Unit10Youaresupposedtoshakehands.

單元話題作文01

主題分析

本單元寫作情境屬于“人與社會”主題范疇中“歷史、社會與文化”這一主題群，涉及子主題“世界主要國家的文化習(xí)俗與文化景觀、節(jié)假日與慶?；顒印薄３Ｒ姷膶懽魅蝿?wù)是簡單介紹不同國家的問候方式、傳統(tǒng)習(xí)俗、餐桌禮儀等。體裁多為說明文、電子郵件等應(yīng)用文或夾敘夾議的文體。Let’sbrainstorm.Challenges

in

foreign

countriesGreetingsTable

mannersHouse

rulesGoing

out

withfriendsBeingontimeLanguageFoodHeisaskingyouaboutChinesecustoms.Yourpenpal,Mike,iscomingtoChinaonanexchangeprogram.CanyougiveMikesomeadviceonChinesecustoms?Chinesecustoms......choosinggiftshouserulesvisitingotherstablemannerscommunicationOthersPre-writingPre-writingWaystogreetpeopleinChinaGreetingMannersGreetingManners1.Youaresuppoesdto

togreetChinesepeople.2.You

wwith

hand.3.You

kisstogreetChinesepeople.4.It’s

to

togreetfriends.shakehandsaresupposedtoshakehandsrightaren’tsupposedtopolitehugPre-writingWaystobehaveattable

1.You

ifthereareolderpeopleatthetable2.You

whenyouareeating.3.It’s

to

thechopsticks

thefood.4.It’s

to

peoplewithchopsticks.TableMannersTableMannersaren’tsupposedtoeatfirstaren’tsupposedtotalkimpolitestickintoimpolitepointatPre-writingHouserulesandgoingoutwithpeople

1.It’s

to

tovisitpropleforthefirsttime.

3.It’s

totellthehostwhereyouaregoingandwhoyouaregoingwith.2.Youshould/needto

onthedoorbeforeenteringtheroom.4.Youareexpectedto

1

whengoingoutwithfriends.Rulespolitebringsomegiftsknockpolitearriveontime單元寫作話題本單元以“

風(fēng)俗習(xí)慣”為話題，具體到書面表達(dá)中，要求同學(xué)們會寫有關(guān)customs,habits,manners等方面的作文，要求我們重點(diǎn)掌握besupposedtodo這一結(jié)構(gòu)。體裁體裁時(shí)態(tài)人稱書信體應(yīng)用文。要注意格式。一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。第二人稱。Writealettertoyourpenpaltogivehim/heradviceandsuggestionsonhowtobehaveproperlyinChina.Dear______________,YoumustbeexcitedaboutcomingtoChinasoon.LetmegiveyousomesuggestionsandadviceaboutChinesecustoms.Whenyou’reeatingatthetable,it’simpoliteto_______________________________________________________________________________________________________Inourhouse,you’resupposedto__________________________________Whenyougooutwithpeople,youshould_______________________________________________________________________________________Haveasafetrip,andIlookforwardtomeetingyousoon!Bestwishes,______________主題是中國風(fēng)俗習(xí)慣，時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，以第二人稱為主

用本單元目標(biāo)語言：besupposedto,it’simpoliteto,youshould和所積累的信息，陳述中國的風(fēng)俗習(xí)慣

信的結(jié)尾表達(dá)祝福和期待。Writealettertoyourpenpaltogivehim/heradviceandsuggestionsonhowtobehaveproperlyinChina.3b稱呼落款While-writingTheoutlineofyourletterBeginningBodyEndingDear___________,YoumustbeexcitedaboutcomingtoChinasoon.LetmegiveyousomesuggestionsandadviceaboutChinesecustoms.Firstly,whenyoumeetChinesepeopleforthefirsttime,it’spoliteto__________________________________.Secondly,whenyou’reeatingatthetable,it’simpoliteto________________________________________________________________________________________.Thirdly,inourhouse,you’resupposedto_________________________________________________________.Finally,whenyougooutwithpeople,

youshould________

____________________________________________.Haveasafetrip,andIlookforwardtomeetingyousoon!Bestwishes,______________

GreetingmannersTablemannersHouserulesGoingoutwithpeopleWhile-writingUsefulExpressions1.You’re(not)supposedto…2.It’simpoliteto…3.Youaren’texpectedto...4.Inmyculture,whenyouarefree,youcan…5.Themostimportantthingyoushouldpayattentiontois…6.Differentcountrieshave

different

manners.7.Youcan/could/can’t/couldn’t...LinkingwordsFirstly, However,Firstofall, What’smore,Instead, Inmyopinion,Besides, Allinall,Inaddition, Finally,Furthermore, Inaword,Asthesayinggoes,…02

