1、,Task writing -Summary,Welcome,IV. 寫作(共兩節(jié),滿分40分) 第一節(jié): 基礎(chǔ)寫作 第二節(jié):讀寫任務(wù)(共1小題,滿分25分) 請根據(jù)以下的任務(wù)說明和寫作要求,寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文. 任務(wù)說明 請認(rèn)真閱讀下面的短文,然后完成以下的任務(wù): 1 )概括短文的內(nèi)容要點,該部分的詞數(shù)大約 30-50字左右; ),Leading in,Summary (about 30 words),Your opinion, argument and conclusion (about 120 words),What is a summary?,A shortened vers

2、ion of the text Main points of the text Written in your own words,A summary is a brief account of the main points of an article in your own words .,Question: What should be paid attention to to write a good summary of an article?,Can we mainly use our own words or the sentences in the original passa

3、ge? Can we judge the writing style? 3. Can we write it in the first person or the third person? 4. Can we express our opinion?,Discussion,understanding,topic sentences,key words,set sentence patterns,summarize/rewrite,the writing style,the 3rd person,Styles of passage,narration,the six elements of a

4、 narrative passage,Hi, I am Mike. I just went through my first year of college. The toughest part on me at first was the general adjustment. I went to a very small high school where my mom was a teacher and she did practically everything for me. But at the college I need to know some basic life skil

5、ls, such as balancing a check-book, laundry, and the things you have to be able to handle that I never thought of in the high school! It was really tough for me at first and I got badly homesick. Once that first semester was over and I got used to the college life, I love itgood facilities, helpful

6、instructors, and a good library. The students Union organizes various parties every week. I also go to cinemas and concerts, and often spend Saturday nights in pubs and clubs. One thing I think is important is to get yourself active in things. I was on dance team in college and met a ton of people t

7、hat wayit was so much easier to make friends when you had a common ground.,the six elements of a narrative passage,Mike,His first year of college,toughestadjustment,got used to it,love the college life,Get himself active in things,套用語句,1.摘要的開頭語(第一段開頭語),(1)記敘文的摘要開頭語: The story/passage is about The wr

8、iter/author tells us about. The story mainly tells us that .,_ his first year of college life. At first he _, but after getting active in things for one semester, he _ and_ .,didnt adjust himself well,adapted to it,enjoyed himself,congratulations!,Try it!,本題為2008年廣東高考讀寫任務(wù),2.摘要后過渡語:在寫完摘要之后,要有過渡詞或過渡句,

9、才使上下文自然銜接,記敘文的過渡語(引出類似的經(jīng)歷) This story reminds me of another story that happened to This story reminds me of a similar experience of I also went through such an experience. I have a similar experience. .have/has a similar experience as.,要想在考場寫作的緊張時刻用30個詞概括短文的內(nèi)容要點，我們需要謹(jǐn)記下面的六種技巧 skill1: 省略細(xì)節(jié) Skill2:省略重

10、復(fù)了的內(nèi)容 Skill3: 省略例子 Skill4: 用概括性的語言而不是精確的語言 Skill5:使用短而精的連詞，如but, and, besides. Skill6:用間接引語表達(dá)對話內(nèi)容。 誤區(qū)警示：考生往往犯以下的錯誤：主題大意概括不清，抄襲原文或表達(dá)了自己的意見 這都會大大音響得分。,如何提高作文檔次,(1)表達(dá)精練簡潔:表達(dá)不要羅嗦,若能用非謂語動詞做定語或狀語就不要用定語從句或狀語從句. (2)避免低級錯誤:避免語法和拼寫的低級錯誤,避免被扣印象分. (3)保證賞心悅目:注重字體的美化,保持卷面整潔,提高印象分. (4)句子錯落有致:根據(jù)表達(dá)需要,交叉使用長句與短句,簡單句與復(fù)

11、合句. (5)句式多種多樣:多樣化句式,方能顯示較強的語言功底,大大提高作文檔次.,多樣化句式,(1)用it is/was that強調(diào)句式. (2)用作狀語的介詞短語開頭的完全倒裝句或用以only in this way 等開頭的部分倒裝句. (3)用with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)(with+賓語+賓補)作狀語. (4)用非謂語動詞簡化狀語從句或并列結(jié)構(gòu). (5)用what引導(dǎo)的名詞性從句. (6)用獨立主格結(jié)構(gòu). (7)恰當(dāng)運用感嘆句,被動句等. (8)適當(dāng)使用插入語,如to be honest, I guess, I think,personally等. (9)盡量用短語代替單詞來表達(dá)同樣的意思.

