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高中英語讀后續(xù)寫片段描寫限時練01

一、心理描寫類

,積極情緒：Emotioncoursedthroughone'sveinslike+喻體，makingeveryfiberofone's

beingtinglewith...

?消極情緒：Emotiongrippedone'shearttightly,squeezingitlike+喻體，andonecould

barely...

?復雜情緒：One'smindwasa+喻體，withtwoopposingthoughtswagingafiercewar,

leavingone...

I.原句：Anticipationawildcurrent,

__________________________________________excitement.

翻譯：期待如狂野的電流般在我的血管中奔涌，讓我全身的每一根纖維都因興奮而顫抖。

2.原句：Fear,avice,

breatheasthedangerloomedcloser.

翻譯：恐懼緊緊揪住我的心臟，像鉗子一樣擠壓著，隨著危險步步逼近，我?guī)缀鯚o法呼吸。

3.原句：battlefield,,

tomandindecisive.

翻譯：我的內(nèi)心猶如一個戰(zhàn)場，兩種對立的想法激烈交鋒，讓我痛苦掙扎、猶豫不決。

答案：

1.coursedthroughmyveinslike;makingeveryfiberofmybeingtinglewith

2.grippedmyhearttightly;squeezingitlike;andIcouldbarely

3.Mymindwasa;withtwoopposingthoughtswagingafiercewar;leavingme

段落一(積極情緒一復雜情緒)

Istoodbackstage,myhandsclutchingtheguitarstrapuntilmyknucklesturnedwhile.The

audience'schatterfadedasthehostcalledmyname,and(1)

(期待如狂野的電流般在我的血管中奔涌，讓我全身的每一根纖維都因興奮而顫抖)1'd

practicedthissongahundredtimes,yetasIsteppedintothespotlight,(2)

內(nèi)心卻像一個戰(zhàn)場，兩種對立的想法激烈交鋒，讓我痛苦掙扎、猶豫不決)一shouldlsmkto

theoriginalversionoraddthenewriffI*dcreatedlastnight?Whenthefirstnoteofthepiano

accompanimentfilledthehall,Iclosedmyeyes,letthemusicguideme,andchosetotrustmygut.

答案：

(l)anticipationcoursedthroughmyveinslikeawildcurrent,makingeveryfiberofmybeing

tinglewithexcitement.

(2)mymindwasabaUleHeld,withtwoopposingthoughtswagingafiercewar,leavingmelorn

andindecisive

段落二(消極情緒-復雜情緒-積極情緒轉折)

Istaredatthebrokencameraonthefloor,thephotosofmygrandma'sbirthdaypartystill

inside.(1)___________________________________________________________________

(恐懼就緊緊揪住我的心臟，像鉗子一樣擠壓著，我?guī)缀鯚o

法呼吸)asIthoughtabouthowupsetshe,dbe-thoseweretheonlyphotoswe'dtakentogether

thatday.(2)______________________________________________________________________

(我的內(nèi)心像一個戰(zhàn)場，兩種對立的想法激烈交鋒，讓我痛苦掙扎、猶豫不決)一

shouldItellherthetmthandriskmakinghersad,orlieandpretendI'dlostthecamera?JustasI

wasabouttohidethebrokendevice,mygrandmawalkedin,sawmyredeyes,andhuggedme.

“Photosfade,butourmemoriesdon't,"shesaidsoftly.Herwordsmeltedmyfear,andIfinally

letoutthebreathI'dbeenholding.

答案：

(1)Feargrippedmyhearttightly,squeezingitlikeavice,andIcouldbarelybreathe

(2)Mymindwasabattlefield,withtwoopposingthoughtswagingafiercewar,leavingmetorn

andindecisive

二、動作描寫類

?緊急動作：Withoutamoment'shesitation,sb.+v-ed+伴隨狀語(clutching/grasping...)

?意外結果:Sb.+v-ed+(方式狀語)+onlyto+v

?細膩動作:Sb.+v-ed+(程度/狀態(tài))，with+身體部位+v-ing...

1.原句：,Tomdashedoutoftheclassroom,clutching

hisumbrellatightlyasthethunderroared.

