單元話題寫作Unit7

Teenagersshouldbeallowedtochoosetheirownclothes.話題分析本單元以“規(guī)則”為話題，結(jié)合此話題就學(xué)校和家庭的各種規(guī)章制度進(jìn)行了論述。在本單元話題作文的命題過(guò)程中，命題人通常會(huì)讓你就學(xué)?；蚣彝サ哪承┮?guī)章制度談一談自己的看法。寫作時(shí)多用第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)時(shí)要有理有據(jù)，不能偏激。

本單元寫作情境屬于“人與自我”主題范疇中“做人與做事”和“人與社會(huì)”主題范疇中“社會(huì)服務(wù)與人際溝通”這兩個(gè)主題群，涉及子主題“自我認(rèn)識(shí)，自我管理，自我提升”和“良好的人際關(guān)系與人際交往”。常見(jiàn)的寫作任務(wù)是根據(jù)實(shí)際情況或文字提示，寫出談?wù)摷乙?guī)、校規(guī)等規(guī)章制度的短文，并能適當(dāng)發(fā)表自己的見(jiàn)解，體裁多為記敘文或議論文。◆開頭句①In

order

to

make

families

better,a

lot

of

families

have

their

own

rules.②Life

is

always

full

of

all

kinds

of

rules.

So

is

our

school.◆中間句①

First

of

all,it’s

necessary

for

us

to

realize

the

importance

of

traffic

safety.②Teenagers

are

too

young

to

make

their

own

decisions.◆結(jié)尾句①

In

short,if

we

obey

the

rules

and

take

care

of

ourselves,we

will

grow

up

safely

and

healthily.②Although

these

rules

are

strict,they

are

good

for

my

growth.【名言積累】①Nothing

can

be

accomplished

without

norms

or

standards.無(wú)規(guī)矩不成方圓。②A

nation

has

its

rule

and

a

family

also

has

one！國(guó)有國(guó)法，家有家規(guī)!

俗話說(shuō)：“無(wú)規(guī)矩不成方圓”。為了營(yíng)造良好的家庭氛圍，使子女養(yǎng)成良好的生活習(xí)慣，每個(gè)家庭都會(huì)有這樣或那樣的家規(guī)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示，先簡(jiǎn)要介紹Mary和Tom的家規(guī)，然后說(shuō)說(shuō)你家的家規(guī)（2-3條）并談?wù)勛约旱母惺堋?/p>

要求：

1.100詞左右（標(biāo)題和開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；

2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名和校名。??審題指導(dǎo)1.文體：議論文2.人稱：第一人稱和第三人稱3.時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)4.寫作要點(diǎn)：①M(fèi)ary的家規(guī)；②Tom的家規(guī)；③我的家規(guī)及對(duì)這些家規(guī)的看法??思路點(diǎn)撥??范文賞析_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

①she

is

not

allowed

to

talk

while

eating.

Her

parents

think

it’s

a

bad

behavior.For

Tom,he

can’t

watch

TV

or

play

the

mobile

phone

at

home.

If

he

does

so,his

parents

will

be

angry

with

him.

And

going

to

bed

before

ten

is

a

must.②His

parents

think

it’s

good

for

his

health.Nothing

Can

Be

Accomplished

Without

Rules

In

order

to

make

families

better,a

lot

of

families

have

their

own

rules.In

Mary’s

family,

Every

family

has

its

own

rules.③There

are

also

some

rules

in

my

family.④First,⑤my

parents

care

much

about

my

exam

results.I’m

not

allowed

to

make

mistakes

because

of

carelessness.⑥Second,going

out

at

night

is

not

allowed.

If

I

do

want

to

hang

out

with

my

friends

at

night,I

must

⑦let

my

parents

know.

You

may

think

my

parents

put

too

much

pressure

on

me

by

making

such

strict

rules.

But

I

can

understand

them

because

they

really

want

me

to

have

a

bright

future.

Nothing

Can

Be

Accomplished

Without

Rules

In

order

to

make

families

better,a

lot

of

families

have

their

own

rules.

In

Mary’s

family,talking

while

eating

is

a

bad

behavior,①

____

she

is

not

allowed

to

do

that.

For

Tom,he

can’t

watch

TV

or

play

the

mobile

phone

at

home.

升格技巧技巧一：巧用邏輯連詞升格①soIf

he

does

so,his

parents

will

be

angry

with

him.