素材積累◆開頭句①It's

of

great

importance

to

be

a

student

with

good

manners

in

our

daily

lives.②In

China,if

you're

invited

to

have

dinner

in

others'

homes,there

are

some

table

manners

you

need

to

remember.◆中間句①Second,you

are

supposed

to

wait

for

the

elder

persons

to

take

their

seats

first

to

show

your

respect.②You'd

better

not

point

at

others

with

chopsticks,which

is

impolite.◆結(jié)尾句①We

Chinese

people

are

very

hospitable,and

we

will

go

out

of

our

way

to

make

you

feel

at

home.②Chinese

people

like

to

eat

together

because

it

can

improve

the

sense

of

happiness

and

provide

a

good

chance

to

communicate

with

each

other.【名言積累】①When

in

Rome,do

as

the

Romans

do.入鄉(xiāng)隨俗。②Politeness

costs

nothing

but

wins

everything.禮貌不費(fèi)分文卻可贏得一切。TablemannersYouarenotsupposedtostarteatingfirstifthereareolderpeopleatthetable.It’simpolitetostickyourchopsticksintoyourfood.Youshouldn’tpointatanyonewithyourchopsticks.It’simpolitetoknockyouremptybowlwithyourchopsticks.HouserulesGoingoutwithpeopleYou’resupposedtoshakehandswithpeople.You’resupposedtosay“Nihao”topeople.You’renotsupposedtokissorhugwithpeople.Youshouldmakeagoing-outplanwithfriends.It'simportanttoarriveatthemeetingplaceontime.Youshouldtellthehostwhereyouaregoingandwhoyouaregoingwith.ReadforskillsI'mreallygladtohearthatyouaregoingtostudyinChinaasanexchangestudent.Inordertohelpyougetusedtothelifeherequickly,letmeintroducesomeChinesecustomstoyou.Skill1“YOU&I”Principle

(你和我原則）YOU:YoursituationorfeelingI:MyfeelingoractionSituationFeelingActionstudyinChinaasanexchangestudentgladintroducesomeChinesecustomsYouIaddreasonsSituationFeelingActioncometoChinaasanexchangestudentexcitedgiveyousomesuggestionsYouIYoumustbeexcitedaboutcomingtoChinaasanexchangestudentsoon.LetmegiveyousomesuggestionsaboutChinesecustoms.willingYoumustbeexcitedaboutcomingtoChinaasanexchangestudentsoon.Iamverywillingto

giveyousomeadviceaboutChinesecustoms.pleasureIt’smypleasuretogiveyousomeadviceaboutChinesecustoms.DearLinda,YoumustbeexcitedaboutcomingtoChinasoon.LetmegiveyousomesuggestionsandadviceaboutChinesecustoms.Whenyou’reeatingatthetable,It’spolitetoaskolderpeopletostarteatingfirstatthetable..Youshouldletthemstartfirst.Whenyouareeatingwithchopsticks,itisimpolitetopointatotherpeoplewithyourchopsticks.Itisalsoimpolitetostickyourchopsticksintothebowlofriceandleavethemthere.Inourhouse,you’resupposedtokeepyourroomclean.You’resupposedtomakeacallifyoudon’tgohomefordinner.You’renotsupposedtogotobedlateatnight.Whenyougooutwithpeople,youshouldtellthehostesswhereyouaregoing,whoyouaregoingwithandwhenyouwillcomeback.Inourculture,thehostesswillworryalotaboutthesafetyofherguest,soapoliteguestwillalwaysletherknowthesethings.Haveasafetrip,andIlookforwardtomeetingyousoon!Bestwishes,LiWeiSampleWritingTips:①useaclearstructure②usedetailsandlinkingwords③usedifferentsentencesWhenyouareeatingatthetable,you’resupposedtoeatwithchopsticks.Besides,

Youshouldn’tpointatanyonewithyourchopsticks.What’smore,Youarenotexpectedtostarteatingfirstifthereareolderpeopleatthetable.Inourhouse,whenyoumeetyourhostfamilyforthefirsttime,you’renotsupposedtokissorbow.Instead,youaresupposedtoshake

hands.Also,You’reexpectedtobringagiftwhenyouvisitsomeone’shouseforthefirsttime.suchasflowersorfruit.Ifyougooutwithpeople,it’simportanttocallfirst.

