考向50應(yīng)用文寫作之咨詢信和推薦信咨詢信【寫作示例】假定你是李華,打算今年暑假去美國旅游。請你給TravelAmerica國際旅行社寫一封電子郵件進行咨詢,內(nèi)容如下:1.請其推薦合適的旅游路線;2.請其告知相關(guān)的旅游費用。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫。DearSir/Madam,

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【考場審題】Step1:精準審題謀篇布局人稱第一人稱(I),第二人稱(you)時態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時段落布局開頭點題:說明寫信目的主體段落:說明需要咨詢的內(nèi)容結(jié)尾:期待對方的回信Step2:頭腦風(fēng)暴字字珠玉(1)美詞:inquire,recommend,inaddition,intend,appreciate(2)佳句:①IintendtostayinAmericaforabout10days,duringwhichIhopetohavealookatsomeuniquenaturalsceneryandhaveatasteoflocalcustoms.②Inaddition,I’dliketoknowthepricesoftheroutes,coveringallthetravelingexpenses.Step3:斟酌詞句妙筆生花要點1:我打算在美國住10天左右,希望能看一看那些獨特的自然風(fēng)景,品味一下當(dāng)?shù)氐娘L(fēng)俗。一般表達:IintendtostayinAmericaforabout10days,andIhopetohavealookatsomeuniquenaturalsceneryandhaveatasteoflocalcustoms.

句式升級(定語從句)IintendtostayinAmericaforabout10days,duringwhichIhopetohavealookatsomeuniquenaturalsceneryandhaveatasteoflocalcustoms.

要點2:除此之外,我想了解包括所有旅行費用的路線的價格。一般表達:Inaddition,I’dliketoknowthepricesoftheroutes,andallthetravelingexpenses.句式升級(分詞短語作定語)Inaddition,I’dliketoknowthepricesoftheroutes,coveringallthetravelingexpenses.

Step4:銜接過渡斐然成篇【參考范文】DearSir/Madam,I’mplanningtotraveltotheUSAinthecomingJuly.Therefore,I’mwritingtoinquireabouttravelroutesofyouragency.IintendtostayinAmericaforabout10days,duringwhichIhopetohavealookatsomeuniquenaturalsceneryandhaveatasteoflocalcustoms.So,couldyoupleaserecommendsomesuitabletravelroutes?Inaddition,I’dliketoknowthepricesoftheroutes,coveringallthetravelingexpenses.Areplyatyourearliestconvenienceishighlyappreciated.Yours,LiHua推薦信【寫作示例】假定你是李華。你的美國網(wǎng)友David看完電影《哪吒之魔童降世》海外版后非常喜歡,寫信想請你再推薦一部中國電影。請你根據(jù)以下要點給他回信:1.表示高興;2.推薦一部電影;3.推薦的理由(至少兩條)。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫?！究紙鰧忣}】Step1:精準審題謀篇布局人稱第一人稱(I),第二人稱(you)時態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時;一般將來時段落布局開頭點題:說明寫信目的主體段落:推薦的電影和推薦的理由結(jié)尾:表達希望Step2:頭腦風(fēng)暴字字珠玉(1)美詞:delighted,fascinated,havemuchincommonwith,appealtosb.,additionally,perfectly(2)佳句:①I’mdelightedtoknowyou’refascinatedbytheChinesefilm,NeZha.②Thisanimatedfilm,whichisalsobasedonclassicChinesefairytales,hasmuchincommonwithNeZha.Step3:斟酌詞句妙筆生花要點1:我很高興知道你對中國電影《哪吒之魔童降世》感興趣。一般表達:Iamgladtoknowyou’reinterestedintheChinesefilm,NeZha.句式升級(高級詞匯,被動語態(tài))I’mdelightedtoknowyou’refascinatedbytheChinesefilm,NeZha.要點2:這部電影也是以神話故事為基礎(chǔ),和哪吒有許多相似之處。一般表達:ThisanimatedfilmisalsobasedonclassicChinesefairytales,andhasmuchincommonwithNeZha.

句式升級(定語從句)Thisanimatedfilm,whichisalsobasedonclassicChinesefairytales,hasmuchincommonwithNeZha.

Step4:銜接過渡斐然成篇【參考范文】DearDavid,I’mdelightedtoknowyou’refascinatedbytheChinesefilm,NeZha.AndI’mperfectlywillingtorecommendanotherimpressiveChinesemovieatyourrequest.SinceIknowanimatedfilmsareyourfavorites,youcan’tmissMonkeyKing:HeroIsBack.Thisanimatedfilm,whichisalsobasedonclassicChinesefairytales,hasmuchincommonwithNeZha,soIthinkit’llappealtoyou.Additionally,MonkeyKingandNezhaarebothregardedasheroesbyChinesepeople.Throughmovies,youwillgetabetterunderstandingofChineseculture.Ihopeyou’llfindthemoviewellworthseeing.Yours,LiHua【檢測訓(xùn)練】1．假設(shè)你是美國紐約市的一名高中生Chris,打算暑假來天津?qū)W習(xí)漢語，來信向你在天津一中的筆友李津咨詢他們學(xué)校的國際班漢語課程。請你根據(jù)以下提示給李津?qū)懸环庾稍冃?。?nèi)容要點：1.想學(xué)漢語的原因（中國文化；個人發(fā)展……）2.咨詢國際班漢語課程的情況（班級大?。皇欠駛?cè)重聽說；能不中國學(xué)生交流）3.詢問是否提供食宿。注意：（1）詞數(shù)不少于100；（2）可適當(dāng)加入細節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實，行文連貫；（3）開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearliJin,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YoursChris2．假設(shè)你是李華，你想?yún)⒓觿虼髮W(xué)（UniversityofCambridge）的夏令營活動。請寫封信向夏令營負責(zé)人Smith教授咨詢相關(guān)事宜，要點如下：1、表達你的意愿；2、咨詢相關(guān)事宜。注意：1、詞數(shù)100左右；2、可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearMr.Smith,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua3．假定你是高三學(xué)生李華。隨著高考的臨近，你感到學(xué)習(xí)壓力越來越大。晚上經(jīng)常失眠，上課精力不集中，學(xué)習(xí)效率低下,現(xiàn)在對備考復(fù)習(xí)很茫然。你寫信給心理學(xué)家Dr.Bloom,咨詢解決問題的方法。內(nèi)容包括：1.寫信目的；2.咨詢內(nèi)容；3.期待回復(fù)。DearDr.Bloom,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YoursSincerely,LiHua4．假定你是李華，你的英國朋友Peter打算這個寒假來中國旅游，讓你推薦個城市，你想推薦杭州作為他旅游行程的首選。請用英語給他寫封推薦信，內(nèi)容包括：1.推薦城市；2.推薦理由；3.你的祝愿。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．假如你是學(xué)生會主席李華，學(xué)校安排你給即將到你校任教的外教Martin推薦一名學(xué)生助手，請根據(jù)以下要點給他寫封推薦信。1.歡迎Martin的到來，推薦WangPeng同學(xué)當(dāng)助手(assistant)2.推薦的理由（溝通能力；熱心助人；英語水平等）3.美好祝愿。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．假設(shè)你是李華，你的外國朋友Tom的中文取得很大的進步，且對中國文學(xué)有著深厚的興趣，他想買一本書，請你寫一封e-mail，向他推薦一本書，并寫出推薦的理由。內(nèi)容包括：1.