G4（南師附中、無錫天一、南通海安、海門四校）高三上學期12月聯(lián)考英語試題閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的故事。

Inmycommunity,there’samuch-lovedstreetcleanernamedPaulSpiery.Since2017,the63-year-oldhasbeendutifullycleaningourstreets.Ashesweeps,healwayssingsalongwiththemelodioustunesofElvisPresley(貓王).Paul’sbeautifulvoicefloatsintheair,addingauniquecharmtoourcommunity.

Paulhasdevelopeddeepandgenuinefriendshipswithmanyofuslocals.I’mhisbestfriendaswebothloveElvis’songs.Wheneverweexpressourgratitudetohim,healwayssmilesbrightlyandsayshe’sjustdoinghisjob.Hispresencehasnotonlykeptourroadscleanbutalsoliftedoutspirits.

We,theneighbours,weredeeplytouchedbyPaul’shardworkandpositiveattitude.Sowedecidedtocometogethertogivehimaspecialgift.Wemanagedtoraiseover3,000tosendhimonaholidaytoPortugalaplacehehadalwaysdreamedofrevisitingsincehehadonlybeenabroadonce,andthatwastoPortugal.

However,ourkindplanencounteredabigproblem.Paul’semployer,awastemanagementcompany,statedthatemployeescouldn’treceiveanygiftsintheformofmoneyotherthantheirregularsalaryaccordingtostrictcorporaterules.Atthisnews,Paulsaid,“Well,rulesarerules.It’sokay.I’mgratefulforwhateveryonehastriedtodoforme."Hecontinuedtosweepthefloor,hummingasongofElvisPresleyasusual.

WewerealldisappointedthatPaulcouldn’tenjoythiswell-deservedholidayasarewardforallhishardworkforourcommunityanddeterminedtofindaproperwaytorecognizePaul.

IpostedPaul’sstoryonsocialmedia,“Givinghimthisincrediblegiftwouldbeaheartfeltwaytoshowourappreciationforeverythinghedoes.Let’scometogethertomakethisdreamhappenforsomeonewhotrulydeservesit.”Thepostwentviralandcaughttheattentionofapackageholidaycompany,OnTheBeach.

ThemanagerofOnTheBeachgotintouchwithme,andputforwardaproperwaytorecognizePaul.

注意：

1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。

OnTheBeachannouncedonlinethatitwastoholdaspecialsingingcompetition.

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ToPaul’srelief,thewastemanagementcompanyhadnoobjectiontohimacceptingthewin.

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文章大意：

在社區(qū)備受愛戴的63歲街道清潔工保羅，清掃時愛哼唱貓王歌曲，與居民情誼深厚。居民感恩其付出，眾籌3000多英鎊想送他去葡萄牙度假，卻因公司規(guī)定員工不能收受金錢形式禮物受阻。保羅坦然接受，居民未放棄，“我"將故事發(fā)網(wǎng)上后引發(fā)關(guān)注，度假公司OnTheBeach介入，提出特別方式幫助實現(xiàn)大家心愿。

故事山分析：

開端：保羅多年如一日清掃街道并哼唱歌曲，與居民交好，展現(xiàn)溫馨日常場景，引出人物與背景。

發(fā)展：居民感恩策劃送度假禮物，體現(xiàn)社區(qū)溫情，推動情節(jié)發(fā)展。

高潮：公司規(guī)則打破原計劃，制造沖突與懸念。

低谷：保羅雖失落仍堅守崗位，凸顯其豁達，情緒短暫下沉。

回升：網(wǎng)上發(fā)帖引度假公司關(guān)注，帶來轉(zhuǎn)機，情節(jié)轉(zhuǎn)折上揚。

伏筆及續(xù)寫中的回應：

伏筆：保羅愛唱貓王歌曲，“Ashesweeps,healwayssingsalongwiththemelodioustunesofElvisPresley.”，為后續(xù)唱歌比賽做鋪墊。

回應：續(xù)寫中度假公司舉辦以貓王歌曲為主題的比賽，保羅憑此優(yōu)勢參賽有望獲獎。

伏筆：保羅僅去過一次國外即葡萄牙，“aplacehehadalwaysdreamedofrevisitingsincehehadonlybeenabroadonce,andthatwastoPortugal.”，明確其向往之地。

