第10講道歉信（考試時(shí)間：15分鐘/每題）目錄道歉信常用詞匯P1道歉信常用句型P2道歉信常用模版與演練P4道歉信精準(zhǔn)測(cè)試18篇P6熱點(diǎn)話題訓(xùn)練（課外活動(dòng)）P36一、道歉信常用詞匯序號(hào)中文英文1信守諾言keeppromise2缺席/出席beabsent/presentfrom3因某事向某人道歉apologizetosb.forsth.4因某事向某人道歉showanapologytosb.forsth.5因某事向某人道歉makeanapologytosb.forsth.6對(duì)某人說抱歉saysorrytosb.7懇求你的原諒begyourforgivenessfor8造成不便causeinconvenience9錯(cuò)過/取消約會(huì)miss/canceltheappointment10彌補(bǔ)makeupfor...11表達(dá)我的道歉expressmyregret12體諒beconsiderateof13接受我的道歉acceptmyapology14與……沖突conflictwith...15除了做某事別無選擇havenochoice/optionbuttodosth.16選擇makeachoice二、道歉信常用句型1.我寫信是為……道歉。Iamwritingtoapologizefor…2.我想……向你道歉。Iwouldliketogiveyoumyapologyfor…3.我很抱歉……Iamverysorrytosaythat…4.對(duì)于做了/沒做……，我必須道歉。Imustapologizeabout(not)doingsth…5.請(qǐng)接受我對(duì)于……的真誠道歉。Pleaseacceptmysincereapologyfor…6.我很抱歉，但是……Iamterriblysorry,but…7.我想讓你知道我們有多難過，我向你保證這不會(huì)再發(fā)生了。Iwantyoutoknowhowbadwefeelaboutitandtoassureyouthatitwon'thappenagain.8.我希望這不會(huì)給你帶來太多的不便。Ihopethatthisdoesnotcauseyoutoomuchinconvenience.9.你太好了，再給我一次機(jī)會(huì)做某事。我保證不會(huì)再發(fā)生這種事情。Itwouldbeverykind(considerate)ofyoutogivemeanotherchancetodosth.Ipromiseitwillneverhappenagain.10.如方便的話，我們?cè)偌s去做某事。Ifitisconvenientforyou,let'shaveanotherappointmenttodosth.11.你會(huì)介意我改變約會(huì)的時(shí)間嗎？WouldyoumindifIchangetheappointmenttime?12.順便說一下，下周約個(gè)時(shí)間一起吃晚飯好嗎？Bytheway,canwehavedinnertogethersometimenextweek?13.可能讓我做某事來彌補(bǔ)損失嗎？IsitpossiblethatImakeupforthelossbydoingsth.?14.我對(duì)于所造成的任何不便再次道歉。Onceagain,Iamsorryforanyinconveniencecaused.15.請(qǐng)?jiān)试S我再一次說抱歉。Pleaseallowmetosaysorryagain.16.我真誠的希望你能夠站在我的位置想一想，并且接受我的道歉。Isincerelyhopethatyouwillbeabletothinkinmypositionandacceptmyapologies.17.我想讓你知道我現(xiàn)在感覺多么的遺憾。IwanttoletyouknowhowregretfulIamfeelingnow.18.我剛剛得了一場重感冒，有人堅(jiān)決建議我呆在家里休息一下。所以我非常遺憾地錯(cuò)過了這個(gè)機(jī)會(huì)……（和你在一起）。IhavejusthadabadcoldandI'madvisedtostayathomeforarest.SoIfeelterriblysorrytomisstheopportunityto...(withyou).19.我當(dāng)時(shí)將缺席的原因是我的學(xué)校安排發(fā)生了變化。ThereasonwhyIwillnotbeavailableatthattimeisthatthereisachangeinmyschoolarrangements.20.我得去機(jī)場接我叔叔。我試著找一個(gè)人，但沒有其他人。Ihavetopickupmyuncleattheairport.I'dtriedtofindanalternativepersonbutnooneelseisavailable.21.你能給我機(jī)會(huì)面對(duì)面向你道歉嗎？我真誠地邀請(qǐng)你來參加。Wouldyougivemeachancetomakeanapologytoyoufacetoface?Isincerelyinviteyouto...22.我們要不要推遲我們的時(shí)間到……Shallwepostponeourmeeting/visit/...till...23.再次抱歉為我的缺席/突然更改造成的不便。Sorryagainforanyinconveniencecausedbymyabsence/theabruptchange.三、道歉信常用模版與演練1.基本模板Dear______(稱謂)I'mterriblysorrytoinformyouthat______(寫信事由).Thus,Iamwritingtoapologizefornotkeepingmyword.Somethingunexpectedhappenedand______(失約理由).Shallwefixanothertime?I’llbeavailableanytimeafter______(補(bǔ)救辦法).Will______(另約時(shí)間)suitsyourconvenience?Ifit’sok,let’smeetat______(見面地點(diǎn)).Ifnot,letmeknowwhattimesuitsyoubest.Ihopetheadjustmentwon’tputyouintomuchtrouble.Keenlyanticipateyourpromptreply.Yoursincerely,LiHua2.