應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作山形框架寫(xiě)作法祝賀信應(yīng)用文?行業(yè)PPT模板http:///hangye/題型分析

祝賀信是指在日常生活中，得知同學(xué)或朋友競(jìng)賽獲獎(jiǎng)、考上大學(xué)或成功完成了某事等時(shí)，向?qū)Ψ奖硎咀ＹR的信件。書(shū)寫(xiě)時(shí)應(yīng)做到真誠(chéng)、自然、親切動(dòng)人。內(nèi)容通常包括：開(kāi)篇表明祝賀事由；正文說(shuō)明被祝賀人所取得的成績(jī)，肯定對(duì)方的努力及優(yōu)點(diǎn)；結(jié)尾表達(dá)祝愿。思維導(dǎo)圖Step1審題填充要點(diǎn)豐富語(yǔ)言明確要求衷心祝賀積極評(píng)價(jià)+求教/請(qǐng)求再次祝賀/祝愿Step2架構(gòu)Step3優(yōu)化OpeningBodyClosing內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)的全面性：覆蓋所有語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)與詞匯的豐富性、準(zhǔn)確性：較多、較復(fù)雜、較高級(jí)再上下文連貫性：緊湊五檔作文

（13-15）寫(xiě)作方法Step1審題填充要點(diǎn)豐富語(yǔ)言明確要求Step2架構(gòu)Step3優(yōu)化?1.體裁：2.命題形式：3.考查內(nèi)容：4.詞數(shù)要求：5.題型分值：6.建議用時(shí)：應(yīng)用文提綱式（半開(kāi)放式）實(shí)際生活情境下用英語(yǔ)傳達(dá)信息、表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)的能力80滿分15分15分鐘假如你是李華，你的好友李明在網(wǎng)上中國(guó)詩(shī)詞朗誦比賽中榮獲一等獎(jiǎng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容，給他寫(xiě)一封祝賀信。內(nèi)容包括：1.表達(dá)你的愉悅心情并表示祝賀；2.肯定對(duì)方成績(jī)并予以贊美；3.希望共進(jìn)晚餐以示慶祝。Comparetherequirements假如你是李華，得知你的好友Peter以優(yōu)異成績(jī)高中畢業(yè)并被一所重點(diǎn)大學(xué)錄取。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容，給他寫(xiě)一封電子郵件表示祝賀。內(nèi)容包括：

1.向Peter表示祝賀；2.請(qǐng)他介紹學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)驗(yàn)；3.再次表達(dá)祝賀和祝愿。假設(shè)你是李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Peter給你發(fā)來(lái)一封郵件，告訴你他被推選為學(xué)校籃球隊(duì)隊(duì)長(zhǎng)。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給他回一封郵件。要點(diǎn)包括：1.對(duì)他的祝賀；2.你對(duì)此事的看法；3.對(duì)他的祝愿。假定你是李華，從小喜愛(ài)大熊貓(panda),一直通過(guò)有關(guān)網(wǎng)站(website)關(guān)注三年前在美國(guó)圣迭哥動(dòng)物園出生的大熊貓"蘇琳"和她的母親"白云"?，F(xiàn)在蘇琳即將三歲。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給動(dòng)物園工作人員寫(xiě)一封信：1.祝賀蘇琳生日；2.感謝工作人員并索取蘇琳三歲生日照；3.再次祝賀蘇琳生日。積極評(píng)價(jià)+虛心求教積極評(píng)價(jià)+其他請(qǐng)求積極評(píng)價(jià)高階模板DearMrsWang,

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Iwouldliketoextendtoyoumyutmostcongratulationsonyourwinningthe"ChineseIdioms"contestheldbyyourschool'sChineseLearningClub,whichcameasnosurprise.I’mamazedatyourextraordinaryachievementsinceitisdifficulttostudyChineseidioms.Itisyouruntiringdiligence,perseveranceand

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prosperousfuture.Yourssincerely,LiHua（湖南省長(zhǎng)沙市長(zhǎng)郡中學(xué)2023-2024學(xué)年高三下學(xué)期）假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)筆友Chris來(lái)郵件與你分享了他參加了他們學(xué)校中文學(xué)習(xí)俱樂(lè)部開(kāi)展的“中國(guó)成語(yǔ)(ChineseIdioms)”比賽，并獲得了冠軍的消息。請(qǐng)你給他寫(xiě)一封回信。要求如下：1.表達(dá)祝賀；2.肯定努力；3.表達(dá)祝愿。注意：1.寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文流暢。模板套用

