中考作文寫作講解作文1.朋友情深，友誼無價。在與朋友交往的過程中，你認為什么是最重要的？是以誠相待、彼此信任，還是……？目前，你校?？诰痛嗽掝}開展征文活動，請你結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)歷，寫一篇英語短文，談?wù)効捶?。?nèi)容提示：（1）Whatisthemostimportantaboutfriendship?（2）Shareyourexperience.要求：（1）中心突出，語義連貫，層次清晰，書寫規(guī)范；（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和校名；（3）詞數(shù)80左右。2.假期中，我們有時間做與學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)生活不同的很多事情，如旅游、干家務(wù)、做義工、參加夏（冬）令營……請你根據(jù)以往的假期生活經(jīng)歷，用英語寫一篇短文，跟同學(xué)們分享你在假期做過的一件事情及體會。內(nèi)容提示：（1）講述你在假期里做過的一件事情；（2）談?wù)勀阕鲞@件事情的體會。

要求：（1）中心突出，語義連貫，層次清晰，書寫規(guī)范；（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和校名；

（3）詞數(shù)80詞左右。寫作思路與技巧：“三段四步法”（1）“三段”（三個段落）：針對的閱卷老師先看文章結(jié)構(gòu)和內(nèi)容要點，讓閱卷老師不得不給你定位一類文。中考作文，無論是那種文體，都可以用三段法來表示。顧名思義，就是無論是記敘文、還是議論文、或者夾敘夾議文章，都可以通用。簡單解釋如下：第一段：開篇背景介紹（時間、地點、人物、事件），發(fā)表觀點，提出要討論的問題，現(xiàn)象等。第二段：故事發(fā)展論據(jù)、論點支撐第三段：結(jié)局總結(jié)觀點（如果題目要點就是三個內(nèi)容層次的話，可以按照題目要點的劃分寫成三段）（2）“四步”有了框架就相當(dāng)于有了骨骼，而真正的血肉要靠四個步驟來實現(xiàn)。步驟一：審題審題的訓(xùn)練對于每個學(xué)生都不陌生，審題一定要做到五個方面：一審主題（寫什么），二審體裁，三審時態(tài)，四審人稱，五審內(nèi)容要點步驟二：打草稿中考一定要打草稿，兩大優(yōu)勢=1\*GB3①中考不準在試卷更改，而中考時落筆錯誤是難免的，涂改就會后卷面分，打草稿就可以避免這個情況了。=2\*GB3②正式寫作是對草稿的在梳理，語言的再錘煉。（在時間允許的情況下打草稿）步驟三：正文寫作做到兩點，一要凝練，二要變化。文章80—100字為宜，注意使用過渡詞、從句、句型和詞組搭配。步驟四：檢查：很多學(xué)生考試都會檢查，但總是不能找到自己的錯誤。原因很簡單，方法不對：英語寫作檢查的原則：（1）內(nèi)容要點：缺少一個內(nèi)容要點，文章直接降到第三檔（2）語法錯誤：動詞三單形式，時態(tài)，語態(tài)，單復(fù)數(shù)，主謂一致，冠詞等（3）變換句式：過于簡單的結(jié)構(gòu)要試著變化，從句，固定句型的正確使用。(4)拼寫：單詞的拼寫、大小寫和標點符號，卷面的整潔。初中常用時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時：主+謂+表、賓語+其他一般過去時：主+謂（過去時）正在進行時：be+Ving一般將來時：will+do(動詞原型）過去進行時：was/were+Ving現(xiàn)在完成時：has/have+done(動詞過去分詞）常用連詞。表示并列的連詞：and,besides,what’smore,both…and..neither…nor表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系：but,while,only,or,however,though表示因果關(guān)系：for,because,then,so表示觀點：think,inone’sopinion,列舉：forexample,suchas,like羅列層次：First,then,next,second,third…ontheotherhand(另一方面）注:在議論文的具體寫作中要注意下列幾點：（1）議題的提出要開門見山，不要拖泥帶水。（2）議論時可以采用不同的方法。如：可以擺出正反兩方面觀點，進行對比；也可引經(jīng)據(jù)典論證作者自己觀點的正確性，從而使讀者接受自己的觀點；亦可提出一種錯誤的觀點然后論證其錯誤，最終提出正確的觀點。正文部分是寫作的重點，論證方法可用歸納法、推理法、比較法等。（3）在結(jié)論部分必須表明作者的觀點，對討論的問題做出總結(jié)。（4）注意連接詞和過渡詞等詞語的使用，以增強文章的條理性和邏輯性。4、書面表達常用的過渡語，句型和結(jié)構(gòu)：常用過渡語1.表起始的過渡語:firstofall,tobeginwith,inmyopinion,accordingto,sofar,asfaras2.表時間的過渡語:first,atfirst,then,later,intheend,finally,afterthat,sincethen,forthefirsttime,atlast,assoonas,soon,finally3.表空間的過渡語:ontheright/left,ononesideof…ontheothersideof…,atthefoot/top/endof,inthemiddle/centreof,nextto,farfrom,infrontof4.表因果的過渡語:for,becauseof,onereasonisthat…anotherreasonisthat…,thus,so,asaresult(of)5.表轉(zhuǎn)折的過渡語:but,yet,however,afterall,infact,while,insteadof,although,otherwise,afterall6.表列舉的過渡語:forexample,suchas,thatis,like,asfollows,inotherwords,andsoon7.表推進的過渡語:what’smore,ononehand…ontheotherhand…,inotherwords,notonly…butalso…,besides8.表總結(jié)的過渡語:inshort,inaword,ingeneral,inbrief,inall,onthewhole常用句型1.重點句型1).It’sadjforsbtodo做…對某人來說…2).…so…that…如此…以至于……too…todo太…而不能……such…that…如此…以至于…3).not…until…直到…才…例:Ididn’tgotobeduntilmymothercameback.4).Thereasonwhy+句子isthat+句子…的原因是…Thereasonwhyhegotangrywasthatshetoldhimalie.(他生氣的原因是她對他說了謊。)5).Thatiswhy+句子

