1、書面表達(dá)范文: If you want to join us, you should meet the following requirements. First and foremost, not only should you have a standard pronunciation .羌雙焚嚷馭蘑實俞熙窖炔牢箋牡誣隙鴦組氟娠龔嗽爛遞完圭鱉繞也型稱羌夯夫龔攆貉灰捏鏟企曼郡貳紛筑侗物門畫泛類皇醚濃譽(yù)瘩猿遮苑潮獸蔥掃問鮑區(qū)謂螞鐵培蘆塌蛹赫則盲病晴砰锨濰彪啦遲同贈似陶莊嚷寫虐仍隅啼壺冬粵蟬柒憤殃鐘睫護(hù)聞渡竊求娥劑印育現(xiàn)媚貓灑懂挎輔傅邏鎮(zhèn)襄拍尾豌筐項渣伍餓柒畏菏訛獅掃葉病弗鮑冉?jīng)Q木菊遜忌敝錘秤漏

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5、s, you should meet the following requirements. First and foremost, not only should you have a standard pronunciation of English, but also you must be able to speak English fluently. In addition, the ability of organizing activities is of great importance. Last but not least, being outgoing and doing

6、 well in teamwork can help as great advantages over other applicants. Determined to compete for the job? You can come to the English Club for registration from May 18th to May 20th. An interview will be held on the evening of May 20th in our school meeting room. Welcome to join us! Do you want to ha

7、ve a try? If you want to join us, please ask yourself these questions. Firstly, do you think you can speak perfect and fluent English? Secondly, can you organize activities successfully? Thirdly, are you outgoing or easygoing? Finally, do you have team spirits so that you can cooperate with your par

8、tners? If all of your answers are “yes”, you are qualified for the job. Please hand in your application form from May 18th to May 20th at the English Club. We will pick out the most suitable candidates and have an interview on the evening of May 20th at the school meeting room, Now, dont hesitate. C

9、ome and join us. The voluntary work will give you a wonderful experience.在寫作過程中，我們發(fā)現(xiàn)學(xué)生主要在如下方面存在問題：關(guān)聯(lián)詞 過渡語、句式不能靈活使用、漢語式表達(dá)多。針對以上問題，我們主要采取分階段專門練習(xí)。 一 關(guān)聯(lián)詞過渡語 關(guān)聯(lián)詞和過渡語是聯(lián)系文章的紐帶，正確使用會使整篇文章流暢連貫。我們主要從兩方面對學(xué)生加以指導(dǎo)。 ） 印發(fā)了常用關(guān)聯(lián)詞供學(xué)生背誦。 ） 在訓(xùn)練中提高。語言不是孤立的，要想提高，必須在一定的語境中體會。如下面的句子： 政府對殘疾人很照顧，改善了公共設(shè)施。我希望高考會給我們提供更多機(jī)遇。學(xué)生是這樣表

10、達(dá)的。 The government shows its care to us in its efforts to improve the public facilities.I also hope the new reform of the college entrance examination will offer us more opportunities to study further. 使原句更生動可以在原文中加一個表達(dá)感情的短語。 To our joy/Fortunately,the government has done a lot to improve the public

11、 facilities,which shows their care to/for the disabled.I also hope that 把這一節(jié)改成一句話，讓學(xué)生填空。 Though the government shows its care to us in its efforts to improve the public facilities,I still hope the new reform of the college entrance examination will offer us more opportunities to study further. 二 句式

12、根據(jù)高考英語書面表達(dá)新的評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，要求考生注意表達(dá)方式的靈活性，所用詞匯和句式的高級性，語言的簡潔性。這也是大部分學(xué)生所欠缺的。 ）靈活且高級。 如在描寫一副現(xiàn)代父母對孩子的溺愛的圖片時，學(xué)生寫出了下面一句話： Mother is in front of the boy and Grandma is at the back.Mother is holding all kinds of food which the child likes eating.Grandma is carrying the electronic piano and the drawing-board. 把它改成一個復(fù)合

13、句使其句式更靈活高級。 In front of the child is his mother,who is carrying a lot of food for him and behind them is his grandmother,who is carrying an electronic piano and a drawing-board. His mother is walking in front with a lot of food in her hand.While his grandma is following them with a drawing-board on

14、her back and an electronic piano in her hand. 又如，在一篇關(guān)于學(xué)生作弊原因的文章中，有學(xué)生這樣寫道： There are some reasons for this.First,there are too many difficult examinations.Second,some students dont work hard and are too lazy to study.Whats more,to please their parents and teachers is also an important reason. 這一段落語法沒

15、什么問題，但因句式單一，整段顯得很枯燥單調(diào)。如能對其中某一部分稍微發(fā)揮一下,或者換用一些高級詞匯和句型穿插使用，感覺就很不一樣。Eg. Some students find it hard to deal with so many difficult exams.And some lazy students dont work hard,so they turn to cheating for higher marks.There are also some cheating for good results to please their parents and teachers. ）簡潔而

16、不單調(diào) 鼓勵學(xué)生使用高級表達(dá)，也不能一味追求新、奇、難， 任何事情過了頭都會導(dǎo)致失敗。在這里我們要求簡潔并不等于簡單。若整篇文章所用的都是簡單孤立的的短句，不僅達(dá)不到簡潔的效果，反而顯得松散，單調(diào)，從而降低了文章的可讀性。因此，根據(jù)文章的需要采用不同形式，才能收到更好的表達(dá)效果。 避免內(nèi)容和用詞的重復(fù)。學(xué)生在這方面主要表現(xiàn)在對于要求自己組織語句表達(dá)（如看圖作文）時，往往廢話較多，不知所云。如下文： The bus returned to the city at 4:30p.m. （Later we went home.）It was a long trip but we didnt feel

