefulforthefuture.解析：使用"fallshortofinspiringtangiblechanges"來(lái)表達(dá)對(duì)公眾意識(shí)活動(dòng)的失望，同時(shí)"leavingconservationistsfeelingdisheartenedyethopeful"表達(dá)了失望與希望并存的復(fù)雜情感。4.Thefutureofpandashangsinthebalance;itisnowuptoustomakethenecessarychangesandensuretheirsurvivalforgenerationstocome.解析：使用"hangsinthebalance"來(lái)表達(dá)熊貓未來(lái)的不確定性，同時(shí)"itisnowuptous"表達(dá)了強(qiáng)烈的呼吁和責(zé)任感，增強(qiáng)了語(yǔ)氣。五、綜合寫(xiě)作任務(wù)答案及解析（請(qǐng)將你的文章寫(xiě)在答題紙上）TheTransformativePowerofTechnologyinOurDailyLivesInthepastfewdecades,technologyhasundergonearemarkabletransformation,reshapingourdailylivesinwayswecouldhaveneverimagined.Thistechnologicalrevolutionhasbroughtbothpositiveandnegativeimpacts,creatingacomplextapestryofbenefitsandchallenges.Ontheonehand,technologyhassignificantlyimprovedourlivesinnumerousways.Forinstance,smartphonesandtheinternethavemadecommunicationinstantaneous,allowingustoconnectwithpeoplearoundtheworldinreal-time.Thishasnotonlystrengthenedpersonalrelationshipsbutalsofacilitatedglobalcollaborationandbusinessopportunities.Additionally,advancementsinhealthcaretechnologyhaveledtomoreaccuratediagnosesandeffectivetreatments,savingcountlesslives.Theconvenienceofonlineshoppingandhomedeliveryserviceshasalsomadeourlivesmorecomfortable,savingustimeandeffort.Thesepositiveimpactsdemonstratehowtechnologyhasthepowertoenhanceourqualityoflife.Ontheotherhand,therapidpaceo