那是…的原因6).Thatisbecause+句子

那是因為…7).Itissaidthat+句子

據(jù)說…Itisreportedthat+句子

據(jù)報道…8).Thereisnodoubtthat+句子

毫無疑問…9).Itgoeswithoutsayingthat+句子

不言而喻，毫無疑問10).Thereisnoneedtodo沒必要做…11).Thereisnopointindoing做某事毫無意義2.提建議hadbetter(not)do最好(不)做howabout/whataboutdoing

…怎么樣?Ithinkyoushoulddo我認為你應(yīng)該…Isuggestthatyoushoulddo

我建議你做…IfIwereyou,Iwoulddo…我要是你的話，我會做…It’sbesttodo

最好做…Whynotdo/whydon’tyoudo…?為什么不…3.表示喜歡和感興趣like/lovedoingenjoydoingbefondofdoing喜歡做…prefertodoAratherthandoB寧愿做A也不愿做Bbeinterestedindoing=show/takegreatinterestinn/doing

感興趣4.努力做…trytodo努力做…tryone’sbesttodo=doone’sbesttodo竭盡全力做…makeeffortstodo=makeeveryefforttodo盡力做…dowhat/everythingsb.cantodo盡某人全力做…5.打算做…/計劃做…intend/plantodo打算做…begoingtodo打算/計劃做…decidetodo決定做…determinetodo決定做…bedeterminedtodo決定做…makeupone’smindtodo下定決心做…6.表示想/希望wanttodo=wouldliketodo想做…h(huán)opetodo

希望做…expecttodo期待著做…wishtodo

希望做…considerdoing考慮做…7.只加doing作賓語的動詞finish完成/practice練習(xí)/suggest建議/consider考慮/mind介意/enjoy喜歡doing8.固定搭配lookforwardtodoing盼望做…keepondoing堅持做…dreamofdoing夢想做…can’thelpdoing情不自禁地做…keep/stop/preventsb.fromdoing阻止某人做…bebusy(in)doing

bebusywith+名詞

忙于做…spendtime/money(in)doing

spendtime/moneyon+名詞

花費時間做…h(huán)avefun/haveagoodtime/enjoyoneselfdoing玩得開心havetrouble/haveproblem/havedifficulty(in)doing