12、(10)恰當(dāng)使用關(guān)聯(lián)詞語, 除使用復(fù)合句的連詞外, 寫作中經(jīng)常用到的關(guān)聯(lián)詞:,舉例:for example; for instance, such as 等 列舉:for one thingand for another一來,二來等. 轉(zhuǎn)折:however(然而),but(但是),after all(畢竟)等. 總結(jié):in a word(總之),in brief(總之),in conclusion(最后)等. 因果:thanks to, as a result(of), due to , therefore, so等. 強調(diào):indeed(確實),certainly(一定),above all

13、(尤其)等.,對比:in the same way(同樣地),just as(正如),compared with(與相比),on the one handand on the other hand一方面,另一方面.等. 遞進(jìn):then(然后),besides(此外,還有),whats more(而且)等.,備考策略:,1.打好詞匯語法基礎(chǔ) 2.閱讀注意概括要點(名家指路第六題) 3.關(guān)注社會現(xiàn)象和社會熱點,學(xué)會用英語表達(dá)想法 4.每天一篇作文訓(xùn)練(25分鐘) 5.積累 “萬能”句型,寫作常用到的正確句型. 6.建立詞句 “錯題集” 7.保證卷面整潔美觀,豐富的句式：(常用到的句型結(jié)構(gòu)） 利用不

14、同的句型來表達(dá)同一個意思， 能增加文章的文采。,e.g. What a kind boy he is! How disappointed he was !,感嘆句,強調(diào)句,e.g. It was this young boy that helped the old granny. I do hope you can come if possible.,e.g. Only in this way can you solve this problem. There comes the police car. Hardly had they got to the station when they

15、met the young man.,e.g. They read while walking or riding on a bus. Come to me if necessary.,e.g. I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand.,倒裝句,省略句,with短語,e.g. In my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place where we can find much useful information. Lets come to the m

16、ain teaching building, at the back of which stands the school library.,定語從句,e.g. Thats what I should do. We should do a favour to whoever needs help at present.,各種名詞性從句,e.g. Time passed quickly before we knew it. The moment we reached the farm, we got down to harvesting. So long as we work harder at

17、 our lessons, well catch up sooner or later.,各種狀語從句,1. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名詞性從句） 2. Though Im weak, Ill make the effort. (使用倒裝句) 3. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用強調(diào)句型) 4. I passed the physics exam because of you

18、r help.(用虛擬語氣）,What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.,Practice 怎樣使用較豐富的句式和高級詞匯,Weak as I am, Ill make the effort.,It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.,I couldnt have passed the physics exam but for your help.,5. She walked o

19、ut of the lab and many students followed her. (使用過去分詞) 6. They sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使用V-ing形式) 7.I wont believe what he says. （no matter what狀語從句） 8.If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （祈使句+and）,Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.,Singing and

20、laughing, they went back to school.,No matter what he says, I wont believe.,Study hard and youll make rapid progress.,9He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒裝句) 10.We all think he is a great man. (think highly of) 11.As a result the plan was a failure. (turn out) 12. W

21、hen he spoke, he felt more and more excited. (the morethe more),No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.,We all think highly of him .,The plan turned out to be a failure.,The more he spoke, the more excited he felt.,How to write a good summary of an article,1.An argumentation

22、 : The topic sentences the supporting sentences the writers conclusion summarize them. 2.A narrative passage : Get the information of six elements combine them smoothly form a summary.,1、Do the task writing in English Weekly No.16. 2、Keep practising writing summaries every day.,Homework,See You Ever

23、ybody !,Thanks For Joining !,Argumentation,Methods: 1. Find out the topic sentences/ key phrases 2. Find out the supporting evidences or facts. 3. Find out the words or phrases that appear most frequently.,How to summarize an argumentation well?,Getting up early has been regard as a good habit since

24、 ancient times. Many years ago, people thought that if we went to bed early and get up early, we would be energetic the whole day. So, getting up early is of great importance to us all. In fact, morning is the best time of a day. In the morning, the air is the freshest and people are usually in the

25、best conditions. Many of us may have the experiences that we memorize some things more quickly and accurately in the morning than any other time of the day. If we do some morning exercise or only take a short walk in the morning, we can build our bodies and become much healthier. Also we will have enough time to make a plan and get ready for our work or study of the day