1、學(xué)生月度違紀(jì)范文 12月15日寫作真題 2018年12月15日 雅思大作文題目 In some cities, there are few controls over the design and construction of new homes and office buildings, and owners can decide on whatever design and size they like. Do you think that the advantages of this approach outweigh the disadvantages? 解析&審題 本題問(wèn)：住宅和辦

2、公樓是否可以隨意修建和設(shè)計(jì)，也就是政府不進(jìn)行任何限制？有些同學(xué)認(rèn)為這個(gè)題目很難，其實(shí)很簡(jiǎn)單，可以雙邊討論即可： 不做任何限制，會(huì)鼓勵(lì)城市經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展，創(chuàng)造就業(yè)，解決住房緊張問(wèn)題； 政府限制，會(huì)保障住房安全，同時(shí)保護(hù)城市秩序和環(huán)境。 把這兩個(gè)觀點(diǎn)討論清楚，本題就算順利完成了。 老師筆記 01 In some cities, people are permitted to construct and design new homes and office buildings in their own ways. While this policy may boost the urban develop

3、ment, it may also involve some potential risks and problems. 在一些城市，人們被允許以自己的方式建造和設(shè)計(jì)新的房屋和辦公樓。雖然這項(xiàng)政策可以促進(jìn)城市發(fā)展，但也可能有一些潛在的風(fēng)險(xiǎn)和問(wèn)題。 解析 （1） 開(kāi)頭段提出現(xiàn)象，同時(shí)表明自己的觀點(diǎn)，提示讀者本文是雙邊討論結(jié)構(gòu)。 （2） construct 建造 （3） boost 促進(jìn) （4） urban 城市的 （5） involve 包含；涉及 （6） potential 潛在的 02 Among other advantages, imposing fewer controls over

4、the design and construction of buildings will push the citys economy to grow faster. When people are allowed to choose whatever styles, shapes and sizes of their new homes and office buildings, the length of time for applying for an appropriate permission will be greatly shortened. This will encoura

5、ge more construction projects, and more jobs will be created aordingly. Simultaneously, the problem of insufficient housing and office spaces will be partly solved when more buildings e into existence. Based on these views, it seems that fewer restrictions would be better. 除了其他一些優(yōu)勢(shì)之外，減少對(duì)建筑設(shè)計(jì)和修建的控制，將

6、推動(dòng)城市經(jīng)濟(jì)更快增長(zhǎng)。當(dāng)人們被允許選擇任何樣式、形狀和大小的新住宅和辦公樓時(shí)，申請(qǐng)必要許可證的時(shí)間將大大縮短。這將鼓勵(lì)更多的建筑項(xiàng)目，相應(yīng)會(huì)創(chuàng)造更多的就業(yè)機(jī)會(huì)。同時(shí)，當(dāng)更多的建筑物出現(xiàn)時(shí)，住房和辦公空間不足的問(wèn)題將得到部分解決?；谶@些觀點(diǎn)，似乎限制越少越好。 解析 （1）本段論述政府不限制建筑的設(shè)計(jì)和修建的好處：促進(jìn)經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展，創(chuàng)造就業(yè)機(jī)會(huì)，解決住房不足。 （2）impose 強(qiáng)加；征收 （3）aordingly 相應(yīng)地 （4）simultaneously 同時(shí) （5）insufficient 不夠的 03 However, many cities have a system of stric

7、t control to ensure the safety and health for people in or about the new buildings to be constructed. This means that the new buildings should be structurally sound and will not threaten the safety or lives of those who live in or use them. In this context, the permission should not be given if any

8、building design is structurally weak and easily damaged during hurricanes, earthquakes or other disaster events. Nor should the permission be granted if any construction project has serious effects on the citys sensitive environment, particularly its parks and green areas. 然而，許多城市都有嚴(yán)格的控制制度，以確保待修新建筑內(nèi)