寫作實(shí)操技巧 假定你是李華，你和外教MrSmith本來約好去看在你們所在城市舉行的國際攝影展，但你因故不能赴約。請(qǐng)給他寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括: 1.表示歉意； 2.解釋原因； 3.補(bǔ)救措施。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右； 2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【模板范文】DearMrSmith(稱謂)I'mterriblysorrytoinformyouthatIcan'taccompanyyoutotheInternationalPhotographyFestivalheldthisSaturday(寫信事由).Thus,Iamwritingtoapologizefornotkeepingmyword.SomethingunexpectedhappenedandmyparentshavetogooutsideofthecitythisSaturday,soIhavetostayathomeandtakecareofmylittlebrother(失約理由).Shallwefixanothertime?I’llbeavailableanytimeafterthisSaturday(補(bǔ)救辦法).WillthisSunday(另約時(shí)間)suitsyourconvenience?Ifit’sok,let’smeetatourschoolgateat8a.m.(見面地點(diǎn)).Ifnot,letmeknowwhattimesuitsyoubest.Ihopetheadjustmentwon’tputyouintomuchtrouble.Keenlyanticipateyourpromptreply.Yoursincerely,LiHua3.仿寫演練 假定你是李華，你的英國朋友David本周六即將結(jié)束在中國的旅行，乘飛機(jī)返回英國，你因有事無法按原定計(jì)劃取機(jī)場為他送行，只好寫信向他道歉，內(nèi)容如下:1.表達(dá)歉意；2.說明不能送行的原因。注意: 1.詞數(shù)80左右； 2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【模板范文】DearDavid(稱謂)I'mterriblysorrytoinformyouthatIcannotmakeittoseeyouoffattheairportthisSaturdayaspromised(寫信事由).Thus,Iamwritingtoapologizefornotkeepingmyword.SomethingunexpectedhappenedandIhavetohelpmakepreparationsfortheEnglishSpeakingContesttobeheldthisweekend.Actually,Ihavejustbeeninformedofthisplanbytheschoolmaster.Moreover,asthechairmanoftheStudentUnion,Ifeelresponsibleforthisjob.HowIwishIcouldhavethechancetotalkwithyouoncemoreaboutthehappydayswespenttogetherbeforeyouleave!(失約理由).Ihopetheadjustmentwon’tputyouintomuchtrouble.Wishyouasafejourney.Yoursincerely,LiHua四、道歉信精準(zhǔn)測(cè)試18篇1.（高三模擬題精選）假如你是李華,現(xiàn)因公司貨品質(zhì)量問題給Johnson寫一封道歉信。要點(diǎn)如下：1.表示要查漏補(bǔ)缺,改進(jìn)提高；2.提出補(bǔ)救辦法；3.表明決心和意愿。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫；3.開頭語已為你寫好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearMr.Johnson,Firstofall,thankyouforinformingusofthequalityissue.Isincerelyapologizetoyouforourfailuretoprovideyouwithsatisfactoryproducts.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yoursfaithfully,LiHua【參考范文】DearMr.Johnson,Firstofall,thankyouforinformingusofthequalityissue.Isincerelyapologizetoyouforourfailuretoprovideyouwithsatisfactoryproducts.We'llstudytheproblem,findoutthecauseofit,andtrytoavoidthesamebadthing.Weassureyouthatwewillprovideyouwithafreereplacementoftheoneyoubought.Mr.LeeofourBusinessDepartmentwillcontactyouassoonaspossible.Wehopeyouunderstandthatthisisjustanaccidentalevent,andwewilltrytocontinuallyimproveourproductquality.Wecherishtheestablishmentofalastingfriendshipwithyou.Atthesametime,wewillalsocontinuetoworkhardtoprovidehigh-qualityandaffordableproductsandbetterafter-salesserviceforyou.Isincerelyapologizeagainforthetroublethishascausedyou.Yoursfaithfully,LiHua【分析】這是一篇應(yīng)用文。