2025年小學英語畢業(yè)考試寫作模擬試卷：拓展寫作思路方法試題型考試時間：______分鐘總分：______分姓名：______Part1:WritingPracticeImagineyouareatouristvisitingacityforthefirsttime.Writeashortparagraph(about60words)describingthecity.Includeinformationabout:1.Whatyouseethatimpressesyou(e.g.,buildings,parks,people).2.Howyoufeelaboutthecity(e.g.,excited,surprised,happy).3.Onethingyouwanttodoorvisitnext.Part2:ReadingandWritingReadthefollowingshortstoryandthenwritearesponse(about80words).TheLostKittenSamanthawaswalkinghomefromschoolwhenshesawasmall,blackkittensittingaloneunderatree.Itlookedhungryandscared.Samanthagentlypickedupthekittenandcarriedithome.Shegavethekittensomemilkandfood.Thenextday,Samanthaputupa"Found"posterwithapictureofthekitten.Shehopeditsownerwouldfindit.Intheevening,aworriedwomancametoherhouse.Thewomansaid,"That'smykitten!Thankyousomuch!"Samanthasmiledandfelthappyshecouldhelp.Writeyourresponse.Youcananswerthefollowingquestionsorwriteaboutyourownideas:1.HowdidSamanthafeelwhenshesawthekitten?2.WhatdidSamanthadotohelpthekitten?3.Howdoyouthinkthewomanfeltwhenshefoundherkitten?Part3:CreativeWritingThinkaboutyourfavoriteseason.Itcanbespring,summer,autumn,orwinter.Writeashortstory(about100words)aboutsomethingspecialthathappensduringthatseason.Include:1.Theseasonandtheweather.2.Whereyouareorwhatyouaredoing.3.Ahappyorinterestingeventthatoccurs.Part4:PersonalLetterWriteashortletter(about70words)toyourpenpal.Tellyourpenpalabout:1.Yourfavoritehobbyoractivity.2.Whyyoulikeit.3.Somethingnewyouwanttotryrelatedtothishobby.Beginyourletterwith"DearPenPal,"andendwith"Yourfriend,".試卷答案Part1:WritingPractice(SampleAnswer)IvisitedLondonforthefirsttime.Iwassurprisedbythebig,oldbuildingsandthebusystreets.Thepeoplewerefriendly,andIsawabeautifulparkwithmanytrees.Ifeltveryexcitedexploringthecity.Next,IwanttovisitthefamousTowerBridgeandseetheriver.解析思路：此題考察學生運用簡單句型描述所見所感的能力。解析思路在于：1）識別題目要求的三點內(nèi)容；2）回憶或構思與“第一次游覽城市”相關的簡單場景詞匯（如：buildings,streets,park,trees）；3）運用基本的形容詞（surprised,big,old,busy,friendly,beautiful）和情感詞匯（excited）進行描述；4）確保句子結構簡單、語法正確（如使用be動詞、現(xiàn)在進行時等），并達到字數(shù)要求。重點在于清晰表達觀察到的景象和個人的直接感受。Part2:ReadingandWriting(SampleAnswer)Samanthafeltsorryforthekittenwhenshesawitaloneunderthetree.Shewaskindandhelpedthekittenbygivingitmilkandfood.Ithinkthewomanfeltveryhappyandrelievedwhenshefoundherkitten.Samantha'sactionswerenice,andshehelpedsomeonefindwhatbelongstothem.解析思路：此題考察學生閱讀理解能力和基于文本進行簡單推理與表達的能力。解析思路在于：1）快速閱讀并抓住故事關鍵信息（看到小貓、喂食、張貼海報、找到主人）；2）針對問題，定位到相應的文本細節(jié)（Samantha的感覺、Samantha的行為、女人的感受）；3）運用簡單的從句或并列句結構（如whenshesaw,andshegave,becauseshehelped）組織答案，確保信息點與問題一一對應；4）使用恰當?shù)男稳菰~和情感詞匯（sorry,kind,happy,relieved）來描述人物情緒；5）注意句子流暢性和語法準確性，避免過度引申原文信息。Part3:CreativeWriting(SampleAnswer)Myfavoriteseasoniswinter.Theweatheriscold,anditoftensnowswhereIlive.Lastwinter,Iwasbuildingasnowmanwithmyfamilyinthebackyard.Werolledabigsnowballforitsbodyandsmalleronesforitshead.Weusedacarrotforitsnoseandbuttonsmadeofpebbles.Itwasveryfun,andwespentthewholeafternoonplayinginthesnow.Ilovethefeelingofwinter.解析思路：此題考察學生的想象力、敘事能力和細節(jié)描寫能力。解析思路在于：1）明確選擇一個自己熟悉的季節(jié)并構思一個相關的小故事；2）圍繞“季節(jié)”、“地點/活動”、“特殊事件”三點展開，選擇一個具體場景（如堆雪人）；3）運用感官細節(jié)（視覺：雪、雪人；動作：rolling,using,playing；感覺：cold,fun）來豐富內(nèi)容；4）使用時間狀語（Lastwinter,allafternoon）和連接詞（and,but）來組織段落結構，使故事連貫；5）確保故事邏輯合理，情感表達積極，并控制字數(shù)在要求范圍內(nèi)。Part4:PersonalLetter(SampleAnswer)DearPenPal,Myfavoritehobbyisdrawing.Ilovedrawingbecauseitisfun,andIcancreateanythingIimagineonpaper.Recently,Istartedlearninghowtodrawcartooncharacters.Theyareverycuteandfunny.Iwanttotrydrawingabeautifullandscapenext,likeamountainwithalakeandtrees.Yourfriend,[YourName]解析思路：此題考察學生寫私人信件的基本格式、表達個人喜好和計劃的能力。解析思路在于：1）遵循書信格式，包括稱呼、正文、結尾敬語和簽名；2）直接回答題目要求的三