1、,2011江蘇高考說(shuō)明高考英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)示例2-看圖作文： 看圖作文的 “圖”不局限于某一類型的圖，如漫畫、廣告，也包括其他圖片、照片、圖表等情景材料?？忌鷤兛筛鶕?jù)圖示的寓意、內(nèi)容或情節(jié)線索，自己組織文字，進(jìn)行描述、敘述、比較或表達(dá)思想觀點(diǎn)。作文應(yīng)覆蓋提示的要點(diǎn)，但應(yīng)避免僅根據(jù)提示文字作簡(jiǎn)單翻譯。,1 教學(xué)上重視對(duì)學(xué)生讀圖能力的培養(yǎng) 2011年第一次使用看圖作文，開放性比例占80%，對(duì)考生的思維運(yùn)用及語(yǔ)言技能的考查加大，避免了傳統(tǒng)考試中押題，背范文或根據(jù)文字做篇章翻譯的弊端。,2 2012 年書面表達(dá)的考查方向 漫畫是西方典型的一種文化形式；商業(yè)和公益廣告，新聞圖片圖文并茂，運(yùn)用夸張，比喻象征等

2、手法很有可能成為2012年的考題。,汪少華,3 2011年考生存在的主要問(wèn)題 1）審題不清，看不懂圖片內(nèi)容 2）自主發(fā)揮部分表現(xiàn)不佳，開放 性的考查不到位,高考書面表達(dá)專題寫作指導(dǎo),漫畫作文,Writing based on cartoons,Tasks:,1. To deal with difficulty in writing about cartoons 2. To learn the basic structure of cartoon writing 3. To learn some useful expressions of cartoon writing,Topics of ca

3、rtoons,Environmental/ Natural problems,Social phenomenon,Attitudes towards life,What abilities should we have?,1. 讀圖,3. 謀篇,2.解意,1. 漫畫的題目 眼睛 2. 漫畫的畫面 細(xì)節(jié) 3. 漫畫的文字 觀點(diǎn) 4. 漫畫的夸張 寓意,1.讀圖 Describe the picture（theme),People lack communication.,Picture1,Protect animals. No buying, no killing.,Picture2,Appear

4、ance doesnt always agree with the fact.,Picture 3,Picture 4,One false move may lose the game. Look before you leap.,Money cant buy everything. Health is the best wealth.,Picture5,.解意-analysis (Interpretation&Implication),注意: 文字說(shuō)明部分往往含有重要信息(clues)， 切記要認(rèn)真閱讀！,1. 辨明褒貶，找準(zhǔn)角度 (angle),. 聯(lián)系生活，明晰主旨 (theme),下圖

5、是某人壽保險(xiǎn)公司的一則經(jīng)典廣告招畫，這則廣告想要告訴我們什么？,if unexpected cant foresee protect ourselves buy insurance,Picture6,The advertisement above shows us that there are always some unexpected “if” s in our life, but not all of us can foresee them clearly. So buying insurance for life is likely the best way to protect ou

6、rselves from a deadly “if”.,角度 criticize,主旨,The students as well as their parents only focus on their academic achievements, neglecting psychological quality and moral standards.,Example7,Are you familiar with this cartoon?,Example 8,warning Smoking can shorten ones life. It does great harm to our h

7、ealth， not only to the smoker himself， but also to others. If you are not a smoker， dont start . The picture tells us that we should treasure our life and give up smoking.,.謀篇 -organization Step1. Description step2. Analysis Step3. Solutions,發(fā)現(xiàn)問(wèn)題,解決問(wèn)題,分析問(wèn)題,Describe a picture,Interpret its implied me

8、aning Point out its implications in our life,Give your own comment/suggestion/solution,Structure,As is vividly shown in the picture, As can be seen in the picture, The picture shows a common phenomenon. In the picture, there are/is (are) doing,Sentence structures:,Step1 How to describe the picture?,

9、Part 1 Describe the picture,The picture is talking about/shows The picture shows a common phenomenon. The picture describes an interesting phenomenon. In the picture, there are/is (are) doing The picture above is about Lets look at the picture above/first.,Step2 Analysis(聯(lián)系實(shí)際分析) ( facts / reasons/re

