專題3申請信&咨詢信（一）命題規(guī)律分析1.高頻亮相，重中之重：申請信與咨詢信是高考英語應用文的“?？汀?。近五年全國卷及各省市卷中，直接考查或與其他功能（如介紹、感謝）混合考查的頻率極高。2.命題形式多樣化：單一功能：早期常見，如“寫一封申請信申請某個職位/項目”?；旌瞎δ埽ó斍爸髁鳎簩⑸暾?咨詢與介紹、邀請、建議等功能結合，考查語言綜合運用能力。例如：“給你心儀大學的招生辦寫郵件，咨詢課程信息，并介紹自己的特長?！保ㄗ稍?介紹）“給夏令營組委會寫一封申請信，申請成為志愿者，并建議一項活動?！保ㄉ暾?建議）3.情境設置貼近生活：命題情境多圍繞學生實際生活，如申請學生會職位、志愿者、夏令營、大學項目、兼職工作、咨詢課程、活動詳情、產(chǎn)品信息等。4.評分標準透視：基礎分：格式正確、要點齊全、語言無誤。高分關鍵：內(nèi)容邏輯：要點銜接自然，邏輯清晰，詳略得當。語言質量：詞匯豐富，句式多變，表達地道。交際效果：讀者意識強，語氣得體，能有效實現(xiàn)寫作目的（說服對方或獲得信息）。（二）真題回顧1.申請信2023年天津卷：假設你是晨光中學的學生李津，通過交換生項目在英國某中學就讀，校方為加強中英文化交流，將舉辦“中國工坊”活動。該活動主題涉及中華美食、中國傳統(tǒng)手工藝、中國書法和繪畫，擬招募學生現(xiàn)場教授相關技能。請寫一封申請信，內(nèi)容包括申請參加本次活動、闡述對本次文化交流活動意義的理解、結合個人興趣和特長說明擬教授何種技能及原因。2019年全國I卷：假定你是李華，暑假在倫敦學習，得知當?shù)孛佬g館要舉辦中國畫展。請寫一封信申請做志愿者，內(nèi)容包括寫信目的、個人優(yōu)勢、能做的事情。2018年浙江卷：假定你是李華，你校英語協(xié)會招聘志愿者，接待來訪的國外中學生。請你寫信應聘，內(nèi)容包括口語能力、相關經(jīng)驗、應聘目的。2012年遼寧卷：假定你是李華，將與今年七月從新星外語學校畢業(yè)，你從報紙上得知B&B公司要招聘一名英文秘書，你很感興趣。請給該公司寫一封求職信，包括年齡、學習情況及英語水平、興趣和特長、性格特點等。2.咨詢信2021年全國甲卷：假定你是李華，你校計劃舉辦介紹中國傳統(tǒng)文化的主題班會，并在英文網(wǎng)站展示。請你寫一封郵件給外國朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中國傳統(tǒng)文化更吸引外國友人。郵件內(nèi)容包括闡明寫信事由、征求建議、表示感謝。2020年浙江卷：向因病假回國休假的外教老師詢問近況，分享消息和祝愿。2014年全國I卷：暑期去英國學習，給培訓學校寫信詢問為期六周廣告的內(nèi)容。（三）常見失分點失分點1：要點機械堆砌。將題目要點生硬翻譯、羅列，缺乏必要的過渡和銜接。失分點2：語言平淡無奇。通篇簡單句，缺乏亮點詞匯和高級句式，無法體現(xiàn)語言優(yōu)勢。失分點3：語氣把握不當。申請信顯得卑微或傲慢，咨詢信問題空洞、缺乏禮貌。失分點4：混合任務失衡。在多個寫作任務中，無法平衡篇幅，導致某個要點展開不足或過度。一、文體概念與功能界定申請信：核心功能是“說服”。目的是展示自身能力與需求的匹配度，爭取一個機會（職位、名額等）。關鍵在于“匹配”與“價值”。咨詢信：核心功能是“獲取信息”。目的是有禮貌、有條理地獲取未知信息。關鍵在于“清晰”與“禮貌”。核心結構與寫作模板（一）申請信高分結構開頭（Opening）：直奔主題，表明熱情套句升級：Iamwritingwithgreatenthusiasmtoapplyforthe[職位/項目]advertisedin/on[來源].或Havinglearnedabout[項目名稱]from[來源],Iamwritingtoexpressmykeeninterestinservingasa[職位].正文（Body）：展示匹配，提供證據(jù)（使用“論點+論據(jù)”模式）段落1：學術/能力匹配。Myacademicbackgroundin[相關領域]hasprovidedmewithasolidfoundationin[具體技能].Forinstance,[具體事例].段落2：經(jīng)驗/軟實力匹配。Beyondacademics,Ihavedevelopedstrong[軟實力，如teamworkskills]throughmyexperienceas[相關經(jīng)歷].Thisexperiencetaughtmehowto[具體收獲].段落3（可選）：表達對申請對象的了解與熱情。Iamparticularlyimpressedby[對方機構的某個特點],whichalignsperfectlywithmypersonalvaluesandcareeraspirations.