2012年高考英語考點預測沖刺書面表達最新熱點預測對比議論型高考英語書面表達最新熱點預測一【無車日與環(huán)?！?月22日你所在的城市和另外107個城市開展了“無車日“活動，倡議人們選用公共汽車、自行車或步行等綠色交通方式來代替開私家車。該活動得到了全國人民的支持，提高了人們節(jié)約能源與保護環(huán)境的意識，活動很成功。下面請你用英語寫一篇短文介紹該活動，并談談開展該活動的必要性，號召更多的城市和居民參與到該活動中來。注意1不要逐句翻譯，可適當發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；2詞數(shù)100左右。3參考詞匯無車日CARFREEDAY；開展LAUNCH【參考范文】ONEPOSSIBLEVERSIONCARFREEDAYWASLAUNCHEDINOURCITYAND107OTHERCITIESONSEPTEMBER22，TOENCOURAGEPEOPLETOTAKEPUBLICTRANSPORT，RIDEBICYCLESORWALKINSTEADOFDRIVINGPRIVATECARSTHECAMPAIGNHASGAINEDMUCHSUPPORTALLOVERTHECOUNTRYANDHASRAISEDAWARENESSAMONGALLPEOPLEOFENERGYSAVINGANDENVIRONMENTALPROTECTIONITSAREALSUCCESSWITHTHEDEVELOPMENTOFTHEECONOMY,MOREANDMOREFAMILIESHAVEBOUGHTPRIVATECARS,THUSLEADINGTOMUCHHEAVIERTRAFFICPROBLEMSANDMORESERIOUSAIRPOLLUTIONTHEREFORE,ITHINKITSNECESSARYTOLAUNCHSUCHCAMPAIGNSANDIHOPEMOREANDMORECITIESANDTHEIRRESIDENTSWILLTAKEPARTINTHISTYPEOFACTIVITY高考英語書面表達最新熱點預測二【網(wǎng)上交友】假設你是李華，在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上看到英國高中生DAVID登的一則啟事希望結(jié)識一位中國朋友，以便學校中國的語言、文化。請你以李華的名義用英文給DAVID發(fā)一封電子郵件，主要內(nèi)容包括1你怎樣得知DAVID的愿望2你愿意成為他的朋友3你打算如何幫助他4你盼望他的回復。注意1電子郵件的格式以為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)2詞數(shù)100左右?！静骂}理由】交友話題為學生熟知，也符合當前對學生的情感教育方向。利用此話題加強學生英語交際能力的培養(yǎng)，較好地體現(xiàn)了“語境生活化、任務真實性、行為個性化“的設計特點?！緲?gòu)思點撥】該命題屬于應用文，需符合電子郵件的格式要求。在寫作過程中要抓住要點提示，做到不遺漏、不重復，并注意保持書信語言的簡潔性和精煉性?！緟⒖挤段摹緿EARDAVID,IVELEARNEDITFROMTHEINTERNETTHATYOUWANTTOMAKEACHINESEFRIENDSOASTOLEARNTHECHINESELANGUAGEANDCULTUREIMGLADTHATYOUSHOWSUCHGREATINTERESTINCHINAANDIWORLDLIKETOBEYOURFRIENDIWILLTRYMYBESTTOWRITETOYOUASOFTENASPOSSIBLETOINTRODUCEYOUTHECHINESECULTUREWHENYOUHAVEANOPPORTUNITYTOCOMETOCHINA,ILLTEACHYOUHOWTOSPEAKCHINESEANDSHOWYOUAROUNDSOMEFAMOUSHISTORICALPLACESOFINTERESTANYWAY,IAMGOINGTOHELPYOUASMUCHASICANHOWDOYOUTHINKIMLOOKINGFORWARDTOYOURREPLYYOURSSINCERELY,LIHUA高考英語書面表達最新熱點預測三【對高三生活的看法】假如你是武漢大學附中高三1的李華，今年即將高中畢業(yè)。請根據(jù)以下要點給某英文報寫一篇英語短文，談談你對高三生活的看法。1對獲得的幫助表示感謝2消除與同學之間的誤會3努力學習，實現(xiàn)人生夢想4對學弟、學妹的建議。注意1可適當加入細節(jié)，以使行文連貫2詞數(shù)100左右開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)?！