要求寫一封道歉信，就公司貨品質(zhì)量問題給Johnson道歉?！驹斀狻?.道歉信主要是向收信人表明歉意，請(qǐng)求對(duì)方原諒自己的過失。寫道歉信時(shí)要明確不是在找借口為自己辯護(hù)，而是承認(rèn)自己的過錯(cuò)并提出彌補(bǔ)過錯(cuò)的具體建議和方法。此類信件的關(guān)鍵是語言要誠摯，解釋的理由要真實(shí)。2.在寫作時(shí)可以根據(jù)提示的要點(diǎn)按照三段式的模式謀篇布局：首段：表明自己做錯(cuò)了事，表示歉意；主體段落：提出作為彌補(bǔ)的可行措施，措施要具體、合理；結(jié)尾段：再次表明承認(rèn)錯(cuò)誤的態(tài)度，請(qǐng)求收信人的諒解。第一步：詞匯積累查明，確信：assure珍惜：cherish意外的：accidental建立：establishment買的起：affordable3.文章的結(jié)尾再次因給對(duì)方造成的不便而道歉，顯得禮貌且態(tài)度誠懇。第二步：句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：wewillprovideyouwithafreereplacementoftheoneyoubought.拓展句：Weassureyouthatwewillprovideyouwithafreereplacementoftheoneyoubought.第三步：高分句式[高分句型1]Atthesametime,wewillalsocontinuetoworkhardtoprovidehigh-qualityandaffordableproductsandbetterafter-salesserviceforyou.(連接詞atthesametime的使用使上下文銜接自然，后文使用并列句并運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯如affordable,after-sales等。)[高分句型2]Isincerelyapologizeagainforthetroublethishascausedyou.句子副詞sincerely的運(yùn)用使得句子流暢自然，thishascausedyou為省略關(guān)系代詞的定語從句。2.（高三模擬題精選）假定你是李華，寒假中作為交流生短期去英國培訓(xùn)，回國時(shí)因?yàn)榇颐?，把房東Bob的音樂光盤夾在行李中帶了回來?，F(xiàn)在請(qǐng)你給Bob寫一封道歉信，要點(diǎn)如下：1.對(duì)自己帶走音樂光盤表示歉意；2.提出解決的辦法；3.再次請(qǐng)求原諒。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。3.開頭語和結(jié)束語已為你寫好。DearBob,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua【參考范文】DearBob,Iamwritingtomakeanapologytoyou,forIforgottoreturnamusicCDwhichIborrowedfromyoulastweek.YesterdayIcamebackfromEnglandandfounditinmyluggage.Iamsosorrythatyoucannotlistentoitatpresent.TheCDwhichIborrowedfromyouismadeinEngland,soIbelieveyoucanfindanotheroneinyourlocalstore.HowaboutyourbuyinganotherCDbyyourselfandIwillpayforit?Ifyoucannotfindasimilarone,Iwouldsenditbacktoyouthroughapostoffice.Andifthereareanyothersolutionsyoulike,pleaseletmeknow.Iamterriblysorryagainformycarelessness.Pleaseforgivemeforanyinconveniencecaused.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua【導(dǎo)語】本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，就將房東Bob的光盤帶走一事寫一封道歉信。第一步：詞匯積累相信：believe→ensure購買：buy→purchase發(fā)現(xiàn)：find→spot解決辦法：solution→settlement第二步：句式拓展同義句改寫原句：Iamsosorrythatyoucannotlistentoitatpresent.拓展句：SosorryamIthatyoucannotlistentoitatpresent.第三步：高分句式[高分句型1]Iamwritingtomakeanapologytoyou,forIforgottoreturnamusicCDwhichIborrowedfromyoulastweek.(運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的限制性定語從句)[高分句型2]TheCDwhichIborrowedfromyouismadeinEngland,soIbelieveyoucanfindanotheroneinyourlocalstore.(運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的限制性定語從句)5.（高三模擬題精選）假定你是李華，在澳大利亞留學(xué)期間，父母維修廚房時(shí)影響到了鄰居James，請(qǐng)給他寫一封道歉信，內(nèi)容包括：1.表達(dá)歉意；2.解釋原因。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】DearJames,

Wewereveryshockedtogetyourlettercomplainingaboutthenoisefromourflat.Wedidn'texpectitspoiledyoureveningsandcausedyousomedistress.Wedohopeyouacceptourapologies.

