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閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫,使之構成一個完整的故事。Aman’svoicecamesuddenlyfromtheloudspeakers:“ParticipantsintheFiveMileJuniorFatTireRace,pleasegatherbehindtheorangeflags.”Hannahwasveryexcited.Firstprizewasabluemountainbike.Onsuchabike,she’dflythroughthewoods.“Goodluck,juniormountainbikers,”theloudspeakervoicecameagain.“Three,two,one,andgo!”Theleadoutwasagirlwithredbraids(辮子).Shepedaledoffharddownthedirtroad.Theracersfollowedbehind.Thegirlwithredbraidsmadeaturnontoapartofsingletrackandgatheredspeed.Hannahpulledupbehindher,whospedupagain.Hannahfollowedclosebehindher.Hannahwatchedfortheorangearrows(箭頭)markingthecourseandbikedthroughthemuddyfields.Attheedgeoftheforest,thegirlwaskneeling(跪)byherbike.Shemusthavegottenaflattire.Hannahbikedfaster.Shewipedthesweatfromhereyes,breathless.NowHannahwascloseenoughtoseethegirlputtingthechainonthechainring.Hannahfeltajoltofenergyasshepassedthegirlintothewoods.Maybeshecouldwin.Inthemiddleofasmallmeadow,Hannahlookedback.Thegirlwasingupbehindheratafastspeed.Hannahenteredthewoodsagain.Atafork(岔口)inthetrail,toherleft,wasthesignwiththeorangearrow.Whensheturned,herfootslippedoffthepedal,andsheaccidentallykickedthesignover.Ineedtostopandfixthesign,shethought.Theotherracersmightgetlost.Butevenasshewasthinkingthis,herfeetkeptmovingfaster,faster.“HannahAnderson,winneroftheFiveMileJuniorFatTireRace!”avoiceannouncedasshepassedthefinishline.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150個左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答?!癏ey!”Hannahturnedandsawthegirlwiththebraidsjumpingoffherbike.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LookingatthenewmountainbikeHannahmadeadecision.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文本分析1.角色:_____________________________2.視角:第________人稱3.時空線:racegatheringarea______________finishline4.請在文章中將可能的線索都找出來。What'sthefirstprizeoftheFiveMileJuniorFatTireRace?:______________________________________________WhywasHannahexcitedabouttherace?:____________________________________________Whowasleadingtheraceatthebeginning?:_______________________Whathappenedtotheleadinggirlattheedgeoftheforest?:___________________________________HowdidHannahgetthechancetopasstheleadinggirl?:_______________________WhataccidentdidHannahhaveattheforkinthetrail?:__________________________________________________WhatdidHannahthinksheshoulddoaftertheaccident?Whatdidsheactuallydo?:___________________Whowontheracefinally?:_______________________________________5.情節(jié)線:Hannah參加五英里青少年胖胎自行車賽,對一等獎充滿期待?!鷂___________→______________→___________________→(續(xù)寫)紅辮子女孩叫住剛奪冠的Hannah。