求助信考點(diǎn)要求考察形式2025年2024年2023年求助信選擇題非選擇題無無（2023年以前的求助信）2021年1月八省聯(lián)考：英文詩(shī)朗誦比賽。請(qǐng)給外教George寫封郵件求助。2020全國(guó)卷：英語(yǔ)課文改編了一個(gè)短劇。給外教MissEvans寫封郵件,請(qǐng)她幫忙指導(dǎo)。2020北京卷：請(qǐng)Jim幫忙推薦外教。2019浙江卷：錢包丟失,給航空公司寫一封郵件說明情況并尋求幫助?？记榉治鲆?、往年真題特點(diǎn)1.話題貼近生活：常圍繞學(xué)習(xí)困難（如英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)法學(xué)習(xí)、備考方法）、生活問題（適應(yīng)新環(huán)境、處理人際關(guān)系）、活動(dòng)籌備（組織活動(dòng)遇難題）等學(xué)生實(shí)際可能面臨的困境展開,確?？忌性捒蓪憽?.任務(wù)指向清晰：題目會(huì)明確設(shè)定寫信人身份（如交換生、學(xué)生會(huì)成員）及求助內(nèi)容（如請(qǐng)求推薦書籍、尋求活動(dòng)建議、解決人際矛盾）,要求考生在信中清晰闡述問題并合理提出求助需求。二、命題思路通過模擬真實(shí)生活中的求助場(chǎng)景,考查學(xué)生運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)問題、合理尋求幫助的能力。旨在檢驗(yàn)考生能否用恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z(yǔ)言描述困境,邏輯清晰地說明需求,并展現(xiàn)出得體的溝通態(tài)度,體現(xiàn)英語(yǔ)在實(shí)際交流中的工具性。三、命題重點(diǎn)1..內(nèi)容完整性與邏輯性：正文需完整涵蓋問題背景、具體困難、期望得到的幫助等要點(diǎn)；合理分段,運(yùn)用連接詞（如Firstofall,Moreover,Finally）有條理地展開內(nèi)容,使信件邏輯清晰。2.情感表達(dá)與語(yǔ)氣把控：要通過語(yǔ)言傳遞真誠(chéng)求助的態(tài)度,避免語(yǔ)氣生硬或過于隨意；根據(jù)求助對(duì)象調(diào)整措辭,保持恰當(dāng)?shù)亩Y貌程度。復(fù)習(xí)目標(biāo)與備考策略一、復(fù)習(xí)目標(biāo)1.提升語(yǔ)言能力：積累多樣化的詞匯和句式,能夠根據(jù)不同話題靈活運(yùn)用,實(shí)現(xiàn)準(zhǔn)確、豐富的語(yǔ)言表達(dá)。2.強(qiáng)化邏輯思維：學(xué)會(huì)構(gòu)建清晰的文章結(jié)構(gòu),合理組織內(nèi)容,增強(qiáng)文章邏輯性與連貫性。3.提高任務(wù)完成能力：保證在考試中精準(zhǔn)把握題目要點(diǎn),完整、高效地完成寫作任務(wù)。二、備考策略1.積累專項(xiàng)素材：針對(duì)?？荚掝}（如環(huán)保、文化、校園生活）整理常用表達(dá)、名言警句和優(yōu)秀范文,建立個(gè)人素材庫(kù)；背誦經(jīng)典開頭、結(jié)尾及過渡句,提升寫作效率。2.加強(qiáng)邏輯訓(xùn)練：進(jìn)行段落擴(kuò)寫、要點(diǎn)排序等練習(xí),訓(xùn)練如何將零散信息有條理地組織成完整文章；刻意使用連接詞和過渡句,增強(qiáng)文章連貫性。3.真題模擬演練：分析近五年真題,總結(jié)命題規(guī)律與高頻考點(diǎn)；按照考試時(shí)間要求進(jìn)行限時(shí)訓(xùn)練,提升寫作速度與應(yīng)變能力；對(duì)照范文和評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn),找出自身不足,針對(duì)性改進(jìn)。4.關(guān)注時(shí)事熱點(diǎn)：通過閱讀英語(yǔ)新聞、觀看英語(yǔ)演講視頻等方式,了解當(dāng)下熱點(diǎn)話題的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)方式,拓寬視野,為文章增添新穎內(nèi)容。考點(diǎn)一寫作技巧知識(shí)點(diǎn)1命題規(guī)律求助信是一種寫給朋友或機(jī)構(gòu)的正式信件,請(qǐng)求他們提供幫助、支持,或給出針對(duì)性的解決方法,以實(shí)現(xiàn)某個(gè)目標(biāo)或完成某項(xiàng)任務(wù)。通常,求助信會(huì)詳細(xì)說明請(qǐng)求幫助的原因、需要的具體支持以及如何使用這些支持。知識(shí)點(diǎn)2寫作技能提升信件需寫明請(qǐng)求幫助的理由,求助的具體內(nèi)容。語(yǔ)言表達(dá)要準(zhǔn)確,措辭要得體。求助信應(yīng)開門見山,直截了當(dāng)?shù)匕涯阌龅降碾y題或者困惑等,并向?qū)Ψ角笾?yīng)注意：①向別人征求意見,態(tài)度一定要誠(chéng)懇,語(yǔ)氣委婉；②把握時(shí)態(tài),應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)描述自己目前存在的困難,用一般將來時(shí)描述自己得到幫助后的進(jìn)步。第一段：交代求助背景及寫信目的。第二段：詳細(xì)描述求助的具體內(nèi)容。第三段：表達(dá)希望得到對(duì)方的幫助并表示感謝?？键c(diǎn)二經(jīng)典必背知識(shí)點(diǎn)1常用詞匯1.havetrouble/difficulty(in)doingsth.做某事有困難2.dosb.afavor/givesb.ahand給某人幫助3.askforhelp/seekforhelp尋求幫助4.encountersomeproblems遇到一些問題5.bebusy/occupied/engagedindoingsth.忙于做某事7.makepreparationsfor.…為某事做準(zhǔn)備9.put...inuse學(xué)以致用10.letsb.down讓某人失望11.overcomethefear克服恐懼12.beanxious/eagertodosth./longtodosth.渴望做某事13.takethetroubletodosth.費(fèi)心地去做某事14.offersomeconstructiveguidance提供一些有益的指導(dǎo)15.begrateful/thankful/appreciativetosb.forsth.