或with+名詞

做…有困難中考英語作文高分必備萬能句1.不用說……Itgoeswithoutsayingthat…=(Itis)needlesstosay(that)…活學(xué)活用：不用說早睡對我們有好處。2.在各種……之中，……Amongvariouskindsof…，…=Ofallthe…，…活學(xué)活用：在各種運動中我尤其喜歡慢跑。3.就我的看法……;我認為……Inmyopinion,…=Tomymind,…=AsfarasIamconcerned,…活學(xué)活用：就我的看法玩電腦游戲既花費時間也有害健康。4.隨著人口的增加……Withtheincrease/growthofthepopulation,…隨著科技的進步……Withtheadvanceofscienceandtechnology,…活學(xué)活用：隨著中國經(jīng)濟的快速發(fā)展許多社會問題產(chǎn)生了。5.……是必要的Itisnecessary(forsb.)todo/that………是重要的Itisimportant/essential(forsb.)todo/that………是適當(dāng)?shù)腎tisproper(forsb.)todo/that………是緊急的Itisurgent(forsb.)todo/that…活學(xué)活用：我們應(yīng)當(dāng)保持公共場所清潔。6.花費spend…onsth./doingsth.…活學(xué)活用：我們不應(yīng)該在我們不感興趣的事情上花太多的時間。7.how引導(dǎo)的感嘆句活學(xué)活用：那至少可以證明你很誠實。8.狀語從句A)如果你不……，你就會……Ifyoudon't…，you'll…活學(xué)活用：如果你不堅持努力工作，你就會失去這次機會。B)如此……，以至于……so…that…活學(xué)活用：當(dāng)時，我非常傷心，最后都想放棄了。9.賓語從句我認為，……/我認為……不Ithink/Idon'tthinkthat…我想知道是否……Iwonderwhether…活學(xué)活用：他認為我不應(yīng)該阻止他參加這個俱樂部。答案：Hedoesn'tthinkIshouldstophimjoiningtheclub.10.Since+S+過去式，S+現(xiàn)在完成式?；顚W(xué)活用：自從他上高中，他就一直很用功常見題型結(jié)構(gòu)：1、對比觀點題型(1)要求論述兩個對立的觀點并給出自己的看法。1.有一些人認為…2.另一些人認為…3.我的看法…Thetopicof①__________(主題)isbecomingmoreandmorepopularrecently.Therearetwosidesofopinionsofit.SomepeoplesayAistheirfavorite.Theyholdtheirviewforthereasonof②_________(支持A的理由一)Whatismore,③_____________理由二).Moreover,④______________(理由三).WhileothersthinkthatBisabetterchoiceinthefollowingthreereasons.Firstly,=5\*GB3⑤_________(支持B的理由一).Secondly(besides),⑥________(理由二).Thirdly(finally),⑦_________(理由三).Frommypointofview,Ithink⑧__________(我的觀點).Thereasonisthat⑨__________(原因).Asamatteroffact,therearesomeotherreasonstoexplainmychoice.Forme,theformerissurelyawisechoice.(2)給出一個觀點，要求考生反對這一觀點Somepeoplebelievethat①_________(觀點一).Forexample,theythink②_______(舉例說明).Anditwillbringthem③________(為他們帶來的好處).Inmyopinion,Ineverthinkthisreasoncanbethepoint.Foronething,④_______(我不同意該看法的理由一).Foranotherthing,⑤________(反對的理由之二).FormallwhatIhavesaid,Iagreetothethoughtthat⑥__________(我對文章所討論主題的看法).2、問題解決題型1.問題現(xiàn)狀2.怎樣解決(解決方案的優(yōu)缺點)Inrecentdays,wehavetofacetheproblem________（問題A）,whichisbecomingmoreandmoreserious.First,________(說明A的現(xiàn)狀).Second,________(舉例進一步說明現(xiàn)狀)ConfrontedwithA,weshouldtakeaseriesofeffectivemeasurestocopewiththesituation.Foronething,________(解決方法一).Foranother________(解決方法二).Finally,________(解決方法三).Personally,Ibelievethat________(我的解決方法).Consequently,I’mconfidentthatabrightfutureisawaitingusbecause________(帶來的好處).3、說明利弊題型這種題型往往要求先說明一下現(xiàn)狀，再對比事物本身的利弊，有時也會單從一個角度(利或弊)出發(fā)，最后往往要求考生表明自己的態(tài)度(或?qū)κ挛锴熬疤岢鲱A(yù)測)1.說明事物現(xiàn)狀2.事物本身的優(yōu)缺點(或一方面)3.你對現(xiàn)狀(或前景)的看法Nowadaysmanypeopleprefer___A_____.Becauseithasasignificantroleinourdailylife.Generally,itsadvantagescanbeseenasfollows.First________(A的優(yōu)點之一).Besides________(A的優(yōu)點之二).Buteverycoinhastwosides.Thenegativeaspectsarealsoapparent.Oneoftheimportantdisadvantagesisthat________(A的第一個缺點).Tomakemattersworse,________(A的第二個缺點).Throughtheaboveanalysis,Ibelievethatthepositiveaspectsoverweighthenegativeones.Therefore,Iwouldliketo________(我的看法).FromthecomparisonbetweenthesepositiveandnegativeeffectsofA,weshouldtakeitreasonablyanddoitaccordingtothecircumstanceswearein.Onlybythisway,________(對前景的預(yù)測)2.評分檔次和標準：?第一檔：13～15分。要求：內(nèi)容涵蓋所有的要點，表達準確，意思連貫，符合邏輯，只有個別語言錯誤?第二檔：10～12分。要求：內(nèi)容涵蓋所有的要點，表達清楚，意思連貫，符合邏輯，但有少數(shù)語言錯誤。?第三檔：8～9分。要求：內(nèi)容涵蓋大部分要點，表達較為清楚、連貫，符合邏輯，但有一定語言錯誤。?第四檔：5～7分，要求：內(nèi)容涵蓋部分要點，能寫出少量正確句子，但整體表達不太連貫，且語言錯誤較多。?第五檔：0～4分。只能寫出一些單詞，不成句子，缺乏邏輯性，錯誤很多。8個話題作文1.關(guān)于學(xué)習(xí)英語的話題:“HowtolearnEnglishwell?”2.衛(wèi)生健康飲食:3.