Hannah看著新山地車做出一個決定。6.情感線:Hannah:excited→___________→___________→___________(續(xù)寫)→___________(續(xù)寫);Thegirlwithredbraids:confident→___________→___________(續(xù)寫)→___________(續(xù)寫)7.綜合以上信息,請用34句話概括文章大意。(中英各一個)中文:______________________________________________________________英文:______________________________________________________________8.句式:賓語從句;非謂語;感嘆句;同位語;完全倒裝句;比喻;夸張_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9.本文屬于人與自我、人與他人:_______________________________________情節(jié)構造第一段提示句:“Hey!”Hannahturnedandsawthegirlwiththebraidsjumpingoffherbike.銜接句1———對前面的"Hannahwontherace"提問“紅辮子女孩叫住Hannah的原因是什么?她會說什么?”:What'sthereasonwhythegirlwithredbraidsstoppedHannah,andwhatwouldshesay?現(xiàn)場情況:紅辮子女孩神色急促,語氣帶著一絲不滿,顯然是有關于比賽的重要事情要告知Hannah。過渡句推演:銜接1→______?______←銜接2銜接句2———對"Hannah'sreaction"提問“Hannah聽到紅辮子女孩的話后會有什么反應?”:HowwouldHannahreactwhensheheardwhatthegirlwithredbraidssaid?Hannah的反應:起初可能有些慌亂和心虛,意識到自己的行為帶來了影響,內(nèi)心充滿愧疚,無法為奪冠感到坦然。第二段提示句:LookingatthenewmountainbikeHannahmadeadecision.銜接3———對"madeadecision"提問“Hannah做出了什么決定?她會如何實施這個決定?”:WhatdecisiondidHannahmake,andhowwouldshecarryitout?實施過程:Hannah會找到比賽組織者,主動說明自己踢倒指示牌未扶起的情況,承認自己的不當行為,提出合理的解決方案。過渡句推演:銜接3→_____?_____←主題主題:_________________________________段落構思第一段:“Hey!”Hannahturnedandsawthegirlwiththebraidsjumpingoffherbike.→①__________________→②__________________→③__________________;英文:____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第二段:LookingatthenewmountainbikeHannahmadeadecision.→④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥__________________。英文:_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________參考答案文本分析角色:Hannah(參賽選手,渴望贏得一等獎藍色山地車)、thegirlwithredbraids(參賽選手,初期領先,遭遇車鏈故障)、raceorganizer(比賽組織者)視角:第____三____人稱時空線:racegatheringareamuddyfields,edgeoftheforest,smallmeadow,trailforkfinishline4.線索答案:What'sthefirstprizeoftheFiveMileJuniorFatTireRace?:Abluemountainbike.WhywasHannahexcitedabouttherace?:Becausethefirstprizewasabluemountainbike,andshedreamedofridingitthroughthewoods.Whowasleadingtheraceatthebeginning?:Thegirlwithredbraids.Whathappenedtotheleadinggirlattheedgeoftheforest?:Shehadabikeproblem—shewaskneelingbyherbikeandputtingthechainonthechainring.HowdidHannahgetthechancetopasstheleadinggirl?:Thegirlwithredbraidsstoppedtofixherbikechain,soHannahseizedthechancetoovertakeher.WhataccidentdidHannahhaveattheforkinthetrail?:Whensheturnedattheforkwiththeorangearrowsign,herfootslippedoffthepedalandsheaccidentallykickedthesignover.WhatdidHannahthinksheshoulddoaftertheaccident?Whatdidsheactuallydo?:Shethoughtsheshouldstopandfixthesigntopreventotherracersfromgettinglost,butshekeptridingfastertowintherace.Whowontheracefinally?:HannahAnderson.5.