因某事感激某人知識(shí)點(diǎn)2必背開頭段IamLiHua,a…我是李華,一個(gè).......I’mwritingtoaskyoutodomeafavor.我寫信是想請(qǐng)你幫我個(gè)忙。Onbehalfof...,I’dliketorequestyourunreservedhelp.代表……我想請(qǐng)求你的幫助。Iamsorry/regretfultotellyouI’mhavingtroublewithsth./doingsth.我很遺憾地告訴你我有......困難。I’mgladtotellyouthatI’mplanningajourneyto…,butIhavedifficulty…我很高興地告訴你,我正在計(jì)劃一段旅程,去……,但我有困難。I’mwritingtoseekyourgeneroushelp/unselfishassistance/patientguidanceduring...我寫信是為了尋求你的慷慨的幫助/無私的幫助/病人的指導(dǎo)。知識(shí)點(diǎn)3必背主題句Itworriesmethat....這讓我很擔(dān)心。Pleaseletmeknowif…請(qǐng)告訴我,如果。I’mlackingin…,addingtomydifficultyindoing…我缺少…,增加了我......的困難。It’ssuchabigheadache/sobigaheadacheformeto...that...這對(duì)我來說是太頭疼了。Forlackof...,Ihavegreatdifficulty/findmyselfstumpedby...因?yàn)槿狈Α?我有很大的困難/發(fā)現(xiàn)自己被（被難倒）難住了。(Doing)sth.isachallengeforme,leadingto.../resultingin.../makingitimpossibleformeto...（做）sth.對(duì)我來說是一個(gè)挑戰(zhàn),導(dǎo)致…/導(dǎo)致…/讓我不可能做到。Whattroublesmemostissth.最困擾我的是......Whatworriesmemostwasthat+...最讓我擔(dān)心的是+句子（表語(yǔ)從句）I’dliketoparticipatein….However,Ifinditdifficultto…我想?yún)⑴c其中。然而,我發(fā)現(xiàn)它很難……。Ilongto…butIdon'tknowhow,whichmakesmeupset.我渴望……但我不知道該怎么做,這讓我很難過。知識(shí)點(diǎn)4必背結(jié)尾句Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldgivemeahand.如果你能幫我一把,我將不勝感激。Yourhelp/assistancewouldbegreatlyappreciated.我們將非常感謝您的幫助/幫助。Iwouldbeextremelygratefulifyoudomethefavor.如果你幫了我這個(gè)忙,我會(huì)非常感激的。Iwouldappreciateitifyouarekindandgeneroustodothisforme.如果你能慷慨地為我做,我將不勝感激。Iwouldbemorethanpleasedifyoucouldgivemesomesuggestions.如果你能給我一些建議,我會(huì)非常高興的。Iwouldbegratefulifyoucoulddomethefavor.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.如果你能幫我這個(gè)忙,我會(huì)很感激的。期待著你的提前回復(fù)。Shouldyoubekindenoughtogivemeanyhelp,Iwouldbegratefultoyou.如果你能給我任何幫助,我會(huì)很感激你的。知識(shí)點(diǎn)5滿分模板必背Dear__________(寫信對(duì)象),Mynameis___________________,I’mwritingtoaskwhetheryoucoulddomeafavour.Ihavehadmuchdifficulty/troublein___________________(交代自己面臨的困難).Besides,I’mveryupsetthat___________(提出令自己苦惱的問題).What’smore,Idon’tknow___________________(進(jìn)一步說明自己的困境)I’mwonderingifyoucouldbesokindasto___________________sothat___________________(再次請(qǐng)求對(duì)方的幫助).I’dappreciateitifyoucouldlendmeahand.I’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.YourSincerely,LiHua考點(diǎn)三體悟真題與新考向知識(shí)點(diǎn)1真題演練1.2021.1八省聯(lián)考假定你是李華,準(zhǔn)備參加學(xué)校組織的英文詩(shī)朗誦比賽。請(qǐng)給外教George寫封郵件求助,內(nèi)容包括:1.說明比賽要求；2.請(qǐng)他推薦英文詩(shī)；3.請(qǐng)教朗誦技巧。注意:1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearGeorge,I'mwritingtoaskforyourhelp._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【參考范文1】DearMr.George,I’mwritingtoaskforyourhelp.OurschoolwillholdanEnglishPoetryReadingContestnextweekend.Iameagertohaveatry.Itisrequiredthatthethemeshouldbeaboutnature.Eachcontestantisgivenuptofiveminutestoreadthepoem.Sowouldyoupleasebesokindtogivemesomerecommendationsonwhichpoemtochoose?Besides,whatIneedaretheskillsofrecitation,includingpronunciationandintonation,whichwillperfectmyperformance.I’dappreciateitifyoucouldgivemesomeguidance.