静骂}理由】本篇書面表達能比較真實地反映學生的生活實際，話題內(nèi)容關(guān)注學生的社交生活和樹立健康的人生觀，具有考查的現(xiàn)實意義和指導意義在語言表達上，能夠讓學生充分運用所學知識，毫無詞匯障礙地表達自己的思想此外，在語言表達的設置上也有一定的伸展性，能有效地激發(fā)學生個性觀點的創(chuàng)建?！緲?gòu)思點撥】本篇書面表達是常見的提綱類型的寫作，要點明確清楚，便于學生組織文章，理清脈絡。行文時要注意處理好語言表達的控制性和伸展性之間的關(guān)系?！緟⒖挤段摹縃IGHSCHOOLISREGARDEDASTHEBESTTIMEINAPERSONSLIFEASASENIORTHREESTUDENT,ITWONTTAKELONGBEFOREIGRADUATENOW,IHAVEMUCHTOSHAREWITHMYFELLOWSTUDENTSFIRSTLY,IWOULDLIKETOSHOWMYAPPRECIATIONTO感激THOSESTANDINGBYMEALLTHEWAY,TEACHERS,PARENTSANDFRIENDSINCLUDEDWITHOUTTHEIRHELPANDADVICE,MYLIFEWOULDBEDIFFERENTSECONDLY,ITSHIGHTIMETOSAYSORRYTOCLASSMATESWHOMIHURTORMISUNDERSTOODCOMMUNICATIONANDSMILESACTASBRIDGESTOFRIENDSHIPABOVEALL,IVEMADEUPMYMINDTOMAKEEVERYEFFORTTOSTUDY,FORIBELIEVEHARDWORKISTHEKEYTOSUCCESSJUSTASTHEOLDSAYINGGOES,“NOPAINS,NOGAINS“FINALLYIHOPETHATALLTHEYOUNGERFELLOWSCANMAKEFULLUSEOFTIME,BECAUSETIMEANDTIDEWAITFORNOMEN高考英語書面表達最新熱點預測四開通微博很多中學生都紛紛開起了自己的微博。一方面，微博可以作為展示自己的窗口，可以釋放學習壓力，因此已經(jīng)被越來越多的中學生所接受。但是，另一方面，很多家長和老師認為管理個人微博要花相當多的時間和精力，會耽誤學習。請對此現(xiàn)象進行介紹，并發(fā)表自己的看法。NOWADAYS,ITISACOMMONPHENOMENONTHATMOREANDMOREHIGHSCHOOLSTUDENTSOPENTHEIROWNMICROBLOGSONTHEINTERNETTHEREAREADVANTAGESANDDISADVANTAGESABOUTTHISMATTERFORONETHING,ITPROVIDESTHEMACOLORFULWINDOWTOSHOWTHEIRIDEASANDALSOAWAYFORTHEMTORELAX,WHICHMAKESITMOREPOPULARAMONGHIGHSCHOOLSTUDENTSBUTMANYPARENTSANDTEACHERSAREWORRIEDABOUTITTHEYFEARTHATMANAGINGAMICROBLOGWILLTAKEALOTOFTIMEANDENERGY,WHICHWILLHAVEABADEFFECTONTHEIRLESSONSINMYOPINION,IDOPREFERTHISACTIVITYBECAUSETHEINTERNETISPLAYINGAMOREIMPORTANTANDNECESSARYPARTINOURLIFEINANAGEOFINFORMATION,WEHIGHSCHOOLSTUDENTSHAVETOLEARNANDMAKETHEMOSTOFTHISUSEFULTOOLTOCOMMUNICATEANDSHOWOURSELVES【議論評價題型】議論題型的解決方法要求考生列舉出解決問題的多種途徑問題現(xiàn)狀怎樣解決解決方案的優(yōu)缺點模式AINRECENTDAYS,WEHAVETOFACETHEPROBLEMA,WHICHISBECOMINGMOREANDMORESERIOUSFIRST,說明的現(xiàn)狀SECOND,舉例進一步說明現(xiàn)狀FACEDWITHA,WESHOULDTAKEASERIESOFEFFECTIVEMEASURESTOCOPEWITHTHESITUATIONFORONETHING,解決方法一FORANOTHER解決方法二FINALLY,解決方法三PERSONALLY,IBELIEVETHAT我的解決方法CONSEQUENTLY,IMCONFIDENTTHATABRIGHTFUTUREISAWAITINGUSBECAUSE帶來的好處