回應：比賽獎品設定為葡萄牙度假套餐，精準契合保羅心愿。

伏筆：公司嚴格規(guī)定員工不能收受金錢禮物，“Paul’semployer,awastemanagementcompany,statedthatemployeescouldn’treceiveanygiftsintheformofmoneyotherthantheirregularsalaryaccordingtostrictcorporaterules.”，制造情節(jié)阻礙。

回應：度假公司另辟蹊徑，以比賽獲勝形式讓保羅合規(guī)獲獎，化解矛盾。

伏筆：“我"與保羅因共同喜愛貓王歌曲成為好友，“I’mhisbestfriendaswebothloveElvis’songs.”，暗示“我"助力的合理性。

回應：“我”在網(wǎng)上發(fā)帖推動故事發(fā)展，利用社交力量幫保羅，源于友誼且順理成章。

伏筆：保羅平日積極樂觀，面對禮物受阻坦然處之，“Hecontinuedtosweepthefloor,hummingasongofElvisPresleyasusual.”，刻畫性格特點。

回應：后續(xù)即使參賽有壓力，他也保持狀態(tài)，最終收獲美好，性格促使其迎來人生小高峰。

續(xù)寫要點：

第一段：

詳細描述唱歌比賽的籌備過程，包括場地布置、宣傳推廣等，展現(xiàn)社區(qū)對此次活動的重視。

例如：Thecommunitycenterwasquicklytransformedintoamakeshiftconcerthall.ColorfulbannerswithElvis’portraitshungeverywhere,andaprofessionalsoundsystemwasinstalled.Volunteersspreadthewordthroughflyersandsocialmedia,attractingcontestantsfromallcornersoftheneighborhood.

突出比賽當日的熱烈氛圍，保羅的精彩表現(xiàn)及競爭對手的實力，增強故事緊張感與可讀性。

像：Onthebigday,theplacewaspacked.Contestantsoneafteranothertookthestage,beltingoutclassicElvisnumbers.Paul,inhisneatlypresseduniform,steppeduplast.Hisvoice,richandresonant,sentshiversdownthespinesoftheaudience.Buttheotherswerenosloucheseither,makingitanail-bitingcompetition.

第二段：

講述保羅得知公司同意后的反應，包括內(nèi)心的激動、對眾人的感謝表達等細節(jié)，將情感推向高潮。

比如：WhenPaulgotthegreenlightfromthewastemanagementcompany,hebrokedownintearsofjoy.Heimmediatelycalledeachandeveryneighborwhohadsupportedhim,hisvoicechokedwithgratitude.Atthesend-offpartybeforehistrip,hegaveaheartfeltspeech,vowingtocomebackandcontinueservingthecommunityevenbetter.

描繪保羅度假歸來后的變化，如工作態(tài)度更加積極，社區(qū)凝聚力更強，升華故事主題。

示例：AfterhiswonderfulvacationinPortugal,Paulreturnedwithasun-kissedglowandrenewedspirit.Hesweptthestreetswithabeamingsmile,hissinginglouderandmoreenergeticthanever.Thecommunity,too,feltanewsenseofunity,boundbythesharedexperienceofmakingsomeone’sdreamcometrue.

情感線：

起初，居民對保羅心懷感恩與喜愛，積極籌備禮物，滿是期待；遇公司規(guī)則阻礙時，大家沮喪失望；保羅雖失落卻樂觀堅守，令人心疼又敬佩；網(wǎng)上求助引發(fā)關(guān)注后重燃希望；比賽過程緊張，眾人情緒隨選手表現(xiàn)起伏；最終保羅獲獎、公司同意，喜悅與欣慰充斥，度假歸來更讓社區(qū)情感升溫，從個人感恩升華為集體凝聚力，溫暖貫穿始終。

故事線：

保羅多年清掃街道，哼唱貓王歌曲，與居民結(jié)下情誼。

居民感恩，眾籌資金想送保羅去葡萄牙度假。

公司規(guī)定致禮物計劃泡湯，保羅坦然接受。

“我”網(wǎng)上發(fā)帖求助，引發(fā)度假公司關(guān)注。

度假公司辦唱歌比賽，保羅參賽。

保羅獲獎，公司同意，度假歸來更添社區(qū)溫情。

主旨升華句：

Truekindnessknowsnobounds;itcanbreakthroughthetoughestofrulesandmaketheimpossiblepossible,justastheneighborsdidforPaul.（真正的善良沒有界限，它能沖破最嚴苛的規(guī)則，讓不可能成為可能，就像鄰居們?yōu)楸Ａ_所做的那樣。）