Myparentsarebusyatworkduringdaytime,sotheyhavetorefitourkitchenintheevenings.What'smore,theyarenotsoexpertatdoinghouserepairsthattheyhavedifficultyingettingthingstofitproperly.Astherepairisstillnotfinished,wewillcallinaprofessionalworkertofinishtheworkthisweekend.Wepromisethathe'llworkonlyduringdaytimehours,soyouwon'tbedisturbedintheeveningsagain.

Sorrytohavecausedtheseproblems.

Yours,LiHua【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，假定考生是李華，在澳大利亞留學(xué)期間，父母維修廚房時(shí)影響到了鄰居James，請(qǐng)給他寫一封道歉信。第一步：詞匯積累希望：wish→hope困難：trouble→difficulty驚訝的：astonished→shocked促使，導(dǎo)致：resultin→cause第二步：句式拓展同義句轉(zhuǎn)換原句：Myparentsarebusyatworkduringdaytime,sotheyhavetorefitourkitchenintheevenings.拓展句：Becausemyparentsarebusyatworkduringdaytime,theyhavetorefitourkitchenintheevenings第三步：高分句式[高分句型1]What'smore,theyarenotsoexpertatdoinghouserepairsthattheyhavedifficultyingettingthingstofitproperly.（so…that…引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句）[高分句型2]Wepromisethathe'llworkonlyduringdaytimehours,soyouwon'tbedisturbedintheeveningsagain.（that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）4.（高三模擬題精選）假設(shè)你是高二學(xué)生陳偉，昨天，你和你的外籍同桌Bob關(guān)于用集體班費(fèi)給災(zāi)區(qū)捐款這一問題發(fā)生了一些小爭執(zhí)，請(qǐng)你按照以下要求給他寫一封道歉信。1.表達(dá)自己的歉意；2.闡述道歉的原因(至少2條)；3.表達(dá)自己的友好之情，提倡(advocate)相互理解、相互尊重。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右。2.文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校和本人姓名。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】DearBob,Iamwritingtoexpressmyregretattheunpleasantargumentbetweenusyesterday.Ifeltsosorryforwhat1didandsaidyesterday.Idonatedallthemoneytothestudentsinthefloodedareawithoutdiscussingtheplanwithyou.Icouldhavedealtwithitdifferently.ButwhenIhandedinthemoney,youhappenedtobeawayfromschoolandlaterIdidn'texplainittoyouinanappropriateway.Whatwasworse,Isaidthatyoudidn'tcareaboutthecollection,whichhurtyousomuch.NowIwanttotakebackwhatIsaid.Pleaseacceptmyapologyforbeingsoimpulsiveyesterday,andI'dlikeyoutotrytounderstandmysituation.Ihopeourfriendshipwilllastlong.Yours,ChenWei【分析】這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作，要求你給同桌Bob寫一封道歉信，表達(dá)歉意，闡述道歉原因并表達(dá)友好之情。第一步：詞匯積累歉意：apology→regret合適的：suitable→appropriate撤回：withdraw→takeback沖動(dòng)的：hotheaded→impulsive第二步：句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Pleaseacceptmyapologyforbeingsoimpulsiveyesterday.拓展句：Pleaseacceptmyapology,forIwassoimpulsiveyesterday.第三步：高分句式[高分句型1]Icouldhavedealtwithitdifferently.(couldhavedone，運(yùn)用了虛擬語氣)[高分句型2]Whatwasworse,Isaidthatyoudidn'tcareaboutthecollection,whichhurtyousomuch.(綜合運(yùn)用狀語從句、賓語從句和非限制性定語從句)5.（高三模擬題精選）假定你是李華,因下周五要到機(jī)場接表妹,所以不能陪Tom去北京旅行。請(qǐng)你給Tom寫一封道歉信。內(nèi)容主要包括：1.向Tom表達(dá)歉意。2.向Tom解釋原因。3.祝Tom下周愉快并另約時(shí)間陪Tom去北京旅游。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右2.