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【參考范文2】DearGeorge,I'mwritingtoaskforyourhelp.I'mpreparingfortheEnglishPoemRecitationCompetitionofourschool.ThecompetitionrequireseveryparticipanttoreciteanEnglishpoemofourownchoicewithinfiveminutesandthepoemshouldbeeasytounderstand.IwonderifyoucouldrecommendafewEnglishpoemstome.Besides,Iwishyoucouldteachmesometechniquesforrecitingpoems.Itriedwithsomesimpleonesbutfoundithardtoreciteatanappropriatespeed.Thecompetitionwillbeheldintwoweeks.I'dbegratefulifyoucouldhelpme.I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】這兩篇范文屬于應(yīng)用文寫作中的郵件體裁,是學(xué)生李華向英文詩(shī)朗誦比賽向George求助,需清晰闡述比賽要求,誠(chéng)懇請(qǐng)求推薦詩(shī)歌與朗誦技巧指導(dǎo)?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累比賽：Contest→Competition渴望：beeagerto→bekeento推薦：recommendations→suggestions技巧：techniques→skills2.句式拓展原句：OurschoolwillholdanEnglishPoetryReadingContestnextweekend.Iameagertohaveatry.拓展句：SinceourschoolwillholdanEnglishPoetryReadingContestnextweekend,IameagertohaveatryasIamreallyinterestedinEnglishpoetry.原句：ThecompetitionrequireseveryparticipanttoreciteanEnglishpoemofourownchoicewithinfiveminutesandthepoemshouldbeeasytounderstand.拓展句：ThecompetitionrequiresthateveryparticipantshouldreciteanEnglishpoemwhichtheychoosebythemselveswithinfiveminutes,andthepoemissupposedtobeeasytounderstand.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Itisrequiredthatthethemeshouldbeaboutnature.（it作形式主語(yǔ),真正主語(yǔ)是that引導(dǎo)的從句,使用虛擬語(yǔ)氣“should+動(dòng)詞原形”,符合比賽要求類表達(dá)的常用句式）[高分句型2]Eachcontestantisgivenuptofiveminutestoreadthepoem.（使用“begiven+時(shí)間+todosth.”結(jié)構(gòu),清晰說明每位選手的朗誦時(shí)間限制）[高分句型3]Besides,whatIneedaretheskillsofrecitation,includingpronunciationandintonation,whichwillperfectmyperformance.（what引導(dǎo)主語(yǔ)從句,“including...”作后置定語(yǔ),“which”引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句,使句子結(jié)構(gòu)豐富,邏輯連貫）[高分句型4]Itriedwithsomesimpleonesbutfoundithardtoreciteatanappropriatespeed.（使用“findit+adj.+todosth.”結(jié)構(gòu),it作形式賓語(yǔ),真正賓語(yǔ)是后面的不定式短語(yǔ),簡(jiǎn)潔地表達(dá)自己在朗誦時(shí)遇到的困難）2.（2020全國(guó)III）假定你是李華,你和同學(xué)根據(jù)英語(yǔ)課文改編了一個(gè)短劇。給外教MissEvans寫封郵件,請(qǐng)她幫忙指導(dǎo)。郵件內(nèi)容包括:1.劇情簡(jiǎn)介；2.指導(dǎo)內(nèi)容；3.商定時(shí)間地點(diǎn)。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫好。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】DearMissEvans,Howiseverythinggoing!Iamwritinginsinceritytoaskyouafavorregardingaplayweadaptedaccordingtothetextbook.We’dliketocombineyourculturewithoursbyadaptingtheclassicnovelTheSteamboatforashortEnglishplay.Theplayissetonabigstormaftermidnight,ontheraftdowntherivernavigation,weseeasteamboatthatisgoingtosink.Wesavedascaredboy.However,theadaptionisquiteachallenge.HavingwrittentheEnglishscript,wedon’twantanythinginappropriatetospoiltheplay.Sowouldyoupleasesparesometimetoreviewthedraftscriptattachedtothisemailandmakenecessarychanges?Ifitisconvenient,mayIpayyouavisitatyourofficenextTuesdaytogiveyoumoredetails?Givenyourbusyschedule,I’dbeveryappreciativeifyouoffertogivesomeprofessionaladvice.Lookforwardtoyourearlyreply.Bestregards!Yourstruly,LiHua【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】此篇范文屬于應(yīng)用文寫作中的電子郵件體裁,是李華向斯求助,涵蓋短劇劇情介紹、明確指導(dǎo)內(nèi)容以及協(xié)商指導(dǎo)時(shí)間地點(diǎn),體現(xiàn)清晰的溝通目的與禮貌的請(qǐng)求態(tài)度?