Inthefaceofobstacles,thepowerofacommunityunitedbyloveandgratitudecancreatemiracles,turningdisappointmentintodelightforsomeoneworthy.（面對阻礙，一個因愛與感恩而團結(jié)的社區(qū)力量能創(chuàng)造奇跡，將失望轉(zhuǎn)化為值得之人的喜悅。）

Sometimes,thesimplestactsofappreciation,likeasongoraholiday,canlightupaperson’slifeandripplethroughawholecommunity,spreadingwarmthandhope.（有時，像一首歌或一次度假這樣最簡單的感恩之舉，能點亮一個人的生活，并在整個社區(qū)泛起漣漪，傳播溫暖與希望。）

Adreamdeferreddoesn’tmeanadreamdenied;withperseveranceandthesupportofothers,itcantakeflightagain,asPaul’sjourneytoPortugalproved.（夢想被推遲并不意味著夢想被否定；有了毅力和他人的支持，它可以再次起航，正如保羅的葡萄牙之旅所證明的那樣。）

ThestoryofPaulandhiscommunityshowsthatnomatterhowhumbleone’sjob,whenfilledwithpassionandkindness,itcaninspireawholeneighborhoodtocometogetherandrewritesomeone’sstory.（保羅和他社區(qū)的故事表明，無論一個人的工作多么平凡，只要充滿熱情和善良，它就能激勵整個社區(qū)團結(jié)起來，改寫某人的故事。）

寫作示范兩篇：

第一篇：

OnTheBeachannouncedonlinethatitwastoholdaspecialsingingcompetition.Therulesweresimple:singanElvisPresleysongandwinadreamholidaytoPortugal.Wordspreadquickly,andsoonthecommunitywasabuzzwithexcitement.Thelocalparkwaschosenasthevenue,andvolunteersworkedtirelesslytosetupthestage,completewithbrightlightsandastate-of-the-artsoundsystem.Onthedayofthecompetition,contestantsofallagesgathered,eachhopingtogivePaulachanceathisdream.Paul,lookingabitnervousbutdetermined,tookthestage.Hisvoice,whichhadsooftencharmedtheneighborhood,nowsoaredthroughthepark,captivatingeveryone.Theothersingerswerestrong,butPaul’spassionwaspalpable.

ToPaul’srelief,thewastemanagementcompanyhadnoobjectiontohimacceptingthewin.Whenthejudgesdeclaredhimthewinner,thecrowdwentwild.Paulstoodthere,tearsstreamingdownhisface,unabletobelievehisluck.Hethankedeveryone,hisvoicecrackingwithemotion.BeforeleavingforPortugal,hevisitedeachneighbor,expressinghisgratitude.Whileonvacation,hesentpostcardsandpictures,sharinghisjoy.Whenhereturned,hewasachangedman.Hisworkhadnewmeaning,andhesanglouderthanever,knowingthathiscommunityhadhisback.Thecommunity,too,wascloserthanever,boundbytheloveandkindnessshowntoPaul.

第二篇：

OnTheBeachannouncedonlinethatitwastoholdaspecialsingingcompetition.ItwasanopeninvitationtoallwholovedElvisandwantedtohelpPaul.ThelocalschoolauditoriumwasdeckedoutwithElvismemorabilia,fromposterstolife-sizecutouts.Flyersweredistributed,andsocialmediawasfloodedwithpostsabouttheevent.Contestantssignedupindroves,eagertobepartofthisheartwarmingendeavor.Onthedayoftheevent,theatmospherewaselectric.Paul,dressedinhisbest,steppedontothestage.HisrenditionofanElvisclassicwasflawless,hisvoiceechoingthroughthehall.Thecompetitionwasfierce,butPaul’sconnectiontothemusicandhiscommunitysethimapart.

ToPaul’srelief,thewastemanagementcompanyhadnoobjectiontohimacceptingthewin.Paulwasoverjoyed.Hehuggedhisneighbors,hiseyesfilledwithtearsofgratitude.Attheairport,beforeboarding,hepromisedtobringbackmemoriesandsouvenirs.WhileinPortugal,heexploredeverycorner,hisfacebeaminginthephotoshesentback.Uponhisreturn,heresumedhisdutieswitharenewedsenseofpurpose.Thecommunitywitnessedhistransformationandfeltasenseofpride.ThisactofkindnesshadnotonlygivenPaulaholidaybuthadstrengthenedthebondsofthecommunity,provingthatalittlelovecangoalongway.

讀后續(xù)寫參考范文（滿分25分）

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