1、How to Write a Composition ?,如何寫好英語作文呢?,一.寫好句子 1、句子要正確。 2、句子要平行。 3、句子要連貫。 4、句子要有邏輯性。 5、句子要避免過多重復(fù)。 6、句子要避免頭重腳輕。 7、句子要避免漢式英語。 二.寫好段落 三.用好過渡詞 四.寫好開頭和結(jié)尾,作文: 1.記敘文 2.說明文 3.議論文 英語寫作多數(shù)為指導(dǎo)性寫作或稱: 半命題寫 作，也就是說，是先給一定的材料，然后讓學(xué)生 依據(jù)所給的材料按要求作文。 方法：組寫、縮寫、擴(kuò)寫、 改寫、 或看圖作文等。,一.寫好句子,1.句子要正確： 1).Do you know where is the Peo

2、ples Park ?,2). There are many visitors enjoy the dish.,Many visitors enjoy the dish. There are many visitors who enjoy the dish.,Do you know where the Peoples Park is?,2.句子要平行,In my spare time, I enjoy popular music and collecting stamps. In my spare time, I enjoy listening to popular music and col

3、lecting stamps. 3.句子要連貫 Go into the park. Go forward. Cross the street. Turn right. After you enter the park by the main gate, walk straight till you come to a stream. Cross the stream and turn right.,4.句子要有邏輯性 Im very interested in computer and won first prize last year. I was very interested in co

4、mputer and won first prize last year. 5.句子要避免過多重復(fù). You will continue to walk. Youll see a hill. You will go around the hill. Youll get to a lake. After walking for a while, youll come to a hill, walk round to the other side of the hill. There youll see a lake.,6.句子要避免頭重腳輕 Chinese, maths, English, ph

5、ysics, chemistry and computer are the main subjects.,The main subjects are Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer.,7.句子要避免漢式英語 My spare lovers are swimming, skating, collecting stamps and listening to popular music.,In my spare time, Im fond of swimming, In my spare time, my hobbie

6、s are swimming, skating,In my spare time, I enjoy swimming, skating,某英語雜志社 “家長(zhǎng)之友”欄目要舉辦一次征文比賽,要求圍繞 “You can lead a horse to water, but you cant make it drink.”這一主題發(fā)表意見. 請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示寫一篇文章.,內(nèi)容提示: 許多家長(zhǎng)望子成龍,不惜重金送孩子上私立學(xué)校,到國(guó)外留學(xué),請(qǐng)家教,給他們買大量的資料,電腦等,但往往這些都 注意事項(xiàng): 投稿人應(yīng)提示內(nèi)容,表明自己的觀點(diǎn):,Nowadays, knowledge is becoming mor

7、e and more important with the development of society, so many parents expect the children to be useful or successful. They spare no effort to offer their children as good a chance as possible: They not only send them abroad for further education and to private schools at great expenses, but also hir

8、e personal teachers. They buy all,kinds of learning materials, computers and so on. But no matter what their parents do for the children, what becomes of the children ? Some of them really make it, but most of them want to enjoy and relax themselves and at last they are really disappointing.,This pr

9、oves the meaning of the saying “You can lead a horse to water, but you cant make it drink.” That is to say, you can give someone all the opportunities for success, but you cant make every person successful.,二.寫好段落,二.寫好段落 段落本身又是一篇小短文,包括 主題句、支持句和結(jié)尾句。 高考題參考范文: 主題句是全文的第一句: Sun Shuwei, a world champion i

10、n diving, is a boy of 14 from Guangdong. 結(jié)尾句是全文最后一句: A year later in 1990,he won a gold medal at the 11th Asian Games and became a world champion at the 6th World Swimming Championships early this year.,假設(shè)你是李曉平，是“江蘇中學(xué)”的學(xué)生。請(qǐng)你圍繞“建設(shè)和諧社會(huì)”的主題，根據(jù)下面所給出的要點(diǎn)提示，用英語給全省中學(xué)生寫一封倡議書。,提示 1.人與社會(huì)：祖國(guó)、家鄉(xiāng)、學(xué)校，熱愛關(guān)心 2.人與人：家人

11、、師長(zhǎng)、同學(xué)，誠(chéng)信互助 3.人與自然：能源、環(huán)境、動(dòng)植物、愛惜保 護(hù) 4.你的態(tài)度：（內(nèi)容由考生自己決定）。,注意：1、詞數(shù)：100左右； 2、內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意行文連貫。,Dear fellow students, Our government is aiming to build a “harmonious society”. I think it is every citizens duty to work hard to achieve this goal.,As high school students, what should we do?,First of all, we sh

12、ould love our motherland. Lets take a great interest in the development of our hometowns and take an active part in our schools activities.,Secondly, lets fill the world with love. We should show our respect for old people,our parents and our teachers. We should also care for each other and help tho

13、se in need. Most important of all, all of us must be faithful and honest in our daily life.,Finally, lets work together to save energy and protect our natural environment, including animals, trees, flowers and grass.,三.過渡詞,1. and, in addition, first, second, third 2. before, after, when, later, imme

14、diately 3. beyond, beside, behind, below, inside 4. but, still, however, even, though 5. because, so, therefore, thus, otherwise 6. so that, indeed, above all, for example 7. finally, in other words, in brief,四.開頭和結(jié)尾,開頭方法:開門見山、解釋和描述主 題、提供背景知識(shí)、小故事 引路、提出問題、倒敘、懸 念、名言、描寫等等. 結(jié)尾方法:總結(jié)主要觀點(diǎn)、重復(fù)開頭或 題目、提出結(jié)論、提出問

15、題 暗示答案、引言、故事等等.,請(qǐng)以你校學(xué)生的名義寫一篇短文,陳述反對(duì)擬在你校附近興建一座化工廠的理由.短文須包括以下內(nèi)容:,1.大部分同學(xué)都反對(duì)興建. 2.盡管該廠可能為本市賺錢不少, 但弊大于利. 3.可能造成噪聲污染和空氣污染. 4.侵占學(xué)校部分操場(chǎng).,注意:可以補(bǔ)充若干理由,不要僅 僅翻譯以上各點(diǎn).,詞數(shù):100-120.,寫作的步驟,1.在頭腦中搜索你想用的單詞:,be against ; construction; chemical factory; make a lot of money; pollute; prevent; take up; harm ; playground,

16、 have sports, take measures.,2.想好開頭句.,Most students of our school, including me, are against the construction of a chemical factory near our school .,3.寫好其它句子來支持你自己的 觀點(diǎn):,Although the factory will make a lot of money for our city, we do think it will do us more harm than good. The air will be badly p

17、olluted and we cant prevent the noise from entering our classrooms.,Besides, the building of it will take up a part of our small playground. We cant have enough place to play games and have sports after class.,Of course, they have promised to take measures to do it well, however, it is far from enou

18、gh. On the other hand ,We will never be able to breathe fresh air.,4.適當(dāng)加上一些評(píng)論:,5.寫出結(jié)尾句。,Where would we go if it were taken up ?,6.補(bǔ)充，完善，加上過渡詞。,So we dont agree to build the factory here.,Most students of our school, including me, are against the construction of a chemical factory near our school. Although the factory will make a lot of money for our city, we do think it will do us more harm than good. The air will be badly polluted and we cant prevent the noise from entering our classrooms. Besides, the building of it will take up a part of our small playground. We cant have enough