閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文?！癕ike,Icouldwalkfasterthanthosewomenrun.”Imademyusualment(評(píng)論)afterwatchingmysonMikeruninarace.HelaughedasheknewIwasn’tarunner.“Listen,Mom,howaboutrunningwithmenextyearinthisrace?”Withoutthinking,Iagreedtothischallenge.Ifeltit’sapieceofcake!NeverdidIimaginewhatthenextyearwouldbring.Whenitwasalmosttimeforthisracetohappen,Mikediedinacaraccident.Afewofhisfriendsknewthis“challenge”IhadagreedtowithMike.Theystartedtoencouragemetoruntherace.Honestlyspeaking,IhadalmostforgottenwhatIsaid.Thinkingdeeply,IdecidedIshouldkeepmypromisetoMike.ThefirstthingIdidwasbuysomerunningclothes.Imightlookgood,eventhoughIhadn’ttrained.Thedayoftheracecame.Ifeltprettysad,butIstartedoff.Itwasn’tlongbeforeamanstartedtorunnexttome.Themanwasverytalkative.Hekeptsayinghowtiredhewas.Thechatterwentonandon.Theracewasover,andthisman’swifewon!IwasjusthappytofinishandkeepmypromisetoMike.Icamehome,andmyneighboraskedabouttherace.Itoldhimwhathadhappened.Myneighborlaughed,“Kay,don’tyouknowwhatthisguywasdoing?Hethoughtyouwerethepetitionbythewayyouweredressed.Hewantedhiswifetowin.”“Ohreally!?”ThefollowingyearIdidtrain.Ievenboughtsometapescalled“WinAtSports”andlistenedtothemdaily.IfthismanthoughtIwasthepetition,youcouldbetIwasgoingtobethepetition.Hisattitudeinthatracebuiltafireinme!Theracewason!注意：1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。TheracebeganandIwasalldressedandready.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Istayedbehindthisman’swifealmostthewholerace.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________一、文本分析1．角色：_____________________________2．視角：第________人稱(chēng)3．時(shí)空線：frommentingonMike’sraceandagreeingtorunwithhim______________preparingforthenextyear’srace4.請(qǐng)?jiān)谖恼轮袑⒖赡艿木€索都找出來(lái)。WhatmentdidKaymakeafterwatchingMike’srace?：______________________________________________WhatchallengedidMikeputforward?：____________________________________________Whatunexpectedthinghappenedbeforethenextrace?：_______________________WhydidKaydecidetoruntherace?：___________________________________HowdidKayprepareforthefirstrace?：_______________________Whathappenedduringthefirstrace?：__________________________________________________Whowonthefirstrace?：___________________WhatdidKaylearnfromherneighbor?：_______________________________________HowdidKayprepareforthenextrace?：_______________________________________情節(jié)線：凱看完兒子邁克比賽后隨口評(píng)論，答應(yīng)次年和他一起參賽→___________________________________→____________________________________→_________________________________________→（續(xù)寫(xiě)）TheracebeganandIwasalldressedandready.→（續(xù)寫(xiě)）Istayedbehindthisman’swifealmostthewholerace.6．