1、我所遇到的問(wèn)題?,詞匯匱乏、表達(dá)不地道？ 怎樣避開(kāi)不會(huì)表達(dá)？ 寫(xiě)作如何避免時(shí)態(tài)的錯(cuò)誤？ 基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作如何整合信息？ 如何避免句子結(jié)構(gòu)和句式單一？ 如何讓閱卷老師瞬間發(fā)現(xiàn)亮點(diǎn)？,優(yōu)秀作文四大標(biāo)準(zhǔn),S1:信息完整，正確 S2:書(shū)寫(xiě)整齊，清晰 S3:語(yǔ)法高級(jí)，貫通 S4:句型漂亮，地道,How to write a good composition,1. 學(xué)會(huì)使用豐富的句式,學(xué)會(huì)使用豐富的句式,多用復(fù)合句、及復(fù)雜句； 長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合、變換主語(yǔ)。 同位語(yǔ)，非謂語(yǔ)，從句， 倒裝句，強(qiáng)調(diào)句，介詞with結(jié)構(gòu),句式豐富：,高級(jí)句型,五句話秘籍一主語(yǔ)多謂語(yǔ)寫(xiě)法,英語(yǔ)一句話只能有一個(gè)主謂結(jié)構(gòu) 如果出現(xiàn)更多動(dòng)詞？ 加連詞

2、（and / but / so） 放入從句 變?yōu)榉侵^語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞,主語(yǔ)、謂語(yǔ)、賓語(yǔ)、定語(yǔ)、狀語(yǔ)、補(bǔ)語(yǔ),一主多謂（化腐朽為神奇?。?謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞/句型的要求 主被動(dòng)關(guān)系 時(shí)間先后順序,寫(xiě)作運(yùn)用非謂語(yǔ)三步走,主：V-ing 被：v-ed,Having done Having been done,Example,Hearing the news, he jumped with joy.,Greatly touched by his story, we decided to work harder.,Tip 使用分詞作狀語(yǔ)： 謂語(yǔ)主語(yǔ)相同 主動(dòng)現(xiàn)在分詞 被動(dòng)過(guò)去分詞,化腐朽為神奇用分詞改寫(xiě),教育經(jīng)歷： He M

3、ajored in Science. He graduated from a famous University in the north and after 4 years, he went abroad for further studies. Majoring in Science, he graduated from a famous University in the north and after 4 years, he went abroad for further studies.,表主動(dòng)含義,He was given the Nobel Prize for physics i

4、n 1921 He was invited to many countries to give lectures.,Given the Nobel Prize for physics in 1921, he was invited to many countries to give lectures.,表被動(dòng)含義,The old woman died, leaving her son a large sum of money.,The old woman died. She left her son a large sum of money.,主動(dòng)表結(jié)果,Liu Xiang won the G

5、old Medal in 110-meter-hurdle race in the Olympics. He became a super star and well-known across China.,Liu Xiang won the Gold Medal in 110-meter -hurdle race in the Olympics，making him become a super star and well known across China.,主動(dòng)表結(jié)果,Which made,洪戰(zhàn)輝，24歲，在校大學(xué)生，出生在一個(gè)貧困的家庭。 Hong Zhanhui, aged 24,

6、 a college student, was born in a poor family. a college student of 24,孟老師給予我很多鼓勵(lì)。最后我完成了中學(xué)的學(xué)習(xí)。,Often encouraged by Mr. Meng, I graduated from the middle school at last.,他掛念自己的妹妹。他把她帶到了大學(xué)里。 Worrying about his sister, he took her with him to the university. 那位老人同意給我們帶路。我們開(kāi)始動(dòng)身往山里走去。,With the old man le

7、ading, we started to walk toward the mountain.,你的朋友小張是個(gè)動(dòng)物愛(ài)好者，一天他被狗咬過(guò)后變得怕狗了，但對(duì)動(dòng)物的愛(ài)心卻沒(méi)有變。請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇5個(gè)句子的短文。,事件,心理變化,朋友的看法,永恒的品質(zhì),為了救一只被狗咬的小鳥(niǎo)，結(jié)果被狗咬,從此之后，不敢到有狗的地方去,嘲笑他，認(rèn)為他是膽小鬼,盡管怕狗，看見(jiàn)小狗受傷仍會(huì)上前解救,Xiaoming,one of my friend, is an animal-lover.One day he tried to save a little bird which was being bitten by a dog, unluckily bitten. Having been bitten by the dog, he no longer dares to walk among dogs. Considered as a coward, he is usually laughed at by his friends. However , seeing dogs injured ,he will manage to resc