靜景活化，勾勒靈動畫面在描寫人物或事物時，僅有靜態(tài)描寫往往會使文章顯得呆板木訥，所以我們有必要將一些靜態(tài)描寫轉(zhuǎn)化為動態(tài)描寫，讓文章更具畫面感，讓內(nèi)容活起來。描寫素材：1.靜態(tài)轉(zhuǎn)化為動態(tài)例1Shewasexcitedwhenshewaspresentedwiththemostpreciousgift.（靜態(tài)）→Herfacelitupwhenshewaspresentedwiththemostpreciousgift.（動態(tài)）析改寫為動態(tài)描寫facelitup后，將描寫重點聚焦到臉部，既說明了激動心情，又體現(xiàn)了她的表情變化，描寫更加生動細膩。例2Wewerehappytorecognizeourneighbor'scar.（靜態(tài)）→Wejumpedwithjoywhenwerecognizedourneighbor'scar.（動態(tài)）析改寫為動態(tài)后，既表明了喜悅的心情，又突出了因喜悅引起的動作跳了起來，描寫更加生動。例3WhenMrs.Morenacametopickhimup,hewasangryagain.（靜態(tài)）→WhenMrs.Morenacametopickhimup,hepulledalongfaceagain.（動態(tài)）析改寫為動態(tài)后，將描寫聚焦在臉部，將他的生氣之情描寫得惟妙惟肖。2.名詞/形容詞動用身體部位類名詞動用faceyourfriend面對你的朋友shoulderone'swaythrough側(cè)身擠過fingerthewound用手指觸碰傷口headtheball用頭頂球armoneselfwithcourage用勇氣武裝elbowsb.outoftheway用肘推開某人handsb.anote遞紙條給某人eyesb.suspiciously懷疑地盯著某人nosearoundtheroom在房間里嗅來嗅去kneethedooropen用膝蓋頂開門自然現(xiàn)象／生物類名詞動用fogone'sbrain使大腦困惑springtoone'sfeet跳起來windthroughtheforest蜿蜒穿過森林thunderawarning厲聲發(fā)出警告floodin蜂擁而入stormintotheroom怒闖房間breezepastsb.輕盈地從某人身邊走過dustthebookshelf擦拭書架sunlightstreamsthroughtheglass陽光透過玻璃灑入eyescloudwithtears淚水模糊了眼睛其他類名詞動用maskangerwithasmile用微笑掩飾憤怒mapthejourneyout精心規(guī)劃旅程walloffthegarden用墻隔開花園chainthedog拴住狗picturesth設想某事，憶起某事bone'shair梳頭發(fā)chairameeting主持會議stageaperformance上演表演mirrorsth…映照出…狀態(tài)類／特征類形容詞動用emptythebox清空盒子drytheclothes烘干衣服quietsb.使某人安靜下來dimthelight使燈光變暗warmone'sheart溫暖某人的心loosetheknot解開繩結(jié)slowthepace放慢腳步thinthecrowd使人群逐漸散開bravechallenges勇敢面對挑戰(zhàn)lightthecandle點燃蠟燭續(xù)寫微練：一請用括號內(nèi)提示詞重寫句子。1．原句：Thekitchensmelledverygood.Wewerehungry．改寫（waterv.):______________________________________________________2．原句：Afteryearsofseparation,thememoryofherfacebecameunclear．改寫（dimv.)：_______________________________________________________3．原句：Lookingatthebeefbeingcookedonthestove,themotherimaginedthewholefamilyhavingamealtogether.改寫（picturev.):__________________________________________________4．原句：Forsomemoments,Johnremainedsilent,butthenhesuddenlystoodupandshouted,"Ihaveagreatidea!”改寫（springv.):___________________________________________________5．原句：Herfootstepsresoundedintheemptyhallway,anddustparticlefloatedinthesunlight．改寫（echov.&wakev.)：________________________________根據(jù)漢語提示改寫句子：靜態(tài)到動態(tài)場景的轉(zhuǎn)變。1.靜態(tài)場景：Theoldbookwasonthedesk.Itspageswereyellowandthecornerswereworn．動態(tài)改寫：那本舊書躺在書桌上，書頁因時間而發(fā)黃。那些磨損的書角低聲訴說著無數(shù)的故事。［lie，yellow,whisper]__________________________________________________________________2．靜態(tài)場景：Thewindwasblowingthroughthetallgrassinthefield．動態(tài)改寫：風穿過高高的草叢，使田野蕩起漣漪，跳起舞來。［bthrough,ripple］__________________________________________________________________三根據(jù)括號里的提示補全句子：名詞／形容詞動用。1.Theafternoonsun_________________（透過玻璃傾灑而下，stream),pencilinglonggoldenlinesacrossthefloor.She__________（望向樹林，eye)wherethewinddancedwiththeleaves,seemingtowhispercongratulations.2.___________________（體育館里回蕩著歡呼聲，echo)asthefinalsecondstickedaway.Jordan________________（從長凳上一躍而起，spring),shoulderingpasthisteammatestograbthefallenbasketball.3.Theroaringnoisefromthestandsseemedtointensifywitheverypassingsecond.Thefloodlightsaboveappearedtobrighten,castingaharshglareonthecourt.Myfocusbeganto_____________（縮小到一個點上，narrow):thecalm,confidentexpressiononmyopponent'sface.________________（我的呼吸變快，speedup),andtheairaroundmefeltheavy,chargedwithanticipation.4.Ashesatthere,therigidlineofhisshouldersseemedtosoften.Awaveofgentlenesssteadiedhisnerves,replacingtheangerfromdaysbefore.Theunfortablesilencebetweenusdidn'tlast;itslowly_______________________________（開始變稀薄，thin)ashefinallyspokemyname,hisvoicelowbutclear.Theheavytensionthat______________________（給我們家蒙上數(shù)天陰影，cloud)finallystartedtoclear.參考答案：一1.Thegoodsmellfromthekitchenmadeourmouthswater.2.Afteryearsofseparation,thememoryofherfacedimmed.3.Lookingatthebeefbeingcookedonthestove,themotherpicturedthewholefamilyhavingamealtogether.4.Forsomemoments,Johnsaidnothing,butsuddenly,hesprangtohisfeetandcried,"Ihaveagreatidea!"5.Herfootstepsechoedintheemptyhallway,wakingdustparticlesthatdancedinthesunlight.二1.Theoldbooklayonthedesk,itspagesyellowedwithtime.Theworncornerswhisperedcountlessstories．2.Thewindbedthroughthetallgrass,makin