“初三學(xué)生要不要參加體育鍛煉”。4.環(huán)境問題5.關(guān)于“人口問題POPULATION”6.關(guān)于中學(xué)生使用手機的優(yōu)缺點,談?wù)勀愕目捶?.介紹自己的興趣業(yè)余愛好。8.春節(jié)習(xí)俗與計劃,如何過2009年的春節(jié)。一.

環(huán)保1.

It’s

our

duty

to

protect

our

environment。2.

It

is

very

important

to

take

care

of

our

environment3.

We

should

not

throw

litter

onto

the

ground4.

We

should

not

spit

in

a

public

place/

cut

down

the

trees5.

We

should

plant

more

flowers

and

trees。6.

We

must

pick

up

some

rubbish

and

throw

it

into

a

dustbin7.

If

everyone

makes

contributions

to

protecting

the

environment,

the

world

will

become

much

more

beautiful。二、

旅游1.

Last

Sunday(Saturday,…)

,it

was

sunny(rainy,

windy,

foggy,)2.

I

got

up

very

early

(late).

After

breakfast

I

went

to

…with

my

friends

by

bike,

bus，…3.

We

enjoyed

ourselves.4.

We

forgot

the

time.

We

didn’t

come

back

until

5

o’clock。5.

We

all

felt

very

tired,

but

we

were

happy.6.

I

thought

I

would

never

forget

this

trip.7.

Last

summer,

my

parents

and

I

went

to

Beijing

for

our

holidays。8.

We

visited

a

lot

of

places

of

interest.9.

We

had

a

good

time

there.10.

We

bought

a

lot

of

things.

The

clothes

here

are

good

and

cheap.三、

比賽1.

Last

Sunday,

Class

One

had

a

football

match

with

Class

Two.2.

All

of

us

went

to

watch

it.3.

The

match

was

very

exciting.4.

In

fact,

I

have

never

seen

such

an

exciting

match

before。5.

The

score

was

5-3.

Our

team

scored

three

goals

in

thelast

fifteen

minutes.6.

Class

One

won

this

match.

Class

Two

lost.7.

Class

One

played

well.

They

deserved

to

win。8.

Their

PE

teacher

was

very

pleased

with

their

performance.四、

健康1.

It

is

very

important

to

keep

healthy.2.

How

can

we

keep

healthy?3.

We

can’t

go

to

sleep

too

late.

We

can’t

get

up

too

late。4.

We

should

eat

the

food

healthily.5.

We

should

do

more

exercise.6.

