1、+例題-全面解析經(jīng)典1一、中考英語書面表達（含答案詳細解析）1.親愛的同學們，初中生活即將結束，你們一定有很多的感觸.假如彳是Tony名城中學九（ 1）班的學生。請以My junior high school life 為題,寫一篇80 詞左右的短文。提示：1 . 個人基本情況介紹2 .校園（校園干凈而美麗，活動非富多彩）；老師（傳授知識，教會做人,經(jīng)常鼓勵）；同學（和睦相處，互相學習，共同進步）。3 .對學校、老師、同學表達感謝和祝福。要求：1 . 文章包含以上提示內(nèi)容，適當發(fā)揮。2 .文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的校名和人名?！敬鸢浮縈y junior high school lifeMy name

2、is Tony. I am studying in Grade 9.As time goes by, my colorful junior middle school life is coming to an end. I m glad to tell you something about my school life.Our campus is clean and beautiful, and there are all kinds of activities. Our teachers teach us rich knowledge and how to behave ourselves

3、. They also encourage us to work hard. We all get on well with our classmates. Besides, we learn from each other and make progress together.I thanks for my school, my teachers and my classmates. Wish them better.【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我的初中生活?！驹斀狻拷Y合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結構主要為系表結構

4、和動賓結構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：My name is ,T ' m glad to , Our campus is，Our teachers teach us等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系。【點睛】本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我的個人情況，接下來介紹我們的校園，老師和同學，最后對學校、老師、同學表達感謝和祝福。此處go by, come to an end, tell sb about sth,all kinds of, behave oneself, encourage sb to do sth, get on

5、 with, learn from, make progress 等這 些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。2 “揚帆起航新學期，學姐學長提建議”。你馬上就要畢業(yè)了，在初中的學習和生活中你一定有很多收獲，請給學弟學妹們提幾點建議吧！要求： 1. 內(nèi)容完整，語言流暢，書寫規(guī)范清晰。2. 短文中不能出現(xiàn)正式姓名，校名。100詞左右?！敬鸢浮縄'm going to graduate from junior high school. As your senior, I have some suggestionsto the young.As old saying goes, "all w

6、ork and no play makes Jack a dull boy." To begin with, you should arrange both your study and life properly.Moreover, you should get along well with others. To have more friends, not enemies.Last but not least, you could be active in school team work. Ability is as important as your study, you

7、can also enjoy your colorful school life as wellI hope these suggestions could make your junior school-life more wonderful.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如be going to， graduatefrom , to begin with , both and get along well with others , be active in, as important as ,as well 等。而 To begin with,/ M

8、oreover,/ Last but not least, 等短語的運用，既豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達多樣化，更使短文很有條理，是本文的亮點。在學習中注意總結牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章表達更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結構以便得到較高的分數(shù)。3 書面表達初中即將畢業(yè)，同學們都感到壓力很大。就此問題，老師要求你在英語課上做一個以“ LessPress

9、ure Makes Life Better 為題的報告，談談你的做法，與同學分享經(jīng)驗。請根據(jù)以下要求 ”寫一份發(fā)言稿，內(nèi)容包括：1. 普遍存在的壓力：同學關系；考試2. 我過去的壓力：父母的期望；學習3. 我成功緩解壓力的辦法及效果；要求：1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和校名；2. 詞數(shù)80 左右，短文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Less Pressure Makes Better LifeHello, everyone!Pressure is a serious problem in today s world. Most studentsreinuonudrecrlatosos ma uch

10、pressure. 【答案】Hello, my classmates!Pressure is a serious problem in today's world. Most students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can't get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.I was always under pressure, too. My parents wan

11、ted me to be the top student in my class. They always sent me to all kinds of after-classes on weekends.I had a talk with my parents and told them I had done my best. Finally, they understood me. In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies.Less pressure makes b

12、etter life. Thank you.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們針對現(xiàn)在同學們普遍感到壓力大這種現(xiàn)象，以 Less Pressure Makes Life Better為題，談談自己的看法，和同學們分享一下自己的經(jīng)驗。審題可知，文章中應主要 包括以下幾個內(nèi)容：首先介紹同學們普遍感到壓力這種現(xiàn)象；然后講述自己過去曾面對的 壓力；最后介紹自己如何成功緩解壓力。題目中只給出了大概的提綱，其中具體的內(nèi)容應 由學生們自己發(fā)揮想象力來補充，并用正確的英語表達出來。學生們可以從自身的經(jīng)歷和 體會出發(fā)，選取生活中常見的場景進行介紹。文章應使用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，注意 根據(jù)表達的需要使用正確的時