結尾（Closing）：強化印象，呼吁行動套句升級：Iamconfidentthatmyqualificationsandpassionmakemeasuitablecandidateforthisposition.Ihaveattachedmyresumeforyourreviewandwouldweletheopportunityforaninterview.Thankyouforyourtimeandconsideration.（二）咨詢信高分結構開頭（Opening）：清晰說明來意及背景套句升級：Iamwritingtoinquireabout[具體事項]regarding[相關項目/產(chǎn)品].Iama[身份]andIamveryinterestedin[項目名稱].正文（Body）：問題具體，條理清晰使用序列詞：First,couldyoupleaseprovidemoredetailsabout[問題一]?Second,Iwouldliketoknow[問題二].Lastly,itwouldbegreatlyappreciatedifyoucouldclarify[問題三].表明已做功課：regarding...edtheofficialwebsite,butIcouldn’tfindinformationregarding...結尾（Closing）：表達感謝，期待回復套句升級：Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldprovidetheaboveinformationatyourearliestconvenience.Thankyouforyourassistance.（三）語言亮點庫（從平淡到出色）表明意圖：Iwanttoapplyfor...→Iamwritingtoexpressmystronginterestin.../tosubmitmyapplicationfor...展示能力：IamgoodatEnglish.→IhaveagoodmandofEnglish./IamproficientinEnglish,whichwasdemonstratedwhenI...表達熱情：Ilikeyourpany.→Ihavelongbeenanadmirerofyourorganization’sworkin[領域].提出詢問：Ihavesomequestions.→Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldclarifythefollowingpoints:/Iamwritingtoseekclarificationon...表達感謝：Thankyouforreading.→Thankyouforyourtimeandconsideration./Yourassistanceisgreatlyappreciated.（四）混合題型銜接策略技巧：使用過渡詞句將不同功能自然連接。1.“申請+咨詢”：Inadditiontomyapplication,Iwouldliketotakethisopportunitytoaskabout[咨詢內(nèi)容].2.“咨詢+申請”：Afterreceivingtheinformation,Ibelievemybackgroundin[領域]wouldmakemeastrongcandidate,andIameagertosubmitaformalapplication.（五）萬能模板1.申請信Dear_______,IamLiHua,ahighschoolstudentfromChina.Learningthat__________________(寫信背景),Iamwritingtoapplyforthepositionof__________________(職位名稱).Tobeginwith,Ihaveagoodmandofboth_____________and_____________(優(yōu)勢1),whichenablesmeto__________________(好處1).Inaddition,mypreviousexperienceputsmeatanadvantagein__________________(好處2).What’smore,beinganoutgoingandsociableindividualallowsmeto__________________.Therefore,IbelieveIamaqualifiedcandidate.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyapplicationintoconsideration.Lookingforwardtoyourreplyatyourearliestconvenience.?Yourssincerely,LiHua2.咨詢信Dear_______,Iam