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累改編：adapted→revised幫忙：askyouafavor→seekyourassistance挑戰(zhàn)：challenge→toughtask審閱：review→goover2.句式拓展原句：We'dliketocombineyourculturewithoursbyadaptingtheclassicnovelTheSteamboatforashortEnglishplay.拓展句：OurintentionistoblendyourculturewithoursthroughtheadaptationoftheclassicnovelTheSteamboatintoashortEnglishplay.原句：Sowouldyoupleasesparesometimetoreviewthedraftscriptattachedtothisemailandmakenecessarychanges?拓展句：Therefore,Iwonderifyoucouldkindlysetasidesometimetoexaminethedraftscriptenclosedinthisemailandmaketherequiredmodifications.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型一]Iamwritinginsinceritytoaskyouafavorregardingaplayweadaptedaccordingtothetextbook.（“insincerity”體現(xiàn)態(tài)度真誠(chéng),“regarding”引出郵件核心內(nèi)容,“weadaptedaccordingtothetextbook”定語(yǔ)從句簡(jiǎn)潔說明短劇來源）[高分句型二]HavingwrittentheEnglishscript,wedon'twantanythinginappropriatetospoiltheplay.（“HavingwrittentheEnglishscript”現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ),表明完成劇本后的擔(dān)憂,邏輯連貫,同時(shí)突出時(shí)間先后順序）[高分句型三]Givenyourbusyschedule,I'dbeveryappreciativeifyouoffertogivesomeprofessionaladvice.（“Givenyourbusyschedule”介詞短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ),體諒對(duì)方忙碌,使請(qǐng)求更顯合理；“ifyouoffertogivesomeprofessionaladvice”條件狀語(yǔ)從句明確表達(dá)期望,語(yǔ)氣委婉）3.2020年7月北京卷假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你們學(xué)校英語(yǔ)戲劇俱樂部外籍指導(dǎo)教師Jim因疫情滯留英國(guó)。復(fù)學(xué)在即,作為俱樂部負(fù)責(zé)人,你給Jim寫一封電子郵件,請(qǐng)他推薦一名外籍指導(dǎo)教師,內(nèi)容包括：1.條件及要求； 2.表示感謝并提醒注意防護(hù)。注意：1.詞數(shù)不少于50；2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearJim,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【參考范文】DearJim,Howareyoudoing?IhopeeverythingisOKwithyou.Ourschool'sdramaclubplanstostartpracticing.SinceyouareawayinBritain,weneedadramateachertobeinyourplace.Wouldyoupleaserecommendoneforus?HeorsheshouldbeanativeEnglishspeaker,currentlyinBeijing,andexperiencedinbothdirectingandteaching.Thankyouforyourhelp.Pleasetakecareofyourself.Remembertowearamaskwhennecessary.Bestwishes.Yours,LiHua解析；第一步：寫作之前必修認(rèn)真審題,首先要注意文章的時(shí)態(tài),根據(jù)提綱內(nèi)容可知使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。第二步：根據(jù)關(guān)鍵要點(diǎn),確定關(guān)鍵詞,如：startdoingsth（開始做某事）,beaway（離開）,needadramateacher（需要戲劇老師）,beexperiencedin（在……有經(jīng)驗(yàn)）等。第三步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞進(jìn)行遣詞造句,注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題以及句子結(jié)構(gòu)完整。第四步：連句成文,注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡,使之自然流暢,書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰,保持整潔美觀的卷面。高級(jí)句式：1.