BYYUSHENUnit6PlanforYourselfSectionB(3a-3c)WritingLearningobjectives

能夠熟練運(yùn)用本單元重點(diǎn)詞匯和短語，如與職業(yè)相關(guān)的詞匯（fireman,musician,actor/actress,engineer,designer,lawyer,nurse等）以及“begoingto”結(jié)構(gòu)來描述未來計(jì)劃。

掌握寫作中常用的連接詞，如first,then,next,finally等，使文章邏輯連貫。

通過寫作練習(xí)，提升學(xué)生運(yùn)用英語進(jìn)行書面表達(dá)的能力，能夠清晰、有條理地闡述自己的夢想職業(yè)及實(shí)現(xiàn)計(jì)劃。Review1.能夠做(短語)______________

2.堅(jiān)持(短語)________________

3.實(shí)現(xiàn)(動(dòng)詞)_________________4.身體的(形容詞)______________5.自信的(形容詞)_______________

6.聰明地(副詞)_________________7.可能的（形容詞）________________8.介紹（動(dòng)詞）_____________________9.一些決定和學(xué)習(xí)新的東西相關(guān)。(句子)____________________________

11.確保你的決定有可能實(shí)現(xiàn)。(句子）____________________________________________beabletosticktoachievephysicalconfidentwiselypossibleintroduceSomeresolutionshavetodowithlearningnewthings.Makesureyourresolutionispossibletoachieve.Agoodstartishalfdone.Astheyeardrawstoaclose,whatresolutionsdoyouwanttomakeforthecomingnewyear?I’mgoingtoIwill...Iwantto...Iplanto...Ihopeto...takeupanewhobbytryanewsportlikejoggingeatmorefruitandvegetablestokeepfitspendmoretimewithfamilyhelpparentswithhouseworkreadmorebooksinEnglish...FreetalkInthislesson,youwillwriteyourownNewYear,NewMe.ProductNewYear,NewMeAsthenewyeardrawsclose,wecanimproveyourlivesby______________________.I’mgoingtomake_______resolutions.First,_______________________________________I’malsogoingto_____________________________Lastbutnottheleast,___________________________Withtheclearsteps,I’ll_____________________Let’ssharestudyharderatschoolimprovetherelationshipformgoodhabitsdomoreserviceworkWhatresolutionsdoyouwanttomake?Thinkaboutyourdailylife.Istheresomethingyouwanttoimprove,likeaskill,ahabit,orasubject?Whatisit?Iwanttoimprovemyreadinghabit…Discussthequestion.

Iwanttoimprovemycookingskill.Iplantolearntomakethreenewdishes…HowmanyNewYear’sresolutionsisthewritergoingtomake?Whatarethey?

studyingEnglishfortwohoursReadandanswerThreetakingupanewhobbygettingfitterWhattypeofarticleisit?

A.Anarration(記敘文)B.Anexposition(說明文)C.Anargumentation(議論文)D.Apracticalwriting(應(yīng)用文)1234ResolutionabouthobbiesResolutionaboutphysicalhealthRsolutionaboutself-improvementMeaningofmakingresolutionWhat’sthemainideaofeachPara.?

Whichisthecorrectstructureofthepassage?A.

B.

NewYear,NewMeAstheyeardrawstoaclose,itistheperfecttimetothink

aboutthechangeswewanttomakeinthecomingnewyear.Wecanimproveourlivesbylearningsomethingnew,forminggoodhabits,workingharderatsomething,orevenimprovingourrelationshipswithothers.Ihopetomakenextyearbetterthanthisone,soIamgoingtomakethreeresolutions.Thefirstoneisabouttakingupanewhobby.Iamgoingtojointheschoolmusicclubtoimprovemysinging!Ithinksingingisagreatactivity.Andmyfriendsandfamilyalllovemysinging.Iamalsogoingtogetfitter.Besidesjogging,Iamgoingtodopush-upsandsit-ups.IfeelenergeticafterIexercise.I’msureI’mgoingtobeahealthierandhappierperson.Lastbutnotleast,myEnglishisn’tgoodenough,soIamgoingtostudyfortwomorehourseachweekend.Itmightbehard,butIamgoingtogetalotbetteratEnglish!123423412341ObserveandthinkTointroducethetopic.Tolistdifferentresolutions.PassageAnalysisTointroducethetopic.Tolistdifferentresolutions.NewYear’sResolutionsWhataretheresolutions?總分Different