適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】DearTom,IamverysorrythatIcan’tgoonatriptoBeijingwithyounextweekend,whichIhavepromisedyou.Iamwritingtotellyouthereasonforit.Justnow,mycousin,LiYing,whowentabroadforfurthereducationlastyear,informedmethatshewouldreturnthenextFridaymorning.Sheaskedmetopickherupattheairportwithherparents.Asyouknow,wehaven’tseeneachotherforaboutayear,soIhavetoseeherinthefirstplace.Ireallyhopethatyoucanacceptmyapologyandunderstandme.IwouldappreciateitifyouallowmetofixanothertimetoshowyouaroundsomeplacesofinterestinBeijing.Wishyouhaveagoodtimethisweekend.YoursLiHua【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)是應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封書信。第一步：詞匯積累出國深造:goabroadforfurthereducation接某人:picksbup首先:inthefirstplace帶某人參觀某地:showsbaroundsomewhere玩得開心:haveagoodtime第二步：句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Wehaven’tseeneachotherforaboutayear.Ihavetoseehertinthefirstplace.拓展句：Asyouknow,wehaven’tseeneachotherforaboutayear,soIhavetoseeherinthefirstplace.第三步：高分句式[高分句型1]IamverysorrythatIcan’tgoonatriptoBeijingwithyounextweekend,whichIhavepromisedyou.（使用非限制性定語從句）[高分句型2]Justnow,mycousin,LiYing,whowentabroadforfurthereducationlastyear,informedmethatshewouldreturnthenextFridaymorning.（使用非限制性定語從句）[高分句型3]Asyouknow,wehaven’tseeneachotherforaboutayear,soIhavetoseeherinthefirstplace.（使用非限制性定語從句和并列句）[高分句型4]IwouldappreciateitifyouallowmetofixanothertimetoshowyouaroundsomeplacesofinterestinBeijing.（使用形式賓語）6.（高三模擬題精選）假如你是李華，你的好朋友Peter明天回國，你因故不能明天去機(jī)場送他，請(qǐng)給他寫一封道歉信。內(nèi)容包括：1.表達(dá)道歉；2.解釋原因。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】DearPeter,Ihavetomakeanapologytoyou.Ihadplannedtoseeyouofftomorrowattheairport,butnowIcan’t.Thereasonisasfollows.ItisatthattimethatIwillhavetoparticipateinaspokenEnglishcompetitionheld,forIwasoncechampioninouruniversitycompetition.Therefore,Ihavenochoicebuttochangemyplanaswellasscheduleandcannotmakemypresencewhenyouleaveforyourcountry.Iamdeeplysorryforit.SadasIamthatIcan’tseeyouforalongtime,Iwishyouhaveagoodtimewithyourfamily.Yours,LiHua【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文之道歉信寫作。要求考生就因故不能明天去機(jī)場送好友Peter回國，給他寫一封道歉信。本篇書面表達(dá)題干所給的信息非常有限，所以考生要仔細(xì)思考如何適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，也就是在“解釋原因”上要多下點(diǎn)功夫。原因可以從“自己那時(shí)正好要干什么事情(比如：要參加比賽啦，要參加面試?yán)驳鹊?而抽不開身前往送行”來設(shè)想。【句式拓展】原句：Ihavetomakeanapologytoyou.Ihadplannedtoseeyouofftomorrowattheairport,butnowIcan’t.拓展：IhavetomakeanapologytoyoubecauseIcan’tseeyouofftomorrowattheairport.【亮點(diǎn)句型】1.ItisatthattimethatIwillhavetoparticipateinaspokenEnglishcompetitionheld,(運(yùn)用了that強(qiáng)調(diào)句)2.SadasIamthatIcan’tseeyouforalongtime,Iwishyouhaveagoodtimewithyourfamily.(運(yùn)用了部分倒裝)7.（高三模擬題精選）假定你是李華，你的美國老師Mr.Evans要求你們明天下午去聽一個(gè)英國歷史的講座。你因故不能參加。請(qǐng)你寫一封信向Mr.Evans道歉并說明情況。要點(diǎn)如下：1.表示歉意；2.道歉理由(至少兩點(diǎn))；3.詢問他是否有錄音，以便補(bǔ)聽講座。