原因狀語(yǔ)從句的使用,如SinceyouareawayinBritain,weneedadramateachertobeinyourplace.等；2.狀語(yǔ)從句的省略,如Remembertowearamaskwhennecessary.等。高級(jí)詞匯：1.recommend推薦；2.currently當(dāng)前。4.（2019·浙江·高考真題）假定你是李華,乘坐FL753航班抵達(dá)倫敦后發(fā)現(xiàn)錢包遺失。請(qǐng)給航空公司寫一封郵件說明情況并尋求幫助。內(nèi)容包括：1.行程信息；2.錢包特征；3.聯(lián)系方式。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】DearSir/Madam,Iamwritingtoreportthelossofmywallet.On1stNovember,2018Iflewbusinessclassonyourflight753fromChinatoLondon.IclearlyrememberitwaswithmeimmediatelyIboardedtheplane.However,onarrivalinLondonHeathrowAirport,Ifounditgone.Iguessitmusthaveslippedoutofmypocketduringtheflight.Itisablackleatheronewitharound200dollars,myIDcard,and2creditcardsinit.Alongwiththeitemsmentionedabove,thewalletcontainsafamilyphoto,mypreciousmemory.Asyoucanimagine,thesematteralottome.Hasanybodyhappenedtofindit?Pleaseemailmeatxxx@.Thankyouforyourtimeandsupport.Yourssincerely,LiHua【分析】本篇考查的寫作類型是求助信。【詳解】第一步：根據(jù)提示可知,本文是一封求助信。李華乘坐FL753航班抵達(dá)倫敦后發(fā)現(xiàn)錢包遺失,要求給航空公司寫一封郵件說明情況并尋求幫助。內(nèi)容包括：1.行程信息；2.錢包特征；3.聯(lián)系方式。第二步：根據(jù)寫作要求確定關(guān)鍵詞（組）,如：Iamwritingtoreportthelossofmywallet.boardedtheplane,onarrival…,Ifounditgone.itmusthave……Hasanybodyhappenedtofindit?Thankyouforyourtimeandsupport.第三步：根據(jù)提示和關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句,注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主,一般過去時(shí)為輔。第四步：連句成文,注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接和過渡,書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰,保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的?！军c(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】What’sworse,mycash,IDcard,and2creditcardswereinit.更糟的是,里面有我的現(xiàn)金,身份證和兩張信用卡。What’sworse意為“更糟糕的是”,連接并列兩個(gè)壞的東西,且后面一個(gè)更嚴(yán)重?！靖叻志湫?】I’dappreciateitifyoucouldhelpmetogetitback.如果你能幫我把它拿回來,我會(huì)很感激的。I’dappreciateitif…如果……我會(huì)很感激的。5.（2016·新課標(biāo)卷I）李華,暑假想去一家外貿(mào)公司兼職,已寫好申請(qǐng)書和個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)歷（resume）。給外教MsJenkins寫信,請(qǐng)她幫你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】DearMSJenkins,I’mLiHua.Iplantotakeapart-timejobinaforeigncompanyduringthesummerholiday.Ihavealreadyfilledintheapplicationformandhadmyresumereadyforit.However,Iamnotsureaboutthewordsandformat.Therefore,Iamwritingtoaskforyourhelpandprofessionaladvice.Wouldyoupleasesparesometimetoreadthroughthematerialsattached?Wouldyoumindfindingoutthemistakesintermsofwordsandformat?Besides,I’dlikeyoutocorrectthemistakesfoundinthematerialsandformat.Iwouldmuchappreciateitifyoucoulddomeafavor.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】此篇范文屬于應(yīng)用文寫作中的電子郵件體裁,是李華向外教MsJenkins請(qǐng)求修改外貿(mào)公司兼職申請(qǐng)書和簡(jiǎn)歷的郵件,需包含目的說明、具體請(qǐng)求及期待回復(fù)等內(nèi)容,體現(xiàn)禮貌與條理?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累計(jì)劃：plan→intend填寫：filledin→completed格式：format→layout專業(yè)建議：professionaladvice→expertguidance2.句式拓展原句：Ihavealreadyfilledintheapplicationformandhadmyresumereadyforit.