UNIT8寫(xiě)作能力提升練史密斯先生是一位太空愛(ài)好者。昨晚，他夢(mèng)到自己去太空探險(xiǎn)了。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的文字及圖片提示，充分發(fā)揮想象力，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，描述史密斯先生的夢(mèng)境。提示:史密斯先生去太空旅行，遇到了一個(gè)外星人，他邀請(qǐng)史密斯先生去自己的星球做客，可是星球的首領(lǐng)不同意。之后會(huì)發(fā)生什么奇妙的事情呢？參考詞匯:trumpet小號(hào)；喇叭［謀篇布局］理清文章要素，構(gòu)建文章結(jié)構(gòu)。［遣詞造句］1.昨天晚上，他夢(mèng)到去太空旅行。Lastnight,_________________________________.2.史密斯先生乘宇宙飛船進(jìn)入太空并且遇到了一位外星人。Mr.Smith__________________________________________.3.那位外星人很友好，邀請(qǐng)史密斯先生去他的星球。Thealienwassofriendlythat_____________________________.就結(jié)構(gòu)圖中的要點(diǎn)完成句子。hedreamedabouttravelingtospacewentintospaceinaspaceshipandmetanalienheinvitedMr.Smithtohisplanet4.然而那個(gè)星球的首領(lǐng)不同意外星人的意見(jiàn)，他阻止史密斯先生進(jìn)入他們的星球。However,theleaderoftheplanetdisagreedwiththealien._______________________________________________.5.最后，史密斯先生受到這個(gè)星球上所有外星人的熱烈歡迎。Atlast,Mr.Smith_______________________________________________________.HepreventedMr.SmithfromenteringtheirplanetwaswarmlywelcomedbyallthealiensontheplanetMr.Smithlovesspaceverymuch.Lastnight,hedreamedabouttravelingtospace.Mr.Smithwentintospaceinaspaceshipandmetanalien.ThealienwassofriendlythatheinvitedMr.Smithtohisplanet.However,theleaderoftheplanetdisagreedwiththealien.HepreventedMr.Smithfromenteringtheirplanet.Mr.Smiththoughthemustdosomethingtomaketheleaderbelieveinhim.Sohegaveatrumpettohim,becausethealien’smouthlookedlikeatrumpet.Atlast,Mr.Smithwaswarmlywelcomedbyallthealiensontheplanet.［連句成篇］1.思路清晰，由“史密斯先生是一名太空愛(ài)好者”引出他昨晚夢(mèng)到太空探險(xiǎn)，繼而交代其夢(mèng)境。2.連接詞however，so,atlast等的運(yùn)用為作文增彩。3.正確運(yùn)用一些短語(yǔ)，如：dreamabout,so...that,disagreewith,believein等使文章更為豐富精彩。高分點(diǎn)評(píng)：請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，描述上周三你生日那天發(fā)生的一件神秘的事。要點(diǎn)提示:1.放學(xué)回家后，家里沒(méi)有人；2.發(fā)現(xiàn)我的房間很亂；3.分析可能的原因，如小偷闖入；4.后來(lái)發(fā)現(xiàn)是一只小狗在房間里，這是媽媽送給我的生日禮物。寫(xiě)作要求:1.詞數(shù)90左右（開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；

2.根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示寫(xiě)作，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。參考詞匯:inamess亂糟糟；breakin闖入________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ItwasmybirthdaylastWednesday.思路分析：1.首段介紹事件發(fā)生的背景。2.第二段介紹事件發(fā)生的經(jīng)過(guò)，重點(diǎn)介紹作者的心理活動(dòng)。3.第三段收尾并表達(dá)作者對(duì)禮物的喜愛(ài)之情。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ItwasmybirthdaylastWednesday.Afterschool,Icamehomeasusual.Tomysurprise,IfoundmyroomwasinamesswhenIopenedthedoor.Mybookswereeverywhere.Iwonderedwhodidit.Atfirst,Iguesseditmightbeathiefbreakingin,buttheotherroomswerecleanandtidy.ThenIthoughtitcouldbemylittlebrother.However,hewastooshorttoopenthedoor.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________AsIwasconsideringwhoitmightbe,alovelydogcameout.Atthesame