話題一家庭生活假如你是李金，你的英國筆友Jason和他的父母因為手機使用問題發(fā)生了爭吵，他感到很無助，希望得到你的幫助和建議，以下是你回復的內容：向Jason表示理解和同情；建議Jason向父母提出需要使用手機的理由，并保證合理使用手機；提醒Jason手機使用要適度。Step1readandthink假如你是李金，你的英國筆友Jason和他的父母因為手機使用問題發(fā)生了爭吵，他感到很無助，希望得到你的幫助和建議，以下是你回復的內容：向Jason表示理解和同情；建議Jason向父母提出需要使用手機的理由，并保證合理使用手機；提醒Jason手機使用要適度。Step1readandthinkWhatmakesagoodcomposition?Bewell-organized;bewell-developedDisplaysunity（統(tǒng)一性）,coherence（連貫性）andprogression（流暢性）.Para.1

Knowingthat，IamwritingtoPara.2……Para.3Hopefully,

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Lookingforwardtoyourreply.你和父母因為手機使用問題發(fā)生了爭吵Bewell-organized：根據(jù)文體搭建正確的組織架構，如新聞報道的倒三角結構等。表達我對你的無助的理解和同情。Step2organizeTip1:充分利用題干Tip2:多問what,why,how，以便合理補充細節(jié)/中譯中Para.1

Knowingthat，IamwritingtoPara.2【總】Toimproveyoursituation,Ihavesomesuggestions.【分】First,it’sadvisableforyouto向父母提出需要使用手機的理由?！痉帧縄naddition,保證合理使用手機isworthconsidering.Para.3Hopefully,

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Lookingforwardtoyourreply.你和父母因為手機使用問題發(fā)生了爭吵Bewell-developed：內容上層層推進，有主有次。形式上使用連接詞、邏輯詞等（displayscoherence）表達我對你的無助的理解和同情。Step3develop提建議的句型：Youhadbetterdo…ItisadvisabletodoItiswiseofyoutodo…IfIwereyou,Iwould…WereIyou,Iwould……isworthconsidering.Step4wordsandexpressionsKnowingthat

youhavearguedwithyourparentsonphoneuse,

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foryou.Toimproveyoursituation,Ihavesomesuggestions.First,it’sadvisableforyoutohaveafranktalkwithyourparents,

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you’llfindmysuggestionsuseful.

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youhavearguedwithyourparentsonphoneuse,

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foryou.Toimproveyoursituation,Ihavesomesuggestions.First,it’sadvisableforyoutohaveafranktalkwithyourparents,

elaboratingwhyyouneedthephone.Inaddition,

makingapromisethatyouwilluseitresponsiblyisworthconsidering.Hopefully,

you’llfindmysuggestionsuseful.

Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Step5Read,assessandreflect了解到你因手機使用問題與父母發(fā)生了爭執(zhí)，我寫下這封信，想表達對你無奈處境的理解與關心。為改善現(xiàn)狀，我有幾點建議供你參考。首先，建議你與父母開誠布公地談一次，詳細說明你需要手機的原因。其次，不妨鄭重承諾你會合理使用手機，這個做法也很值得考慮。希望這些建議對你有所幫助。期待你的回信。話題二學校生活假定你是李華，上周你參加了學校組織的“走進新農(nóng)村（ExploringNewRuralChina）”研學活動。請你給新西蘭朋友Oliver寫一封郵件分享這次經(jīng)歷，內容包括：1.你的見聞；2.你的感想。Step1readandthinkWhatmakesagoodcomposition?Bewell-organized;bewell-developedDisplaysunity（統(tǒng)一性）,coherence（連貫性）andprogression（流暢性）.Step2organizePara.1

Lastweek…，IamwritingtoPara.2……Para.3Doyouhavesimilarexperience?/Howdoyoulikeit?Lookingforwardtoyourreply.假定你是李華，上周你參加了學校組織的“走進新農(nóng)村（ExploringNewRuralChina）”研學活動。請你給新西蘭朋友Oliver寫一封郵件分享這次經(jīng)歷，內容包括：1.你的見聞；2.你的感想。progressionStep3develop面對不熟悉的話題，怎么做到言之有物？（Bewell-developed）農(nóng)村有誰？ruraldevelopment體現(xiàn)在哪些方面“新”？農(nóng)村有什么？從事什么？如何從事？新農(nóng)人collegegraduatesreturningbacktohometownasprofessionalfarmers村村通路5G網(wǎng)絡覆蓋pavedroadsconnectingvillageseasyaccessto…5Gnetworkcoverage農(nóng)業(yè)旅游業(yè)precisionfarmingrun/operatearuralhomestayWithadvancedtechnologiesdronefertilizationadoptnewirrigationmethodsStep4Read,assessandreflectDearOliver

Howiseverythinggoing？Iamwritingtosharewithyouthestudytour“ExploringNewRuralChina”organizedbyourschoollastweek.ItwasthroughthisexperiencethatIgainednewinsightsintoruraldevelopmentinourcountry.

Whatimpressedmemostisthatadvancedtechnologieslikedronefertilizationarewidelyadopted,andmorecollegegraduatesarereturningtoworkasprofessionalfarmers.Moreover,localproductsarepromotedviashortvideosandlivestreaming—thisnotonlyboostssalesbutalsohelpslocalsachieveapleasantincreaseinincome.

Thisstudytourreallydeepenedmyunderstandingofruralrevitalization.IhopeyoucanhaveachancetovisitChina’scountrysideyourselfoneday.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,

LiHua

progressionStep4Read,assessandreflectDearOliver

Howiseverythinggoing？Iamwritingtosharewithyouthestudytour“ExploringNewRuralChina”organizedbyourschoollastweek.ItwasthroughthisexperiencethatIgainednewinsightsintoruraldevelopmentinourcountry.

Whatimpressedmemostisthatadvancedtechnologieslikedronefertilizationarewidelyadopted,andmorecollegegraduatesarereturningtoworkasprofessionalfarmers.Moreover,localproductsarepromotedviashortvideosandlivestreaming—thisnotonlyboostssalesbutalsohelpslocalsachieveapleasantincreaseinincome.

Thisstudytourreallydeepenedmyunderstandingofruralrevitalization.IhopeyoucanhaveachancetovisitChina’scountrysideyo