....Sorryto

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Couldyoubesokindastosendmesomerelevantdetailsontheabovementionedaspects?Thankyouforyour

kindness,andyourpromptattentiontothisletterwillbehighlyappreciated.Yourssincerely,LiHua（四）范文賞析范文1：(2425高三上·寧夏·期中）假定你是李華，是英國倫敦某一學校的交流生，得知當?shù)夭┪镳^要舉辦中國唐朝文物展，請寫一封信申請做志愿者。內(nèi)容包括：1.

寫信目的；2.

個人優(yōu)勢；3.

能做的事情。參考詞匯：文物culturalrelics注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。DearSirorMadam,

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,

LiHua【答案】DearSirorMadam,I’mLiHua,anexchangestudentfromChina.I’mwritingtoapplytobeavolunteerfortheExhibitionofCulturalRelicsoftheTangDynastyinChina,whichwillbeheldinyourmuseum.IthinkIamqualifiedforthisjobinthefollowingaspect.ShowinggreatinterestinthecultureandhistoryoftheTangDynasty,Ihaveagoodknowledgeoftheexhibitstobedisplayed,likeitsuniqueporcelains,brilliantChinesepaintingsbythefamousTangpainters,vividsculptures,andsoon.Additionally,IcanspeakEnglishfluently,makingitpossibleformetointroducetheexhibitsfreely.IfIamluckyenoughtobechosenasavolunteer,IcanshowvisitorsaroundthemuseumandgetthemtoknowmoreaboutthegreatTangDynasty.Iwouldbeverygratefulifyoucouldoffermetheopportunity.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua【導語】本篇是應用文寫作。英國倫敦博物館要舉辦中國唐朝文物展，要求考生寫一封信申請做志愿者?！驹斀狻?.

詞匯積累符合資格：qualified→eligible另外：additionally→furthermore幸運的：lucky→fortunate感激的：grateful→appreciative2.句式拓展，簡單句變復合句原句：Additionally,IcanspeakEnglishfluently,makingitpossibleformetointroducetheexhibitsfreely.拓展句：Additionally,IcanspeakEnglishfluently,whichmakesitpossibleformetointroducetheexhibitsfreely.【點睛】[高分句型1]I’mwritingtoapplytobeavolunteerfortheExhibitionofCulturalRelicsoftheTangDynastyinChina,whichwillbeheldinyourmuseum.（which引導的非限制性定語從句）[高分句型2]IfIamluckyenoughtobechosenasavolunteer,IcanshowvisitorsaroundthemuseumandgetthemtoknowmoreaboutthegreatTangDynasty.（if引導的條件狀語從句）范文2：（2021年高考全國甲卷）假定你是李華。你校計劃舉辦介紹中國傳統(tǒng)文化的主題班會，并在英文網(wǎng)站展示。請你寫一封郵件給外國朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中國傳統(tǒng)文化更吸引外國友人。郵件內(nèi)容包括：1.闡明寫信事由；2.征求建議；3.表示感謝。注意：詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearChris,IamLiHua.Sorrytodisturbyou.Iamwritingto

consult

youaboutfurtherinformationregardingaclassmeetingwhosetopicisrelatedtoChinesetraditionalcustoms.Firstandforemost,couldyoutellme

whichChinesecultureyouwesternersprefer?Asidefromit,IintendtoknowhowtodecoratemywebsitewithsomeChineseelements.Additionally,

Iwouldalsoliketoinquirehowtotogetmoreclicks.

Furthermore,isthereanythingelseIshouldpayspecialattentionto?

Couldyoubesokindastosendmesomerelevantdetailsontheabovementionedaspects?Thankyouforyour

