PAGE1Unit5WhataDeliciousMeal!單元寫作精練寫作主題識寫作主題識本單元的寫作是圍繞著“食物制作”這一話題展開，涉及“飲食與健康”。寫作內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生通過使用制作食物的常用句型介紹某種食物的制作過程，包括所需要的食材、制作步驟和注意事項(xiàng)等，能恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂庙樞蜻B接詞連貫文章。人稱多用第二人稱，時態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時。相關(guān)話題寫作素材有：詞匯Ingredients:apple,banana,egg,tomato,sugar,salt,milk,oil，chicken，beef，flourActions:wash,cut,mix,peel,stir,add,pour,chop，heat,turnon/off,cook,fly,taste,serve,enjoyAdjectives:fresh,sweet,tasty,cold,soft短語washcarefully,forabout...minutes,cutintosmallpieces,add...to...,o...,put...on...,mixwell/together,putinthefridge,overlow/medium/highheat用小火/中火/大火,acup/spoon/teaspoon/tablespoonof...句型①First/Firstly,youneedto...the...togetitready.②After...,it’stimeto③Finally/Intheend,④Ittastesbestwhen...⑤Thenextstepisto...⑥It'stimeto...⑦M(jìn)akesurethepanishot...⑧...shouldbecookeduntilsoft...⑨Makesureto..forabout...sothat⑩Thesecrettomakingitdeliciousisto?Whenyousee...,youknowit’salmostdone.名言①Goodfoodisgoodmood.(Deliciousfoodbringshappiness.)美食能帶來好心情。②Youcan’tmakebreadwithoutflour.無米不成炊。寫作寫作步驟懂一、Before-writing1.ChooseasimpledishPickadishyouknowwellandiseasytomake(e.g.fruitsalad,scrambledeggswithtomatoes,milkpudding).Avoidcomplexoneswithtoomanysteps!2.Listbasicinformation①Ingredients:Writedownwhatyouneed(e.g.3apples,2spoonsofhoney,1cupofyogurt).②Tools:Notetoolslikeaknife,bowl,orpan.③Steps:Thinkabouttheorder.Ask:WhatdoIdofirst?Then?Finally?3.搭建寫作框架Beginning引出食物:清晰說明你要介紹的是什么食物。簡單說明為什么選它（簡單、美味、受歡迎、健康、有文化意義等）。點(diǎn)明主題:表明你將介紹它的制作過程。Let

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祈使句）2．提示：為培育時代新人，新時代勞動教育又回到學(xué)校教育中。勞動教育鼓勵中學(xué)生要掌握一定的生活技能，其中炒菜做飯不僅能使我們提高生活自理能力，還能增強(qiáng)我們的家庭責(zé)任意識。請以“AnExperiencetoMake________”為題，用英語寫一篇短文，介紹一次你制作一道美食的經(jīng)歷及感受。要求：1.請先將題目補(bǔ)全后，再作答；2.語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于70個；3.文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)；4.請將短文寫在答題卡上，寫在本試題卷上無效。AnExperiencetoMake__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文AnExperiencetoMakeScrambledEggsandTomatoesAttheclassmeeting,wewereaskedtomakeadishforourparentsafterschool.Seeingthevegetablesinthekitchen,Ichosetocookthescrambledeggsandtomatoes.Afterwatchingthevideoonhowtocookit,Istarted.Unfortunately,itburnedandIfailed.ItwasatthatmomentthatIrealizedifIdidn’taddenoughoil,theeggswouldbeeasilystucktothepanandbeburnt.Changingtheway,Isucceededintheend.Aftermyparentssawmydish,theyweresomovedandhappythattheyateitup.Throughthisexperience,Ilearnedthatlabourcannotonlybeameaningfulthingbutalsomakemefeelsatisfiedandhappy.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話題作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般過去時”；③提示：根據(jù)題干要求介紹自己制作一道美食的經(jīng)歷，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，完整表述內(nèi)容。[寫作步驟]第一步，補(bǔ)全題目；第二步，具體介紹是如何做這道菜的；第三步，書寫結(jié)語，表達(dá)自己的收獲。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①choosetodo選擇做某事②intheend在最后③ateitup吃光[高分句型]①ItwasatthatmomentthatIrealizedifIdidn’taddenoughoil,theeggswouldbeeasilystucktothepanandbeburnt.（條件狀語從句）②Aftermyparentssawmydish,theyweresomovedandhappythattheyateitup.（結(jié)果狀語從句）③Throughthisexperience,Ilearnedthatlabourcannotonlybeameaningfulthingbutalsomakemefeelsatisfiedandhappy.（賓語從句和并列句）3．“人間煙火氣，最撫凡人心。”