情感線：Kay：casual&overconfident(whenagreeingtothechallenge)→_________________→_______→__________________（續(xù)寫(xiě)）→_______（續(xù)寫(xiě)）7.綜合以上信息，請(qǐng)用34句話概括文章大意。（中英各一個(gè)）中文：_____________________________________________________________________英文：_____________________________________________________________________8.句式：賓語(yǔ)從句；非謂語(yǔ)；感嘆句；同位語(yǔ)；完全倒裝句；比喻；夸張________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________本文屬于人與他人：_______________________________________二、情節(jié)構(gòu)造主題：_________________________________第一段提示句：TheracebeganandIwasalldressedandready.銜接句1——對(duì)前面“preparingfortherace”提問(wèn)“凱在比賽開(kāi)始時(shí)狀態(tài)如何？”：WhatwasKay’sstateatthestartoftherace?過(guò)渡句推演：銜接1→？←銜接2銜接句2——對(duì)后面“stayedbehindtheman’swife”提問(wèn)“凱為何選擇跟在男子妻子身后？”：WhydidKaychoosetostaybehindtheman’swife?第二段提示句：Istayedbehindthisman’swifealmostthewholerace.銜接句3——對(duì)“stayedbehindtheman’swife”提問(wèn)“凱何時(shí)選擇加速？最終結(jié)果如何？”：WhendidKaychoosetoaccelerateandwhatwasthefinalresult?過(guò)渡句推演：銜接3→？←主題段落構(gòu)思第一段：TheracebeganandIwasalldressedandready.→①__________________→②__________________→③__________________；英文：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第二段：Istayedbehindthisman’swifealmostthewholerace.→④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥__________________。英文：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________參考答案一、文本分析1．角色：I（Kay，主人公“我”）、Mike（凱的兒子）、atalkativeman（參賽的健談男子）、theman’swife（男子的妻子）、Mike’sfriends（邁克的朋友）、neighbor（凱的鄰居）2．視角：第一人稱(chēng)3．時(shí)空線：frommentingonMike’sraceandagreeingtorunwithhimMike’sdeathinacaraccidentencouragedbyMike’sfriendstoruntheracerunningtheracewithouttraining(disturbedbyatalkativeman)learningtheman’sintentionfromtheneighborpreparingforthenextyear’srace4.請(qǐng)?jiān)谖恼轮袑⒖赡艿木€索都找出來(lái)。WhatmentdidKaymakeafterwatchingMike’srace?：Shesaidshecouldwalkfasterthanthosewomenran.WhatchallengedidMikeputforward?：Runningwithhimintheracethenextyear.Whatunexpectedthinghappenedbeforethenextrace?：Mikediedinacaraccident.WhydidKaydecidetoruntherace?：TokeepherpromisetoMike.HowdidKayprepareforthefirstrace?：Sheonlyboughtrunningclothesanddidn’ttrain.Whathappenedduringthefirstrace?：Atalkativemanranbesideherandkeptplainingaboutbeingtired.Whowonthefirstrace?：Thetalkativeman’swife.WhatdidKaylearnfromherneighbor?：Themanthoughtshewasapetitoranddisturbedhertohelphiswifewin.HowdidKayprepareforthenextrace?：Shetrainedandlistenedto“WinAtSports”tapesdaily.5．情節(jié)線：凱看完兒子邁克比賽后隨口評(píng)論，答應(yīng)次年和他一起參賽→邁克意外車(chē)禍去世，在其朋友鼓勵(lì)下，凱為兌現(xiàn)承諾決定參賽→凱僅買(mǎi)了裝備未訓(xùn)練就參賽，途中被一男子干擾，最終男子的妻子奪冠→凱從鄰居口中得知男子是故意干擾自己以助妻子獲勝，決心認(rèn)真?zhèn)鋺?zhàn)次年比賽→（續(xù)寫(xiě)）比賽開(kāi)始，凱整裝待發(fā)→（續(xù)寫(xiě)）凱幾乎全程跟在男子妻子身后。