模式BWITHTHEDEVELOPMENTOFMODERNINDUSTRY,MOREANDMOREPEOPLEARECONCERNEDABOUTTHEPROBLEM點題ITISBECAUSEFIRSTLY,SECONDLYTHIRDLY原因或現(xiàn)象123PERSONALLY,IBELIEVETHAT（結(jié)論，前景，解決方式）MANISNOWFACINGWITHABIGPROBLEMOF,WHICHISBECOMINGMOREANDMORESERIOUS點題，重要性或嚴重性THEREASONSFORTHISARELISTEDASFOLLOWSFIRSTLY,SECONDLYTHIRDLY原因或理由123INBRIEF,結(jié)論或措施VERYOFTENYOUCOMEACROSSANEMPTYCLASSROOMWITHTHELIGHTONITSNOTDIFFICULTTOFINDEVIDENCEOFWASTINGWATER,AVERYSERIOUSPROBLEMADDITIONALLY,STUDENTSDONOTRECYCLEENOUGH,THROWINGAWAYTHESOFTDRINKBOTTLES,USEDEXERCISEPAPERSANDBOOKSWORSESTILL,MANYSTUDENTSSTILLUSETHENONENVIRONMENTALLYFRIENDLYLUNCHBOXES,CAUSINGTHEWHITEPOLLUTIONTHESETHINGSSHOWTHATMANYSTUDENTSLACKTHESENSEOFENVIRONMENTALAWARENESSITSIMPORTANTTOEDUCATESTUDENTSTOBEMOREENVIRONMENTALLYFRIENDLYATTHESAMETIME,STUDENTSCANDOSMALLTHINGS,SUCHASCOLLECTINGUSEDITEMFORRECYCLING,TURNINGOFFTHELIGHTSANDSAVINGWATERALWAYSREMEMBERTHATITSEVERYONESRESPONSIBILITYTOPROTECTTHEENVIRONMENT生活情境熱點預測高考英語書面表達生活情境熱點預測一描述公共汽車上讓座的情形。寫作思路1體裁故事2時態(tài)一般過去時態(tài)為主。3寫作要點（1）一位老年人上車（2）老人駝背，拄著拐杖（3）讓座給奶奶（4）小孩子讓座（5）大家表揚這個可愛的孩子。4單詞、短語和句型的選擇OFFERASEATWASFULLOF/WASCROWDEDTAKEASEATLEDSBTOPRAISEDSBFORSTH5注意事項（1）可能有圖片，圖片內(nèi)容闡述要詳略得當（2）描寫要形象生動、得體運用詞匯【參考范文】OFFERINGSEATSONEDAY,AGRANNYWITHGREYHAIRGOTONTHEBUSATABUSSTOPSHEWASINHERSEVENTIESWITHAWALKINGSTICKINHERRIGHTHANDTHEBUSWASFULLOFPASSENGERSANDTHEREWASNOEMPTYSEATSUDDENLYINTHEFRONTOFTHEBUS,AVOICECAMEFORMALITTLEBOYHESAID“GRANNY,TAKEMYSEAT”FOLLOWINGTHEVOICE,PEOPLESAWALOVELYBOYOFABOUT4YEARSOLDHECAMEANDLEDTHEOLDWOMANTOHISSEATANDASKEDHERTOSITDOWNBESIDETHEBOYWASHISMOTHERSHESMILEDATHERCHILDANDALLTHEPASSENGERSWEREHAPPYANDPRAISEDTHEBOYFORHISGOODMANNERSWHATAGOODBOYHEIS高考英語書面表達生活情境熱點預測二野餐等聚會活動地點描述。范文背誦（一封短信或便條）JUNELST,2005DEARPETER,WERESOGLADYOURECOMINGTOJOINUSONSUNDAYHEREISHOWYOUCANFINDUSWELLHAVEOURPICNICINTHEPEOPLESPARKYOUKNOWWHERETHATIS,DONTYOUAFTERYOUENTERTHEPARKBYTHEMAINGATE,WALKSTRAIGHTONTILLYOUCOMETOASTREAMCROSSTHESTREAMANDTURNRIGHTAFTERWALKINGFORAWHILEYOULLCOMETOAHILLWALKAROUNDTOTHEOTHERSIDEOFTHEHILLTHEREYOULLSEEALAKEWELLHAVEOURPICNICTHEREINTHESMALLWOODSBYTHELAKEIMSUREYOULLHAVENOTROUBLEFINDINGUSDOCOMEYOURSLIHUA高考英語書面表達生活情境熱點預測三創(chuàng)新預測應用文提綱式/安排好友來訪假設你是李華，是成都育才中學的高三學生。