翻譯：湯姆毫不猶豫地沖出教室，雷雨大作時緊緊操著雨傘。

2.原句：Shetiptoedintotheroom,hopingnottowakehermother,thebed

empty.

翻譯：她踮著腳尖走進房訶，希望不吵醒媽媽，卻發(fā)現(xiàn)床上空無,人。

3.原句：Shetiptoedacrosstheroom,tryingnottomakeasound.as

gentlyasafeatheralighting.

翻譯：她踮著腳尖穿過房間，盡量不發(fā)出一點聲音，雙腳像飄落的羽毛般輕柔移動。

答案：

1.Withoutamoment'shesitation

2.onlytofind

3.herfeetmoving

段落一(緊急動作+意外結果)

Thebellfortheendofclasshadn'tfinishedringingwhendarkcloudsrolledin.andthick

raindropsstarted砸ingdov/n.(1)，(亳不猶豫地)Tom

dashedoutoftheclassroom,clutchinghisumbrellatightlyasthethunderroared.Heheldthe

umbrellahighoverhishead,rushingtowardtheschoolgate：omeethislittlesister一she'd

forgottenhersthatmorning.Hescannedthecrowdanxiously,callinghername,

⑵(卻發(fā)現(xiàn)她站在墻邊的樹下)bythewall,her

schoolbagheldoverherheadtoblocktherain.Reliefwashedoverhimasheranover,openingthe

umbrellatoshieldthembothfromthedownpour.

答案：

(1)Withoutamoment'shesitation

(2)onlytofindherstandingunderatree

段落二(細膩動作+意外結果+緊急動作)

Ilwaspastiiiidnighl,andLilywantedtoleaveacupofwarminiik.onhermuni'sdesk——moldhad

beenworkinglateeverynightthisweek.Shetiptoedacrosstheroom,tryingnottomakeasound,

(1)(雙腳輕柔移動)afeatheralighting.Sheheld

themugcarefully,itswarmthseepingthroughherpalms,andapproachedthedeskquietly,

(2)(去口不小心碰侄ijT筆筒)一pensand

pencilsscatteredacrossthefloorwithasoftclatter.Withoutamoment'shesitation,sheknelt

downquickly,pickingupthestationeryonebyone,(3)

.(生怕吵醒媽媽，心怦怦直跳)Justasshefinishedputtingthemback,asoft“Thankyou,

sweetieMcamefromthebed—momhadbeenawakethewholetime,watchingherwithasmile.

答案：

(1)herfeetmovingasgentlyas

(2)onlytoknockoverapenholderbyaccident

(3)herheartracinginfearofwakingmom

三、環(huán)境烘托類

?擬人化環(huán)境：自然現(xiàn)象+v-ed+(方式狀語)+asif+擬人從句

,場景氛圍：With+環(huán)境名詞+v-ing+(細節(jié)),sb.+v-ed...

?感官環(huán)境：具體事物+感官動詞(crunched/lashed...),(補充說明)

1.原句：Thewindwhistledthroughthetrees,.

翻譯：風穿過樹林呼嘯作響，仿佛在為落葉哭泣。

2.原句：intheduskandthecricketschirpinginthe

grass,shesat(here,lostinmemories.

翻譯：黃昏中螢火蟲飛舞，草叢里蟋蟀鳴叫，她坐在那里，沉浸在回憶中。

3.原句：Ahowlinggaleandtorrentialrain.

翻譯：狂風暴雨猛烈地拍打著窗戶。

答案：

I.asifweepingforthefallenleaves

2.With(hefirefliesdancing

3.lashedthewindows

段落一(擬人化環(huán)境+場景氛圍+感官環(huán)境)

Thewindwhistledthroughthetrees,(1)___________________________________________

(仿佛在為路邊堆積的落口1哭泣)lhalpiledupalongllicpalh.(2)

(螢火蟲飛舞)intheduskandthecricketschirpinginthegrass,shesatthere,

lostinmemories-ofsummereveningswhenshe'dchasefireflieswithhergrandpa,theirlaughter

mixingwiththecricketsongs.Asuddengustblew,carryingiheearthyscentofwetsoil,andshe

pulledhershawltighteraroundhershoulders.Justthen,(3)

(一根小樹枝"咔嚓"斷裂)underfootnearby,makingherjumpslightly一thoughshesoon

smiled,knowingitwasonlyasquirrelscunyingbacktoitsnest.Iheduskdeepened,andthewind

s“weeping“grewsofter,(4)(仿佛在讓她多沉

浸一會兒回憶)alittlelonger.