13、態(tài)，并變化謂語動詞的正確形式。句式結構可以簡單句結構 為主，這樣的句式表達簡潔、明了，易于掌握。但為提升作文檔次，應穿插使用并列句和 復合句，或使用一些復雜結構，如非謂語動詞、被動語態(tài)等。語句之間使用恰當?shù)倪B接成 分，使文意連貫?！军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，談了自己對同學們普遍感到壓力大這種現(xiàn) 象的看法，并分享了自己的經(jīng)歷。短文有如下幾個優(yōu)點：首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目 中要求的所有信息，且層次清晰，文章分成了四段，每一段的中心話題也很明確。其次短 文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，文章主要使用了一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，謂語動詞形式 準確。句式結構以簡單句為主，敘述清晰、簡潔

14、。也使用了并列句和復合句的結構，如賓 語從句、狀語從句等。短文中使用了豐富的句式，如 Some students can't get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much. 、My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class、In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies 等等。4.人們對

15、于學生網(wǎng)上交友持不同意見。請你用英語寫一篇關于學生網(wǎng)上交友的短文，介紹 人們不同的觀點，并表達自己的看法。贄成的理由反對的理由你的看法1 .廣交朋友2 .可自由表達思想3 .有利于外語學習1 .浪費時間2 .影響學習3 .可能上當受騙(be cheated)1.2.注意：1.所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表中各方觀點并進行合理拓展。2.詞數(shù)80詞左右，短文的開頭已給出(不計入總詞數(shù))。Nowadays many teenagers show great interest in making friends online. Some peoplethink【答案】 Nowadays many teenager

16、s show great interest in making friends online. Some people think students should make friends on line? Some people say yes. The internet helps make many friends. Chatting on line, students can more freely express their feelings and opinions, and even get help with their foreign language studies. Bu

17、t others think students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on line.It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we c

18、an readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.【解析】【分析】整體分析：這是一篇提綱話題作文。是一篇議論文，第一段要寫贊同學生網(wǎng)上交友的人的 觀點，第二段要寫反對學生網(wǎng)上交友的觀點，第三段要表述作者自己的觀點。【詳解】本篇作文要求作者就上網(wǎng)交友發(fā)表意見，寫作之前要認真閱讀所給提示，確定文章中心。 注意文體、人稱和時態(tài)。文章要有層次、流暢?？梢赃m當發(fā)揮，寫作中適當使用連詞，注 意上下文的緊密聯(lián)系，要符合邏輯關系?！军c睛】這類作文的寫作方法要注意認真審題，可以分三段寫：贊成；反對；你的看法。注意過渡 性語言的使用。做

19、到：要點要全，表達要清晰明確，使用短語，句型要準確，注意避免拼 寫和語法錯誤。5.近年來霧霾天氣在中國許多城市頻頻發(fā)生。霧霾天氣引起大家極大的關注。請你用英語寫一篇有關霧霾的短文向?？⒄Z角”投稿，內(nèi)容包括：1. 霧霾的危害2. 霧霾產(chǎn)生的原因（2 個） 3. 應對霧霾的措施（3 個）提示：霧霾smog poisonous 有毒的注意： 1. 詞數(shù) 110 左右； 2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3. 開頭語已為你寫好（不計入總詞數(shù)）。In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which

20、 has aroused great concern among people.【答案】In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which hasaroused great concern among people.Smog has a bad effect on people s health. Many people, children and the old in particular, suffer from illnesses caused by smog. Consequentl

21、y, citizens are warned not to go out without wearing masks.How does it come about? Scientists have found that it is human activity that has caused this.The poisonous matters in the air mainly come as a result of peopleng csarbsu, rning coal, driviindustry production and so on.What should we do to st

22、op the situation from worsening? First, cleaner fuels for cars and stricter emission standards for factories are of vital importance. Second, for us individuals, living a green life like going to work or school by public transport is a good choice. Also planting more trees to increase green areas is

23、 necessary. I believe every contribution counts. Only if we work together will smog weather disappear completely. 【解析】 【詳解】 這篇作文要求我們根據(jù)提示來介紹有關霧霾的情況，題目中給出了寫作的內(nèi)容，我們應將 這些內(nèi)容用正確的英語表達出來。首先應注意在短文中要包括題目中給出的所有信息，不 能遺漏要點，并注意表達的層次和條理。其次要注意使用正確的時態(tài)和人稱，通過分析可 知，這篇短文應使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，謂語動詞用原形，特別要注意謂語動詞形式要變化， 這是一個寫作的難點。最后要注意英