你的英國網(wǎng)友JIM發(fā)來電子郵件，告訴你他將于今年暑假來中國旅游，并決定來成都和你呆一周。但他有些情況不清楚。請你給他回一封電子郵件。注意1、詞數(shù)60左右；2、文中應包括方框內(nèi)所有的提示內(nèi)容，可以適當發(fā)揮。SUBJECTVISITTOCHINAFROMJIMDEARLIHUA,IFEELVERYEXCITEDABOUTMYVISITTOCHINAANDMEETINGYOUFORTHEFIRSTTIMEBUTIMSTILLNOTSUREABOUTTHEFOLLOWING1WHENWILLYOUBEFREE2HOWCANIGETTOYOURPLACE3WHATSTHEWEATHERLIKETHERE4WHATSHALLWEDOTOGETHERPLEASELETMEKNOWYOURFRIEND,JIMDEARJIM,IAMSOEXCITEDTHATYOULLCOMETOCHINAANDSTAYWITHMEFORAWEEKDURINGTHESUMMERVACATION從6月18日你就有時間陪他了。乘飛機到成都，到成都機場去接他。然后一塊乘汽車來學校。成都夏天氣溫高，不用帶太多衣服。參觀當?shù)刂L景名勝并一起游泳。ILLBEFREESINCEJUNE18THANDWILLHAVEPLENTYOFTIMETOBEWITHYOUWHENYOUCOME,PLEASETAKEAPLANETOCHENGDUILLMEETYOUATCHENGDUAIRPORTANDTHENWELLCATCHABUSTOOURSCHOOLTHEWEATHERHEREINSUMMERISVERYHOT,SOYOUNEEDNTTAKEMANYCLOTHESDURINGYOURSTAYHERE,ILLTAKEYOUTOSOMEPLACESOFINTERESTWEAREGOINGTOSWIMTHEREIMSUREWELLHAVEAVERYGOODTIMETOGETHERLOOKINGFORWARDTOMEETINGYOUSOONYOURS,LIHUA高考英語書面表達生活情境熱點預測四創(chuàng)新預測應用文提綱式/留言條假設你是李華，星期天你要和你的同班同學李明一起去敬老院參加義務勞動，你去找他，但他沒有在家，你給他留言說明要求，內(nèi)容如下（1）930在學校門口集合；（2）帶勞動工具（洗衣粉、理發(fā)工具、除草（WEEDING）工具等）；（3）自帶午飯，騎自行車前往。注意（1）詞數(shù)100左右；（2）可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫?！静骂}理由】2010年高考寫作題應該是學生較為熟悉的、身邊的與他們生活、學習密切相關(guān)的話題。因為高考有一定的連續(xù)性，2011年有些省份仍可能采用應用文進行考查?！緲?gòu)思點撥】本題屬于提綱式要點作文，要求學生就所給內(nèi)容寫一張留言條，是學生比較熟悉的題材，體現(xiàn)了英語學習應該注意實用性，生活化的原則。應注意下面幾點（1）注意人稱，應該用第一人稱的形式給同學李明（第二人稱）寫便條（2）注意時態(tài)的正確使用從試題的內(nèi)容上可以看出在表達要點上應用將來時；（3）注意恰當使用邏輯詞語，是各個要點間邏輯連貫，行文通順。提綱類書面表達不是簡單的逐條翻譯，而是將所給的幾個要點合理的組成比較通順的語句，因此要仔細組織語言，合理安排結(jié)構(gòu)。在語言方面，要特別注意簡潔明了，開門見山?！緟⒖挤段摹緿EARLIMING,THISSUNDAYWELLGOTOTHENURSINGHOMEANDDOSOMEVOLUNTARYLABORYOUWEREOUT,WHENIDROPPEDINONYOUTHEREFORE,IHADTOLEAVEAMESSAGETOYOUACCORDINGTOWHATMONITORSAID,WELLMEETATTHEGATEOFOURSCHOOLAT930TOMORROWMORNINGANDSTARTOUTTOGETHERBYBIKESOYOUSHOULDTAKEYOURBIKEANDDONTFORGETTOTAKESOMEWASHINGPOWDER,BARBERTOOLSANDWEEDINGTOOLSSOTHATWECANHELPTHEMWITHWASHINGCLOTHES,CUTTINGTHEIRHAIRANDGETRIDOFSOMEWEEDINTHEGARDENATLAST,YOUSHOULDREMEMBERTOTAKESOMEFOODFORLUNCHBECAUSEWELLSTAYTHEREFORCHATTINGWITHTHEMATNOONIFYOUCOMEBACK,YOULLPHONEMEATONCELIHUA數(shù)字、方位說明熱點預測高考英語書面表達數(shù)字、方位說明熱點預測一應用文便條路線圖你叫李明，你住友誼賓館的英國朋友MIKE明天想到你校（第一中學）參觀。