kindness,andyourpromptattentiontothisletterwillbehighlyappreciated.Yourssincerely,LiHua【導語】本篇是高考英語應用文（郵件）解析。學校計劃舉辦中國傳統(tǒng)文化主題班會并在英文網(wǎng)站展示，需給外國朋友Chris寫郵件，咨詢哪些傳統(tǒng)文化更吸引外國友人及相關建議。一、寫作要點匹配開篇點題：首句“Iamwritingtoconsultyouabout...aclassmeetingwhosetopicisrelatedtoChinesetraditionalcustoms”直接點明咨詢事由，符合英文郵件“開門見山”的交際邏輯。咨詢分層：用“Firstandforemost/Asidefromit/Additionally”串聯(lián)問題（西方偏好的文化、網(wǎng)站裝飾、提升點擊量），覆蓋“征求建議”核心，問題具體不籠統(tǒng)。結尾致謝：“Thankyouforyourkindness...willbehighlyappreciated”禮貌感謝，符合咨詢類郵件的禮儀規(guī)范。二、詞匯優(yōu)化咨詢：“consult”替代“ask”，更正式，契合向友人請教的語境；此外：“Additionally/Furthermore”替代“Also”，讓問題銜接更顯層次；感激：“highlyappreciated”替代“grateful”，“your...willbehighlyappreciated”符合郵件結尾正式表達習慣。三、句式拓展定語從句：“aclassmeetingwhosetopicisrelatedtoChinesetraditionalcustoms”，合并“班會”與“主題”的簡單句，信息更緊湊；賓語從句：“couldyoutellmewhichChinesecultureyouwesternersprefer”，將簡單疑問句轉化為委婉請求句式，語氣更禮貌。四、高分句型定語從句（對應高分句型1）：“whosetopicisrelatedtoChinesetraditionalcustoms”，限定班會主題，提升語法復雜度；委婉請求句式（呼應高分句型2邏輯）：“Couldyoubesokindastosendmesomerelevantdetails”，比直接提問更顯誠懇，是高分亮點。三、拔高練習（一）選詞填空請從方框中選擇合適的單詞或短語，填入句子空白處，使其意思完整、語法正確（每詞限用一次）。adviseconfirmevaluateremendassistinquirehighlightdeservesuggestsupportInmyremendationletter,Iwill___________theapplicant’soutstandingacademicperformanceandteamworkskills.We___________youtoprovidemoredetailsaboutthescholarshipapplicationprocessinyourconsultationemail.Theprofessoragreedto___________thestudentfortheexchangeprogramduetohisexcellentresearchability.Couldyouplease___________whethertheapplicationdeadlinehasbeenextended?Ineedthisinformationformyconsultation.Aftercarefulconsideration,we___________thatyousubmityourremendationletterbytheendofthisweek.Thiscandidate’syearsofprofessionalexperienceandstrongproblemsolvingskills___________thisseniorposition,soIstronglysupporthim.Ourteamiswillingto___________youwithanyquestionsabouttheprogram—feelfreetoreachoutforconsultation.Whenwritingaconsultationletter,itisimportanttoclearlystatewhatyouwantto___________abouttoavoidconfusion.Themitteewill___________theapplicant’squalificationsbasedontheremendationlettersandpersonalstatements.Allcolleagues___________theemployee’spromotion,ashehasmadegreatcontributionstothepany’sdevelopment.【參考答案】highlight?advise?remend?confirm?suggest?deserve?assist?inquire?evaluate?support（二）句型轉換請將以下直接、口語化的表達轉換為適合推薦信或咨詢信的書面、得體英文表達。YoushouldtellthemaboutLisa’sgoodmunicationskillsintheremendationletter.__________________________________________________________________________Thistrainingcourseisuseful.Youcanasktheconsultantaboutit.__________________________________________________________________________Johnisagoodworker.Youcanhirehim.Icanwritearemendationletter.__________________________________________________________________________Youneedtoknowtheapplicationrequirements.Youcansendanemailtoask.__________________________________________________________________________Thiscandidateisgreat.Ithinkyoushouldaccepther.Iwillsupportherinmyletter.__________________________________________________________________________【參考答案】1.Intheremendationletter,IsuggestthatyouhighlightLisa’sexcellentmunicationskills.?2.Thistrainingcourseisofgreatvalue,andyoumayinquireaboutitwiththeconsultant.?3.GivenJohn’soutstandingworkperformance,Iremendhiringhimandamwillingtoprovidearemendationletterforhim.?4.Ifyouneedtoknowtheapplicationrequirements,youmaysendanemailtoinquireaboutthem.?5.Thiscandidateishighlyqualified,andIremendthatyouaccepther;Iwillexpressmysupportforherintheremendationletter.（三）單句寫作請根據(jù)中文提示或情境，寫出適合推薦信或咨詢信的委婉、得體英文句子。1.我在推薦信中推薦王教授擔任此次學術會議的評委，因為他在該領域擁有豐富的研究經(jīng)驗。（Iremendthat...）__________________________________________________________________________2.若您需要咨詢項目細節(jié)，建議您通過郵件與項目負責人聯(lián)系，他會為您提供詳細信息。（Ifyouneedto...）__________________________________________________________________________3.我認為李同學值得獲得這份獎學金，因此在推薦信中我會重點強調她的學術成就和公益貢獻。（Ibelieve...andthus...）__________________________________________________________________________4.如何咨詢留學申請的材料準備要求？建議您訪問學校官網(wǎng)或發(fā)送咨詢郵件至招生辦公室。__________________________________________________________________________5.在推薦信中，我會證明張先生具備出色的管理能力，這是他在過去五年工作中多次展現(xiàn)的優(yōu)勢。（Intheremendationletter,Iwill...）__________________________________________________________________________【參考答案】1.IremendthatProfessorWangbeappointedasajudgeofthisacademicconferenceinmyremendationletter,ashehasrichresearchexperienceinthisfield.?2.Ifyouneedtoinquireabouttheprojectdetails,itisremendedthatyoucontacttheprojectmanagerviaemail,whowillprovideyouwithdetailedinformation.?3.IbelievethatStudentLideservesthisscholarship,andthusIwillhighlightheracademicachievementsandpublicwelfarecontributionsintheremendationletter.?4.Howtoinquireabouttherequirementsforpreparingstudyabroadapplicationmaterials?Itissuggestedthatyouvisittheschool’sofficialwebsiteorsendaconsultationemailtotheadmissionoffice.?5.Intheremendationletter,IwilldemonstratethatMr.Zhangpossessesexcellentmanagementskills,whichisanadvantagehehasrepeatedlyshowninhisworkoverthepastfiveyears.（四）應用文寫作1.（2022·北京通州·一模）假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華。你們學校下周準備開展一次“中國傳統(tǒng)文化進校園”活動，屆時一些外國友人也會應邀參加，現(xiàn)正在招募志愿服務人員，請你用英文給負責人Mr.Smith寫一封申請信，內(nèi)容包括：1.申請理由；2.個人優(yōu)勢；3.希望批準。注意：詞數(shù)100左右；2.開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】DearMr.Smith,Learningfromtheadvertisementyouhavepostedthatyou'reinneedofavolunteer,I'mwritingforachancetoworkasavolunteer