通用模板Dear_______,(首段祝賀)Congratulationsonyour_______.Itwasdelightfulformetohearthat______________.IknowhowhardyouhavebeenworkingandIamveryproudofyouforyourachievement.Pleaseacceptmysincerecongratulationsonyour___________.(評(píng)論事件)Ihavebeenwatchingyourprogresswithadmirationalltheyears,andIunderstandforsurethatitisyourhardwork/yourexcellentabilitythatleadsyoutothecurrentsuccess.Nowyouprovetomeamatureandwell-rounded（全面的）________ineveryrespect.(展望未來(lái)，再次祝愿)Judgingfromyourcurrentsuccess/achievement,Iamconfidentthatinthefuture___________.Again,Iwouldliketoextendtoyoumyutmostcongratulationson______.Mayalltheyearsaheadfulfillyourdreams!Yours，___________DearChris,Congratulationsonyourwinningthechampionshipintheinterschoolbasketballgamelastweek,whichcameasnosurprise.Itwasdelightfulformetohearthatyouwinthechampionship.IknowhowhardyouhavebeenworkingandIamveryproudofyouforyourachievement.Pleaseacceptmysincerecongratulationsonyourwinningthechampionshipintheinterschoolbasketballgame.Ihavebeenwatchingyourprogresswithadmirationalltheyears,andIunderstandforsurethatitisyourhardworkandyourexcellentabilitythatleadsyoutothecurrentsuccess.Again,Iwouldliketoextendtoyoumyutmostcongratulationsonyourwinningthechampionshipintheinterschoolbasketballgame.Mayalltheyearsaheadfulfillyourdreams!Yours，___________（英語(yǔ)周報(bào)2023年度春季學(xué)期高一課標(biāo)第59期高一英語(yǔ)下學(xué)期總復(fù)習(xí)三）假定你是李華，收到外國(guó)朋友Chris的郵件，告訴你他所在的球隊(duì)上周在校際籃球賽（interschoolbasketballgame）中獲得冠軍。請(qǐng)給他回一封郵件，祝賀他取得的好成績(jī)，并贊賞他付出的努力。注意：寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右。模板套用

真題鏈接【2025·河北唐山】假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)好友Jim來(lái)信告知他被國(guó)際野生生物保護(hù)學(xué)會(huì)錄用為暑期項(xiàng)目的志愿者。你對(duì)此非常感興趣，請(qǐng)你回復(fù)郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示祝賀；2.肯定他的努力；3.尋求項(xiàng)目信息。注意：寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右。參考詞匯：國(guó)際野生生物保護(hù)學(xué)會(huì)WildlifeConservationSociety(WCS)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua審題體裁祝賀信時(shí)態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)主題保護(hù)野生生物人稱第一、二人稱結(jié)構(gòu)第一段：表示祝賀第二段：肯定他的努力并尋求項(xiàng)目信息第三段：期待回復(fù)列綱

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再次祝賀BodyClosingOpening句型變換一句多譯先內(nèi)后外先努力后天賦前后銜接邏輯清晰繁簡(jiǎn)搭配自然流暢StructureContentPara1Para2Para3Tips1.Congratulationsonyoursuccessin(祝賀事由).Weareveryproudofyouforyouremarkable

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extend/convey/expressmysincere/cordial/heartycongratulationsonyour(祝賀事由),onbehalfof(某方).3.Iamexceedingly/morethandelighted/pleasedtolearnthat(祝賀事由)!Congratulations!4.

Itissuchagreatexcitementthat(祝賀事由),soIamwritingtosendmycongratulationstoyoufromthebottomofmyheart.5.Whatuplifting/thrilling/inspiring

newsthat(祝賀事由)!Congratulations!6.Onhearing(祝賀事由),Ican'thelpfeeling

exceedinglydelighted.7.Goodnewstravelfast!Itwasdelightfulformetolearnthat(祝賀事由).Pleaseacceptmysincerecongratulations!theChineseSpeechCompetitionPara1衷心祝賀開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山：事由+祝賀內(nèi)因外因勤奮diligence/industry/devotion天賦talent/gift毅力persistence/perseverance能力ability/capabilityBrainstorm:whatmakesforsuccess?環(huán)境environment/conditions機(jī)遇chance/opportunity運(yùn)氣goodluck/fortuneTip1:先內(nèi)后外先努力后天賦Para2積極評(píng)價(jià)+虛心求教S1：你獲獎(jiǎng)我不意外，因?yàn)槟阋幌蚴莻€(gè)努力又投入的人。Version1:Iamnotatallsurprisedatthenewsbecauseyouarealwayshard-workinganddevoted.Version2:Itcomesasnosurprisetomethatyouhavewonthefirstprizeduetothefactthatyouarealwayssodiligentanddevoted.名詞性從句Practice作為你的好朋友，我一直堅(jiān)信你遲早會(huì)成功，因?yàn)槟闱趭^又投入?！?/p>

______________________________________________________________Asyourclosefriend,Ialwaysholdthebelieffirmlythatyouwillmakeitintimeasaresultofconstantdiligenceanddevotion.Para2積極評(píng)價(jià)+虛心求教S2：你的堅(jiān)持和語(yǔ)言天賦促成了你在漢語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)上的進(jìn)步。Version1:Youarepersistentandtalentedinlanguage,soyoucanmakerapidprogressinChinese.Version2:Youarepersistentandtalentedinlanguage,whichcontributestoyourrapidprogressinChinese./contributingtoyour…Version3:ItisyourpersistenceandtalentinlanguagethatbringaboutyourrapidprogressinChinese.定從非謂Practice你能被北大錄取源于你的堅(jiān)持和付出?！?/p>

