2025年小學英語畢業(yè)考試模擬試卷：英語寫作能力提升與思路拓展練習題考試時間：______分鐘總分：______分姓名：______寫作部分directions:pleasereadthefollowingsituationscarefullyandwriteashortpassageinEnglishaccordingtotheinstructions.Yourpassageshouldbenolessthan60words.Situation1:ImagineyouareLiHua.Yourpenpal,Tom,livesinCanada.HeoftenwritestoyouandasksaboutChinesefestivals.YoudecidetowritehimbackandtellhimabouttheSpringFestival,China'smostimportantfestival.Explainwhenitis,whatpeopleusuallydoduringthefestival(suchashaveabigmeal,giveredenvelopes,setofffireworks),andhowyoufeelaboutit.Situation2:Youandyourfriendsarediscussingyourfavoritehobbies.LiMinglikesplayingbasketballafterschool.WangWeienjoysreadingbooksinhissparetime.Whatisyourfavoritehobby?Writeaboutit.Telluswhyyoulikeitandhowoftenyoudoit.Also,mentionifyouhaveafriendwhosharesthishobbywithyou.SituationalWritingdirections:pleasereadthefollowingsituationandwriteashortpassageinEnglishaccordingtotheinstructions.Yourpassageshouldbenolessthan60words.Situation:SupposeyourschoolisgoingtoholdanEnglishspeechcontestnextmonth.Youareveryinterestedinitbutyouarenotverygoodatpublicspeaking.WriteashortlettertoyourschoolEnglishteacher,Mr.Smith.Inyourletter,youshould:1.Expressyourinterestinjoiningthecontest.2.TellMr.Smithyourmainconcern(e.g.,fearofmakingmistakes).3.Askforhisadviceorhelponhowtoprepareforthecontest.試卷答案寫作部分Situation1:DearTom,I'mverygladtowritetoyouabouttheSpringFestival,themostimportantfestivalinChina.ItusuallyhappensinlateJanuaryorearlyFebruaryaccordingtotheChineselunarcalendar.Duringthefestival,ourfamilyalwaysgetstogetherforabigdinner.Wewearnewclothesandgiveredenvelopeswithmoneytotheyoungones.Intheevening,wesetoffcolorfulfireworksandwatchtheSpringFestivalGalaonTV.IthinktheSpringFestivalisveryhappyandmeaningful.Situation2:Myfavoritehobbyisplayingthepiano.IstartedlearningitthreeyearsagoandIloveitverymuch.Iusuallypracticeforonehoureveryday,usuallyintheafternoonafterschool.It'sveryrelaxingtoplaypiano.Myfriend,ChenXiaoyu,alsolikesplayingthepiano.Weoftenplaytogetherandgiveeachotheradviceonhowtoimprove.Playingthepianohelpsmefeelcalmandhappy.SituationalWritingDearMr.Smith,IamwritingtoexpressmygreatinterestinjoiningtheEnglishspeechcontesttobeheldnextmonth.Ireallywanttoparticipateinit.However,IamalittleworriedbecauseI'mnotverygoodatpublicspeaking.MymainconcernisthatImightmakemistakeswhilespeakinginfrontofmanypeopleandgetnervous.Iwouldbeverygratefulifyoucouldgivemesomeadviceorhelponhowtoprepareforthecontest.Maybeyoucouldsuggestsomeusefulexercisesorsharesomeexperiencewithme.Ibelievewithyourguidance,Icanovercomemyfearandmakeagoodspeech.Thankyouforyourtimeandconsideration.Yours,LiHua每道題解析思路Situation1:*解析思路：1.審題：明確寫信對象（Tom）、主題（介紹春節(jié)）、身份（LiHua）。要求包含時間、活動、感受，且不少于60詞。2.構(gòu)思：按照春節(jié)的時間、慶?；顒雍透惺苋齻€要點來構(gòu)思段落。時間點明是農(nóng)歷；活動突出家庭團聚、穿新衣、發(fā)紅包、放煙花等；感受表達節(jié)日快樂和意義。3.寫作：使用恰當?shù)木湫兔枋鰰r間（"Itusuallyhappensin..."）、活動（"Duringthefestival,...""Wealways...""Intheevening..."）、感受（"Ithink..."）。注意使用連接詞（"and","During","Intheevening","So"）使段落連貫。4.檢查：檢查時態(tài)、詞匯、語法、句子結(jié)構(gòu)和書寫是否規(guī)范，確保字數(shù)達標。Situation2:*解析思路：1.審題：明確寫作對象（假設(shè)讀者）、主題（介紹自己的愛好）、要求（說明愛好是什么、為什么喜歡、多久一次、是否有同伴）。2.構(gòu)思：圍繞“愛好”這一核心，分點構(gòu)思：①愛好是什么（彈鋼琴）；②何時進行（每天下午放學后）；③頻率（一小時）；④原因（喜歡、放松）；⑤關(guān)聯(lián)（朋友也喜歡、一起練習）。3.寫作：使用簡單句和稍復雜的從句（"Istartedlearningitthreeyearsago"）來描述。先點明愛好（"Myfavoritehobbyis..."），再按時間順序或邏輯順序介紹細節(jié)（"Iusuallypracticefor...""It'sveryrelaxing...""Myfriend..."）。使用連接詞（"and","but","because","also"）。4.檢查：檢查時態(tài)（一般現(xiàn)在時描述習慣）、主謂一致、詞匯準確性、句子連貫性和書寫。SituationalWriting*解析思路：1.審題：明確寫信對象（Mr.Smith）、文體（書信）、身份（LiHua）、目的（表達參賽意愿、提出擔憂、請求建議）。要求涵蓋三個要點，不少于60詞。2.構(gòu)思：按照書信格式，分段構(gòu)思：①段：表達參賽意愿和稍顯的擔憂；②段：具體說明擔憂（緊張、怕犯錯）；③段：明確提出請求（給建議或幫助），并表達感謝。3.寫作：使用書信常規(guī)開頭（"DearMr.Smith,..."）和結(jié)尾（"Yours,""LiHua"）。正文分段清晰：第一段說