Resolutionsself-improvement（補(bǔ)充）…studyhardlearnnewthingsphysical

healthHowcanweimproveourlives?1.learningsomethingnew2.forminggoodhabits3.workingharder4.improvingourrelationshipswithothersReadpara1andanswer.Readpara1andfinishthetasks.1.“NewYear,NewMe”isaboutthe__________wewanttomake.3.How

manyresolutionsdoesMikemake?changesThree.2.Wecanimproveourlivesby_________________________.MikeToimprove...Resolution1.2.3.123mysingingJointheschoolmusicclub

myphysicalhealthgojogging,dopush-upsandsit-upsmyEnglishStudyfortwomorehourseachweekendReadpara2-4.Completethetable.3aToimprove...Resolution1.2.3.singingJointheschoolmusicclubtoimprovesingingfitness/healthDojogging,push-upsandsit-upstogetfitterEnglishStudyfortwomorehourseachweekendReadthetextandcompletethetable.3a最后但同樣重要的是WhatHowWhyWritingtip:Usesomelinkingwordstomakeitclearandlogical.HobbyResolutionHealthResolutionStudyResolutionReadpara2andanswerthequestions.1.Thefirstoneisabout_________

_____________.2.Howishegoingtodo?Heisgoingto______________________.anewhobbyjointheschoolmusicclubtakingupToimprove...(為了改善)Resolution（決心）singingJointheschoolmusicclub.1.Astheyeardrawstoaclose,itistheperfecttimetothinkaboutthechangeswewanttomakeinthecomingnewyear.Wecanimproveourlivesbylearningsomethingnew,forminggoodhabits,NewYear,NewMeworkingharderatsomething,orevenimprovingourrelationshipswithothers.Ihopetomakenextyearbetterthanthisone,soIamgoingtomakethreeresolutions.即將結(jié)束；即將完成n.關(guān)系；聯(lián)系“by+動(dòng)詞-ing形式”表示方式、方法、手段等。在即將到來的新年里L(fēng)anguagepointsThefirstoneisabouttakingupanewhobby.Iamgoingtojointheschoolmusicclubtoimprovemysinging!Ithinksingingisagreatactivity.Andmyfriendsandfamilyalllovemysinging.Iamalsogoingtogetfitter.Besidesjogging,Iamgoingtodopush-upsandsit-ups.IfeelenergeticafterIexercise.I’msureI’mgoingtobeahealthierandhappierperson.Lastbutnotleast,myEnglishisn’tgoodenough,soIamgoingtostudyfortwomorehourseachweekend.Itmightbehard,butIamgoingtogetalotbetteratEnglish!adj.精力充沛的；充滿活力的最后但同等重要的（強(qiáng)調(diào)重要性與其他內(nèi)容不相上下。）Toimprove...(為了改善)Resolution（決心）1.2.3.singinghealthJointheschoolmusicclub.Gojogging,dopush-upsandsit-ups.EnglishStudyfortwomorehourseachweekend.Readpara3-4andcompletethetable.

Writedownthethingsyouwanttoimproveandyourresolutions.3bToimprove...Myresolution1.2.3.4.5.決心+如何做Writedownthethingsyouwanttoimproveandyourresolutions.3bToimprove…Myresolution1.2.3.myphysicalhealthmyrelationshipwithparentsmymathseatmorehealthilyandgetmoreexercise;takeupanewhobbylikeswimminghelpthemwithhouseworkwhenI’mfreetalkwiththemmorelistentotheteachermorecarefullyinclass/workharderthanbefore/askteachersforhelpImitateandshare

Writedownthethingsyouwanttoimproveandyourresolutions.Toimprove...MyresolutionHow:develophealthyeatinghabitsanddoexerciseregularly/eatmorefruitsandvegetables.Why:healthisbetterthanwealth.What:physicalhealth3bWhatHowWhyWhat:self-improvementHow:takepartinpublicspeakingactivitiesandmakemorefriends.Why:becomemoreconfident.What:hobbyresolutionHow:jointheschoolclubandpracticepaintingfor30minuteseveryweek.Why:relievemystudypressureDoyouhaveanyresolutionsforthecomingNewSemestetr?backgroundauthor’sdecisions

waysReadandanalyzehowthewriterwrotethearticleBeginningHowaboutparagraph2to4?resolutionhow/plans/waysFeelings/reasonsIthink...Ifeel...Itmightbehard,butI...決心+如何做+原因/感受BodyPre

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writingNewYear’sResolutionsTointroducethetopic.Tolistdifferentresolutions.決心+如何做I‘mgoingtotake...lessonstoimprove