24、語的表達習慣，英語句式與漢語在語序和詞性上的使 用是不同的，要注意不能逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語。應從句子整體考慮，使用恰當?shù)脑~匯和句型來表達，語法規(guī)范。還應使用一些較好的句型或者短語，增強文章的表現(xiàn)力。6.美麗的瓊海我的家，人人都要保護她”。自雙創(chuàng)以來，我們的生活環(huán)境得到了很大的改觀，人人積極參與雙創(chuàng)活動，讓人點贊的文明行為隨處可見。作為一名中學生，請你寫 一篇短文號召大家加入到雙創(chuàng)活動中來。要求：1 .語句通順，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；2 .必須包含所給提示，并做適當?shù)耐卣梗? .行文中不得出現(xiàn)真實人名、校名或地名；4 .詞數(shù)80左右，（短文的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；Sinc

25、e the government created the civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.As junior high students,Let ' s take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a mor

26、e beautiful city.【答案】 Since the government created civilized and healthy city, our living environment hasimproved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.As junior high students, on the one hand, thereare a lot of things we cando. We sho

27、uld be politeto others and try to behave well. It' s kind of you to helppeople in need. Meanwhile,Wecanhelpclean up our city in order to make it clearer andtidier. Also, we can plantmore trees and keep offgrass. On the other hand, there are many things we shouldn' t do. We shouldn't make

28、alot ofnoise loudly in the public. We can' t spit anywhere and we shouldn' t throw rubbish everywhere.At the same time, we shouldn ' t break traffic rules.Let ' s take action now. Our aonis can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.【解析】【詳解】瓊海正在進行“雙創(chuàng) ”活動，即創(chuàng)建文明城市、創(chuàng)建健康城市，城

29、市的生活環(huán)境有了很大的改變。這篇作文要求我們用英語寫一篇短文，號召中學生們都參加到“雙創(chuàng) ”活動中來。題目中并沒有規(guī)定具體的寫作內(nèi)容，而是用圖表的形式，列出了寫作的提綱。通過審題可知，這篇短文我們應從兩個方面來敘述：即應該做什么；不應該做什么。根據(jù)這個內(nèi)容，寫作時，把短文分成兩個層次，這樣可以使文章結構清晰、條理。整篇短文應使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，第一人稱we 來敘述。寫作時應注意：首先英語的表達習慣和漢語是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語，而應從句子的整體結構考慮，使用恰當?shù)脑~匯、短語和句型，以常見的主謂賓或者主系表構成的簡單句為主，穿插使用并列句或者復合句，改變文章節(jié)奏，提升文章檔次。語句之

30、間使用恰當?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫、流暢?！军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，向中學生們發(fā)出號召，共同參與到城市“雙創(chuàng) ”活動中來。首先短文的內(nèi)容完整，文章根據(jù)題目中列出的圖表，補充了具體的寫作內(nèi)容，從應該做的和不應該做的兩個方面，對中學生的日常行為提出了要求。文章條理清晰，有層次。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，語法規(guī)范，語言準確，語句通順，符合英語的表達習慣。短文中句子結構以簡單句為主，也使用了并列句和復合句以及一些較復雜的高級句式，語句之間也使用了較好的連接成分，如We should be polite to others andtry to behave well. 、

31、It s kind of you to help people in need、 . Meanwhile, We can help clean upour city in order to make it clearer and tidier. 、 We can t spit anywhere and we shouldn t throwrubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldn' t breOk traffic rules.7 寫作81. 春天，許多人都喜歡參加各種戶外活動。為了倡導中學生接近大自然，某中學生英文報舉辦了一次征文活

32、動，請你根據(jù)以下問題，用英語寫一篇短文參加征文。提示：1) What' s the benefit (好處)of outdoor activities? (1-2 opinions)2 ) Which is your favourite outdoor activity? How and why? ( 1-2 examples)3 ) What do we need to pay attention to when we do outdoor activities? ( At least 1 suggestion)要求： 1)表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；2)必須包括提示中的所有信息

33、，并按要求適當發(fā)揮；3)詞數(shù)：100 詞左右，開頭已給出，不計入詞數(shù)；4)不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。s great to get clIt s spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think it nature.【答案】It s spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think it s a good way toget close to nature.When we are outdoors and in the