情節(jié)線:Hannah參加五英里青少年胖胎自行車賽,對一等獎充滿期待。→比賽開始后紅辮子女孩領先,Hannah緊緊跟隨→紅辮子女孩在森林邊緣停車修理自行車鏈條,Hannah趁機超越→Hannah在岔路口踢倒指示牌未扶起,繼續(xù)沖刺奪冠→(續(xù)寫)紅辮子女孩叫住剛奪冠的Hannah。Hannah看著新山地車做出一個決定。6.情感線:Hannah:excited→determined(緊跟領先者時)→eager(超越后渴望奪冠時)→guilty(奪冠后面對紅辮子女孩時)→ashamed(得知自身行為影響他人后)→resolute(做出誠信抉擇時);Thegirlwithredbraids:confident(領先時)→frustrated(車鏈故障時)→angry(發(fā)現(xiàn)指示牌被踢倒后)→understanding(看到Hannah誠信舉動后)7.文章大意:中文:Hannah參加五英里青少年胖胎自行車賽,一等獎是她夢寐以求的藍色山地車。比賽初期紅辮子女孩一路領先,卻在森林邊緣遭遇車鏈故障。Hannah趁機超越,途中在岔路口不慎踢倒指示牌,雖明知可能導致其他選手迷路,但為了奪冠仍未停留,最終成功沖線。英文:HannahtookpartintheFiveMileJuniorFatTireRace,withthefirstprizebeingabluemountainbikeshehadlongdesired.Thegirlwithredbraidsledtheraceatfirstbuthadabikechainproblemattheedgeoftheforest.Hannahseizedtheopportunitytoovertakeher.Ontheway,sheaccidentallykickedoverthesignatthefork.Thoughknowingitmightmakeotherracerslost,shedidn’tstopforthesakeofwinningandfinallycrossedthefinishlinesuccessfully.8.句式示例:賓語從句:Hannahdreamedthatshewouldflythroughthewoodsonthebluemountainbike.非謂語:Puttingthechainonthechainring,thegirlwithredbraidsdidn’tnoticeHannahpassingby.感嘆句:WhatapreciouschancetowintheraceitwasforHannah!同位語:Thefirstprize,abluemountainbike,wasthemotivationforHannahtokeepgoing.完全倒裝句:Attheforkinthetrailstoodanorangearrowsignguidingtheracers.比喻:Hannahpedaledasfastasawindafterpassingthegirlwithredbraids.夸張:TheexcitementofwinningmadeHannah’sheartbeatsofastthatitseemedtojumpoutofherchest.9.本文屬于人與自我、人與他人:人與自我——面對榮譽與誠信的內(nèi)心抉擇;人與他人——競爭中的公平公正與相互理解情節(jié)構造第一段提示句:“Hey!”Hannahturnedandsawthegirlwiththebraidsjumpingoffherbike.銜接句1———對前面的"Hannahwontherace"提問“紅辮子女孩叫住Hannah的原因是什么?她會說什么?”:What'sthereasonwhythegirlwithredbraidsstoppedHannah,andwhatwouldshesay?現(xiàn)場情況:紅辮子女孩神色急促,語氣帶著一絲不滿,顯然是有關于比賽的重要事情要告知Hannah。過渡句推演:銜接1→紅辮子女孩的話會揭示什么關鍵事實?這會讓Hannah的內(nèi)心產(chǎn)生怎樣的波動?←銜接2銜接句2———對"Hannah'sreaction"提問“Hannah聽到紅辮子女孩的話后會有什么反應?”:HowwouldHannahreactwhensheheardwhatthegirlwithredbraidssaid?Hannah的反應:起初可能有些慌亂和心虛,意識到自己的行為帶來了影響,內(nèi)心充滿愧疚,無法為奪冠感到坦然。第二段提示句:LookingatthenewmountainbikeHannahmadeadecision.銜接3———對"madeadecision"提問“Hannah做出了什么決定?她會如何實施這個決定?”:WhatdecisiondidHannahmake,andhowwouldshecarryitout?實施過程:Hannah會找到比賽組織者,主動說明自己踢倒指示牌未扶起的情況,承認自己的不當行為,提出合理的解決方案。過渡句推演:銜接3→Hannah的決定會帶來什么結(jié)果?這個結(jié)果能體現(xiàn)出怎樣的核心價值?←主題主題:誠信比榮譽更珍貴,競爭的真諦不僅在于勝負,更在于堅守道德底線、秉持公平公正的原則。段落構思第一段:“Hey!”Hannahturnedandsawthegirlwiththebraidsjumpingoffherbike.→①紅辮子女孩氣憤地指出Hannah踢倒指示牌,導致自己迷路耽誤時間;②Hannah低頭認錯,坦陳當時想奪冠的僥幸心理;③紅辮子女孩雖有不滿,但看到Hannah真誠的歉意后語氣逐漸緩和;英文:“Hey!”Hannahturnedandsawthegirlwiththebrai

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