WritewithConfidence!

茂名市朱劍潮名教師工作室:YangChunmei2025.10.20Hobbiesmakepeople'slivesmorecolorful–FunPathtoBetterWriting課程目標(biāo)1.知識目標(biāo)：學(xué)生能夠掌握英語寫作中的基本結(jié)構(gòu)（如開頭、主體、結(jié)尾），學(xué)會運用常用的連接詞和過渡句，積累一定量的寫作好詞好句。2.能力目標(biāo)：通過課堂練習(xí)，提高學(xué)生的英語寫作邏輯思維能力，能夠獨立完成一篇符合要求的九年級英語作文。3.情感目標(biāo)：激發(fā)學(xué)生對英語寫作的興趣，增強學(xué)生寫作的自信心。Beforewriting---leadinWhatdopeopleinHuaZhouusuallydointheirfreetime?Somepeopleusually_________________intheirfreetime.Differentpeoplelikedoingdifferentthingsintheirfreetime.hobbiesBeforewriting--FreetalkA:Whathobbiesdoyouhave?.....like/love/enjoy/prefer...........beinterestedin/fondof...........becrazyabout...........showgreatinterestin.......fallinlovewith......beintodoingsth...(熱衷于做某事）...adoredoingsth.......haveafancyforsth/doingsth（對某事有興趣）someadvancedsentencesB:Iamfondof（對某事有強烈的喜愛）/showgreatinterestin....Beforewriting--FreetalkShefallsinlovewithcookinginhersparetimewhileIjustshowgreatinterestineatingdeliciousfood.thesamehobbydifferenthobbiesBoth...and......arefondof...Allof.......areinterestedin....Ilike....While....enjoy....Hobbiesarechangingwithtime.Beforewriting--doasurveywhatnamenowusedto.../inthepastThereisnodoubthobbiesmakepeople'slivesmorecolorful.How?....makeourlives........bringus.........canget....from....Whathobbydoyouhavenow?/Whathobbydidyouusetohave?Beforewriting--FreetalkWhathobbiesdoeshehavenow?Whathobbydidheusetohave?Didheusetolikelisteningtomusicandplayingbasketball,too?....becrazyabout...........showgreatinterestin....Ifallinlovewith...Ibeintodoingsth...Iadoredoingsth....Ihaveafancyforsth/doingsth.....like/love/enjoy/prefer...........beinterestedin/fondof.......Hobbiesarechangingwithtime.Heloveslisteningtomusicandplayingbasketball.

No,hedidn't.Heisfondofcollectingstamps.leadinto---whilewritingAreyougoodatwritingacomposition?Didtheygethighmarksinwriting?書面表達四K曲

看(look)看話題、人稱、字?jǐn)?shù)、時態(tài)

想（think)列篇章結(jié)構(gòu)、列詞匯、短語、句型結(jié)構(gòu)

連(link)用關(guān)聯(lián)詞連接成句，完成文章檢查錯誤查(check)美化文章、檢查錯誤Whilewriting

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Step1

look

看話題看文體看人稱看時態(tài)看字?jǐn)?shù)WhilewritingWhilewriting---looking（審）以下是我和我的朋友Jane和Michael過去和現(xiàn)在的業(yè)余愛好。請根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容寫一篇以"ourhobbies"為題的短文，描述每個人過去和現(xiàn)在的愛好，以及喜愛的原因。80詞左右。NamesinthepastNowReasonsMichaelwatchtvswimrelax,.....Janelistentomusiccollectstampsgreatfun,......Iplaycomputergamesdosportsbuildmeup,.....體裁：記敘文話題第一人稱第三人稱一般過去時一般現(xiàn)在時字?jǐn)?shù)

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Step2

think

列篇章結(jié)構(gòu)列詞匯列短語列句型結(jié)構(gòu)Whilewriting開頭段表明不同的人有不同的興趣愛好，并且興趣愛好會隨著時間而改變。

