2026屆新高考英語三輪沖刺復(fù)習(xí)玫瑰花的救贖讀后續(xù)寫ThecarturnedontothefamiliarroadthatledtoGrandma’sfarm.“Jude,thissummerholidaywillbeagreatchanceforyoutostaywithyourgrandma,”Dadsaidashedrove.Everymoment,weweremovingfartherawayfromthecity,theplacewhereIknewhowtodothingsright.Thecarenginewasn’toffbeforeGrandmahuggedme.Islowlydraggedmyselfoutofthecar.“Jude,youlookunhappy.Why?”Grandmaasked.Sheactedlikenothingbadhadhappenedlasttime.CouldIaskhowmuchmoneyherneighborMr.Jacksonhadlostbecauseofmymistake?Washestillupsetwithme?“I’mfine,”Ianswered.“I’mjustmissingmycomputercamp.ComputersaresomethingI’mgoodat.”“Thatsoundsdisappointing.”Grandmanodded.Ifeltunhappyaboutmypastmistakesandmissedmycomputercamp.AnalysethetextItraveledtothefarmwithmydadandmissedmylifeinthecity.IlikedvisitingthefarmduringbreaksbeforeImessedthingsuplastsummer.Grandmalivedalone,andMr.Jacksonwaslikefamilytoher.ThenonedayIforgottolockthegateandletthegoatsintohisflowerbeds.Helostalmostallhisrosesforthefarmers’market.Now,backatthefarm,Ifeltnervous.IwastryingtohideintheroomwhenIsawMr.Jackson!HewasopeningthedoorandcallingGrandma.“Ineedhelp!”heyelledtoher.“Justasecondforthefreshlyharvestedroses!”Thatwaswhenhesawme.Ifeltmyhearttightenandwasreadyforhiscriticism.Ideservedit.Hehadprobablybeenwaitingforthismomentsincelastsummer.IforgottolockthegateandgoatsruinedJackson’srosesMrJacksonaskedforhelpandIfearedthecriticismHowever,Mr.Jacksongreetedmehappily,“Great,Judeishere!Yourgrandmaalwaystellsusyouareawonderfullycompetent(有能力的)computerprogrammer.”Ishookmyhead.“Iamnotcompetent.IamsorryImessedthingsup.”Hewassurprisedandcomfortedme,“Itwasanaccident.Beingcompetentdoesn’tmeanyounevermakemistakes.”Ilookedoutofthewindow.Therewerepilesofroseswaitingtobesold.“Jude,canyouhelpus?Wewanttosellrosesonline.Wehaveacomputerandalltheparts(零件)forourinternetconnection,butwejustcan’tsetitup,”Grandmaasked.Nointernet.Theyseemedtoliveinthetwentiethcentury.Mr.Jacksongreetedmehappilyandcomfortedme.Mr.Jacksonaskedmeforhelp:Conflict&Theme外部沖突內(nèi)部沖突賣玫瑰花Wehaveacomputerandalltheparts(零件)forourinternetconnection,butwejustcan’tsetitup,”Grandmaasked.Nointernet.Theyseemedtoliveinthetwentiethcentury.【How】如何解決問題？Jude用自己的計算機(jī)能力協(xié)助Mr.Jackson&Grandma完成網(wǎng)絡(luò)連接和線上銷售工作，使農(nóng)村進(jìn)入21世紀(jì)，成功彌補(bǔ)之前的錯誤，銷售玫瑰花我逃避我之前犯下的錯誤我認(rèn)為有能力等于不犯錯誤，陷入自我懷疑直面錯誤，利用計算機(jī)能力解決之前犯下的錯誤我意識到有能力不等于不犯錯誤，重拾自信Conflict&Theme善良？（Itiskindnessthatmakestheworldgoesaround）科技改變生活？（Technologychangesourlife）人物自我成長（敢于面對錯誤，意識到有能力并不等于不犯錯誤）“Itwasanaccident.Beingcompetentdoesn’tmeanyounevermakemistakes.”MrJacksonsaid.MaybeIcouldbesomeonewhowasreallycompetent.Withinafewhours,ordersforrosesfloodedin.Picturetheplot我是否同意幫忙？我點頭同意，表示會全力以赴。我接下來的行動？走進(jìn)屋內(nèi)，拿工具組建網(wǎng)絡(luò)。從P2首句來看，P1應(yīng)以什么結(jié)尾？給我?guī)硎裁葱睦磙D(zhuǎn)變？網(wǎng)店創(chuàng)建好，開始接單。增強(qiáng)信心，漸漸驅(qū)散了去年夏天犯錯的陰霾。Withinafewhours,ordersforrosesfloodedin.Picturetheplot銜接過渡總結(jié)/升華看到這些訂單，Mr.Jackson和Grandma的反應(yīng)？倆人臉上綻開驚訝又自豪的笑容，紛紛稱贊我的能力。我們幾人接下來的行動？忙完后我們的互動？整個下午都忙于售賣工作：Grandma包裝玫瑰，Mr.Jackson為花束貼上標(biāo)簽，我則回復(fù)顧客的咨詢。玫瑰售罄后，奶奶再次肯定了我。這件事給我的感悟？能力不在于規(guī)避錯誤，而在于直面錯誤，用自己的才能去療愈與成長。寫作存在問題情節(jié)脫節(jié)：忽略原文伏筆（如農(nóng)場有電腦和網(wǎng)絡(luò)零件），憑空添加不合理情節(jié)（如Jude外出購買新設(shè)備），導(dǎo)致與原文邏輯斷裂；心理描寫缺失：Jude從不安到自信的轉(zhuǎn)變過程未體現(xiàn)，僅單純敘述事件，人物形象不豐滿。謙辭造句1.見到祖母和杰克遜先生鼓勵的眼神，我鼓起勇氣，擺脫了揮之不去的自我懷疑，并決心幫助他們，彌補(bǔ)我去年的錯誤?！揪涫揭?Atthesightof/At

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