And

going

to

bed

before

ten

is

a

must.

In

his

parents’

eyes,②____________________________________________（早睡早起身體好）.技巧二：巧用諺語(yǔ)升格②early

to

bed

and

early

to

rise

is

good

for

health續(xù)表

Every

family

has

its

own

rules.③

______________（我家也是）

④

______________（一方面）,my

parents

⑤

________________________（非常關(guān)注）

my

exam

results.

I’m

not

allowed

to

make

mistakes

because

of

carelessness.⑥

_________________（另一方面）,going

out

at

night

is

not

allowed.

If

I

do

want

to

hang

out

with

my

friends

at

night,I

must

⑦

__________________（和……保持聯(lián)系）

my

parents

all

the

time.

You

may

think

my

parents

put

too

much

pressure

on

me

by

making

such

strict

rules.

But

I

can

understand

them

because

they

really

want

me

to

have

a

bright

future.技巧三：巧用倒裝句升格③技巧四：巧用銜接詞升格④⑥技巧五：巧用短語(yǔ)升格⑤⑦So

does

mine.For

one

thingpay

too

much

attention

toFor

another

thingkeep

in

touch

with續(xù)表Withapartner,discusssomerulesathome

thatyouagreeordisagreewith.Makesome

notesinthechart.RuleWhyyouagreeordisagreewithitHowyouthinktheruleshouldbechangedcan’tplaycomputergamescan’twatchTV3aAgree-playingcomputergamesmaygetinthewayofourschoolwork.PlayasfewgamesaspossibleDisagree-Sometimesweneedtorelaxsothatwecanstudybetter.ShouldbeallowedtowatchTVprogramsonweekendsWriteadiaryentryexplainingwhichrule(s)youdonotagreewithathomeandhowyouthinktherule(s)shouldbechanged.3bUsethefollowingexpressionstohelpyou:Idonotagreewith…IthinkIshouldbeallowedto...Iwouldliketo...Icould…ifI...思路點(diǎn)撥內(nèi)容：你認(rèn)為哪一條家規(guī)不合理、理由及應(yīng)該如何修改文體：應(yīng)用文(日記)；日記的主體部分為議論文

人稱：以第一人稱為主

時(shí)態(tài)：以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主話題引出→

（Beginning）↓↓↓↗1.不贊成的原因→2.

（MainBody）↘3.↓↓

總結(jié)觀點(diǎn)→（Ending）FamilyrulesyoudisagreeWhyyoudisagreeHowitshouldbechangedTherearemanyrulesinmyhouse.Idonotagreewith...Thisisbecause...IthinkIshould...Ihopemyparentswillallowmeto…OutlineWriting

tips

Payattentiontothestructure.

Beginning—FamilyrulesyoudisagreeBody—Whyyoudisagree

Ending--HowitshouldbechangedTrytomakesentencesdifferently.IthinkIshouldbeallowedto…Iwouldliketo…Icould…if…Idonotagreewiththeideathat…TrytousesomelinkingwordsFirst;next;however;what’smore;inaword;allinall…4thApril,Sunday

Therearemanyrulesinmyhouse.IdonotagreewiththerulethatImustbehomefordinnereveryday.Thisisbecausetheruleaffectsmysociallife.Ittakesawayopportunitiesformetospendtimewithmyfriends.Asaresult,mylifeisquiteboringsometimes.IthinkIshouldbeallowedtohavedinnerwithmyfriendsonceinawhile.Forexample,IwouldliketohangoutwithmyclassmatesafterdinneronsomeFridays.IhopemyparentswillallowmetodothisifIpromisenottostayouttoolateandifthereisnoimportantfamilyactivityonthosedays.Sample

假如你叫李華,是一名中學(xué)生。父母對(duì)你要求非常嚴(yán)格，你有很多家規(guī)。請(qǐng)以“Myfamilyrules”為題，根據(jù)提示，簡(jiǎn)要介紹你的家規(guī)，并談?wù)勀愕目捶āＬ崾荆?.不準(zhǔn)穿耳洞，不準(zhǔn)戴耳環(huán)，不準(zhǔn)抽煙、喝酒；2.先寫作業(yè)再看電視;3.早睡早起，不準(zhǔn)熬夜；4.不和父母頂嘴,關(guān)心家人和朋友，幫助父母做家務(wù)。要求：1.熟練運(yùn)用所學(xué)知識(shí)，條理清楚，邏輯合理。2.書寫規(guī)范。3.詞數(shù)：80左右Howmanysteps(步驟)ofwriting:_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________51.Analysethetopic.“審”2.Listanoutline.“列”3.Connectsentencesintoanarticle.“連”4.Correctthearticle.“改”5.Copyitintothepaper.“謄”It’stimetowrite.