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右，開頭結(jié)尾已為你寫好(不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearMr.Evans,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【參考范文】DearMrEvans,IamindeedsorrytotellyouthatIwon’tbeabletoattendthelectureonEnglishhistorytomorrowafternoon.MymothersuddenlyfellillandwastakentohospitallastnightandmyfatherisonabusinesstriptoBeijingnow.IamafraidthatIwillhavetotakecareofherthesedays.HoweverIamactuallyveryinterestedinEnglishsocietyandhistory.Iwonderifitispossibleforthetalktoberecorded,andifso,couldIborrowthetape?Itwouldmeanagreatdealtometolistentothetapeandlearnwhatiscoveredinthetalk.Pleaseallowmetosaysorryagain.Isincerelyhopethatyouwillbeabletounderstandmysituationandacceptmyapology.Yours,LiHua【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文之道歉信寫作。要求考生就明天下午不能去聽Mr.Evans的英國歷史講座給他寫一封信道歉信。要點(diǎn)如下：表示歉意；道歉理由；詢問他是否有錄音，以便補(bǔ)聽講座。本篇書面表達(dá)的題干所給的信息還是比較多的。首先，“表示歉意；詢問他是否有錄音，以便補(bǔ)聽講座”等要點(diǎn)表達(dá)起來還是非常容易的；其次把“道歉理由”表達(dá)出來就可，記住至少需要兩條理由。【句式拓展】原句：MymothersuddenlyfellillandwastakentohospitallastnightandmyfatherisonabusinesstriptoBeijingnow.拓展：Mymothersuddenlyfellill,becauseofwhichshewastakentohospitallastnight,andmyfatherisonabusinesstriptoBeijingnow.【亮點(diǎn)句型】1.IamindeedsorrytotellyouthatIwon'tbeabletoattendthelectureonEnglishhistorytomorrowafternoon.(由that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句)2.IamafraidthatIwillhavetotakecareofherthesedays.(由that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句)3.Iwonderifitispossibleforthetalktoberecorded,andifso,couldIborrowthetape?(由if引導(dǎo)的賓語從句和ifso引導(dǎo)的省略的條件狀語從句)4.Itwouldmeanagreatdealtometolistentothetapeandlearnwhatiscoveredinthetalk.(由what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句)5.Isincerelyhopethatyouwillbeabletounderstandmysituationandacceptmyapology.(由that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句)8.（高三模擬題精選）假如你是李華，你約好昨天去公交車站接你的英國朋友Dylan，然后一起去公園。但你卻遲到了，他有些生氣，沒有等到你就離開了。請(qǐng)用英語給他寫一封道歉信。內(nèi)容如下：1.認(rèn)錯(cuò)，道歉，解釋原因；2.許諾以后一定守時(shí)；3.請(qǐng)求原諒。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearDylan,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【參考范文】DearDylan,Iamwritingtoconveymysincereapologytoyoufornotbeingpunctualyesterday.Iwassupposedtopickyouupatthebusstationat10a.m.ButsocarelesswasIthatIforgottotakethebusytrafficintoconsideration.Asaresult,Iunfortunatelygotcaughtupinaterribletrafficjamandfailedtoarrivethereontime.However,itshouldn’tbemyexcuseandyouhaveeveryrighttobeangrywithme.Ipromisethatanythinglikethiswon’thappenonceagain.Again,Iamexcessivelysorryaboutwhathavehappened.IwouldtrulyappreciateitifyoucouldkindlyforgivemeandIwilldefinitelyturnoveranewleafinthefuture.Yours,LiHua【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文之道歉信寫作。要求考生給自己的朋友寫一封道歉信。本篇書面表達(dá)的題干所給的信息足夠的多，看似好事，其實(shí)不然。因?yàn)榭忌绻凑疹}干中所給要點(diǎn)的順序一一寫出來的話就嫌得太啰嗦，也沒有邏輯性，所以考生需要對(duì)題干中的要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行篩選并捋順后，再設(shè)想一下如何解釋才行。