答案：

(1)asifweepingforthefaEenleaves

(2)Withthefirefliesdancing

(3)asmallbranchsnapped

(4)asiflettingherlingerinthememories

段落二(感官環(huán)境+擬人化環(huán)境+場景氛圍)

Ahowlinggaleandtorrentialrain(1),(猛烈地拍打著

窗戶)theirforcesostrongthattheglassrattledwitheveryblow.Thewinddashedagainstthe

doorframe,(2)(仿佛想闖進屋

甲)toescapethestormoutside.(3)________________________________(壁爐里的火苗嚼啪作

響)andsendingoccasionalsparksontothehearth,Dadsatbythewindow,wipingthefoggedglass

tochecktheroad.Momstoodin(hekitchen,stirringapotofhotsoup-thericharomaofcanots

andbeefdriftingintothelivingroom,fightingoffthecoldfromtherain.°Thestormshouldpass

bymidnight,Dadsaid,turningtoMom,“We'Hhavehotsoupandtellstoriesuntilthen."The

rain(4).(繼續(xù)拍打著窗戶)butinsidethehouse,the

sputteringfireandwarmsoupmadethehowlinggalefeellikeadistant,unthreateningsound.

答案：

(1)lashedthewindows

(2)asiftryingtobreakintothehouse

(3)Withthefireplacesputtering

(4)continuedtolashthewindows

四、情感互動關

?神態(tài)+對話：Tears+非謂語+inone'seyes,sb.+v-ed+H...n+while+v-ing...

?動作+對話：“???”+sb.+v?ed,(伴隨動作/神態(tài))

?情緒+動作：Overwhelmedwith+emotion,sb.+v-cd+(動作細節(jié))

1.原句：,shewhispered,"Tmsorry“whilegently

pattinghisshoulder.

翻譯：她眼中滿含淚水，一邊輕輕拍著他的肩膀，一邊低語道：“對不起。”

2.原句："We,11makeitJhesaid,,"justholdon".

翻譯：“我們會成功的，”他說著，拳頭緊攥，透著堅定，“堅持住。”

3.原句：crimson,andhecouldfeeltheheatrisingfromhis

neck.Heshiftedhisweightuncomfortablyfromonefoottotheother,wishinghecoulddisappear

intothinair.

翻譯：他的臉漲得通紅，能感覺到脖子上熱氣升騰。他不自在地把重心從一只腳換到另一只

腳，真希望自己能消失不見。

答案：

1.Tearsbrimminginhereyes

2.hisfistclenchedindetermination

3.Hisfaceflushed

段落一(愧疚與原諒)

Lilastaredatthebrokenmusicboxinherhands-theonehersisterhadkeptsincechildhood.

She*dknockeditoverwhilerushingtoschool(hatmorning,andnow(hedelicatemelodywouldn'

tplay.(1)，(眼中滿含淚水)she

whispered,"I*msorry“whilegentlypattinghersisterJsshoulder,(2)

.(聲音里滿是懊悔，微微發(fā)顫)Hersisterlookedatthemusicbox,thenat

Lila,stearfulface,andletoutasoftsigh."We'IImakeit,“shesaid,(3)

,(拳頭緊攥，透著堅定)"justholdon.Dadknowshowtofix

thesethings-wecanaskhimtonight.M(4),(如釋

重負的情緒涌上心頭)Lilahuggedhersistertightly,feelingtheweightofguiltliftoffherchest.

Thesunlightfilteredthroughthewindow,castingawarmglowonthetwogirls,turningthe

momentofwonyintooneofquietcomfort.

答案：

(1)Tearsbrimminginhereyes

(2)hervoicetremblingwithregret

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