拓展句：I'vealreadycompletedtheapplicationformandpreparedmyresumeforthispart-timejobopportunity.原句：Wouldyoupleasesparesometimetoreadthroughthematerialsattached?拓展句：Couldyoukindlytakeamomenttoreviewtheattacheddocuments?【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型一]Ihavealreadyfilledintheapplicationformandhadmyresumereadyforit.（使用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí),強(qiáng)調(diào)準(zhǔn)備工作已完成,為后文請(qǐng)求幫助做鋪墊,使邏輯連貫）[高分句型二]Wouldyoupleasesparesometimetoreadthroughthematerialsattached?（用委婉的疑問句提出請(qǐng)求,“sparesometime”體現(xiàn)對(duì)對(duì)方時(shí)間的尊重,語(yǔ)氣禮貌得體）[高分句型三]Iwouldmuchappreciateitifyoucoulddomeafavor.（“Iwouldappreciateitif...”是常用的表達(dá)感謝的句式,簡(jiǎn)潔明了地表達(dá)期待與感激之情）6.2015年高考真題四川卷假如你是李夏。你看到美國(guó)留學(xué)生Sharon在網(wǎng)上發(fā)貼,希望有人能幫助她提高普通話（Mandarin）水平,她可以教英語(yǔ)作為回報(bào)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示用英語(yǔ)給她寫一封電子郵件。1.表達(dá)給她提供幫助的意愿；2.說明你能勝任輔導(dǎo)的理由；3.給出講好普通話的兩點(diǎn)建議；4.提出你學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的具體需求。注意：1.詞數(shù)120左右,開頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫；3.文中不得透漏個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱；HiSharon,ThisisLiXia.IlearnedfromyourpostthatyouwanttoimproveyourMandarin__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________HiSharon,ThisisLiHua.IlearnedfromyourpostthatyouwanttoimproveyourMandarin.Iamquiteinterestedinit.IthinkI'mfitforit.Asastudent,IhavebeenlearningMandarinformanyyears.Inaddition,IamChinese,whichmeansMandarinisamustformetocommunicatewithothersinmydailylife.SoI'mquiteconfidentthatIcanhelpyoulearnMandarin.LearningMandarintakestime,soifyouwanttolearnitwell,youshouldspendmuchtimepracticingMandarineveryday.Asthesayinggoes,practicemakesperfect.Besides,youcanalsoreadsomebooksinChinese,seesomeChinesefilmsandlistentosomeChineseradioprogrammes.Speakingandlisteningareveryimportantforalanguagelearning,bywhichyouaresuretomakegreatprogress.Inyourpost,yousayyoucanteachEnglishasareward.ItisjustwhatIwant.I'meagertoimprovemyEnglish.So,ifyouallowmetohelpyoulearnMandarin,youcanalsohelpmeimprovemyEnglish.WecancontacteachotherbyvideochateverynightforhalfanhourinEnglishandhalfanhourinChinese,sothatwecanimproveouroralspeaking.Hopeforyouearlyreply!Yours,LiXia【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】此篇范文屬于應(yīng)用文寫作中的電子郵件體裁,是李夏回復(fù)美國(guó)留學(xué)生Sharon,表達(dá)幫助其提高普通話水平的意愿,同時(shí)說明自身優(yōu)勢(shì)、給出學(xué)習(xí)建議并提出英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)需求?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累勝任：befitfor→bequalifiedfor日常的：daily→routine進(jìn)步：progress→advancement2.句式拓展原句：IlearnedfromyourpostthatyouwanttoimproveyourMandarin.拓展句：Uponreadingyourpost,IcametoknowthatyouareeagertoenhanceyourMandarinproficiency.原句：SoI'mquiteconfidentthatIcanhelpyoulearnMandarin.拓展句：Therefore,IpossessstrongconfidenceinmyabilitytoassistyouinyourMandarinlearningjourney.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型一]Inaddition,IamChinese,whichmeansMandarinisamustformetocommunicatewithothersinmydailylife.