9、或周圍的人的安全和健康。這意味著新的建筑物應(yīng)該結(jié)構(gòu)合理，不會(huì)威脅住在或使用它們的人的安全或生命。在這種情況下，如果任何建筑設(shè)計(jì)結(jié)構(gòu)薄弱且容易在颶風(fēng)、地震或其他災(zāi)難事件中損壞，則不應(yīng)給予許可。如果任何建設(shè)項(xiàng)目對(duì)城市敏感的環(huán)境，特別是公園和綠地造成嚴(yán)重影響，也不應(yīng)給予許可。 解析 （1）本段討論政府應(yīng)該控制樓房修建的原因：安全和環(huán)境兩個(gè)方面。 （2）ensure 確保 （3）structurally sound 結(jié)構(gòu)合理的 （4）threaten 威脅 （5）hurricane 颶風(fēng) （6）disaster 災(zāi)難 （7）sensitive 敏感的 04 In conclusion, it is u

10、p to the city governments whether to focus on economic benefits or human safety. While excessive controls over the design and construction of new homes and office buildings may slow down economic growth, obviously the proper restriction is necessary. 總之，聚焦經(jīng)濟(jì)利益還是人的安全由城市政府來(lái)決定。雖然過(guò)度控制新房和辦公樓的設(shè)計(jì)和建造可能會(huì)減緩經(jīng)濟(jì)

11、增長(zhǎng)，但恰當(dāng)?shù)南拗骑@然是必要的。 解析 （1）本段為結(jié)論段，并重申自己的觀點(diǎn)。 （2）It is up to. 由.來(lái)決定 （3）excessive 過(guò)多的 （4）slow down 減緩 7分范文 In some cities, people are permitted to construct and design new homes and office buildings in their own ways. While this policy may boost the urban development, it may also involve some potential ris

12、ks and problems. Among other advantages, imposing fewer controls over the design and construction of buildings will push the citys economy to grow faster. When people are allowed to choose whatever styles, shapes and sizes of their new homes and office buildings, the length of time for applying for

13、an appropriate permission will be greatly shortened. This will encourage more construction projects, and more jobs will be created aordingly. Simultaneously, the problem of insufficient housing and office spaces will be partly solved when more buildings e into existence. Based on these views, it see

14、ms that fewer restrictions would be better. However, many cities have a system of strict control to ensure the safety and health for people in or about the new buildings to be constructed. This means that the new buildings should be structurally sound and will not threaten the safety or lives of tho

15、se who live in or use them. In this context, the permission should not be given if any building design is structurally weak and easily damaged during hurricanes, earthquakes or other disaster events. Nor should the permission be granted if any construction project has serious effects on the citys se

16、nsitive environment, particularly its parks and green areas. In conclusion, it is up to the city governments whether to focus on economic benefits or human safety. While excessive controls over the design and construction of new homes and office buildings may slow down economic growth, obviously the

17、 proper restriction is necessary. 建議背誦的句子 1. While this policy may boost the urban development, it may also involve some potential risks and problems. 雖然這項(xiàng)政策可以促進(jìn)城市發(fā)展，但也可能有一些潛在的風(fēng)險(xiǎn)和問(wèn)題。 2. When people are allowed to choose whatever styles, shapes and sizes of their new homes and office buildings, the l

18、ength of time for applying for an appropriate permission will be greatly shortened. 當(dāng)人們被允許選擇任何樣式、形狀和大小的新住宅和辦公樓時(shí)，申請(qǐng)必要許可證的時(shí)間將大大縮短。 3. This means that the new buildings should be structurally sound and will not threaten the safety or lives of those who live in or use them. 這意味著新的建筑物應(yīng)該結(jié)構(gòu)合理，不會(huì)威脅住在或使用它們的人的安全或生命。 4. The permission should not be given if any building design is structurally weak and easily damaged during hurricanes, earthquakes or other disaster events. 如果任何建筑設(shè)計(jì)結(jié)構(gòu)薄弱且容易在颶風(fēng)、地震或其他災(zāi)難事件中損壞，則不應(yīng)給予許可。 5. While excessive controls over the design and constructi