34、natural world, we can not only breathe fresh air and enjoy the beautiful scene, but also relax ourselves for the coming study or work.There are many different ways we can get out into the natural world, such as hiking, cycling, camping and climbing. Cycling is my favourite. I join a cycling club, an

35、d often go out with other members. While cycling, we can forget our worries and have fun together. Also, we can learn to be a part of a team and help each other.Whatever you do, remember to stay safe. When you re outside, it s better to be with yourparents or friends.【解析】試題分析：本篇書面表達以“ outdoor activi

36、ties 為話題，結合所給的寫作材料，寫一篇報刊 ”征文稿。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文會使用到一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意一些常見句式的應用。寫作中注意連詞、固定短語的交替使用，使文意連接緊密，還要注意使用豐富的語句，注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系，最后最好要表達出人物的感想和看法。寫作亮點：本文結構緊湊，語言簡練、要點齊全。文中 in the natural world, not only - butalso, get out, such as, also 等詞（組）的恰當使用，使上下文意連接緊密；本文還采用了豐 富的句型，比如：It is +形容詞+（ for sb.） to do sth. ； There

37、be 句型；時間狀語從句等復合句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，這是一篇不錯的范文。8 假如你是李華，你們學校準備組織學生本周五去北京世園會參觀。你打算邀請外教Peter 參加。請用英語寫一封電子郵件，告訴他集合的時間和地點，在那里可以做什么，以及參觀時需要準備什么。提示詞語：school gate, nature, culture, food and drink提示問題： When and where are you going to meet? What are you going to do there? What do you advise Peter to prepare f

38、or the visit?Dear Pete,How is it going?I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition inYanqing.I'm looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua【答案】Dear Peter,How is it going?I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition

39、. We will meet at the school gate at 7:00 a.m. this Friday. Then we will go to Beijing International Horticulture Exposition together. We can do a lot of things there. We can not only enjoy the special and beautiful plants but also learn different cultures in various indoor or outdoor shows. We plan

40、 to stay there for a whole day. You'd better wear a pair of comfortable sports shoes and take some food and drinks with you.I'm looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】1 .題干解讀：這是一篇給材料作文，屬于應用文寫作。本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點， 動筆前要先認真閱讀要點，寫作中，應注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；提 示的問題就是寫作的基本方向，然后圍繞要點適當發(fā)揮即可

41、。2 .例文點評：文章采取郵件格式，時態(tài)以一般將來時態(tài)為主。語言的表述應該符合語法 的結構，語言準確，語意連貫，表達清楚，具有邏輯性。3 .高分亮點：短語：school gate; invite sb. to do; a lot of; plan to do。句型： not only - but also You'd better ； T'm looki ng forward to 。一9.目前，許多中學生不重視課外閱讀。請你根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容寫一篇短文，對這一現(xiàn)狀進行分 析并提出建議。要點：/、重視課外閱讀的原因1 .作業(yè)太多2 .沒有讀書習慣3 .時間花在電腦或網(wǎng)絡上課外閱讀的好

42、處1 .更多地了解世界2 .學會如何思考3 .生活更加豐富多彩對學?；蛲瑢W的建議（至少一點）注意：1.詞數(shù)：80個左右(開頭已給出的內(nèi)容不記入總詞數(shù))；2 .內(nèi)容必須包括上表中的要點，可適當發(fā)揮，但不要逐字翻譯；3 .條理清楚、語句連貫；4 .文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的地名、校名和人名。At present only a few students do some reading after class. Here are several reasons.AAAAAA【答案】 At present only a few students do some reading after class. Here

43、 are several reasons.First of all, quite a lot of students are burdened with too much homework. Still others havenformed a habit of reading. They would rather spend their spare time on TV or on the Internet.However, reading has many benefits. Through reading we can learn more about the world.Besides

44、, it can help us think better. Last but not least, reading can make our life more colourful.Here are my suggestions. For one thing, teachers are supposed to limit the amount of ourhomework so that we can have more time to read. For another, it' s a good idea to form readingclubs and learn from each other.【解析】略10 .根據(jù)要求完成大作文，詞數(shù)： 80-100詞.豐富的校本課程可以讓你的生活更精彩.請根據(jù)下列圖示中所提供的特色課程，按內(nèi)容及 要求，用英文完成寫作.內(nèi)容包括：1. Which course ( s) do you like ?2. Why do you like i