從手到口，從口到心，中國人延續(xù)著對世界和人生特有的感知方式?；虻胤教厣?，或家常便飯，只要端起碗筷，總有一道美食觸動了你的味蕾。請以”SpecialFoodFullofMemories”為題分享一下你和美食之間的故事吧。要點(diǎn)提示：1.介紹最觸動你的一道美食；2.談?wù)勥@道美食為什么特殊；3.分享這道美食曾帶給你的回憶。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文SpecialFoodFullofMemoriesEveryonehastheirownfavoritecuisine.Somepeopleliketoeatmeat,whileothersliketoeatvegetables.Butmyfavoritedishissteamedeggs.Itsapproachisverysimple.Youonlyneedafeweggs,cookingoil,andsomeleeks.Whenitisbroughttothetable,itscolorisverytempting,rangingfromyellowtogreen.Ilikeitnotbecauseitissodelicious,butbecausemyfamilywasrelativelypoorintheearlyyears.Theonlyeggsinmyfamilywereeithersoldformoney,orsteamedeggswereonlyavailablewhentherewereguestsathome.Butatthattime,wewereonlyallowedtoeatwhentheguestsfinishedeating.Sowhenweatethefeweggsleft,itwasverydelicious.SowheneverIeatsteamedeggs,Irememberthememoriesofthattime.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：為“一般現(xiàn)在時”和“一般過去時”；③提示：寫作提示已給出，考生應(yīng)按要求進(jìn)行寫作，適當(dāng)增添細(xì)節(jié)，完善作文內(nèi)容。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹最觸動你的一道美食；第二步，介紹這道美食特殊的原因；第三步，介紹這道美食曾帶給你的回憶。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①atthattime那時②thememoriesof...……的回憶[高分句型]Whenitisbroughttothetable,itscolorisverytempting,rangingfromyellowtogreen.(when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句及被動語態(tài))4．眾所周知，飲食也是一種文化。中國的飲食文化豐富多彩，源遠(yuǎn)流長。假如你的外教老師馬克（Mark）要到你的家鄉(xiāng)旅游。請你根據(jù)下面的英文提示，向你的外教介紹一下你家鄉(xiāng)的特色美食，并簡述其制作過程。提示：1.yourhometown;2.specialfoodthere;3.howtomakeit...要求：1.語句通順、符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.80詞左右（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）I’mfromSichuan.Myhometownisfamousfordelicioushotpot._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文I’mfromSichuan.Myhometownisfamousfordelicioushotpot.I’mveryhappytotellyouhowtomakeahotpotathome.Tomakethehotpot,youneedtobuythehotpotsoup,somemuttonandbeefpieces,somevegetablesandotherfoodsyoulikefromthesupermarket.First,boilthehotpotsoup.Next,washthevegetablesandputthemonplates.Then,putthemeatpiecesandvegetablesintothepotwhenthesoupisboiled.Makesurethatallthefoodsareboiledinthepot.Finally,getyourfavoritefoodfromthepotandenjoyit!IhopeyoucanhaveagoodtimeinSichuan.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作提示已給出，考生應(yīng)按要求進(jìn)行寫作，適當(dāng)增添細(xì)節(jié)，完善作文內(nèi)容。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹自己的家鄉(xiāng)及特色美食（已給出）；第二步，講述該特色美食的制作過程；第三步，表示祝愿。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①athome在家②putsth.into...把某物放入……③makesure確保④haveagoodtime玩得開心[高分句型]①I’mveryhappytotellyouhowtomakeahotpotathome.(“疑問詞+不定式”作賓語)②Tomakethehotpot,youneedtobuythehotpotsoup,somemuttonandbeefpieces,somevegetablesandotherfoodsyoulikefromthesupermarket.(不定式作目的狀語)③IhopeyoucanhaveagoodtimeinSichuan.(賓語從句)5．2024年四川省中小學(xué)生”用英語講好中國故事”愛國主義主題展示活動即將開始，請以“一道中國傳統(tǒng)美食”為主題，寫一篇演講稿進(jìn)行投稿。寫作要點(diǎn)：1.簡單介紹一道中國傳統(tǒng)美食。2.介紹這道中國傳統(tǒng)美食的制作方法。寫作要求：1.短文須包含所有信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.短文中不提及真實(shí)的人名、地名和校名；3.詞數(shù)不少于80詞，題目和開頭語已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：ingredientn.（食品的）成分，原料；要素，因素LadiesandGentlemen,TherearesomanytraditionaldishesinChina.Today,I’dliketointroduce__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________