10、sults),Step2 Sentence structures,1.What are the reasons for this phenomenon? 2.It seems very ridiculous thatHowever, this kind of story is performed everywhere. 3.The picture shows thatIt is the exact reflection of 4.The picture indicates that we/Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that 5.This is an

11、 ironic (諷刺的) cartoon which describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon among,As far as Im concerned/In my opinion, From my point of view,Only in this way can./Only if, can we,Step 3 Solutions (opinions /suggestions),It is high time we took some measures to put an end to this phenomenon./ Immediat

12、e measures should be taken to The government should make laws to The media should call on We should raise peoples awareness of Everyone should make great efforts to,從大到小 從意識(shí)到行動(dòng),下面的漫畫反映了一種社會(huì)現(xiàn)象，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)對(duì) 這幅漫畫的理解，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，描述一下他們的不同境遇，并就如何解決此問(wèn)題發(fā)表你的看法。,Example1.,_,Example,a country boy crying long for educat

13、ion a city boy enjoy all the benefits of education,角度 comparison 主旨 education inequality,Indicate: education inequality Facts: drop out of school suffer from low standards of comparatively better opportunities Results: lower enrollment rates worsen the problem,Example,The government The media be awa

14、re of Only if social justice harmonious society,solutions,_, a country boy is crying helplessly in the darkness, longing eagerly for school education. In contrast, the city boy on the right is enjoying all the benefits.,As is vividly shown in the picture,The comparison indicates the phenomenon of ed

15、ucation inequality in modern China. (facts) School-age country children are often dropping out of school due to poverty. Even those who managed to stay in school are still suffering from the low standards of educational facilities and academic qualities. Comparatively, city children have much better

16、 opportunities to receive good education. (results) Thus, school in the countryside generally have much lower enrollment rates than those in the city, which in turn worsens the problem of educational inequality.,To solve this problem , the government should spend more money on the improvement of edu

17、cation in rural areas. Meanwhile, the media can appeal for the public donations for rural education. Moreover, all people in the community should be aware of the seriousness of the problem and do whatever to help. Only if we do these can we have more social justice and thus make our society more har

18、monious.,Practice 目前醫(yī)療費(fèi)不斷攀升，有人因付不起昂貴的醫(yī)療費(fèi)而只好忍受疾病的折磨。人們強(qiáng)烈呼吁政府應(yīng)當(dāng)建立有效的醫(yī)療保障體制。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面圖畫，以“Health Care”為題寫一篇短文，簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)明圖畫中所表達(dá)的內(nèi)容，重點(diǎn)闡述這種現(xiàn)象所帶來(lái)的后果和你的觀點(diǎn)。,_,_,Clues: 簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)明圖畫中所表達(dá)的內(nèi)容， 重點(diǎn)闡述這種現(xiàn)象所帶來(lái)的后果和你的觀點(diǎn)。,Steps,Contents,Description,Analysis,Solutions,an old man suffer from go to hospital medical bill cant afford anothe

19、r attack ,Results: 1.in debt 2.bear the pain 3.wait for death,1.reduce medical expenses 2.build up medical insurance/care system ,Health Care (Description) From the picture, we can see that the old man was suffering from heart trouble/attack. He had to go to hospital for medical care. When he saw th

20、e medical bill with $5,0000 from the hospital, he was so shocked that he couldnt stand on his feet. It was beyond what he could affordIts really another heart attack for him.,Sample,Analysis,At present, many people cant afford heavy medical fees. (Results) Because of this, they may get into deep deb

21、t in order to get proper medical care . Worse still, some cannot borrow any money so they have to bear the pain of diseases or wait for the last day of their life. What a pity!,Solutions To solve the problem, we strongly call for the medical expenses to be reducedThe government should build up medic

22、al insurance system ,and try its best to explore and develop a new health care so that everyone will be able to enjoy their life as long as possible. /Only in this way, can we enjoy our life as long as possible.,Whatever the picture is, just remember: Proper description Accurate analysis Reasonable solutions,Only if you keep these rules in mind, can you make it.,Lets draw conclusion,再叮囑幾句：,1. 保證三要素體裁、時(shí)態(tài)、人稱正確,體裁：議論文 時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí) 人稱：第三人稱,Homework,Thank you!,It is well known that drunken driving has been the leading cause for road