UNIT4寫(xiě)作能力提升練最近，學(xué)校開(kāi)展了一次“文明活動(dòng)月”的實(shí)踐活動(dòng)。通過(guò)這次活動(dòng)，同學(xué)們的變化很大，尤其是郭浩同學(xué)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇有關(guān)郭浩同學(xué)變化的作文。［審題指導(dǎo)］1.體裁:記敘文2.人稱:第三人稱3.時(shí)態(tài):一般過(guò)去時(shí)、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)［思路點(diǎn)撥］ItseemsthatGuoHaohaschangedalotinthepastfewdays.Heusedtobelateforschool,butnowheisneverlateforschool.Inclass,heusedtotalkwithotherstudents,butnowhelistenstotheteachercarefully.Afterclass,hedoeshishomeworkcarefully,butheusedtoplaycomputergames.Anotherthingisthathegetsonwellwithhisclassmatesnow,butheusedtofightwiththem.WearegladthatGuoHaohasmadegreatprogress.［精彩范文］1.思路清晰，本文采用了“總—分—總”三段式結(jié)構(gòu)。2.連接詞but,afterclass,anotherthing的運(yùn)用為作文增彩。3.inthepastfewdays,usedto,belatefor，fightwith,madegreatprogress等短語(yǔ)使文章更為豐富精彩。4.句子Itseemsthat...、Wearegladthat...等運(yùn)用成為文章的加分點(diǎn)。高分點(diǎn)評(píng)：下面句子均有1、2處錯(cuò)誤，請(qǐng)找出并改正。1.Itseemswhathehaschangedalotthesedays._________________________________________________2.Theboyusedtotalkingwithotherstudentsinclass._________________________________________________Itseemsthathehaschangedalotthesedays.Theboyusedtotalkwithotherstudentsinclass.3.Theboyalwayslistentotheteachercarefully._________________________________________________4.Hedevelopsanotherbadhabitsincethen._________________________________________________5.Hangoutwithfriendisalmostimpossibleforme._________________________________________________Theboyalwayslistenstotheteachercarefully.Hehasdevelopedanotherbadhabitsincethen.Hangingoutwithfriendsisalmostimpossibleforme.假如你校英文報(bào)正在舉辦題為“Greatchangesaroundme”的征文比賽活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面表格內(nèi)容提示寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文參賽。詞數(shù)80~100。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________GreatchangesaroundmeGreatchangeshavetakenplacearoundmeinthepastfewyears.【思路分析】1.首段點(diǎn)題——在過(guò)去幾年中，身邊發(fā)生了巨大變化以便引起下文(開(kāi)頭已給出)。2.第二段具體介紹過(guò)去、現(xiàn)在在住房、交通、飲食變化的對(duì)比等。3.最后表達(dá)對(duì)未來(lái)的展望。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________GreatchangesaroundmeGreatchangeshavetakenplacearoundmeinthepastfewyears.Inthepast,peoplelivedahardlife.Theyusedtoliveinoldandsmallhouses.Transportusedtobehard.Peoplemainlywalkedtoanywheretheywantedtogo.Thefoodwasreallysimple.Peopleseldomatemeatatthattime.Nowpeopleliveabetterlife.Moreandmorepeopleliveintallbuildings.Transportismucheasier.Theroadsa