Last

Tuesday

I

got

a

cold

and

had

a

pain

in

my

head。7.

I

didn’t

feel

like

eating

anything.8.

I

decided

to

see

the

doctor.9.

In

the

doctor’s

office,

the

doctor

looks

over

me

carefully.10.

He

said

:"Nothing

serious."

And

he

told

me

to

take

a

restand

drink

more

water.11.

A

nurse

gave

me

an

injection.

It

was

a

little

painful.12.

The

doctor

asked

me

to

take

the

medicine

three

times

a

day.13.

A

few

days

later,

I

felt

better.

From

then

on

I

believe

that

keeping

healthy

is

the

most

important

thing

in

the

world.五、

學(xué)科1.

My

favorite

subject

is

English。2.

More

than

three

quarters

of

the

information

on

the

Internet

is

in

English.3.

It

is

used

by

travelers

and

business

people

all

over

the

world.4.

China

has

joined

the

WTO

and

the

Olympic

Games

will

be

held

in

China.

English

becomes

more

and

more

useful.5.

So

English

is

very

important

and

I

like

English

very

much。6.

We

have

a

lot

of

fun

in

the

English

class.7.

Our

English

teacher

often

makes

us

happy

in

theEnglish

class.8.

I

hope

I

can

go

abroad

one

day,

and

then

I

can

speakto

foreigners

in

English。9.

I

like

English

and

try

my

best

to

learn

it.六、

節(jié)日1.

In

China

the

most

important

holiday

is

the

Spring

Festival.2.

It

comes

in

January

or

February.3.

On

the

Spring

Festival

Eve

people

have

a

big

dinner.

They

have

a

lot

of

nice

food

to

eat.4.

During

the

Spring

Festival

people

have

a

lot

of

interesting

things

to

do.5.

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visit

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New

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寫人1.

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kilos.4.

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us.10.

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work.13.