Andrememberto

arriveontime,becauseit’simpolitetokeepotherswaiting.Skill2TransitionalSentences

（過渡句）

When從句

介詞短語InourhouseAtthetable

If從句Asfor...Asforeatingatthetable,Asforgoingoutwithpeople,Whenyouareeatingatthetable,you’resupposedtoeatwithchopsticks.Besides,

Youshouldn’tpointatanyonewithyourchopsticks.What’smore,Youarenotexpectedtostarteatingfirstifthereareolderpeopleatthetable.Inourhouse,whenyoumeetyourhostfamilyforthefirsttime,you’renotsupposedtokissorbow.Instead,youaresupposedtoshake

hands.Also,You’reexpectedtobringagiftwhenyouvisitsomeone’shouseforthefirsttime,suchasflowersorfruit.Ifyougooutwithpeople,it’simportanttocallfirst.

Andrememberto

arriveontime,becauseit’simpolitetokeepotherswaiting.Sentencepatternsbe(not)supposedtodosth.be(not)expectedtodosth.It’s+important/polite/impolitetodosth.Remembertodosth.(祈使句)should(not)dosth.Whenyouareeatingatthetable,you’resupposedtoeatwithchopsticks.Besides,

Youshouldn’tpointatanyonewithyourchopsticks.What’smore,Youarenotexpectedtostarteatingfirstifthereareolderpeopleatthetable.Inourhouse,whenyoumeetyourhostfamilyforthefirsttime,you’renotsupposedtokissorbow.

Instead,youaresupposedtoshake

hands.Also,You’reexpectedtobringagiftwhenyouvisitsomeone’shouseforthefirsttime,suchasflowersorfruit.Ifyougooutwithpeople,it’simportanttocallfirst.

Andrememberto

arriveontime,becauseit’simpolitetokeepotherswaiting.Skill3從_____角度(instead,never)從_____角度(suchas,forexample)從_____角度(because,becauseof)從結(jié)果角度對比例子原因EnrichParagraph

（豐富段落）It’simpolitetostickyourchopsticksintoyourfood.

You’resupposedtolaythemonyourplateorbowlinstead.②It’simportanttocomebackhomeby10:00p.m.,

or

thehostwillworryaboutyou.③Thingsareverydifferentfromthewaytheyareathome.

Forexample,you'renotsupposedtoputyourbreadon

yourplate.

④

InChina,whenwemeetothersforthefirsttime,weusuallysay“Hello”andshakehands.Wedon’thugor

kisseachother.______從對比角度______從原因角度______從例子角度______從結(jié)果角度④①②③Putthesentencesintotheblankcorrectly.Haveasafetrip,andI’mlookingforwardtomeetingyou.Skill4

addsayings

諺語Ihope(that)myadvice/suggestionscanhelpyou.Wishyouhaveafantastictriphere.Asthesayinggoes,“WheninRome,doastheRomansdo.”I’msureyouwillgetusedtothesecustoms.Haveasafetrip,andIlookforwardtomeetingyousoon!EndingandwishesDearMikeI'mreallygladtohearthatyouaregoingtostudyinChinaasanexchangestudent.Inordertohelpyougetusedtothelifeherequickly,letmeintroducesomeChinesecustomstoyou.Whenyouareeatingatthetable,you’resupposedtoeatwithchopsticks.

Besides,

Youshouldn’tpointatanyonewithyourchopsticks.What’smore,Youarenotexpectedtostarteatingfirstifthereareolderpeopleatthetable.Inourhouse,whenyoumeetyourhostfamilyforthefirsttime,you’renotsupposedtokissorbow.Instead,youaresupposedtoshakehands.Also,You’reexpectedtobringagiftwhenyouvisitsomeone’shouseforthefirsttime,suchasflowersorfruit.Ifyougooutwithpeople,it’simportanttocallfirst.