假如你叫李華,是一名中學(xué)生。父母對(duì)你要求非常嚴(yán)格，你有很多家規(guī)。請(qǐng)以“Myfamilyrules”為題，根據(jù)提示，簡(jiǎn)要介紹你的家規(guī)，并談?wù)勀愕目捶āＬ崾荆?.不準(zhǔn)穿耳洞，不準(zhǔn)戴耳環(huán)，不準(zhǔn)抽煙、喝酒；2.先寫作業(yè)再看電視;3.早睡早起，不準(zhǔn)熬夜；4.不和父母頂嘴,關(guān)心家人和朋友，幫助父母做家務(wù)。要求：1.熟練運(yùn)用所學(xué)知識(shí)，條理清楚，邏輯合理。2.書寫規(guī)范。3.詞數(shù)：80左右1.Analysethetopic.“審”styleofwriting(體裁):__________tense(時(shí)態(tài))：___________person(人稱):______keypoints(要點(diǎn)):__________________I一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)說(shuō)明文familyrules

假如你叫李華,是一名中學(xué)生。父母對(duì)你要求非常嚴(yán)格，你有很多家規(guī)。請(qǐng)以“Myfamilyrules”為題，根據(jù)提示，簡(jiǎn)要介紹你的家規(guī)，并談?wù)勀愕目捶?。提示?.不準(zhǔn)穿耳洞，不準(zhǔn)戴耳環(huán)，不準(zhǔn)抽煙、喝酒；2.先寫作業(yè)再看電視;3.早睡早起，不準(zhǔn)熬夜；4.不和父母頂嘴,關(guān)心家人和朋友，幫助父母做家務(wù)。要求：1.熟練運(yùn)用所學(xué)知識(shí)，條理清楚，邏輯合理。2.書寫規(guī)范。3.詞數(shù)：80左右2.Makeanoutline.“列”

Myfamilyruleshowmanyparagraphs(段落):____para.1:______________________________para.2:____________________________________________________________para.3:______________________________3Mynameis___.I’ma___.Ihave___.myfamilyrulesopinions(Ithink/agreethat...)(First...second...third...finally...)Linkingwords(連接詞):表并列：and,both...and...表轉(zhuǎn)折：but,however...表因果：because,so,asaresult...表遞進(jìn)：notonly...butalso...,what’smore表結(jié)果：so...that...,such...that...表先后：first,second,third,next,finally...表時(shí)間：when,while,after,before...3.Connectsentencesintoanarticle.“連”TimeforwritingPossibleVersion:

MynameisLiHua.Iamamiddleschoolstudent.Myparentsarestrictwithme.Therearemanyrulesinmyfamily.Letmetellyouaboutthem.

First,Ican’tgetearspiercedorwearearrings.Iamnotallowedtosmokeordrink,either.Second,IhavetofinishmyhomeworkbeforewatchingTV.What’smore,Imustgotobedandgetupearly.Stayinguplateisnotallowedforme.Last,Imustnottalkbacktomyparents.Ineedtocareaboutmyfamilyandfriends,andIamrequiredtohelpwithhouseworkathome. Ithinksomeofmyfamilyrulesarestrict.However,Iknowthattheyaremadetomakemebecomebetterandbetter.MyFamilyRules

Enjoyavideo.Whatcanyoulearnfromthisvideo?1.Ourgrowthneedsrules.我們的成長(zhǎng)需要規(guī)則。

2.Nothingcanbedonewithoutrules.無(wú)規(guī)矩不成方圓。3.Anationhasitsruleandafamilyalsohasone!國(guó)有國(guó)法，家有家規(guī)！4.Correctthearticle.“改”Peer-evaluationchecklistYesNo1.Canyoupicturetheexperiencethewriterwroteabout?2.Doesithaveacorrectstructure?3.Arethereanyspellingmistakesandpunctuationerrors?4.Aretheverbsinpropertenses?5.Doesitincludea