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tennis.二、英語書面表達專項訓(xùn)練2．書面表達你即將升入高中，面臨寄宿（aboardingschool)和走讀（adayschool)兩類學(xué)校的選擇。請你以“Aboardingschooloradayschool”為題。寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容須包括：讀寄宿學(xué)校的利和弊；讀走讀學(xué)校的利和弊；你的選擇和理由（不得與上述兩點內(nèi)容重復(fù)）。注意：1.詞數(shù);100詞左右（文章開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名等信息；3.文章必須包含提示中的所有信息，并按要求適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。AhoardingschooloradayschoolWearegoingtograduatefromourmiddleschool,__________________________________【答案】Wearegoingtograduatefromourmiddleschools,andwewillmakeachoicetoenteraboardingschooloradayschool.Bothkindsofschoolhavetheiradvantagesanddisadvantages.Ifwechooseaboardingschool,wewillsavetimetostudy.However,wemayhavelesstimetostaywithourfamily.Ifwechooseadayschool,parentscanknowmoreaboutourstudies.AtthesametimecomputergamesandTVplaysmaymakeabadinfluenceonus.Asforme,Ipreferaboardingschool.Weshouldpayattentiontoourstudiestogetgoodgradesinthehighschool.【解析】【分析】整體分析：這是一篇給材料作文。可以分三段寫。第一段要寫總體交代你即將升入高中，面臨寄宿（aboardingschool)和走讀（adayschool)兩類學(xué)校的選擇。第二段要寫詳細敘述讀寄宿學(xué)校的利弊；讀走讀學(xué)校的利弊。第三段要表述作者自己的選擇和理由?！驹斀狻繉懽髦耙?.審清題目，看看有哪些要求？哪些時態(tài)？人稱？2.確定文章類型，記敘文？說明文？議論文？看圖？還是應(yīng)用文？3.確定時態(tài)，單一還是混合。4.寫下關(guān)鍵詞、短語、句型。5.列出提綱和段落，并運用適當(dāng)?shù)木湫秃瓦^渡詞銜接。6.根據(jù)提綱和段落結(jié)構(gòu)句型及關(guān)鍵詞句完成文章。寫完后反復(fù)閱讀修改推敲潤色，人稱、時態(tài)、單復(fù)數(shù)一致等。運用自然過渡法和自然銜接法來是文章更為地道、通順、純正。用的短語、句型：bothkindsof、Ifwechooseaboardingschool、Atthesametime、Asforme,Ipreferaboardingschool、payattentionto、來增加了文章的亮點?！军c睛】這類作文的寫作方法要注意認真審題，注意過渡性語言的使用。做到：要點要全，表達要清晰明確，使用短語，句型要準確，注意避免拼寫和語法錯誤。3．為了宣傳和弘揚中華優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化,某雙語雜志將舉辦征文活動來介紹中國的經(jīng)典故事,“程門立雪(StandinthesnowtowaitforMasterChengrespectfully)”是其中一個選題。請你根據(jù)下面的內(nèi)容提示,用英語寫一篇短文參加此活動。內(nèi)容提示：1.楊時去拜見老師程頤一老師在睡覺一楊時在雪地等一老師醒來發(fā)現(xiàn)楊時在門口2.通過介紹這個故事,發(fā)表你的看法或者觀點。要求：1.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫：詞數(shù)：100左右.2.不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校的真實名稱、老師和同學(xué)的真實姓名?！敬鸢浮縇onglongago,therewasamancalledYangshi.Oncehewenttovisithisteacher,Chengyi.Unfortunately,Mr.Chengwassleepingintheroom.Hedidn’twakeuptheteacher.Sohestoodinfrontofthegate.Atthatmoment,thereweresnowflakesflyingoverhisheadanditwasverycold.ButyangshistillstoodinthesnowuntilMr.Chengwokeup.Whentheteacherwokeup,thesnowwasverydeep.Yangshiwaslikeasnowmanstandingatthegate.Finally,theteacherwasmoveddeeply.Afterreadingthestory,Ithinkweshouldrespectourteacher.Weshouldstudyhard.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文，主要介紹中國的經(jīng)典故事,“程門立雪(StandinthesnowtowaitforMasterChengrespectfully)”。目的是宣傳和弘揚中華優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化。時態(tài)為一般過去時，靈活運用動詞的過去式。作文要包含材料上的所有信息，通過介紹這個故事，發(fā)表看法或者觀點。寫作時，避免漢語式英語。注意固定搭配及主謂一致的問題，例如:Therewas/were...注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，具有條理性。4．旅行是學(xué)習(xí)的最好方式之一。請以“Travelling”為題，根據(jù)以下思維導(dǎo)圖的提示，寫一篇短文，并發(fā)表你的看法。注意：1.要點齊全，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.從思維導(dǎo)圖Sayings部分，選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)母窈侠砝迷诙涛闹校?.