Andrememberto

arriveontime,becauseit’simpolitetokeepotherswaiting.Asthesayinggoes,“WheninRome,doastheRomansdo.”I’msureyouwillgetusedtothesecustoms.Haveasafetrip,andIlookforwardtomeetingyousoon!Bestwishes,Peterlinkingwords

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范文剖析

俗話說：“民以食為天”。中國的飲食文化歷史悠久、舉世聞名。假如你是學(xué)生會主席李華，今年暑假有一批外國朋友要到你的學(xué)校參加文化交流夏令營。作為學(xué)生代表，請你以“When

in

China,Eat

as

the

Chinese

Eat”為題，向?qū)Ψ浇榻B去中國家庭聚餐時(shí)的餐桌禮儀，寫一篇100詞左右的短文。

內(nèi)容包括：

1.他們需要注意的禮儀；

2.他們要注意這些禮儀的原因。范文賞析When

in

China,Eat

as

the

Chinese

Eat

Food

is

the

first

necessity

of

the

people.

In

China，the

table

manners

are

different

from

your

country

in

many

ways.①First,when

you

eat

dinner

with

others,②you

should

wait

for

the

old

to

begin

eating

first.Second,pointing

at

others

with

chopsticks

is

impolite.③Third,if

you

are

invited,arrive

on

time

or

a

few

minutes

earlier.

By

the

way,④you

can't

give

a

clock

to

your

friends

as

a

present

when

you

visit

them.Because

it

means

“death”

in

Chinese.⑤At

last,you

can

help

to

clear

the

table

to

express

your

respect

and

politeness.

When

in

China,eat

as

we

Chinese

eat!⑥We

Chinese

people

are

very

hospitable

and

we

will

go

out

of

our

way

to

make

you

feel

at

home.Have

a

good

trip

in

China!

【溫馨提示】請將上述加黑體的部分按對應(yīng)的序號在下面的方框中一一升格！When

in

China,Eat

as

the

Chinese

Eat

Food

is

the

first

necessity

of

the

people.

In

China,the

table

manners

are

different

from

your

country

in

many

ways.升格技巧技巧一：巧用銜接詞升格①③⑤⑦

①___________（首先）,when

you

eat

dinner

with

others,②________________________________________________.Secondly,you'd

better

not

point

at

others

with

chopsticks,which

is

impolite.③__________（此外）,if

you

are

invited,arrive

on

time

or

a

few

minutes

earlier.

By

the

way,④______________________________________________________________________________，which

means

“death”

in

Chinese.⑤________（另外）,you

can

help

to

clear

the

table

to

express

your

respect

and

politeness.技巧二：用it's

better

to

do句型升格②技巧三：用be

expected

to

do結(jié)構(gòu)升格④First

of

all

it's

better

to

wait

for

the

old

to

begin

eating

firstMoreover

you

are

not

expected

to

give

a

clock

to

your

friends

as

a

present

when

you

visit

themBesides續(xù)表

⑦_(dá)_________（總之），when

in

China,eat

as

we

Chinese

eat!

⑥_______________________________________________________________________________________Have

a

good

trip

in

China!技巧四：用so…that…結(jié)構(gòu)升格⑥In

a

word

We

Chinese

people

are

so

hospitable

that

we

will

go

out

of

our

way

to

make

you

feel

at

home.續(xù)表

寫作練筆

踐行文明禮儀從我做起。作為一名學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該不斷提升文明素養(yǎng)，做文明禮儀的倡導(dǎo)者。請以“Be

a

Student

with

Good

Manners”為題，

寫一篇100詞左右的短文。內(nèi)容必須包括以下要點(diǎn)：1.簡述你見過的文明或者不文明行為；2.你對該行為的看法或感受；3.你該如何成為一名講文明的學(xué)生。審題指導(dǎo)1.文體：__________2.人稱：第________人稱3.時(shí)態(tài)：________________________4.寫作要點(diǎn)：①____________________________；②__________________；③________________________________。夾敘夾議一、三一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)見到的文明或者不文明的行為如何看待這類行為如何做一名有素質(zhì)、講文明的