_____________________________________________________________________________________Yousparesnoeffortstoequipyourself,leadingtoyoursuccessfuladmission…強(qiáng)調(diào)句型Itisyourpersistenceandeffortsthatearnedyouyoursuccessfuladmission…Para2積極評(píng)價(jià)+虛心求教S3：你優(yōu)美的發(fā)音和流利的口語(yǔ)一定給觀眾和評(píng)委留下了深刻的映像。Version1:I'msureyouimpressedtheaudienceandthejudgeswithyourpronunciationandfluency.Version2:YourbeautifulpronunciationandfluencyinspokenChinesemusthavelefttheaudienceandthejudgesadeepimpression.Version3:WithoutyourbeautifulpronunciationandfluencyinspokenChinese,youcouldn'thavelefttheaudienceandthejudgesadeepimpression.虛擬語(yǔ)氣Practice要不是之前積累的豐富經(jīng)驗(yàn)，你比賽的時(shí)候也不會(huì)如此從容自信。————————————————————————————————————

_________________________________________________________________Ifithadn'tbeenfortherichexperienceaccumulatedpreviously,youwouldn'thavebeensocalmandconfidentwheninthecompetition.Para2積極評(píng)價(jià)+虛心求教S4：你的成功令我開(kāi)心，使我鼓舞。我也將參加英語(yǔ)演講比賽，能否分享一些成功經(jīng)驗(yàn)？Version1:Yoursuccessmakesmepleasedandencouraged.IwilltakepartinanEnglishspeechcompetition.Wouldyouliketogivemesomeadvice?Version2:Notonlydoesyoursuccessfunctionasadelight,italsoservesasanencouragementtome.IplantotakepartinanEnglishspeechcompetition,soIwonderifitispossibleforyoutosharewithmeyouradvice.倒裝Practice我為你驕傲，因?yàn)槟愕呐υ谀且豢探K于得到了回報(bào)（notuntil…）?！狪takeprideinyouasnotuntilthendidallyoureffortspayoff.Tip2:句型變換一句多譯Para2積極評(píng)價(jià)+虛心求教1.Congratulationsagainonyoursuccessandbestwishes.2.SincerecongratulationstoyouagainandIamlookingforwardtoyourfurtherachievement.3.Mayeachsucceedingyearbringyougreathappinessandprosperity.4.Iwishyousuccessandfulfillmentintheyearahead.5.IwishyougreatersuccessandIamlookingforwardtogoodnewsfromyousoon.6.Pleaseacceptoursincerecongratulationsandbestwishesforallthegoodfuture.7.Allmybestwishesforanevenmoreprosperousfuture/successfulcareer!Para3再次祝賀/祝愿強(qiáng)調(diào)主題Onepossibleversion：DearJim,HowexcitedIwaswhenknowingthatyouwereadmittedtobeavolunteerofWildlifeConservationSociety.Pleaseacceptmyheartiestcongratulationsonthismeaningfulexperienceinyourupcomingsummer.Youhavebeensavingtheabandonedanimalsandhelpingthelovelyanimalsallthetime.Havingalwaysappreciatedyourdevotiontowildlifeconservation,Ifirmlybelievethatitisyourenthusiasmanddeterminationthatmakeyouselectedtobeavolunteer.HowIwishtojoinyouandbeavolunteerlikeyou!Couldyoupleasesendmesomeinformationonhowtoapplyforit?I'msureIwillmakeevengreatereffortstodosomethingfornatureandpeople.Lookingforwardtoyourreply!Yourssincerely,

LiHua1.2024·湖北武漢假定你是李華，得知你的外國(guó)筆友Peter獲得了“漢語(yǔ)橋”中文演講比賽一等獎(jiǎng)。你為他感到驕傲，并給他寫(xiě)一封祝賀信，內(nèi)容包括：1.取得成就的原因(努力與堅(jiān)持)；2.繼續(xù)努力；3.希望見(jiàn)面和交流。注意：寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右。參考詞匯：“漢語(yǔ)橋”中文演講比賽“ChineseBridge”ChinesespeechcontestDearPeter,__________________________________________________________________DearPeter,I'mmorethandelightedtohearthatyouwonthefirstplaceof“ChineseBridge”Chinesespeechcontest.Pleaseacceptmysincerecongratulationsonyourachievement.Asweallknow,itisyourhardworkandpersistencethatleadyoutothecurrentsuccess.Inthepastfewmonths,youhavebeendevotingtimeandefforttopracticingChineseeveryday,becauseofwhichyoumadegreatprogress.Butinordertoachievemoreinyourstudyandembraceabetterfutureinyourlife,you'dbettergoonstudyingC