你提前到其住處告訴行走路線，但他不在，你便隨手在一張紙上畫上路線圖，并在圖下簡短附言提示。請按圖寫一便條。友誼賓館十字路口紅綠燈公園銀行大約100米第一中學MAY11,2003DEARMIKE,WELCOMETOMYSCHOOLIVECOMEHEREINPERSONTOTELLYOUHOWTOGOTOMYSCHOOL,BUTYOUAREOUTSOIHAVETOLEAVETHISDIAGRAPHTOREMINDYOUOFTHECOURSEYOUSHOULDTURNLEFTWHENYOUGETOUTOFTHERAILWAYSTATIONGODOWNTHEROADANDYOUWILLSEETHEFIRSTCROSSINGGOSTRAIGHTAHEADTILLYOUSEETHETRAFFICLIGHTSNEXT,YOUSHOULDTURNRIGHTATTHETRAFFICLIGHTSTHENYOULLPASSBYAPARKWHICHISONYOURLEFTGOSTRAIGHTAHEADTILLYOUGETTOABANK,ANDYOULLFINDTHATTHEREISASTREETOPPOSITETHEBANKNOWWALKDOWNTHESTREETABOUT100METERS,ANDYOUWILLSEENO1MIDDLESCHOOLONYOURLEFTYOUCANTMISSITILOOKFORWARDTOSEEINGYOUSOONLIMING高考英語書面表達數(shù)字、方位說明熱點預測二參觀學校解說詞。LADIESANDGENTLEMEN,WELCOMETOOURSCHOOLIMVERYGLADTOSAYTHATSOMETHINGABOUTOURSCHOOLTOYOUOURSCHOOLWASFOUNDEDIN1959NOWTHEREARE2,300STUDENTSIN44CLASSESTHEREARETWOHUNDREDANDNINETYTEACHERSANDSTAFFTHESCHOOLHASFOURSCIENCELABORATORIES/LABS,ONELANGUAGELABORATORY,ONECOMPUTERROOMANDABIGLIBRARYITSAKEYSCHOOLHEREANDVERYBEAUTIFULITALSOHASANEWLIBRARYANDALARGEPLAYGROUNDBESIDES,ANEWARTSBUILDINGISUNDERCONSTRUCTIONHOPEYOUWILLENJOYTHEMANDHAVEAGOODTIME身邊生活熱點預測高考英語書面表達網(wǎng)絡熱點預測一隨著網(wǎng)絡的發(fā)展，目前很多人給親朋好友發(fā)電子賀卡，請根據(jù)提示闡述電子賀卡的優(yōu)越性。1）可播放動畫和聲音。2）傳播速度快。3）形式多樣。4）有利于環(huán)境保護，節(jié)省資源。文章包括以上要點，可適當發(fā)揮，不要逐條翻譯。提示詞電子賀卡ELECTRONICCARD動畫ANIMATIONWITHTHEDEVELOPMENTOFINTERNET,MOREANDMOREPEOPLETENDTOSENDELECTRONICCARDSINSTEADOFPAPERONESATNEWYEARSTIMECOMPAREDWITHTHETRADITIONALCARDS,ELECTRONICCARDSAREMOREINTERESTINGANDLIVELY,FORYOUCANGETNOTONLYPICTURESBUTALSOSOUNDANDEVENANIMATIONSINADDITION,ITSFASTERTOSENDANELECTRONICCARDONINTERNET,WHEREDIFFERENTVARIETIESOFCARDSAREAVAILABLEMOREOVER,YOUCANDESIGNCARDSOFUNIQUESTYLEUSINGFLASHOROTHERSOFTWAREIFYOUARENTINTERESTEDINANYOFTHEGIVENONESMOREIMPORTANTLY,WITHTHEPOPULARITYOFELECTRONICCARDS,LESS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