中間段根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容寫出不同的人過去與現(xiàn)在興趣愛好的變化，及變化的原因。結(jié)尾段總結(jié)興趣愛好帶來的的好處。(興趣愛好使我快樂和健康）Differentpeoplehavedifferenthobbiesandtheywillchangewithtime.Hobbiescanmakeushappyandhealthy.Whilewriting--think(列出篇章結(jié)構(gòu)）Whilewriting--列句型.....like/love/enjoy/prefer...........beinterestedin/fondof...........becrazyabout...........showgreatinterestin....1.列出表示喜歡的句型2.列出表示過去喜歡...的句型。...usedtolike..../beinterestedin......enjoyed...alotinthepast,butnow.....3.列出表達原因的句型。...because...canmake.......she/hethinks...canbringher/him.......canget.....from.............isgoodfor......willkeep...healthy....relaxoneselfDifferentpeoplehavedifferenthobbiesandtheywillchangewithtime.Michaelusedto_____________________________,nowheprefersswimming.Swimming_______________________.Janeenjoyedlisteningtomusicinthepast.Sheenjoys___________________________.Shecangetgreatfunfromit.Iusedto_________________________________________.Iamfondofdoingsportsnow.Itcan___________________________.Goodhobbiescanmakeushappyandhealthy.Whilewriting--編寫中間段likewatchingTVcanmakehimrelaxedcollectingstampsnowbeinterestedinplayingcomputergamesbuildmeupNamesinthepastNowReasonsMichaelwatchtvswimrelax,.....Janelistentomusiccollectstampsgreatfun,......Iplaycomputergamesdosportsbuildmeup,.....

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Step3

link列詞匯列短語

用關(guān)聯(lián)詞連接成句,完成文章WhilewritingWhilewriting--link（連）NamesinthepastNowReasonsMichaelwatchtvswimrelax,.....Janelistentomusiccollectstampsgreatfun,......Iplaycomputergamesdosportsbuildmeup,.....Differentpeoplehavedifferenthobbiesandtheywillchangewithtime.MichaelusedtolikewatchingTV,nowhelikesswimming.Swimmingcanmakehimrelaxed.Janeenjoyedlisteningtomusicinthepast.Sheenjoyscollectingstamps.Shecangetgreatfunfromit.Iusedtobeinterestedinplayingcomputergames.Iamfondofdoingsports.Itcanbuildmeup.Goodhobbiescanmakeushappyandhealthy.

用關(guān)聯(lián)詞連接成句,完成文章Mygoodfriend,butnowBecauseinsteadoflisteningtomusic.Asforme，However,Ihateitnow.AsInmyview，

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Step4

check列詞匯列短語

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WhilewritingDifferentpeoplehavedifferenthobbiesandtheywillchangewithtime.

Mygoodfriend,MichaelusedtolikeswatchingTV,butnowhelikesswimming.becauseswimmingcanmakehimrelaxed.Janeenjoylisteningtomusicinthepast.Now,Sheenjoyscollectingstamps

insteadoflisteningtomusic.Shethinksshecangetgreatfunfromit.Asforme,Iusedtobeinterestedinplaycomputergames,butnowIhateit.Iamfondofdoingsports.Asitcanbuildmeup.

Inmyview,goodhobbiescanmakeushappyandhealthy.Whilewriting--check（美兼查）美化文章檢查錯誤

美化文章檢查錯誤iscrazyaboutshowsgreatinterestingoodhobbiescannotonlymakeushappy,butalsobringushealth.enjoyedlikeplayingSummary--Howtowirte?

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書面表達四K曲WatchandThinkIsplayingcomputergamestoomuchagoodorbadhobby?Weneedtodevelopsomegoodhobbieslike............andkeepawayfrom....Asgoodhobbiescanmakepeople'slivesmoreandmorecolorful.Afterwriting--practice練習(xí)

寫作練

寫作練兵EveryonehashisorherownhobbyandsodoI.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________請以“MyHobby”為題寫一篇短文，必須包含以下要點和詞語提示信息。要求：1.可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；2.語言通順，意思連貫，條理清晰，書寫規(guī)范。3.詞數(shù)：80詞左右。短文開頭已給出，不計入總數(shù)。MyHobby1.Whatisyourhobby?

(例如listentomusic,dosomereading,dosports等等，)2.Howdoyoudevelopyourhobby?

3.Sharethehappinessyougetfromyourhobby.Giveatleastoneexample.Afterwriting---show展示

MyHobbyEveryonehashisorherhobbyandsodoI.Myhobbyisdoingsomereading.

WhenIwasachild,Iwasfondofreadingallkindsofbooksbeforesleeping.Ioftenlosemyselfinthem.WhenIbecomeolder,IalsoprefergoingtothelibraryinmyfreetimeandIoftenshareinterestingstoriesfromthebookswithmyfriends.IthinkreadingcanhelpmerelaxwhenIfeeltired.Igetalotoffunaswellasknowledgefromreading.

Allinall,readingmakesmewiseandhappy.

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寫作評價

以小組為單位，每組成員之間按照評價表的要求互批作文。之后每組選取一篇優(yōu)秀作文，全體學(xué)生和老師通過電子白板進行評價。Afterwriting--comment點評items

score1.thestructureofwritingA

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C2.link