(which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句,對(duì)前面“我是中國(guó)人”這一事實(shí)進(jìn)行補(bǔ)充說明,自然地闡述了自己能勝任輔導(dǎo)的理由)[高分句型二]Speakingandlisteningareveryimportantforalanguagelearning,bywhichyouaresuretomakegreatprogress.（bywhich引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句,修飾先行詞“Speakingandlistening”,強(qiáng)調(diào)聽說對(duì)于語(yǔ)言學(xué)習(xí)的重要性以及能帶來的積極效果,使文章表達(dá)更具邏輯性和說服力）7.（2013·新課標(biāo)卷I）假定你是李華。請(qǐng)你給筆友Peter寫封信,告訴他你叔叔李明將去他所在城市開會(huì),帶去他想要的那幅中國(guó)畫,同時(shí)詢問他是否可以接機(jī)。信中還需說明：李明：高個(gè)子,戴眼鏡航班號(hào)：CA985到達(dá)：8月6日上午11:30注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫；3.開頭語(yǔ)和結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫好。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】DearPeter,Howareyoudoing?I’mwritingtotellyouthatmyuncleLiMingisgoingtoyourcityforaconference,andI’veaskedhimtobringyoutheChinesepaintingyou’veaskedforbefore.Also,I’dlikeyoutodomeafavor.WouldyoupleasemeetmyuncleattheairportandtakehimtohishotelsincethisishisfirstvisittotheU.S.?Thankyouinadvance!HisflightnumberisCA985,anditwillarriveat11:30am,August6.Myuncleistallandheiswearingglasses.Andhewillbeinabluejacket.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】此篇范文屬于應(yīng)用文寫作中的書信體裁,是李華寫給筆友Peter的信,需傳達(dá)叔叔李明前往其所在城市開會(huì)并送畫的信息,同時(shí)請(qǐng)求Peter接機(jī),涵蓋人物、事件、航班等關(guān)鍵內(nèi)容?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累開會(huì)：foraconference→toattendameeting幫忙：domeafavor→givemeahand提前：inadvance→aheadoftime到達(dá)：arrive→reach2.句式拓展原句：I’mwritingtotellyouthatmyuncleLiMingisgoingtoyourcityforaconference,andI’veaskedhimtobringyoutheChinesepaintingyou’veaskedforbefore.拓展句：I’mpenningthislettertoletyouknowthatmyuncleLiMingwilltraveltoyourcitytoattendaconference,andI’verequestedhimtotaketheChinesepaintingthatyou’velongdesiredwithhim.原句：WouldyoupleasemeetmyuncleattheairportandtakehimtohishotelsincethisishisfirstvisittotheU.S.?拓展句：ConsideringthatthisishisinitialtriptotheU.S.,Iwaswonderingifyoucouldkindlypickmyuncleupattheairportandaccompanyhimtohishotel.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型一]I’mwritingtotellyouthatmyuncleLiMingisgoingtoyourcityforaconference,andI’veaskedhimtobringyoutheChinesepaintingyou’veaskedforbefore.（“thatmyuncleLiMingisgoingtoyourcityforaconference”為that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句,作tell的賓語(yǔ),直接說明寫信目的；“you’veaskedforbefore”為省略了關(guān)系代詞that的定語(yǔ)從句,修飾“theChinesepainting”,使句子信息更豐富）[高分句型二]WouldyoupleasemeetmyuncleattheairportandtakehimtohishotelsincethisishisfirstvisittotheU.S.?（“sincethisishisfirstvisittotheU.S.”為since引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句,清晰闡述請(qǐng)求接機(jī)的原因,使行文邏輯合理）[高分句型三]HisflightnumberisCA985,anditwillarriveat11:30am,August6.(用并列句簡(jiǎn)潔明了地提供航班號(hào)和到達(dá)時(shí)間,為對(duì)方接機(jī)提供關(guān)鍵信息,符合書信實(shí)用性需求)8.（2011·全國(guó)·高考真題）假定你是李華,正在一所英國(guó)學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)暑期課程,遇到一些困難,希望得到學(xué)校輔導(dǎo)中心(LearningCenter)的幫助。