6．情感線：Kay：casual&overconfident(whenagreeingtothechallenge)→sad&determined(afterMike’sdeath,decidingtokeepthepromise)→calm&relieved(finishingthefirstrace)→angry&motivated(learningtheman’sintention,preparingforthenextrace)→focused&confident（續(xù)寫(xiě)，duringtherace）→proud&fulfilled（續(xù)寫(xiě)，aftertherace）7.綜合以上信息，請(qǐng)用34句話概括文章大意。（中英各一個(gè)）中文：凱看完兒子邁克比賽后隨口答應(yīng)次年和他一起參賽，不料邁克意外車(chē)禍去世。為兌現(xiàn)承諾，凱在邁克朋友鼓勵(lì)下參賽，雖未訓(xùn)練卻順利完賽，后從鄰居處得知比賽中干擾自己的男子是為助妻子奪冠。這讓凱決心認(rèn)真?zhèn)鋺?zhàn)，要成為真正的競(jìng)爭(zhēng)者。英文：KaycasuallyagreedtorunaracewithhersonMikethenextyearafterwatchinghisrace,butunfortunately,Mikediedinacaraccident.Tokeepherpromise,KayparticipatedintheraceundertheencouragementofMike’sfriends.Shefinishedtheracesmoothlyevenwithouttraining,andlaterlearnedfromherneighborthatthemanwhodisturbedherduringtheracedidsotohelphiswifewin.ThismadeKaydeterminedtopreparecarefullyandbeearealpetitor.8.句式：賓語(yǔ)從句；非謂語(yǔ)；感嘆句；同位語(yǔ)；完全倒裝句；比喻；夸張賓語(yǔ)從句：Ifeltit’sapieceofcake!非謂語(yǔ)：Thinkingdeeply,IdecidedIshouldkeepmypromisetoMike.同位語(yǔ)：Ievenboughtsometapescalled“WinAtSports”,whichIlistenedtodaily.完全倒裝句：NeverdidIimaginewhatthenextyearwouldbring.比喻：Hisattitudeinthatracebuiltafireinme!夸張：Icouldwalkfasterthanthosewomenrun.9.本文屬于人與他人：本文展現(xiàn)了母子間的承諾與思念、他人的干擾與激勵(lì)，核心是凱在承諾與挫折的推動(dòng)下實(shí)現(xiàn)自我突破，傳遞出“承諾的重量與不服輸?shù)木衲苜x予人強(qiáng)大力量”的主題。二、情節(jié)構(gòu)造第一段提示句：TheracebeganandIwasalldressedandready.銜接句1——對(duì)前面“preparingfortherace”提問(wèn)“凱在比賽開(kāi)始時(shí)狀態(tài)如何？”：WhatwasKay’sstateatthestartoftherace?Shewasdetermined(notsadlikelastyear),calmandwellprepared.Shefollowedthepacingskillsfromtrainingtapesandstartedsteadily.過(guò)渡句推演：銜接1→凱專(zhuān)注起跑，留意到男子和其妻子，保持節(jié)奏跟隨←銜接2銜接句2——對(duì)后面“stayedbehindtheman’swife”提問(wèn)“凱為何選擇跟在男子妻子身后？”：WhydidKaychoosetostaybehindtheman’swife?Sheknewthemanonceregardedherasarival.Stayingbehindhiswifeallowedhertousethewife’spaceasareferenceandsaveenergy,avoidingdistraction.第二段提示句：Istayedbehindthisman’swifealmostthewholerace.銜接句3——對(duì)“stayedbehindtheman’swife”提問(wèn)“凱何時(shí)選擇加速？最終結(jié)果如何？”：WhendidKaychoosetoaccelerateandwhatwasthefinalresult?Heacceleratedwhentherewasonly100metersleft(noticingthewife’sstepsfaltered).Shepassedthewife,dashedacrossthefinishlineandwontherace.過(guò)渡句推演：銜接3→凱在終點(diǎn)前加速超越，贏得比賽，兌現(xiàn)承諾并實(shí)現(xiàn)自我突破←主題承諾是前行的燈塔，他人的輕視與干擾能化為奮進(jìn)的動(dòng)力；全力以赴的堅(jiān)持，不僅是對(duì)承諾的兌現(xiàn)，更是對(duì)自我的超越。三．段落構(gòu)思第一段：TheracebeganandIwasalldressedandready.→①我隨著發(fā)令聲沖出，耳邊回響著訓(xùn)練時(shí)的節(jié)奏口訣，眼神緊緊鎖定前方→②很快就看到了去年那對(duì)夫妻，男子依舊在妻子身邊，不時(shí)看向我，眼神帶著一絲驚訝→③我沒(méi)有貿(mào)然加速，而是保持穩(wěn)定步伐跟在他妻子身后，默默積蓄力量，心里默念著對(duì)邁克的承諾；英文：TheracebeganandIwasalldressedandready.→①I(mǎi)dashedout