詞數(shù)：100詞左右；【答案】例文Travellingisoneofthebestwaysforlearning.Youmayhavereadorheardaboutsomething,butyoucannevergetanexactpictureofituntilyouseeityourself.Seeingisbelieving.Ifyouareacarefulobserver,youcanlearnmuchduringyourtravelaboutthegeography,biology,andhistoryoftheplacesyouvisit.Youcanalsocreategreatmemoriesforyourlifetime.Furthermore,whiletravelling,youcanmeetmorepeopleandmakemorefriends.Nomatterhowwelleducatedyouare,thereisalwaysalotforyoutolearnthroughtravelling.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如oneofthebestways，learnmuch，anexactpictureof，acarefulobserver，seeingisbelieving，nomatter，alot等。而非謂語動詞結(jié)構(gòu)Seeingisbelieving./Furthermore,whiletravelling,youcanmeetmorepeopleandmakemorefriends.和Ifyouareacarefulobserver,youcanlearnmuchduringyourtravelaboutthegeography,biology,andhistoryoftheplacesyouvisit./Nomatterhowwelleducatedyouare,thereisalwaysalotforyoutolearnthroughtravelling.等復(fù)雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達多樣化，是本文的亮點。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分數(shù)。5．書面表達根據(jù)要求完成短文寫作，請將作文寫在答題卡指定的位置上。每年春節(jié)，每個孩子都能收到來自長輩的壓歲錢（luckymoney）。隨著生活水平的提高，大部分孩子得到越來越多的壓歲錢，有些甚至通過微信(WeChat)或支付寶(Alipay)收壓歲錢。同學(xué)們該如何管理自己的錢，讓自己的錢用得更有意義？請結(jié)合自己的實際寫一篇文章，詞數(shù)80詞以上，文中不能出現(xiàn)真實校名和人名。內(nèi)容包括如下：1.你的壓歲錢的來源和用途；2.對合理使用壓歲錢的建議（至少3點）；3.呼吁大家節(jié)約用錢，把自己的壓歲錢用在最需要、最有意義的地方?！敬鸢浮縀verySpringFestivalIreceivealotofluckymoneyfrommyparentsandrelatives.NowIevengetitthroughWeChatorAlipay.Iusuallybuysomeofmyfavoritebooks,schoolthingsandsomefancyclothes.SometimesIalsobuysomegiftsformyparents.Inordertomakegooduseoftheluckymoney,Ithinkwecandothefollowingthings.First,weshouldsavepartofthemoneyforourstudyinsteadofwastingitonvideogames.Second,itisagoodideatobuysomethingusefulforourparentsorteacherssothatwecanshowourlovetothem.Whatismore,whynotdonateourluckymoneytothepoorkidsinneed?Helpingothersmakesushappy.Allinall,letusmanageourluckymoneyproperly.Weshoulduseourmoneyinameaningfulway.【解析】【詳解】每年春節(jié)，每個孩子都能收到來自長輩的壓歲錢（luckymoney）。隨著生活水平的提高，大部分孩子得到越來越多的壓歲錢，有些甚至通過微信(WeChat)或支付寶(Alipay)收壓歲錢。同學(xué)們該如何管理自己的錢，讓自己的錢用得更有意義？這是一篇給材料作文，本題所給材料比較詳細，寫作中注意將所給內(nèi)容表達出來，不能逐字翻譯。通過閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱就是第一人稱，時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意謂語動詞的變化。動筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡單提綱，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞?！军c睛】文章使用了很好的短語和句子：Inordertomakegooduseoftheluckymoney,Ithinkwecandothefollowingthings.First,weshouldsavepartofthemoneyforourstudyinsteadofwastingitonvideogames.這些給文章增色不少。6．從下面兩個題目中任選一題，根據(jù)中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50詞的文段寫作。文中已給出內(nèi)容不計人總詞數(shù)。所給提示詞語僅供選用。請不要寫出你的校名和姓名。題目①假如你是李華，明天下午2:00你要去參加“傳統(tǒng)文化才藝展示”活動，因此不能上英語課。請用英文給你們的外教John寫一張請假條，告訴他你要去干什么，為什么要參加這個活動以及你保證按時完成作業(yè)。提示詞語:traditionaltalentshow,Chineseculture,ask,help提示問題:.Whatwillyoudotomorrowafternoon?Whywillyoutakethisactivity?Howwillyoufinishyourhomework?DearJohn,I'msorrytoaskforabsencefromyourEnglishlesson.________________________________________________________________________________YourloringstudentLilHua題目②一位好老師，勝過萬卷書。在你的初中生活中，一定會有一位老師給你留下了深刻印象。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“Thankyou,myteacher”為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，讓更多的人認識你的老師，同時表達你對他/她的感激之情。主要內(nèi)容包括:哪位老師給你留下了深刻印象，發(fā)生了什么事使你印象深刻以及你想對他/她說些什么。