...Ihopetospendmoretimeon...Iwillpractise...threetimesaweek.審文體：審人稱：審布局：記敘文第一人稱I一般將來時(shí)/一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)審時(shí)態(tài)：三段BeginningBodyEnding引出話題具體介紹表明決心1.自我提升2.身體健康3.親友關(guān)系4.學(xué)業(yè)提升what↓how↓whyLet’smakeanoutline（列提綱）BeginningBodyEndingplans/waysresolutionsfeelings/reasonsYourfeelingsSummarizewhatcanbementionedwhenwritingresolutions.MyNewYear’sResolutionsTointroducethetopic.background+(ways)+decisionI’mgoingtoIwill...Iwantto...Iplanto...IdecidetoIhopeto...IpromisetoUsefulsentencesIntroducethetopic1.Astheyeardrawstoaclose,itistheperfecttimetomakeresolutions.HereIwanttosharemyNewYear’sresolutionswithyou.2.Thestartoftheyearisoftenaperfecttimeformakingresolutions.Iplantomake...resolutions.1.Myfirstresolutionisaboutimprovingmyphysicalhealth/myrelationshipwithothers…2.Mysecondresolutionhastodowithlearningnewthings/self-improvement…3.Lastbutnotleast,描述不足，soIamgoingto…Resolutionstakeupanewhobbygetfitterimprovestudyjointheschoolmusicclubgojoggingdopush-upsandsitupsstudyfortwomorehourseachweekendlearntosinglearntoplaytheguitarlearntoswimlearntoplaybasketball...eatmorevegetablesgotobedearlygorunningeverydayexerciseeveryday...workwithagrouplistencarefullystudyhardreadmorebooks...A:What’syourresolution?

B:Myresolutionisto_______.B:I’mgoingto___________.A:Howareyougoingtodothat?PairworkI’mgoingto…Iplanto…Iamgoingtotakeupanewhobby,like…Sentencepatterns:

Asthesummerholidaycomestoanend,it’stheidealmomenttothinkabouttheprogressIwanttoachieveinthenewsemester..Iamgoingtomakefourresolutions.Thefirstresolutionisaboutmyownpersonalimprovement.Nextyear,ormaybesooner,Iamgoingtotakeupanewhobby.IthinksingingisagreatactivitysoIamgoingtolearntosing.Ithinkthiswillalsomakemyfamilyhappybecausetheylovetolistentomusicandsingtogether.

Thesecondresolutionisaboutimprovingmyphysicalhealth.I’mgoingtogetlotsofexerciseandeatmorefruitandvegetables.Exerciseandvegetablesaregoodformyhealth.Thethirdresolutionisaboutimprovingmyrelationshipswithmyfamilyandfriends.I’mgoingtospendmoretimewithmyfamily.I’mgoingtodomorehouseworktomakemyparentshappy.Iamalsogoingtohelpmyfriendsmorebecausetheyareimportantforme.

Thelastresolutionsisabouthowtodobetteratschool.IamgoingtoreadmorebooksinEnglishanddomoremathexercise,becauseI’mnotgoodatthesetwosubjects.

Body具體介紹1.自我提升2.身體健康3.親友關(guān)系4.學(xué)業(yè)提升OnepossibleversionPlansreadmorebooks/eatmorehealthily/exercisemore/keeponwriting…takeupanewhobby,likeswimming/joggingorphotography/painting…3.studyharder/jointhesportsclub/helpwithhousework…4.dopush-ups/dosit-ups5.becomemoreconfident/organized6.takeartlessonsandpractiseeveryday...I’mgoingtoIwill...Iwantto...Iplanto...IdecidetoIhopeto...IpromisetoExpressfeelingsI’msureIcanachieve/realizemydream.Ihopemydreamcancometrueoneday.I’msureIcankeepmyresolutionsifItrymybest.Althoughit'sdifficulttokeeptheresolutions,Iwilltrymybesttodoit.FamoussayingsNopains,nogains.一分耕耘，一分收獲Agoodbeginningishalfdone.良好的開端是成功的一半。Wherethere’sawill，there’saway.有志者事竟成。Nothingisimpossibletoawillingheart.世上無難事，只怕有心人。Now,youcanexchangeyourwritingswithyourpartnerstocheckeachother’swriting.ChecklistSelf-evaluationPeer-evaluationTeacher-evaluationClearstructureTopicsentenceMorerelativeinformationRightlinkingwordsRightgrammarRightspellingGoodhandwritingGreatGoodTryharderResolutionsarepromisestoyourself.Theymayhelptomakeyouabetterpersonandtomakeyourlifeeasier.Imadetworesolutionsatthebeginningoftheyear.Thefirstresolutionisaboutmyphysicalhealth.I‘mgoingtoexercisemoreandeatlessjunkfood.Afterall,healthcomesfirst.Thesecondresolutionisaboutmystudies.Iwanttogetbettergrades,soI’mgoingtostudyharder.Takingmoreexerciseandaskingforteachers‘helparealsogoodwaysformetomakeprogress.Althoughit'sdifficulttokeeptheresolutions,Iwilltrymybesttodoit.SamplewritingBeginning(開頭)B