根據(jù)學(xué)校規(guī)定,你需書面預(yù)約,請(qǐng)按下列要點(diǎn)寫一封信：1.本人簡(jiǎn)介；2.求助內(nèi)容；3.約定時(shí)間；4.你的聯(lián)系方式(Emailaddress：ihua@126.com；Phonenumber：12345678)。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;3.開頭和結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫好。DearSir/Madam,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【參考范文】DearSir/Madam,I’mLiHua,aChinesestudenttakingsummercoursesinyouruniversity.I’mwritingtoaskforhelp.Icameherelastmonthandfoundmycoursesinteresting.ButIhavesomedifficultieswithnote-takingandIhavenoideaofhowtousethelibrary.IwastoldtheLearningCenterprovideshelpforstudentsandI’manxioustogethelpfromyou.IhavenoclassonTuesdaymorningsandFridayafternoons.PleaseletmeknowwhichdayisOKwithyou.Youmayemailorphoneme.Herearemyemailaddressandphonenumber:lihua@1236.com;12345678.Lookforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文,假定你是李華,正在一所英國(guó)學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)暑期課程,遇到一些困難,希望得到學(xué)校輔導(dǎo)中心(LearningCenter)的幫助。根據(jù)學(xué)校規(guī)定,你需書面預(yù)約,請(qǐng)按提示寫一封信。【詳解】1.詞匯積累請(qǐng)求：askfor→applyfor有困難：havesomedifficultieswith→havetroublewith提供：provide→offer焦急的：anxious→worried2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：I’mLiHua,aChinesestudenttakingsummercoursesinyouruniversity.拓展句：I’mLiHua,aChinesestudent,whoistakingsummercoursesinyouruniversity.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]IwastoldtheLearningCenterprovideshelpforstudentsandI’manxioustogethelpfromyou.(省略that的賓語(yǔ)從句)[高分句型2]PleaseletmeknowwhichdayisOKwithyou.(運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句)知識(shí)點(diǎn)2命題新考向【與中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化相關(guān)的求助信】01.（2025·河南·二模）假定你是李華,正在美國(guó)參加一項(xiàng)交換生項(xiàng)目。你打算在學(xué)校建立一個(gè)專注于中國(guó)文化傳播的社團(tuán)。請(qǐng)給你的指導(dǎo)老師Mrs.Thompson寫一封郵件尋求幫助,內(nèi)容包括：1.尋求建議；2.期待回復(fù)。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearMrs.Thompson,Ihopethisletterfindsyouwell._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【參考范文】DearMrs.Thompson,Ihopethisemailfindsyouwell.Iamwritingtoseekyourguidanceonestablishingaculturalexchangeclubatourschool.Asanexchangestudent,IampassionateaboutsharingChineseculturewithmypeers.Ifirmlybelievesuchaclubcouldfostermutualunderstandingandappreciationofdiverseculturesamongstudents.However,Iamunsureabouthowtosecureschoolapproval,attractmembersandorganizeengagingactivities.Iknowyouareanauthorityinculturalstudies.Couldyoubekindenoughtosharesomerelevantadvice?Yourexperienceandinsightswouldbeabsolutelyinvaluabletome.I’mlookingforwardtoanyassistanceyoucanoffer.Thankyouforyourtimeandsupport.Yours,LiHua【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生以李華的身份,向湯普森夫人寫一封郵件,闡述自己想在學(xué)校建立文化交流俱樂部的想法,并就如何獲得學(xué)校批準(zhǔn)、吸引成員及組織活動(dòng)等問題尋求指導(dǎo)建議。【詳解】1.詞匯積累尋求：seek→lookfor/pursue指導(dǎo)：guidance→instruction/direction建立：establish→setup/found確保：secure→ensure/guarantee有價(jià)值的：invaluable→priceless/extremelyvaluable2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Iamwrit