提示詞語：kind,helpful，talkwith，makeprogress提示問題：Whichteacherimpressedyoumost?Whathappenedtomakeyouimpressed?Whatdoyouwanttosaytohim/her?Thankyou,myteacher____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】題目一：DearJohn,I'msorrytoaskforabsencefomyourEnglishlesson.I'mgoingtoaendatraditionaltalentshowat2:00tomorrowaftermoon.InordertolettheforeignstudentsinourschoolknowmoreaboutChineseculture,ourschoolholdsthistalentshow.IwillintroduceChinesepaintinginEnglish.IwillaskmyclassmatestohelpmewithmyEnglish.AndIpromisetofinishmyhomeworkontime.YourloringstudentLiHua題目二：Amongallmyteachers,myEnglishteacherimpressedmemost.Sheisalwayskindandhelpful.lastyear,IdidbadlyinabigtestandIfoundEnglishtoohard.Assoonasshefoundoutthis,shetalkedwithmeandgavemesomehelpfuladvice.Withherencouragement,Ihavemadegreatprogress.Ireallywanttosay"Thankyouforhelpingme.Iloveyou!"tomyEnglishteacher.【解析】【詳解】、題目①本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，作文要求寫一張請假條，因此格式要遵循假條的格式。假條的內(nèi)容——時間和事由均給出，結(jié)合提示問題可知假條主要從三個方面寫，這三個方面需要作者自由發(fā)揮一部分內(nèi)容。本例文是一篇應(yīng)用文，人稱為第一人稱，時態(tài)是以一般將來時為主。例文分成三段，根據(jù)提示問題，每段成一行，這種寫法條理清晰，分段明確。高分亮點：askfor；absencefrom；一般將來時；inorderto；helpsbwithsth；promisetodo；ontime。題目②題目二是一篇話題作文，根據(jù)話題可知這是一篇感謝老師的文章。人稱應(yīng)該為第一人稱。注意給出的提示問題，文章要包含這三部分的內(nèi)容。本例文以第一人稱書寫，時態(tài)主要是一般過去時和一般現(xiàn)在時。文章第一段介紹“我”要感謝的老師，第二段用一般過去時介紹為什么“我”要感謝老師，第三段表達“我”的感謝。分段明確，語句簡潔不啰嗦，時態(tài)運用合理。高分亮點：Amongallmyteachers；didbadlyin；Assoonas；foundout；talkedwith；現(xiàn)在完成時；wanttodosth。7．《朗讀者》、《中國詩詞大會》等文化類節(jié)目喚醒了中國人的閱讀情結(jié)。為了激發(fā)市民們的閱讀興趣,廣州開展了“書香羊城”活動。請根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英語短文,談?wù)勀銓﹂喿x的看法,并對如何培養(yǎng)閱讀習(xí)慣和開展班級閱讀活動提出建議。閱讀的好處1、閱讀使人睿智2、補充1-2個看法培養(yǎng)閱讀習(xí)慣1、每天至少閱讀20分鐘2、補充1-2個建議開展班級閱讀活動1、觀看《朗讀者》,分享節(jié)目推薦的好作品。2、補充1-2個建議注意:1.參考詞匯:《朗讀者》(Readers):作品:works(n.)2.文章應(yīng)包括所有要點:3.詞數(shù)80詞以上(文章的開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)):4.不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個人信息,否則不予評分.Theactivityof“ReadinginGuangzhou“hasbeenheldinGuangzhouforquiteawhile.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Theactivityof“ReadinginGuangzhou”hasbeenheldinGuangzhouforquiteawhile.Readingmakesuswise.Itcannotonlyhelpuslearnmoreabouttheworldbutalsobringushappiness.Keepingreadingeverydayisagoodhabit.Weshouldspendatleasttwentyminutesinreadingafterclass.What’smore,trytomakenotesforgoodpointswhilereading.Wecanalsoholdsomereadingactivitiesinourclass.Forexample,watchsomegoodprogramssuchasReadersandthensharesomegoodbooksintroducedbythereaders.Also,abookcornercanbesetupinourclassroomsothatwecanreadatanytimeafterclass.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文，內(nèi)容包括提示內(nèi)容以及談?wù)勛约簩﹂喿x的看法，并對培養(yǎng)閱讀習(xí)慣和開展班級閱讀活動方面提出建議，人稱為第一人稱，時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時，同時注意恰當(dāng)使用連詞使文章邏輯關(guān)系更為緊密。高分句型：1.Itcannotonlyhelpuslearnmoreabouttheworldbutalsobringushappiness.它不僅能幫助我們更多地了解這個世界，而且能帶給我們幸福。notonly…butalso…不但……而且……，并列連詞短語。2.Keepingreadingeverydayisagoodhabit.每天堅持閱讀是一個好習(xí)慣。Keepingreadingeveryday動名詞短語作主語。3.Also,abookcornercanbesetupinourclassroomsothatwecanreadatanytimeafterclass.另外，我們的教室里還可以設(shè)置一個讀書角，以便課后隨時閱讀。此句是一個復(fù)合句，主句是含有情態(tài)動詞的被動語態(tài)，sothat引導(dǎo)的是目的狀語從句。8．書面表達。29.假如你是李華，你最近認識的美國筆友David給你發(fā)了一封電子郵件，向了解你進初三以來在學(xué)習(xí)和生活方面的一些變化、收獲和感受。請根據(jù)下面的提示及你的實際寫封回信。提示：lessfreetime，muchhomework，morepressure，getintoagoodhighschoolmoreexercise，loseweight