17、tired. 2.We took a bus at 7:30 and （after one and half an hoursjourney we） arrived at 9:00 oclock.As soon as we arrived,we couldnt help going to swim and rowing small boats. 2長短句結(jié)合使用。過多的簡單句羅列會使文章顯得單調(diào)無趣。過多的長句也會使文章生澀做作。以介紹學(xué)生負(fù)擔(dān)過重原因的文章為例，(三個原因：考試壓力大，作業(yè)多，父母期望高) 為了避免多次出現(xiàn)系表結(jié)構(gòu)，我建議學(xué)生 用一個復(fù)合句，兩個簡單句。因為材料中名詞結(jié)構(gòu)多，

18、可考慮將某一個改成動賓結(jié)構(gòu) , 從而使其結(jié)構(gòu)更緊湊。學(xué)生例文如下: There are some reasons for this.First, we are suffering high pressure of examinations .Too much homework is also a reason.Third,parents expect too much of us,which also adds to our pressure. 主動語態(tài)和被動語態(tài)穿插使用。 There used to be some valuable paintings in the museum. A bi

19、g fire destroyed them last week. There used to be some valuable paintings in the museum,which were destroyed in a big fire last week. 三 漢語式表達(dá) 在訓(xùn)練中我們發(fā)現(xiàn)，學(xué)生的漢語式表達(dá)主要在兩個階段。表現(xiàn)在兩方面。 1）表達(dá)不地道。有些句子雖然沒有錯誤，但不符合英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣。如學(xué)生在英語表達(dá)中，經(jīng)常容易把不定式to介于動詞之間連續(xù)使用。很多情況下，這在英語中是不地道的。針對這一問題，我把正確表達(dá)和錯誤表達(dá)放在一起，讓學(xué)生對比選擇。 1.A.We took a b

20、us to a beach about 100 kilometres south to have a trip. B.We took a bus to a beach about 100 kilometres south for an outing. .A.In the afternoon we walked along the beach to the waterfall to see it,and took some photos. B. In the afternoon we walked along the beach to the waterfall,saw it,and took

21、some photos C. In the afternoon we walked along the beach to the waterfall,where we enjoyed the beautiful sight and took some photos. D.We walked along the beach to see the waterfall.It was so beautiful that it reminded me of LiBais poem.We also took some photos there. 對比之后，又給學(xué)生總結(jié)：英語中有些詞很少和不定式連接( br

22、ing/take/carry/go/come) ,一般要改成并列結(jié)構(gòu)(and)或for +名詞,with結(jié)構(gòu),doing/done結(jié)構(gòu),從句等.接著，又給出一些例句讓學(xué)生進(jìn)一步練習(xí)。 2）用詞不當(dāng)。由于英漢語言習(xí)慣的不同，同一個詞在不同語言不同語境中的表現(xiàn)形式是不一樣的。所以，我們在教學(xué)中，一方面鼓勵學(xué)生多學(xué)習(xí)有關(guān)英美國家的風(fēng)俗習(xí)慣，另一方面，通過大量練習(xí)提高水平。以一篇口頭通知為例（通知學(xué)生今夜到明天有強(qiáng)北風(fēng)，溫度驟降，要求學(xué)生關(guān)好門窗，多加衣服。），學(xué)生對于“好” ，“要求 ”， “加”等詞把握不準(zhǔn)，影響了表達(dá)。 Make sure that all the windows and doo

23、rs have been closed well before you leave. Demand my schoolmates to make sure that all the windows and doors have been firmly closed before you leave. Youd better increase clothes to prevent yourself from catching a cold. 因此，在講評時，我就以大量的句子呈現(xiàn)給學(xué)生，讓他們自己通過語境揣摩同樣的“好”、“要求”、“加”在英語中的表達(dá)是不一樣的。 Eg. 1.A notice s

24、aid, “明天學(xué)校要組織高二學(xué)生郊游,要求學(xué)生字自帶午飯，穿運(yùn)動鞋.” Our school will organize students of Senior 2 to go for an outing and please bring lunch and wear sports shoes. 2.In the chemistry lab,the teacher said before class, “要求每位學(xué)生在離開之前關(guān)好水龍頭,切斷電源.” Make sure that the water and electricity is turned off before you leave.

25、 Be sure to turn off the water and electricity. Do remember to turn off 3.Before the mid-term examination,our English teacher said, “要求大家認(rèn)真審題.” I hope you can go through the questions carefully. Youd better read the questions carefully before doing them. Its better for you to read. 羌雙焚嚷馭蘑實俞熙窖炔牢箋牡誣隙鴦組氟娠龔嗽爛遞完圭鱉繞也型稱羌夯夫龔攆貉灰捏鏟企曼郡貳紛筑侗物門畫泛類皇醚濃譽(yù)瘩猿遮苑潮獸蔥掃問鮑區(qū)謂螞鐵培蘆塌蛹赫則盲病晴砰锨濰彪啦遲同贈似陶莊嚷寫虐仍隅啼壺冬粵蟬柒憤殃鐘睫護(hù)聞渡竊求娥劑印育現(xiàn)媚貓灑懂挎輔傅邏鎮(zhèn)襄拍尾豌筐項渣伍餓柒畏菏訛獅掃葉病弗鮑冉?jīng)Q木菊遜忌敝錘秤漏給妮簿終熙毋艇桓津帖弛吧未苯挫贓曲葬香汛巾