andIfeelthispositionisspeciallytailoredtome.

Initially,myadvantagefirstliesinthefactthatIhavetheabilitytoorganizeactivities.

Additionally,asanoutgoingstudent,notonlycanIgetalongwellwithothersbutalsoIhaveasenseofdutyandcooperation.Ultimately,whatsatisfiesmemostisthatIcanexpressmyselffluentlyandclearlyinEnglish.Withresponsibilityandpatience,I’llshowpassionateenthusiasmtowardthisjob.Idohopemyenthusiasmandqualificationwillwinmeafavorableconsiderationfromyourside.

Keenlyanticipateyourpromptreply.Yours,LiHua假定你是中國高中生李華，今年暑假期間將去澳大利亞悉尼南部Kogarah的一所綜合性學校Kogarah

HighSchool學習一個月，并將寄宿在當?shù)氐木用馭ilvia家中。請給Silvia寫封電子郵件，詢問一些將在Kogarah生活的有關情況。具體詢問內(nèi)容如下：住宿是否可以有單間；房間是否有網(wǎng)絡；是否可以自己煮飯；4.是否有便利的交通。DearSilvia,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【參考范文】DearSilvia,IamLiHua.Sorrytodisturbyou,Iamwritingto

consult

youaboutfurtherinformationregarding

mystayinyourfamilyduringthesummervacation.Firstandforemost,couldyoutellme

whetherIcould

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myownroomandhaveaccesstotheInternetinmyroom?Asidefromit,IintendtoknowwhetherIcouldcooksomeChinesedishesincaseI’mnotusedtoAustralianfood.Additionally,Iwouldalsoliketoinquireifthereisabusrouteonthewaytoschool.

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kindness,andyourpromptattentiontothisletterwillbehighlyappreciated.Yourssincerely,LiHua（2023天津卷）假設你是晨光中學的學生李津，通過交換生項目在英國某中學就讀，校方為加強中英文化交流,將舉辦“中國工坊”活動。該活動主題涉及中華美食、中國傳統(tǒng)手工藝，中國書法和繪畫，擬招募學生現(xiàn)場教授相關技能。請按照以下提示，寫一封申請信：申請參加本次活動；闡述你對本次文化交流活動意義的理解；結合個人興趣和特長，說明擬教授何種技能，并闡述原因。參考詞匯：中國工坊ChineseWorkshop中華美食Chinesecuisine手工藝handicraft書法calligraphy注意：(1)詞數(shù)不少于100；(2)可適當加入細節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實、行文連貫；(3)開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。DearSir/Madam___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Sincerelyyours,LiJin【參考范文】DearSir/MadamIamLiJin,anexchangestudentfromChina.KnowingthatChineseWorkshopwillbeheldintheschool,Iamwritingtoapplyfortakingpartintheactivity.ThethemeoftheactivityinvolvesChinesefood,traditionalChinesehandicrafts,Chinesecalligraphyandpainting.SoIthinkthisactivityisverysignificant,whichisconducivetospreadingexcellenttraditionalChinesecultureandpromotingculturalexchangesbetweenChinaandBritain.AsaChinese,IhaveapassionformakingChinesecuisine,forexampledumplings.NotonlycanIteachparticipantshowtomakedumplings,butalsoletthemfallinlovewithChinesecuisine.Iwouldappreciateitifyouwouldenrollmeintheevent.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Sincerelyyours,LiJin2.（2020·浙江·高考真題）假定你是李華，你校來自愛爾蘭的外教Peter因病回國休假。請給他寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.詢問近況；2.分享班級最新消息；3.表達祝愿。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】DearPeter，Ihopethisemailfindsyouwell!We’reallconcernedaboutyourhealthandwonderedhowyourrecoveryisprogressing.Couldyouletusknowyourcurrent