篩選捋順：本來應(yīng)該到汽車站接你的，(因?yàn)槭裁丛?；結(jié)果你生氣了；作出保證。【句式拓展】原句：Iamwritingtoconveymysincereapologytoyoufornotbeingpunctualyesterday.拓展：IamwritingtoconveymysincereapologytoyoubecauseIwasnotpunctualyesterday.【亮點(diǎn)句型】1.ButsocarelesswasIthatIforgottotakethebusytrafficintoconsideration.(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句和倒裝句，即表語前置時(shí)，用倒裝)2.Again,Iamexcessivelysorryaboutwhathavehappened.(運(yùn)用了what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句)9.（高三模擬題精選）假設(shè)你是高二學(xué)生陳偉，昨天，你和你的外籍同桌Bob關(guān)于用集體班費(fèi)給災(zāi)區(qū)捐款這一問題發(fā)生了一些小爭執(zhí)，請(qǐng)你按照以下要求給他寫一封道歉信。內(nèi)容包括：1.表達(dá)自己的歉意；2.闡述道歉的原因(至少2條)；3.表達(dá)自己的友好之情，提倡(advocate)相互理解、相互尊重。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右。2.文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校和本人姓名。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】DearBob,Iamwritingtoexpressmyregretattheunpleasantargumentbetweenusyesterday.IfeltsosorryforwhatIdidandsaidyesterday.Idonatedallthemoneytothestudentsinthefloodedareawithoutdiscussingtheplanwithyou.Icouldhavedealtwithitdifferently.ButwhenIhandedinthemoney,youhappenedtobeawayfromschoolandlaterIdidn’texplainittoyouinanappropriateway.Whatwasworse,Isaidthatyoudidn'tcareaboutthecollection,whichhurtyousomuch.NowIwanttotakebackwhatIsaid.Pleaseacceptmyapologyforbeingsoimpulsiveyesterday,andI’dlikeyoutotrytounderstandmysituation.Ihopeourfriendshipwilllastlong.Yours,ChenWei【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文之道歉信寫作。要求考生給同桌Bob寫一封道歉信，表達(dá)歉意，闡述道歉原因并表達(dá)友好之情。同上題一樣，本篇書面表達(dá)的題干所給的信息足夠的多，但是跟上題所不同的是本篇書面表達(dá)所要表達(dá)內(nèi)容的順序題干已經(jīng)給出：1.表達(dá)自己的歉意；2.闡述道歉的原因(至少2條)；3.表達(dá)自己的友好之情，提倡(advocate)相互理解、相互尊重。所以考生只需要篩選一下要點(diǎn)。重點(diǎn)是設(shè)想道歉的原因(至少2條)?！揪涫酵卣埂吭洌篜leaseacceptmyapologyforbeingsoimpulsiveyesterday.拓展：Pleaseacceptmyapology,forIwassoimpulsiveyesterday.【亮點(diǎn)句型】1.Icouldhavedealtwithitdifferently.(couldhavedone，運(yùn)用了虛擬語氣)2.Whatwasworse,Isaidthatyoudidn'tcareaboutthecollection,whichhurtyousomuch.(綜合運(yùn)用狀語從句、賓語從句和非限制性定語從句)10.（高三模擬題精選）假定你是校英語社社長李華，原定于下周舉行的英語戲劇比賽因故推遲，請(qǐng)給擔(dān)任評(píng)委的外教Mr.Johnson寫封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示歉意；2.推遲原因及后續(xù)調(diào)整。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)在80左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearMr.Johnson,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【參考范文】DearJohnson,Withuttersincerity,I’mwritingtoextendmyapologyforthepostponementoftheEnglishDramaPerformanceCompetition,whichotherwisewouldbeheldnextFriday.Outofourexpectations,alectureofvitalimportancewillfallonnextFriday,whichunavoidablyconflictswithourinitialarrangement,makingmanycompetitorsunavailabletothecontest.Therefore,thecontesthastobeputofftonextSundaynight.Woulditbeconvenientforyou?Iapologizeagainforanyinconvenienceitmaybringtoyouandyourundersta